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WOW Naley...I know that I'm quite delayed, haven't been to the forum in quite a while...just read part 4 and it's just wow! You are so so so immensely talented, I am truly in love with your writing style, besides the fact that your actual storyline is so unique and so amazing, the way you write is indescribable. From that intense Armaan-Bhaskar scene to the touching, emotional and really simple and beautiful reunion between ArBi. I can feel Bharti's confusion and how scared she must be. Really lovely how the doctor explained to Armaan to stick by his love and help her and loved the end when he is so happy. Hope he can recreate his love and keep Bharti always by his side. One of my favourite emotions that you portrayed, was how nervous Armaan was to go and see Bharti...Very innocent, very genuine....I'm sorry I'm just throwing adjective after adjective at you, but I don't know how to describe your writing. I haven't read anything in a long time, I'm glad I started with yours....Love it sooo much! You should have started writing earlier, truly are a gem of a writer...
I just started reading part 5 and something crossed my mind, what's going to happen with the hitman (gasp)...I hope he still doesn't come after Armaan...okay well I'll continue reading now... Aunt Mary is very sweet...the whole Bhaskar-Armaan confrontation was well written and what a twist about Bhaskar's wife....so much mystery, so many unanswered questions...hope to find out about it all soon....I really love how you write all the ArBi scenes, even the light-hearted scenes with her changing. Wow, didn't expect Tony to approach her, hope he doesn't do anything without Bharti paying him and that will take a while, but I'm sure Armaan will want to find out about him.....love the end with Armaan leading her to their home by holding her hand.....too sweet
Will read rest and comment later......
Sohana
Armaan : hesitates yeah.. yeah ..we..do... sleep in the same room.. but... he starts pacing around the room his hands going to all directions trying to get the right word out of him keeps explaining about it ... But finally.. I think.. is best we sleep separately .... is not that I don't... won't to sleep with you! Believe me, I do won't to sleep with you gazing at her! Suddenly turns around closes his eyes what the hell I'm I saying control your self Armaan saying to himself!! turning around to face her again ..Looking down at her but... Bharti.. is just ...With your condition ...& you really.. need to figure things out with us & all that! you understand what I'm saying right ?
Bharti: well I think you should but I know you don't have to.. as she leaned towards him so that her face was only inches away from his Bharti's hand moved slowly to his face Armaan was surprise yet he was not able to resist her touch feeling her breath on his face a her jet black hair perfectly falling on the right side of her shoulder her lips was so beautiful tempting him so badly to kiss her but suddenly he moved away from her
Armaan: Bharti ... I don't think is the ...right ..time ..for us...to
Bharti: Armaan...I ..was just trying to....
Armaan: I....know .....Believe me girl I really want to kiss you.. so badly... but I..think...
Bharti : Armaan Ssh.... Keeps her finger on his lips..Armaan I was just try to wipe the chocolate for the side of your mouth, Bharti wipe the chocolate which was on the side of his mouth ,there that's all done what were you telling about badly kiss you wanted smiling at him
Armaan: so embarrass he hesitates again I...was...just saying..I thought you were ...going to ..kiss..I really ...miss..you..kissing...me so..I..
I really loved this scene, too cute and funny too...
Bharti: start walking towards the door stops herself turns to walk near Armaan again Good night Armaan she lifts herself up slightly from her toes to place a kiss on his cheek ..Looking in to Armaan's eyes thank you for everything for being the person you are... thank you as she walks away from him
Armaan: was standing still lost in Bharti just looking at her leaving the room.. he kept his hand on his cheek where Bharti kissed him !! God you still make my heart beat fast & slower... thank you for coming in to my life again whispering softly to himself
and this last part is very sweet, I really want to see ArBi close and see Armaan happy....hope this whole mystery doesn't unravel too soon...hope ArBi have time to grow close....well done on these 4 amazing parts, really been a pleasure to read...continue soon
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Part 8
Armaan: was standing still lost in Bharti just looking at her leaving the room.. he kept his hand on his cheek where Bharti kissed him !! God you still make my heart beat fast & slower... thank you for coming in to my life again whispering softly to himself
NEXT MORNING
Armaan was up early having his morning coffee dress up to go to office
Aunt Mary: you look very happy today
Armaan : smiling at Aunt Mary ! Aunt Mary do you know that feeling you get when you loss something very special very valuable that you cant replace it with anything, you keep on searching for it till you find it but finally you lose all hope of not getting it again Suddenly one day accidentally you find it you feel so happy so relief that you fund it & you will never every lose it again because that is the only thing that makes you the person who you truly are '.I'm having the same feeling right now .....Aunt Mary do you think she will forgive me
Aunt Mary: Armaan stop it now! don't look back grieving over the past it is all ready gone son & you cant change that! a bout Bharti forgiving you the future well it has yet to come Armaan you have to live in the present with Bharti for who she is right now & that will make it so beautiful it will be worth remembering always don't worry son just be your self everything will be ok
Armaan: you always make everything so ease to understand... thank you
Aunt Mary: sweet heart you are truly well come now go to office finish your work ...You better come back soon...you know someone is waiting for you smiling at him
Armaan: I will don't worry .... as he leaves to office
In the Aviation Company it was a very busy Monday morning staff was just arriving to office & Adam arrived at office bit early just about go start his work Mr.Chopra gives him some unwonted project peppers to get rid off
Adam: takes the peppers to the paper shredder while shredding the paper..wow man you came all the way from US to shred Mr.Chopra's unwanted pepper super cool man! Why can't you just say No man why can't you ever say no! as he murmured to him self sending the pepper to the machine
Suddenly Cool breezes brushed against his face as he turns to the direction where the breezes was coming he sees Payal coming in ( every time Adam& jay sees Payal is all dream land Payal)
Payal : Hey Adam with Beautiful smile wiggling her fingers
Adam: his mouth opens keeps staring at her
Payal: ..okay bye Adam she leaves because Adam was not responding
Adam: still mouth open feels as if someone is pulling him he turns as he has put his tie in to the shredder he panics what the hell...he straggles trying to pull it out but it keeps on pulling the tie in pretty fast..NO..NO ..My tie...NO somehow mangers to press the stop button! 5.11" tall Adam was stuck bend down half way his face on top of the paper shredder
Jay enters the office in hurry his was already late as he passerby the Copy room to find Adam bend over struggling face on the paper shredder staring at Adam for a while I'm sure it must be American office morning ritual as he shakes his head walks a way ..suddenly he stops him self it cant be as he quickly goes to the copy room
Jay: Adam are you all right?
Adam: jay is that you dude ...man I'm so glad to see you.......
Jay: dude what's wrong with you?
Adam: Apparently my tie is stuck to the shredder
Jay: What!... busting out of laughter some how mangers to catch him self What the hell what happened dude?
Adam: explains the incident which happened with Payal
Jay: Busting out of laughter even more.. dude you must be kidding me?
Adam : jay do you think I'll kid around with you right now when my back is killing me apparently I cant feel my lags no I'm not kidding .... in anger dude laughing is so not the option right now ...hello over here guy stuck in the shredder
Jay: sorry man But is so funny I cant help it....dude I so need to take some pictures of you in this pose he takes his Mobile flashing away ok man give me your best paper shredding tie stuck smile ....
Adam: cut it out man... his arms moving allover trying to stop jay
Jay : chill dude these pictures are so wrath it ...Dude how in the world can I get you out now ?
Adam: do something man use your god forgiven brains for god sake I'm totally screwed if MrChopra comes hurry up man
Jay: put his chin in his hand rubbing it as he keeps thinking of what to do.. I got it!! he goes near Adam grabs him by the waist & starts pulling him with all his strength
Adam : Stop.... Stop........ it tickles
Jay : dude can you pleas stop moving... try pushing the shredding machine I'll pull you on three..........
Adam: one
Jay: two
Jay& Adam: thre......e
Adam: dude why did you stop?
Jay: still holding on to Adam waist ........Mr.Chopra
Mr.Chopra: Mr.Adam .Mr. jay may I ask what in the gods name is going on here
Jay: still holding on to Adam ....lets go of his waist quickly stands up he hesitates sir...I.....was..just..
Mr.Chopra: I was just what Jay? & Adam I ask you to shred paper not you self
Adam: with a fake laugh....wow sir that a good one... isn't that a good one jay
Jay: with same fake laugh .. yeah .. yeah best one ever sir is just .... to good
Mr.Chopra: Stop it right NOW!!! In anger Mr. Adam you know that you are in probation period isn't this your last month do you won't to make it another 5
Adam: NO........ No sir....No..
Mr.Chopra; ok then I will give you five seconds to tell me what happened? One...two...three...four..fi...
Adam: sir....I..Saw...pay.....
Jay: Armaan sir.
Adam: what....Armaan sir
Armaan: what's going on here? Adam why are you keeping your face on the shredder?
Adam: is long story sir ......
Armaan: make it short
Adam: my tie is tuck to the shredder
Armaan: ok... I don't won't to hear the long one right now! Mr.Chopra stop wasting time please arrange the meeting!
Mr.Chopra: ok sir as he leaves staring at jay & Adam
Armaan: Jay get him out of that & guys try to act like Adults next time as he smiles at jay while looking at Adam ....& Adam is best if you avoided the copy room next time
Jay: goes & grabs Adams waist again to pull him
Armaan: Jay what are you doing?
Jay: try to get him out?
Armaan: looks up o god jay use a scissor & guys next time concentrate on work not Girls ...as he leaves shaking his head smiling a way
Adam: dude why dint I think of that
Jay : shut up dude ...as he brings the scissors & cuts out the tie
Adam: I'm free.... I'm free....I love you man ...as he hugs jay... I'm free
Jay: dude I think you should let go! we look totally gay right now
Adam; I know but I still love you as they break off from the hug leaves the Copy room
Armaan: meet payal told her the complete story about Bharti's condition
Payal : wow ...I'm so sorry Armaan
Armaan: no it's ok payal ....I love her so much ...nothing is going to change that
Payal: I know .... You two are truly made for each other .... why don't you bring Bharti here to office?
Armaan: I don't think is a good idea ... Bharti not remembering anything
Payal: I understand.. You better be going home then...if there is any problem in the office I'll call you ... don't worry everything will be ok
Armaan: everyone keeps on saying that everything will be ok ! is it really going to be ok..... is just I lover so much ....I cant lose her again
Payal :Armaan you wont lose her again because everything is going to be ok....my friend deserves the best right now & he already have it & that someone is worth fighting for .... now go spend time with your wife !! don't for get Payal waiting for all the romantic details
Armaan: well I'll try my best with the romance... bye Payal!!
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