FF:jaane kahaan dil mil gaye Ch 4 updated pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone thanks for the lovely comments 😉 feedback but i'm planing to keep the same title cause it play an important part of the story ... i was wondering could someone plz make a vm for my ff with the dmg title song? it should have some scenes of ARbi and Bhasker n payal along with sunny n bharti gyaan fighting scenes thanks so here it is for all u Arbi lovers

Ch1

Sept 2003

Early Morning 5.A.m at the Arora's on the Terrace

A beautiful voice singing

Oh ho, oh ho ho

O laal meri pat rakhio bala jhoole laalan - 2

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri, o laal meri

Chaar charaag tere baran hamesha - 3

Panjwa mein baaran aayi bala jhoole laalan

O panjwa mein baaran

O panjwa mein baaran aayi bala jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri, o laal meri

Hind sind peera teri naubat vaaje - 3

Naal vaje ghadiyaal bala jhoole laalan

O naal vaje

O naal vaje ghadiyaal bala jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da shaki shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri, o laal meri

O ho, o ho ho, oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh

Ho oh oh, oh ho oh oh oh

Har dam peera teri khair hove - 3

Naam-e-ali beda paar laga jhoole laalan

O naam-e-ali

O naam-e-ali beda paar laga jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da shaki shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri pat rakhio bala jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

(Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla

Voice from the back: Bharti beti Shabaash bhot acha

Girl in a White Salwar Kameez with wet hair turns around

Bharti: Thanks Chachu

KK: ab tum jao ja ke Dance ke Practice karo

Bharti: par chachu it's 5:30 I didn't sleep at all last night

KK: Bharti no but's jao

Bharti :Dancing classical hour pass's

KK: jao go make Breakfast Ready then get ready for Class aur haan muhje ek chup chai do

Bharti: haan mein abhi lake aye

Bharti :Ragu Dhaijaan

DhaiJaan: ji baby

Bharti: ragu khan hai Muhje kitchen mein help karna hai

Dhaijaan: mein kart hi na baby

Bharti: na Dhaijaan app relax karo mein kart hi

Bharti in the kitchen making Brakfast

Hour pass(looks at the lock it's 7:30)

Putting the food on the table

Rakesh Arora(bb Papa): beti go wake Bhasker

Bharti: haan papa runs into the room

Bro wake up papa n kk are at the table hurry

Bhasker: bharti: let me sleep na

Bharti: bro ur tired I've been up since 5 come on get up,

I'm going to wake sunny when I get back be up or else

Sunny's room

Bharti: Sunny wake chachu n papa are at the table

N help me wake up bro come

Back in Bhasker's room

Bharti (putting bhasker's finger in the cup of chai):good morning bro

Bhasker:ouch! Why did u ok ok I'm up

Bharti and sunny laughing :u both get ready I will to

Later on the 3 our ready and going next door to payal's house

Sinha's

Bharti, Bhasker and sunny come in

Bharti: hello uncle how r u where payal not ready yet huh?

Amarjeet :no beta go get here ready or u will be late

Bhasker: when do woman ever get ready and be on time , and for payal it takes extralong just to look decent enough so she wont scare people (smiling)

Bharti going upstairs in to payals room

(Bharti opens the door goes in hears the shower on )

Bharti: payal yaar hurry up

Facing the bathroom door suddenly the door opens and Armaan walks out in a towel (just like ranbir kapoor in sawariya)

They both are shocked looking at each other

Armaan: Bharti tum yahaan kyun aye

Bharti(turning around covering her eyes ): I should be the one asking you that Q's, what are u doing in payal's room, I came to see what was taking her so long

Armaan:The AC isn't working in this room so I let payal sleep in my room

Bharti is next to the bed about leave when she see's a

Bharti Yelling at the top of her lungs: chipkali(jumping on the bed)

Armaan: bharti calm down plz calm down

Bharti foot slips she falls into Armaans arms

Armaan almost loses his balance but his hand hit the radio song starts playing.

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanamPyaar hota hai deewana sanamTujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam (Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanamPyaar hota hai deewana sanam) - 2Ab yahan se kahan jaaye humTeri baahon mein mar jaaye hum

Bharti's eye's are close but Armaan is stairing at her beautiful face and smiling( Moving bharti's hair from her face behind her ear )

Bhasker ,Sunny, Payal run ito the room after hearing the scream

Bhasker: dude Armaan why is my sister in your arms and on top of all that why are u only in a towel?

Bharti opening hers eyes after hearing bhasker voice

Bharti: bro mein payal ko milne aye phir armaan towel then chipkali phir mein armaan ki ba '. bahoon mein gi'. giri blushing looking the other way.

Right when payal and sunny heard chipkali they jumped on the sofa

Sunny:Oh no Chipkali bacho

Payal: Kya Chipkail (jumping around)

Bhasker: yo payal why are u so scared haven't u ever seen your self in the mirror u look just like a chipkali

Payal:kya I look like a Chipkali too you

Sunny: bhi you are so right Chipkail ki bhen lag thi

Payal: you both better run (starts chaseing them out the door)

Armaan slowly puts bharti down

Bharti: Sorry and Thank u Armaan

Armaan:It's alright Senorita, Bade Bade Deshon Mein, Aisi Choti Choti Baatein Hoti Rahti Hain."(smiling)

And anyway thank u

Bharti: huh?

Armaan:For being such a wonderful Alarm clock you know

O laal meri pat rakhio bala jhoole laalan - 2

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar

Winking at her

Bharti smiles and walks out of the room

Armaan thinks to himself :what awesome way to start the Morning and drys his hair with a towel

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Thats it for now dont forget to comment n press the like button😆
Edited by lalmirch28 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Yiippppee
I m the first one to comment.....
Awesome work girl
the last scene was very funny😆😆
Luved the ArBi part
Cont soooooooooon


TC
Mahnaz😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Awesome part dear...
Loved it...
Continue soon

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
@lalmirch: Dear...gorgeous....n rockingggggggggg update.. 👏👏👏👏 Just luv ..luv luvvvvvvddddddd...the way in which u have introducted the characters.. its like watching a show...😛
n hey.. wanted to ask.....that prayer song.. its a sindhi song right??😉
n wow.... first epi..n u had my Janu.. in a towel...wit wet hair..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ OMG...just thinking of him.. that way..has me..☺️☺️☺️☺️ soo hottt..!!
Luvd the ArBi mulakat a lot... esp that it was a fall-catch scene..just like BB....😛 ...very very nice..!! njoyed the whole interaction between Bharti- Bhaskar... n the whole chipkali thing was cute... luvd Payal n Sunny reactions..😆
Gr8 going...dear.. .keep rocking.....❤️
Edited by Armu4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fiza, I LOVE the last part!!
From the moment you said Armu in a towel just like RK from Sawaariya which BTW imagining it alone is ☺️...and then to bharti jumping on the bed and falling into Armaan's arms..and him pressing the Radio and it played Tujhe Dekha..?? 🤣..OMG it was funny! Plus that bit with Sunny and Bhaskar jumping on the bed..and Bhaskar teasing Payal!! 😆 😆..Lovedd it!!..and the icing on the cake was the last part when Armu said "thanks for being my alarm clock" 😆 & also when he said those DDLJ lines..😆 Man i would be so embarassed if anybody heard me sing..😆
Excellent one! 😉
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahnaz_00

Yiippppee
I m the first one to comment.....
Awesome work girl
the last scene was very funny😆😆
Luved the ArBi part
Cont soooooooooon


TC
Mahnaz😊

Thank u so much Mahnaz i too luved the last part 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

@lalmirch: Dear...gorgeous....n rockingggggggggg update.. 👏👏👏👏 Just luv ..luv luvvvvvvddddddd...the way in which u have introducted the characters.. its like watching a show...😛

n hey.. wanted to ask.....that prayer song.. its a sindhi song right??😉
n wow.... first epi..n u had my Janu.. in a towel...wit wet hair..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ OMG...just thinking of him.. that way..has me..☺️☺️☺️☺️ soo hottt..!!
Luvd the ArBi mulakat a lot... esp that it was a fall-catch scene..just like BB....😛 ...very very nice..!! njoyed the whole interaction between Bharti- Bhaskar... n the whole chipkali thing was cute... luvd Payal n Sunny reactions..😆
Gr8 going...dear.. .keep rocking.....❤️

Armu4eva thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo much Sweets for ur kind words
By the way the song is not a prayer song it is a Pakistani song IN the late 1970 a begger in Pak had sung this song it became very famouse becuase in the Late 1990 an Pakistani group Juhnoon made it faouse and well know one of my fav songs glad u liked it .......... i was thinking how i wanted to have armaan shown they i was watching Sawairiya and thought only if Armaan was like that 😳 lol😆 glade u liked it 😃
I will try to make the next chs just as good
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Fiza, I LOVE the last part!!

From the moment you said Armu in a towel just like RK from Sawaariya which BTW imagining it alone is ☺️...and then to bharti jumping on the bed and falling into Armaan's arms..and him pressing the Radio and it played Tujhe Dekha..?? 🤣..OMG it was funny! Plus that bit with Sunny and Bhaskar jumping on the bed..and Bhaskar teasing Payal!! 😆 😆..Lovedd it!!..and the icing on the cake was the last part when Armu said "thanks for being my alarm clock" 😆 & also when he said those DDLJ lines..😆 Man i would be so embarassed if anybody heard me sing..😆
Excellent one! 😉

Blueberry,
Thanks a lot dear
i luved writing the whole Ch espeacialy the Arbi part n loved the bharti jumping on the bed and falling into Armaan's arms..and him pressing the Radio and it played Tujhe Dekha aswell😃 i tryed to bring back some BB moments like how they were n the real bb .hopefuly i can make the other chs just as good glade u njoyed it 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it, very cute😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

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Pyras
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Hey lehka
thanks girl um n by the wAy
some one else is do m the sig for this
one but could u do one for my love
aaj kal one I will pm u the pix or u could
choose them if u want I don't mind
by the way how were ur exams?
I met u rocked passed with flying colors
right tc
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