Devil Reloaded- RishNa(Aham & Krystal)FF,Chapter 6 UPDATED 31.12

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Virika_EHMMBH

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Ohhh... Rishab's previous birth's character name is RanVijay.. What might be Raina's name?? Continue soon.. very well written. Thanks for the PM

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sharmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Gosh! This was just an awesome update!
Ur story is so intresting... its a different story line...nd i am attracted to this like a magnet.
The scene between them was beautifully written and expressed. It was pure romance...and way too hott!..hayyee main marjaavaan.
And RishNa feeling all that...and something happenning between them similiar to that was superb!
Loved it!!
Well written...
Now i am dying...please jaldi se next part update kardo.
This was fab!

Love Sharmi

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Pi-laar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Kryan_DevAkshi
Ohhh... Rishab's previous birth's character name is RanVijay.. What might be Raina's name?? Continue soon.. very well written. Thanks for the PM

its sandhya.. it was ter in previous chapter

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zainab_sushita2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Strong script... Thts wht indian serials dnt have.. I suggest to give ur story to any production team...indian cvs dumb mind dnt get over ths sass bahu saga circle..thtz wht indian serial lags behind they dnt cum up wth strong script..even some dramas have bt only for few week then asusual it cum back to its place...btw eagerly waiting fr the nxt one...impressed by ur writting skill

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Namita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Madhu, that was AMAZING!!! Brilliant update with a bit of bit of romance thrown in for good measure. Well done. Looking forward to the next update.

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Nirmala

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Omg, what an update Madhu, short but powerful. Sheer brilliance, the way you are opening up the flash backs. Looks like Ranvijay and Sandhya were too much in love. Now desperate to know what happened to them and what will happen to Rishna. A big thumbs up.

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sania_58

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: pilar
this was just amazing madhu...!!! ❤️ since tht tandav part was aired...i could exactly imagine it... even tht music...and raina dancing...rishb staring... ths was pure talent... continue soon dear...

Thanks Pilar for your lovely comment. I am glad that you liked it. Yes, copied that Tandav dance part from the show & will copy some more. But in my style. Yes, will continue soon. Most probably tomorrow.😃 Loads of Love.

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sania_58

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: pilar
and tht myth behind ravanhatta❤️ i want you to send a copy of ths story to the cvs..!!

ohh, the myth behind Ravanhatta. Not a big deal, just opened google, search from it & then copy, paste the info. No No, No need to send copy to CVs, they will laugh.

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sania_58

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kryan_DevAkshi
Ohhh... Rishab's previous birth's character name is RanVijay.. What might be Raina's name?? Continue soon.. very well written. Thanks for the PM

Raina's name is Sandhya. Already revealed in previous chapter.

Thanks for liking the story. Will continue soon. Loads of Love.😊

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sania_58

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Gosh! This was just an awesome update!
Ur story is so intresting... its a different story line...nd i am attracted to this like a magnet.
The scene between them was beautifully written and expressed. It was pure romance...and way too hott!..hayyee main marjaavaan.
And RishNa feeling all that...and something happenning between them similiar to that was superb!
Loved it!!
Well written...
Now i am dying...please jaldi se next part update kardo.
This was fab!

Love Sharmi

Thanks Sharmi for your lovely, encouraging comment. Super happy.😃

Glad that I able to attract you through my writing.

Thanks for writing the romance part. I was afraid to post. But all the positive comments gave me relief.

yes, will update soon, may be tomorrow. Loads of Love to you too.😃