Random NivRen-ness! (Update : The Reunion - Pg18)

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Okay, so on request by Payal Di (Thank you diii!!!), I'm posting this one NivRen scene that I would LOVE to see, and if you guys like/love this then I shall continue to write more .. and if not then, I won't, 'cos I'm not that good at making up scenes, but I do give it my best shot! 😆
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Okay, so NivRen are in the car, Viren's driving and Nivi's looking out from her window, as her hair blows in the cool fresh breeze. Viren cannot help but look at her as they are driving down a quiet, deserted road. Nivi then starts to feel cold, as she hugs herself and starts shivering. Viren asks Nivi, "Tumhe sardi lag rahi hain naa?" Nivi cutely nods. Viren parks the car and takes his jacket off and puts it around Nivi. During this, Nivi's hair gets stuck on Viren's watch. Nivi takes the innitiative, and untangles her hair from Viren's watch, but she is failing to do so, as all the while Viren is looking at her. Nivi catches Viren's eyes, as they both share an immense eyelock, making Viren's face come closer to Nivi's. Viren then, still looking at Nivi, untangles Nivi's hair from his watch, and brings it behind her ear, as they both begin to draw ever so closer to each other, that they both can feel each other's breath on their face.
Suddenly, it begins to rain, and not just lightly, but heavily. Nivi wakes upto reality, as she stares out of her window as cheerfully says "Baarish! Dekho Viren, baarish! Itne deyr baad Shimla main baarish ho rahi hain!", but Viren is to busy adoring Nivi. Nivi knows that Viren is looking at her, and so she holds out her hand and collects a handful of water, and slowly chucks it on Viren. She cannot help but burst out laughing, as Viren screams "Nivi!! Tum ne mujh par pani kyun peynka? Tumhe pata hain na mujhe pani se kitni nafrat hain?!" Nivi is still uncontrollably laughing, and Viren too tries to keep a straight face on, as he smiles at Nivi's laugh, and sees just how beautiful she looks when she's happy. Viren then gets an idea of doing the same to Nivi, so he turns and gets a handful of rain water. Nivi, our smart girl, knows what Viren is doing, and screams "Viren nahinnn!!", and with that she gets out of the car, and runs into the middle of road.
Nivi then realises that she is in the rain. She outstretches her arms and spins in the freedom of each and every raindrop. She is now wet from head to toe, as her gorgeous red saree is drenched. Nivi proclaims "Baarish main keylne main kitna mazaa ataa hain!!" as she thoroughly enjoys each and every second she is in the rain, whether it be by dancing in the rain, twirling and spinning, or splashing the rain on her face.
Viren is left stunned. As he's in the car, he keeps on making the wipers on his windscreen clear the rain that comes on the windscreen that is blocking the breath taking view. He has never seen someone so simple, yet so elegant and stunning as Nivi. He simply gazes at Nivi from head to toe, on how beautiful she looks when she's wet, free and enjoying herself. Viren, who is hydrophobic and hates water, cannot control himself, as he steps out of the car, only to realise that in a matter of seconds, his black shirt is drenched too. It isn't he who is walking. His feet, his eyes and his heart are dragging him towards Nivi.
Viren is still a few footsteps further away from Nivi, as Nivi stops, because she see's Viren. She smiles and calls Viren, "Viren, Aaao naa!". But he stops, as he realises that "Oh CRAP! Main to poora beeg chuka hoon!", and he pulls a babyface towards Nivi. Nivi laughs again, and turns around, making her back face Viren, as she continues to enjoy herself.
Viren then looks at Nivi again, and once again he begins walking towards her. He then kneels on his knees, draws his hand out, and says "Nivedita, would you take the honour to dance with me?", as Nivi turns around, suprised yet with such shyness, accepts the offer, and holds Viren's hand.
Viren then spins Nivi round and around, as they both ballroom dance. Oh what fun they had, and the smiles they shared, as they both united as one. Finally when the dance is over, Viren kisses Nivi's hand, to which Nivi shyly tries to escape, but Viren from the back, holds both of Nivi's hands, and pulls her towads him. He then wraps his hands around Nivi's waist, as Nivi begins to feel nervous and breathes quickly.
She then closes her eyes, as Viren touches her hair and takes it to one side, and places it on her left shoulder, as he gently, slowly, yet so passionately kisses Nivi's neck and lets his other hand trickle down her left arm. Nivi's apprehension increases and she grips Viren's hand that is wrapped around her waist. The moment seizes as Viren, completely out of control, spins Nivi, making her hair splash onto her face.
Silence is around them, as Viren draws his finger on Nivi's face, removing the hair from it. Nivi cannot find any other place to escape to, so she begins taking a step back, and with each step, Viren moves another step closer, as Nivi finally clashes with a tree trunk. Viren takes full advantage of this moment, and puts one arm onto one side of the trunk, thereby placing his other arm on the other side. "Ab bach kar kaha jaaogi mujh se, Nivedita Viren Sood?", exclaims Viren, as he edges even closer to Nivi, and she gradually shuts her eyes ...
Viren caresses Nivi's wet cheeks, and kisses them, then kisses her forehead. With each kiss, Nivi grabs onto Viren's black shirt tighter and tighter, naturally making him more closer to her. Viren cannot resist the beauty before him, and draws his finger onto Nivi's wet lips, and feels the moist and softness of them. Nivi opens her eyes slowly, and gazes deeply into the loving eyes of Viren, as she then kisses him on his forehead, and then both cheeks, and with each kiss, Viren again wraps his hands around Nivi's waist.
Then comes the moment, the moment of confession. As Viren whispers into Nivi's ear, "I love you", and Nivi, every so shyly, whispers back into Viren's "I love you too". And as there faces drew apart from each other's ears, their noses perfectly touched and met each others, as each and every distance between them closed, and Viren's wet yet soft lips kissed the gentle and wet lips of Nivi's passionately.
Gradually, as both their lips parted, Nivi straight away falls into the arms of Viren, as she hugs him for sheer life, and Viren hugs her back, clinging onto one another, finding their peace and serenity between themselves. They both reassure each other again with the words "I love you", before Viren offers his hand, that Nivi accepts, and both make their way back into the car. Nivi straight away wears Viren's jacket, as Viren turns on the heaters of the car. NivRen again look at each other, as Viren caresses Nivi's cheek and they both smile at each other, and away they drive home again, leaving the point of NivRen's union safe and sound ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My Faizupie!! 🤗 Thanks dear!! Yes, please, I cannot speak for everyone else, of course, but would highly encourage you to continue writing such beautifully passionate scenes between NivRen. I for one would surely appreciate that!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Excruciating

My Faizupie!! 🤗 Thanks dear!! Yes, please, I cannot speak for everyone else, of course, but would highly encourage you to continue writing such beautifully passionate scenes between NivRen. I for one would surely appreciate that!! 😊

Awwww Diiiiiiiiiii!!!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!
Okay then, I'll write some more for sure now! 😉
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: FaizuuNivRen

Awwww Diiiiiiiiiii!!!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!
Okay then, I'll write some more for sure now! 😉
🤗

Payal hii!! I agree too, Faizuu keep writing jaan that was amazing and so beautiful!! Now final goodnight from me, love youu🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjaani07

Payal hii!! I agree too, Faizuu keep writing jaan that was amazing and so beautiful!! Now final goodnight from me, love youu🤗

Ohhh Asma Diiii!!!
🤗
Thank you soooooooooo much!!!!!
Love you tooooooo, and goodnight 😉
Sweet Kinny Dreams! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjaani07

Payal hii!! I agree too, Faizuu keep writing jaan that was amazing and so beautiful!! Now final goodnight from me, love youu🤗

Hey Asma!! 🤗 How are you sweets!! I know right, Faiza should continue writing. She is such a brilliant writer. Taking this scene as an example, she writes so beautifully that I am actually visualizing the entire scene. I have always been a fan of her episode analysis and had no clue that she could do such an amazing job creating such imaginary scenes..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMV, Payal Diii!!!
I can't stop blushing now! 😳
Seriously, thank you ever soooo much Dii!!!
I really and truly appreciate it! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Faizaaaaaaaa Of course u HAV to write😆....n the scene was beautiful, not rushed n so much like Niv Ren😛..Waitiing for Mooooooooore nw
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very beautifully written....................👏
write more...........😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sofna

Faizaaaaaaaa Of course u HAV to write😆....n the scene was beautiful, not rushed n so much like Niv Ren😛..Waitiing for Mooooooooore nw

OMV!!
Sofna Diiiiiiiiiii!!!
Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! 🤗
Awwwwwwwwwwww!!
Okay, I'll defos write more now!!!! 😉

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