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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Oh dear lord! Dashing, cutiepie Adam has made his entry in Naley's FF! * Vini drops down FLAT on the floor..BOOM!* 😆
Girl i was so waiting for this part!! And my my the wait for it was so worth every single minute or more like seconds.....Haiiii.........😍
He is ☺️ so ☺️ freaggin uberly ☺️ CUTE in your FF!! ☺️☺️☺️..Me going 🤪 just reading those dialogues of his..!! BTW thanks alot girl for making him so HOT in this FF..I am so liking the details here..ahem ahem..i hear umm 5.11 inch is his height..Hmm not bad..taller than me...😳 😆 😆 😆
"NO..NO ..My tie...NO somehow mangers to press the stop button! 5.11" tall Adam was stuck bend down half way his face on top of the paper shredder.."
Goodness the part with Adam and Jay were outrageously hilarious and so very cute! Adam and shredder machine..? Aww poor boy can't say No!..😆..and how cute the way he says " You came all the way from the US to shred papers.."........😆
Love the way he got stuck..and how Jay comes in and snaps pictures of him..then with Jay pulling his waist.!! Totally Dostana going on.. 🤣 ....
I esp LOVE these underlined lines! Jay and Adam was just too cute..!!
"Mr.Chopra:
I was just what Jay? & Adam I ask you to shred paper not you self
Adam: with a fake laugh....wow sir that a good one... isn't that a good one jay Jay: with same fake laugh .. yeah .. yeah best one ever sir is just .... to good .."
Man Payal is so lucky! Naley i so wanna work in Armaan's company now..!!😳 😆..Love how Armaan came inbetween and said "make the story short"..Adam answers..and Armaan says "Ok i don't want to hear the long story.."...😆...and then he finds such an easy solution.."CUT THE TIE"..😆 😆...and the last part with Adam saying "stop it! We look so gay!"
Boy these two are so cute! Looking forward to reading more parts abt them!
Armaan is so sweet, love that last line he said abt Bharti..
Going Greattttt and do continue yea..!! 😃
Am enjoying your FF So mucho!! 🤗
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
really good and funny part yaar....
totally loved Jay and Adam part.....
Adam opening mouth when he sees Payal and all....Was laughing when reading this.....continue soon
love,
Harika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Loving it Naley👏

Adam-Jay part was really very funny😆

Payal seems very sweet😛

Waiting for ArBi romance☺️

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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Armaan : hesitates yeah.. yeah ..we..do... sleep in the same room.. but... he starts pacing around the room his hands going to all directions trying to get the right word out of him keeps explaining about it ... But finally.. I think.. is best we sleep separately .... is not that I don't... won't to sleep with you! Believe me, I do won't to sleep with you gazing at her! Suddenly turns around closes his eyes what the hell I'm I saying control your self Armaan saying to himself!! turning around to face her again ..Looking down at her but... Bharti.. is just ...With your condition ...& you really.. need to figure things out with us & all that! you understand what I'm saying right ?

This was really well written, very realistic, love parts 6 and 7, not as emotional, but beautifully written all the same.

Bharti: well I think you should but I know you don't have to.. as she leaned towards him so that her face was only inches away from his Bharti's hand moved slowly to his face Armaan was surprise yet he was not able to resist her touch feeling her breath on his face a her jet black hair perfectly falling on the right side of her shoulder her lips was so beautiful tempting him so badly to kiss her but suddenly he moved away from her

Armaan: Bharti ... I don't think is the ...right ..time ..for us...to

Bharti: Armaan...I ..was just trying to....

Armaan: I....know .....Believe me girl I really want to kiss you.. so badly... but I..think...

Bharti : Armaan Ssh.... Keeps her finger on his lips..Armaan I was just try to wipe the chocolate for the side of your mouth, Bharti wipe the chocolate which was on the side of his mouth ,there that's all done what were you telling about badly kiss you wanted smiling at him

Armaan: so embarrass he hesitates again I...was...just saying..I thought you were ...going to ..kiss..I really ...miss..you..kissing...me so..I..

I really loved this scene, too cute and funny too...

Bharti: start walking towards the door stops herself turns to walk near Armaan again Good night Armaan she lifts herself up slightly from her toes to place a kiss on his cheek ..Looking in to Armaan's eyes thank you for everything for being the person you are... thank you as she walks away from him

Armaan: was standing still lost in Bharti just looking at her leaving the room.. he kept his hand on his cheek where Bharti kissed him !! God you still make my heart beat fast & slower... thank you for coming in to my life again whispering softly to himself

and this last part is very sweet, I really want to see ArBi close and see Armaan happy....hope this whole mystery doesn't unravel too soon...hope ArBi have time to grow close....well done on these 4 amazing parts, really been a pleasure to read...continue soon



wow Sohana thanx again🤗 love reading ur comments all the time
I'm glad you enjoy the last 4 parts

love
take care
naley


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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

Armaan: everyone keeps on saying that everything will be ok ! is it really going to be ok..... is just I lover so much ....I cant lose her again

red part: awwww😳😳😳
i love this part yaar..... soooo cute but the Adam and jay part was soooo funny😆😆😆
and yah they were sounding sooooo gay😆😆
really fun
but i am felling good to know that armaan is very happy😳.. i wish that he be happy... at least for a time😳..... i love what he said to mary... that he found something he lose😳😳😳... sooooo sweet
i love it yaar
and payal want romance detalis😉.... and armaan will try to😉.... soooo cute😳
coun soooooonnnnnnn



thanx girl me soo glad you like it 🤗
yeah trying my best make them geeky & funny
take care
Naley


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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Oh my god..... what a hilarious bit... 🤣🤣🤣 The whole Adam-Jay bit... OMG OMG .....🤣🤣🤣

Just luvd how Adam got himself shreded having been stumped on seeing payal.... awesome yaar!! n that whole pulling frm the wait.. .very very happy n GAY part..🤣🤣 Naley sweetie.. very cool...
Btw... Armu is soo smart... he caught that Adam was staring at Payal n ended up shredding himself..!!😆
Luvd how Armu is feeling all happy n excited after the previous days experience wit Bharti.. Looking fwd to a lot of romance Naley... so just like Payal.. i wil say...😛
Tanu waiting to knw all the juicy bits of the ArBi romance 😍 Rocking epi...👏



AWWWWWWWWW girl Adam Jay will keep on getting hilarious 😆
thank you girl soo for ur wonderful comments
girl the juicy bits will be coming ASAP 😉
take care
Naley





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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oh dear lord! Dashing, cutiepie Adam has made his entry in Naley's FF! * Vini drops down FLAT on the floor..BOOM!* 😆
Girl i was so waiting for this part!! And my my the wait for it was so worth every single minute or more like seconds.....Haiiii.........😍
He is ☺️ so ☺️ freaggin uberly ☺️ CUTE in your FF!! ☺️☺️☺️..Me going 🤪 just reading those dialogues of his..!! BTW thanks alot girl for making him so HOT in this FF..I am so liking the details here..ahem ahem..i hear umm 5.11 inch is his height..Hmm not bad..taller than me...😳 😆 😆 😆
"NO..NO ..My tie...NO somehow mangers to press the stop button! 5.11" tall Adam was stuck bend down half way his face on top of the paper shredder.."
Goodness the part with Adam and Jay were outrageously hilarious and so very cute! Adam and shredder machine..? Aww poor boy can't say No!..😆..and how cute the way he says " You came all the way from the US to shred papers.."........😆
Love the way he got stuck..and how Jay comes in and snaps pictures of him..then with Jay pulling his waist.!! Totally Dostana going on.. 🤣 ....
I esp LOVE these underlined lines! Jay and Adam was just too cute..!!
"Mr.Chopra: I was just what Jay? & Adam I ask you to shred paper not you self
Adam: with a fake laugh....wow sir that a good one... isn't that a good one jay Jay: with same fake laugh .. yeah .. yeah best one ever sir is just .... to good .."
Man Payal is so lucky! Naley i so wanna work in Armaan's company now..!!😳 😆..Love how Armaan came inbetween and said "make the story short"..Adam answers..and Armaan says "Ok i don't want to hear the long story.."...😆...and then he finds such an easy solution.."CUT THE TIE"..😆 😆...and the last part with Adam saying "stop it! We look so gay!"
Boy these two are so cute! Looking forward to reading more parts abt them!
Armaan is so sweet, love that last line he said abt Bharti..
Going Greattttt and do continue yea..!! 😃
Am enjoying your FF So mucho!! 🤗



Viniiiiiii girl i sooo love you thank u sooooo much for loving Adam Bordy like me 😳
sooooo freaking happy you loved Adam's entry u are right he is reaggin uberly ☺️ CUTE
thank u loads girl for your sweet crazy Comments i just love reading them sooo much 🤗
take care
luv
Naley


Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: haaki.b

really good and funny part yaar....

totally loved Jay and Adam part.....
Adam opening mouth when he sees Payal and all....Was laughing when reading this.....continue soon
love,
Harika



thanx sweet hariki for liking it 🤗
me glad Jay & Adam made u laugh
take care
Naley
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Loving it Naley👏

Adam-Jay part was really very funny😆

Payal seems very sweet😛

Waiting for ArBi romance☺️



thanx girl soooooooo much 🤗
I'm sooooooo glad u are enjoying my FF
take care
naley
Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

CHANGE

Part 9

Payal :Armaan you wont lose her again because everything is going to be ok..my friend deserves the best right now & he already have it & that someone is worth fighting for .. now go spend time with your wife !! don't for get payal waiting for all the romantic details

Armaan: well I'll try my best with the romance.... bye payal!!


Bharti was in her room going through her things when she found beautiful hair Clip



Amieera: Bharti di what are you doing

Bharit: isn't this beautiful showing the clip to Amirra

Amieera: yes it belongs to my mother

Bharti: I wish I had known... Remember your mum

Amieera: me to... she died while giving birth to me

Bhart: I'm so sorry Amieera comes near holds her hand

Amieera: is ..ok Bharti di Bhaiyya never let me feel my mum's absents! But it was always there when I saw children with there mother it always reminded me of her, then our dad died when I was 14 Baiyya was only 23 then he filled up my dad's place to... it was fun my brother becoming my parents but I never realized how much my Baiyya was going through because he never showed it never ever let me feel it .. he always told me that our parents were looking at us guiding us to believe that life is worth living & that believed will help create the fact... I' hardly knew my mum but I'm so glad that I got the best gift from my mum my Baiyya as tears sting on her eyes

Bharti: Hugs her...Amieera is ok

Amieera: Bharti di.... Baiyya loves you a lot he always did....he will never do anything hurt you..you are his life Bharti di..

Bharti: I know dear .. hugs her stroking her hair suddenly occurred to her that she couldn't remember Armaan's love for her but the feeling in her heart right now was she is already falling in love with him again & this time she will remember as she breaks away from the hug . can I tell you something ?

Amieera: what?

Bharti: I know that I can't remember anything about the past but I'm glad I got married to your Baiyya to become part of this family ...to become the life of your Baiyya

Amieera: me to....

Bharti: wiping Amirra's tears now stop crying see you made me cry to smiling at Amirra is a beautiful day & we are not going to let some tears stop us from enjoying the day & you told me your friends are coming to practice the stage play ?

Amieera: I almost for got hitting her head ..they must be here already

Bharti: Ok then let's go & practice in the garden is a beautiful day

Amieera: ok good idea di lets go... both of them walking towards the door suddenly Amirra stop half way went back took her mum's hair clip which was on Bharti's bed & clip it on Bahrti's hair there now you look beautiful just like today they left the room

Amieera & her Friends was in the garden practicing the play while Bharti & Aunt Mary looking at it

Armaan arrived home to find everyone missing he ask the maid to find out that they have gone to the far garden to practice the stage play

Armaan: changed his cloths & went out to the far garden as he saw Amirra's friends in the garden with Bharti & Aunt Mary he came towards them waving his hand to Amieera & her friends as the girls started waving they're hands starts giggling blushing away seeing Armaan

Amieera: stop it guys that's my brother... the girls stop giggling & concentrate on the play

Armaan: sat down beside Bharti crossed his legs in front of him on the blanket which was place on the grass, Hi... whispering near her ear

Bharti: hey ...as she whispered back I think your sisters friends seem to have there 1st huge crush on you

Armaan: well being the charming guy I am... I bet they do smiling back at Bharti...........so what's the play

Bharti: Romeo & Juliet the funny version is really funny your sister is very talented

Armaan : it comes from her Baiyya giving her a cute smile

Bharti: o really ...looks at him again

Armaan: yeah....shacking his head.. It will be my pleasure to teach you sometimes free of charge smiling a way

Bhart: I'll keep that in mind as she smiles at him looks at the play again

Armaan: notices the clip on Bharti's hair as he gently touches the clip...it always looked beautiful on you...

Bharti: turns slowly to face Armaan as his hand gently slips form Bharti's hair on to her cheek they keep on glaring at each other eyes

Suddenly out of nowhere it starts to rain the rain was coming down so hard everyone rushed to the long path so they can reach the house quickly leaving everything behind except Bharti & Armaan

Bharti: closes her eyes lifting her face up letting the hard cool rain drops lashing against her face

Armaan : quickly holds on to her hand .. Bharti let's go we are soaking ....Let's go..

Bharti: opens her eyes looks at Armaan...I can remember

Armaan: what?

Bharti: yes... I can remember this moment the rain being here in the same moment with you in the rain

Armaan : comes close to Bharti smiling at her touches her cheek softly it was our first kiss

Bharti: yes... her mind flying back to the moment of the kiss it was all broken but she could see Armaan in the rain in a dark path she coming running towards him Armaan reaching out touch her face his lips coming down on her suddenly it all fades away.. NO......NO... as she keeps her hands on her head & fall down unconscious

Armaan: Bharti ...Bhati ...as he reaches out for her, swooped her up in his arms ....jaan please talk to me... open your eyes jaan ...Please jaan....gripping her tightly in his arms started carrying her towards the house

Everyone was shock to see Armaan carrying Bharti her head was fallen back from Armaan's arm unconscious

Amieera: came running in the rain Baiyya what happened as they took Bharti in to the house keeping her on the bed

Armaan kept on pacing round panicking the room while Aunt Mary & Amieera changed Bharti's wet clothes puts dry warm cloths on her & covering her with thick warm quilt

Aunt Mary: stop panicking Armaan ,Bharti is going to be ok

Armaan: is all my fault ..I made her Remember ...

Aunt Mary: stop it now Armaan! stop blaming you self for everything ... come here stay with your wife

Amieera: look di is opening her eyes

Bharti: blearily forced her eyes open & raised them up to see Armaan as she smiled slightly looking at Armaan reached out to him

Armaan: sat down on the edge of the bed to gently pull her into his arms ..o jaan you scared me so much ..don't you ever do that to me again ...as he kissers her head & pulled her even closer to him

Aunt Marry: whispering to Amieera I think we better leave them along they went out quickly & closers the door behind them

Bhart: still in Armaan's arms..Armaan will you stay here with me to night

Armaan: looks in to Bhartis deep brown eyes finally says ...ok

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Edited by naley4ever - 14 years ago

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