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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lrllover


Note-the first answer has been "Choried" from the answer which i have given the the set of questions posted by daisy

Yeh kya jab maine kaha tab nahi likha aur ab😡 Just kidding😉

Rocking as usual👏

Waiting 4 the 8th one😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sunaina02

Daisy dear where are you and whenwill you com back.
Tere bina FC to progress hi nahin kar pate.

Missing YOU

Haan dear tere bina tho FC suna suna lagtha hai..... Come back soon dear😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Nishant Nice Answers ..Cool

@ Su Thanks for Rajeev Pics...he is looking like a prince 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sunaina02

Daisy dear where are you and whenwill you com back.
Tere bina FC to progress hi nahin kar pate.

Missing YOU

Its So Sweet Su,we are missing daisy! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
ashi's task.................the scene


Note:Sory friends but i am not good at writing scenes aur aaj to aise hi mood bahut kharab hai so jo man main aaya woh likh de raha hoon........sorry ashi par kya karoon aaj dimaag sach main bahut kharaab hain



So here is my pathetic scene


In priyanka's house


"Priyanka, ak baat hain jo main tumhe bahut dino se kahna chahta hoon par kaise kahhon yah nahi samaj aa raha hai"

"english mein kaho agar usmein bhi problem hain to hindi main kah dalo"

"kya priyanka tum bhi na....tunhe majak lag raha hai"

"acha sorry nishant chalo batao kya kehna chahte ho"

"Priyanka,main tumhe jab bhi dekhta hoon tab.............."

"haan aage bolo............."

"tab................"

"aare bol na....................."

"coffee..."

"kya!!!! coffee? yah kya bol rahe ho kuch samaj main nahi aa raha hain"

"woh tum itna aacha coffee bana ti ho kya ak cup coffee bana sakti ho"

"jab shuru main poocha tha tab to mana kar diya tha.....................chalo thik hain main abhi bana ke lati hoon"

meanwhile Nishant musters all the courage required to propose to her

Priyanka comes back with a cup of coffee for [kitni sweet hain na dosto..........imagine mere liye coffee.......mujhe to soch kar hi itna excitemnet ho raha hai.........ok now back to the scene]

"yeh lo"

"haan table pe rakh do"

"priyanka ak baat poochoon"

"ha pooch jaise ki agar main mana karoongi to tu nahi poochega"[dekho doston kitni ahe tarah se mujhe woh jaanti hain]

"main kaisa ladka hoon'

"kaisa matlab.......normal ladka hain tu jaise sab hote hain"

"are woh nahi.............ak ladki ki nazar se batao not just as a friend"

"woh oh kya baat hain Nishant kyun koi ladki pasand aa gayi hain kya"

"are bata na"

"haan tum bahut ache ho.............well mannered,soft spoken,caring ho......koi bhi ladki tumhe pasand karegi" ; ;[friends dont kill me but pehli baar apni tariif karne ka mauka mila hain]

"acha maine ak speech tyaar kiya hain use propose karne ke liye"

"lagta hain isiliye aapki aankhen red hain lagta hain raat bhar soye nahi ho..........yehi speech likh rahe the na?"

"acha ab speech sun.......................whenever i see you i get lost into another world.......whenever i hear your voice i wonder whether there is a more sweet voice................whenever i see your smiling face i keep on looking at you..........whenever you are sad my heart weeps............whenever......"

"are bas kar Nishant apna whenever wala speech aise yeh aur kitne whenever's hain"

"woh abhi 100-150 baki hain kyun pasand nahi aaya kya"

"are nahi mera yeh matlab nahi tha its good koi bhi ladki yeh sun kar tumhe na nahi bol payegi"

"agar main yah kahoon ki priyanka yeh tumhare liye likha hoon to"

"what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"[shocked]

Just then rajeev enters the room who had been outside listening to all this conversation right from the moment when priyanka brought coffee for me


"wah Nishant wah.....sach main kamaal kar diya................

"kya kamaal kar diya"[priyanka still shocked]

'are kuch nahi priyanka tum to jaanti hi ho Nishant ka majak karne ki aadat...............................waise yeh majak to nahi hain par poora sach bhi nahi hain...............actually tum to jaanti hi ho ki DJ's ke writers kitne phaltu dialogues likhte hain isiliye maine ak propose karne wale scene ke liye ise ak dialogue likhne ko kaha tha........haina Nishant"

Raj comes near me and holds me by the neck and whispers in my ears"beta tu baaad main milna"

"oh Nishant main ak pal ke liye samjhi ki yeh tum sach mooch mere liye likhe ho,itna bhi shock mujhe mat diya karo.....aise hi lrl sets pe roj shoch milta hain..........kabhi kehte hain ki ypu will be paired with rajveer,kabhi huda aur kabhi abhimanyu........ab tum to mujhe shock mat do"

"priyanka chalo humein shooting ke liye der ho rahi hain"

and then raj swoops away priyanka


Note:sorry once again for this pathetic scene but i am not in a good mood today.................

Important:Characters mentioned in the story are real,but incidents are completely fictious specially from the part after Nishant proposes to priyanka

Edited by lrllover - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Nishant Nice Fic really Its rocking 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_rabi

@ Nishant Nice Fic really Its rocking 👏


thanks a lot Rabi............waise i wanted to make it long but then i had to keep in mind the condiions set by ashi as it was a task for MOTW
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishttha

hello...koi hai? 😊


Hi 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishttha

hi nishant...good fic..


thanks for liking it but its not a fic its a task for MOTW given by ashi.....check out pg 136 ques no.7
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Posted: 17 years ago
okay..i hope they grilled u well 😉

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