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Chapter 3
Nivi was feeling down. She'd totally messed up her interview and knew there was no point in even waiting for a phone call back from them. She felt like she'd answered all their questions through a haze and she didn't know if it was because she was still shook up from almost getting run over or if it was something else. She was still thinking about it to herself as she went out to water the plants out front.
She'd spoken to Divya as soon as she gotten home and Divya had listened to her until she'd let it all out before saying slowly, 'Maybe it's actually a good thing you were distracted Nivi. You know how you only went for that job because it was the only response you'd gotten so far right? I know you would have hated working there; bank jobs are so boring and it wasn't right for you at all...' Nivi knew Divya was right but still she felt bad until Divya hugged her and said something much better would come along soon because she had a good feeling about it. Nivi sighed and was just thinking that maybe it was for the best when she looked up and suddenly realized someone was standing in front of her and she had no idea who he was or how long he'd been there!
Viren watched as the girl watered the plants with more concentration than he'd ever seen anyone put into doing something so normal. She'd stopped muttering to herself and was so focused it was actually cute. He wanted to say something but she was still looking down and seemed to be unaware of his presence so he watched her curiously, again trying to figure out who she was; after a few minutes she looked up suddenly and Viren could only stare, her eyes had widened when she realized he was standing there and seeing them, all other thoughts flew out of Viren's head.
'Tum! What are you doing here?!!' Viren couldn't stop himself as he saw the girl had the same eyes as the one he'd almost hit this morning. She looked at him in confusion and said, 'I live here, who are you?!' and Viren realized she wouldn't know him because he'd been wearing his helmet. He was still stunned and she was still looking at him with the biggest eyes he'd ever seen. In the back of his mind he was still thinking that he couldn't believe he'd almost run Divya or Nivi over...Dadi would have killed him!!
Nivi watched the guy and wondered if there was something wrong with him as she waited for him to reply to her question; he looked normal enough...better than normal even, she thought unwillingly. He was wearing dark blue jeans with a red tee and a black jacket. His sleeves were pushed up and he had his hands in his pockets as he watched her. There was what looked like a flute sticking out of his pocket and it was so random that Nivi wondered if she was seeing things. He looked shocked to see her, almost as if he knew her and she started to think back, she can't have known him...she was sure she would have remembered meeting this guy. But still, there was something about him that was so familiar somehow...He blinked a couple of times and Nivi found herself wondering if guys were supposed to have such thick eyelashes and then shook her head at the crazy thought and asked 'Aap ko kuch chahiye tha?' He seemed to shake himself too before he smiled all of a sudden and said 'So are you Nivedita or Divya?' without answering her question at all.
His whole face lit up when he smiled and Nivi found herself wanting to smile back but she reminded herself he could be anyone, just because he seemed to know her name didn't mean he actually knew her. She frowned instead of smiling and asked 'Do you always answer a question with a question?!' Viren watched her thinking she was really very pretty and she seemed to be getting slightly annoyed...he remembered something from childhood and suddenly had an idea of who she was. He smiled even wider and said 'You can't be Nivi cos Nivi was always such a moti... so you must be Divya right?!' Viren watched as her face went red and it looked like she might explode and he was fairly sure it was Nivi; she'd always hated it when he called her Moti even though she never had been.
Nivi was suddenly as angry as she'd been this morning at Yash and she wanted to throw something at this guy who was being so rude to her without even knowing her. When he said the word 'moti' she felt her brain trying to tell her something but she ignored it and said as calmly as she could manage, 'Look I don't know who you are or what you're doing here, but please leave quietly...before I find someone to throw you out!' Viren tried not to laugh at her fake calm tone and thought quickly before saying 'Actually, I'm looking for Nivedita Sharma...I nearly ran her over today and I wanted to apologise...as well as tell her to be more careful and watch her step in the future!'
He saw her eyes widen again in recognition and he knew then that this was Nivi. She only looked shocked for a few seconds and he thought he must have really annoyed her because suddenly she was saying all her sentences too fast for him to understand, 'Tum! You're telling ME to be careful? How can you say that, how fast were you going?! You're supposed to brake when you come round a corner! Because of you I messed up my interview...and now you're still SMILING instead of apologising?!' Viren couldn't help it, he started laughing and then suddenly felt water drench him as she emptied the last of the water from the can onto his face!
Edited by anjaani07 - 14 years ago
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Chapter 4
Viren shook his head dripping water everywhere and spluttered as he tried to say 'Nivi I'm..' but Nivi wasn't interested. She didn't know who this guy was but if he at least looked sorry she would have been fine with it but he was still laughing and for some reason that made her angrier than ever. She didn't know why he was getting to her so much, she only ever lost her temper like that with Yash and that was only because he knew her so well. She'd never even yelled at a total stranger before let alone thrown water in his face!
She decided she'd had enough of this madness and turned to leave when she felt the guy grab her arm and say 'Wait! Look I'm really sorry!' Nivi pulled her arm, trying to get it free without turning around fully. 'Please listen, look I'm me, sorry I mean I'm Viren!' he burst out the last part and Nivi stopped trying to pull her arm away and turned around to look at him.
'Viren...Viren... Sood?!' Nivi watched him closely as she asked. He smiled and nodded and she tilted her head a little and suddenly it all clicked into place and now she could see the resemblance. She could see the same cheekiness in his smile and his eyes tilted the same way and he still had a thick shock of hair except now it wasn't always in his eyes like when they were kids.
He had let go of her arm and was waiting for her to reply and she suddenly felt awkward so to cover it up she folded her arms and said 'Are you sure you're Viren?! I remember he was much less annoying...!' with a raised eyebrow. Viren started laughing and said, 'Well you're still the same; abhi bhi meri har baat pe gussa aa jata hai!' He shook his head and said 'You never used to get so angry at anyone else.' Some of her hair had come to the front and he reached out and pulled a thick strand sharply and said 'Ab kuch yakeen aaya?!'
Viren watched as Nivi jerked her hair out of his hand and rubbed her head saying 'Oww Viren!' just like when they were kids. She suddenly laughed and he saw her whole face change as she did; her eyes sparkled with a cheeky glint and her whole face lit up. She was still laughing as she said 'Hmm, so first you ran me over and then you pull my hair...who else could it be?!' She rolled her eyes and he shook his head and sighed saying in a disappointed voice, 'I didn't RUN you over...but I still can!!' When she narrowed her eyes at him he held his hands up in apology and then held out one hand saying 'Hi I'm Viren Sood, sorry I almost ran you over!'
Nivi seemed to think about it for a second and Viren suddenly realized he was holding his breath. After a few long seconds, she smiled a little shyly and took his hand saying 'I'm Nivedita Sharma, sorry I threw water all over you!' and Viren didn't know why but he felt so relieved. He smiled as he thought that maybe this time the decision of whether to stay in Shimla would be easy.
Nivi shook Viren's hand and watched as a big smile grew on his face and she couldn't help herself from smiling back. She suddenly wanted to ask him so many things, like where he'd been all these years and how long he was back for but as she opened her mouth she heard someone call out his name from the Sood house. Viren turned his head a little and said 'That's probably Maa...' He turned back to her and asked quickly, 'We'll catch up soon?' in a hopeful voice and Nivi felt herself nodding. He smiled again and even in the fading light she could see his eyes shining. He reached out and pulled her hair, lightly this time, before saying 'OK bye Moti!' with a wink and then running away before she could respond! Nivi laughed as he left, thinking Viren hadn't changed much.
As she turned to go back into the house, she saw something in the grass, glinting in the evening light and she bent down to pick up Viren's flute. She looked at it curiously for a few seconds and thought maybe he had changed after all... She decided to hold on to the flute till she saw him next and felt an odd flutter of excitement and something else in her tummy at the thought of getting to know this new Viren.
Edited by anjaani07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Omg Asma just came on to check if you updated your new chapters... My timing is great. Love this Nivi and Viren... They so cute. I don't know why I'm feeling so nervous really your FF LOL. Its a great feeling. Thanks doll.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hai meri asmu... *hugs*
awesome chapters.. waiting impatiently for more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just read chapter 4 now... So sweet. They both have this connection. OMG so sweet. Love them. Thanks jaan u made my weekend. Will eagerly wait for your next update. Will it be next weekend?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMV...asma jaan..🤗...wonderful chapters...i just popped here for a few seconds..and wht i got...triple dhamaka..three chapters in a roll...u r a star my sister...love u...thank u so much...!!!!
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Hey Shamima, Vids, Ashly and all!! 🤗
Shamima, thanks so much sweetie, I'm so glad ur enjoying it, im having fun writing it actually!! I'm happy u got ur timing so perfect!
Ashly!! Hi jaaan, how're u?! OMV it's been so long! Thanks for ur earlier comment and again now - i'm happy ur enjoying it and im happy to tell u i'll probably be updating during the week if i get some time cos i have a few more chapters in mind. You're not on the forum much are u these days? I hardly see u and miss ur updates and pleeease how about in return for my ff u give us an AWESOME new nivren VM😉??! Love you🤗
Nadz, dunno if you'll see this but ur comments weren't boring, loved them and love you for bugging me to write an ff LOL😆 Hope u liked the lastest chapters...and i really havnt decided about CC yet...she may be the same, except she doesnt have any special hatred towards our Nivi!😉
Sana, dont know if you'll see this either but thank youu!!! Im so glad ur enjoying it, u know how much i value ur opinion, let me know if u have any thoughts going forward altho i do have a vague plan! Love you too sis and chat sooon 🤗
@everyone else: So sorry for not replying individually but thank you sooo much for the lovely comments and PM's - i was more nervous about writing my own ff but i feel so much better after reading ur comments! Please do let me know if u have any suggestions etc🤗
Edited by anjaani07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Asma Jaan Excellent FF Dear, Love it, So sweet and cute story of our Viren and Nivi, U have made it soo beautifully I just loved reading it, PLease continue writing would love to read more
Edited by friendforall - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow my word that was brilliant asma and please continue soon
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waaaw asma fab!!!!!!!!!! chapters👏👏⭐️ i really enjoy read them and they make me feel am ready to study now with all i can thannnx jannn...and about the chapters i love when u excately explain the feeling that nivi and verin feel so awesome😳 and when i imagin it feel so happy and ya feel the love 😳great update sweeti...love the water part really funny put smile in my face thanx😊😊 ...great describe dear when u describe verin and nivi when they remember each othere wawww i just can make pic of them with ur describe ...u r talented wait for the next soon sweeti 🤗
Edited by love-mystery - 14 years ago

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