A Story Script Idea - More Like My Own Story

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here's a snippet of a movie script I'd love to see - more like my own story. 😆

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For the heck of it, I'm going to use character names. They are random made up names.


So the story starts out with two young college student, Rani & Rahul. At first they don't know each other. But then they meet each other at a raas team tryout. Then they meet again at a mutual friend's birthday party at a club. They become really good friends. They find a lot of confidence in each other to share personal stories with each other. Rather than the usual talking on the phone or meeting in person, they spend hours online chatting with each other about random things. They share each other's problems and everything with each other.


One day Rani is forced to leave the university and head back home (2 hrs away) due to her parents wanting her back near home. Rahul is local to the university. He comes down to the university just to meet Rani. Rani does not invite him up to her dorm room because at this point she is confused and she has a girl friend waiting for her in the room so she doesn't want to make it awkward for her friend. They chat for about 15 min. After that Rahul leaves.


A few nights after she returns home, Rahul starts texting her. Things start to go crazy. So well one night Rahul txts her at 2 am and asks her to call him. Its 2 am, Rani's parents are asleep and Rani's sister is in the bed sleeping in the same room...how the hell am is Rani supposed to call him? So she tells him she can't call at this hour. He says to her that he wants to hear her voice. Rani explains how she can't call right now! Then he's like ok I'll call you! Rani is like nooo and she explains to him why she can't call him or why he couldn't call her. Rahul gets a little upset. Rani apologies and they continue talking. Just in that one night he say lot. He poured out every single emotion in him. He tells he broke up with his girlfriend. He tells Rani how much he is attracted to Rani. How much he wanted to be with her. How much he loved her. He leads Rani on and makes her pour out all her emotions for him! She tells him, how she has as much feelings for him as he has for me. Everything was PERFECT that night. Rani was on top of the world, the happiest girl ever! And then all hell broke lose. The next morning she gets a text saying "I'm so sorry. I was drunk last night. I can't be in a relationship with you..." Her heart sinks...She tells him all her feelings she had for him and this is what he did. He was like I need a physical relationship and you're too far away. Rani swears he did not sound drunk. She couldn't believe it. She was heart broken! She asked him if we could just move on like nothing happened. He said no...

A series of apologies and forgiveness occurs between the two. Rahul apologizes, Rani. forgives. Rahul also at random points would block Rani on Facebook, AIM Instant Messaging, and even texting. Rani did nothing wrong and yet she got this ignorance from him. Then one random night he texts her with this message: '"I'm having dinner with the ex tonight. I don't know what its going to lead to, but I don't want to hurt you later, so I'm just telling you now'. Rani simply wished him the best as she was lost with words. The next morning she finds out he is back with his ex. Yet Rani's biggest mistake was that both of them continued to talk to each other, text each other, and flirt with each other. It got to a point where his gf saw all of Rani and Rahul's texts and got mad. So he was like we can't text for a while. My gf read all of our texts and she's mad. So we were again out of touch for 2 weeks. 2 weeks later Rani finds out from Rahul that he and his gf broke up. Weeks later he breaks Rani's heart once again telling her this relationship can't work out. All he wants is physical, physical, physical. Rani once again is devastated. Then continues the series of apologies and forgiveness. Rahul comes to meet Rani personally and explain his childlessness to her. Though his love for her may not be true, Rani's love is very much true and her heart wants to believe his every word even though her mind may not. All is well and they become ONLY friends again. Rani slowly learns to move on .. its not easy but she slowly moves on. But she still has him as a friend on FB, Instagram, SnapChat and his memories always come back. One random day years later, he messages her on FB after Rani's favorite American Football team loses a big game. He does that again the next year as well this time when that same team wins a big game. He continues to talk to her from time to time, but the only difference now is that he is happily engaged to a girl. The wedding is set. That's the end of the story for Rahul & Rani.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2, make Rahul &Rani were married to their respective partner. Rahul has a son too. Then they met again when Rani assumed Rahul's son was kidnapped by Blackbeast.

What is the fiancee's name? I hope it is Anjali.😎

Rahul's mind was just pointing to "physical, physical & physical". So, Rani should fulfill it with "Slapping, slapping & slapping" him.
Edited by DY.chakravarty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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story of my life
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm sorry you had to fall in love with such a douche. That jerk didn't deserve you or your love!
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Originally posted by: Hazardous

I'm sorry you had to fall in love with such a douche. That jerk didn't deserve you or your love!



Yeah, just my kismat...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww hugs dear. I m so sorry that u fall in love with such a loser but this what love does. Anyways,wish u happy life n I m sure u will get your Mr.right one day. I m happy u moved on ..this is life n life teaches us lessons:-*
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Originally posted by: panidarang

Awww hugs dear. I m so sorry that u fall in love with such a loser but this what love does. Anyways,wish u happy life n I m sure u will get your Mr.right one day. I m happy u moved on ..this is life n life teaches us lessons:-*


Thank you for your kind words. Hope you're right.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Actually come to think of it, can anyone actually make a fan made video trailer on this?

I'd love Shah-Rani to be in it, but don't know about the other characters. If I knew how to make a video, I'd jump on it, but unfortunately I don't.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww :( I feel for you hun! I was(or maybe still am) in love with a douchebag🤢. But at the end of the day, we are way better than them. Hope we find our true love. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry that happened to you . But idk if that would make a good film since their is no happy ending . Maybe a blog or podcast . Yes a podcast like that one Serial about the Muslim guy who allegedly killed his girlfriend. I think podcast is the way to go . An your talking about the patriots right ?? Like when they won those 3 super bowls . Or when they lost those other 2 . I bet more than Rahul you hate Eli manning and David Tyree 😆 😆 😆 Maybe they'll win no. 4 this year . Anyway it was engaging but maybe not a movie . Podcast or maybe even abc family show is the way to go 😳

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