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Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

'I cannot portray the characters the way he does.. and his father writes 😆'

After reading your ff,I'm sorry but I disagree. Tbh,I felt like I was reading a scene from SSRs written screenplay of part2.

'Meenu😕!) A bandit tries to attack her from back while Amarendra comes and holds him as he says this.. do u get the picture?😕'

I got the picture yaar.that's not what I meant by the emoticon. His dialogue😕

Don't you remember the last scene of part1 before the credits rolled out??the vishvasghath of kattappa? ?

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Matlab??I read it twice now.why? ?

(I'm going to PM ishita, she should not miss such an awesome post about baahu deva. )

Wanted to ask you,will you continue this ff? ?like shivgami taking propasal to kunthala, baahu meeting devasena in her real attire there,things leading up to their grand engagement, I'm sure you can imagine more,isn't it??

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

First of all,don't call it a mere imagination yaar. (I assure you, having read many ffs,ss and OSes, especially arshi ones.I really know how to recognize a good ff, and this one is not just good,but excellent 👏..)

It has every potential to be turned into a remarkable story /ff.So Pls do seriously consider my suggestion whenever you find time.

Tbh,not much,(why did you end that with bhalla? ?😆)but as I said I know a perfect story needs all shades and right ingredients. So I appreciate you for balancing all the characters aptly.

Originally posted by: -ISakuraS-

Meenu!!! LOVE IT!!! ❤️ Thank you so much for this!🤗 You pretty much gave us Devasena's intro, Baahu & Bhalla meeting Devasena, and of course kind of a proposal and Sivagami's input into it too!!!

You are not good with words? 😲 Meenu.. if this is what happens when you are not good with words, I can't even imagine how good it will be when you are. Seriously, yaar, this is sooo good !! 👏 I love the way you are narrating the events, very simple but beautiful!!

One teeny tiny suggestion (hope you don't mind).. can we add a wink after "MY QUEEN"😉?

Somehow the Sivagami (I imagine as a mother) is just like the one you have in yours!! We have seen her in her Rajamatha avatar more..

I feel like that bit of dialogue between Deva & Baahu about sword in soft hands and then the part with "MY QUEEN"..is something I can imagine SSR doing..

Please don't say you are not good with words.. This is really good..Thanks!

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Ye kaisa sawal hain??ofc yahan par,hum sab yahan hain.

I was the admin of the first thread and Hershey is the admin of this thread and neither me nor I think Hershey would object posting the continuations here.

Originally posted by: -ISakuraS-

@bold - I agree.. I don't think any of the regulars here would mind.. we can make a list of all the ff work.. and ask if Hershey can post a table of contents with page # on 1st or 2nd page

Originally posted by: Meenu_Luvs_ASR

I always see a proud mother in Sivagami whenever it concerns Amarendra.. So this is my version of Sivagami

Oh we can add a wink.. I would have forgot to put it there as I thought of it while drafting😆

Well.. If not like SSR, I can try to think like him.. Lest the man is unpredictable.. but I have seen his every movie though😆

Originally posted by: -ISakuraS-

Yeah, she is a proud mother when it comes to Amarendra.. It's like they have a connection that she doesn't have with even her own biological son. I love this version of Sivagami too.. and this is the one I have in my imagination too..

😆Okay.. yay!! When I read it, I was imagining a wink there.. 😉

Yeah, you can.. This FF (hopefully you can make it a ff) had the SSR touch to it.. Every movie? wow.. I have seen few but not all..

Originally posted by: Meenu_Luvs_ASR

Let Everyone read.

Lets wait to hear from hershey n hiral too

Did you PM them Ratna?

Originally posted by: -ISakuraS-

Thanks Ratna for the pm!! I would not have wanted to miss out on this by any chance..

I agree with Ratna, if you can continue this like a ff.. we would love to read it..