Armaan/Bharti on Pee Loon, Pg 26 :)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: BUBLAI
The VM is superb ... the scenes that you have selected for this VM is absolutely perfect ... the song is beautiful and the ambience that you have created through your VM is beautiful too 😛... Great work !!!👏 completely loved the editing and the effects that you have used ... If you hadn't mentioned it that it's your First Vm , nobody would have got it by viewing this Vm ...Trust me on that ... it has been beautifully made .... make some more Vms dear .... would love to watch them too ....

Thanks alot Arpita for watching it and am glad you like it!...:)

I love this song too..😃..Esp the later part of the song the "sa re ga ma pa" part..Sry i don't know what you call that part..😆 😆..But i hope you get me....😆..I love that intense part thats why for that part i put ArBi's fight...:) and glad it created that ambience for ya..

And sure with all these kind reviews am getting i'll be more than delighted to make some more VMs...

Thx again for your kind kind words...😳..Me VERY HAPPY dear!...Though i personally didn't find my editing good actually...:(......But still love with you said...Esp the part wher you said "no one would have guessed that it's my first VM"...Feels good to hear that!..😳

All the hardwork paid off then!...Phew!...😆 😆

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray
Loved it Viny😊
Good selection of songs and scenes😊
This is what I want to tell ArBi "tu muskura" always😊
and to you as well😆
Very good as a first VM👏
loved the sweet and cute ArBi scenes😊

But there are scopes for improvement😊
try to remove the avs thing😊 (you wanted criticism😆)

Yes yes Kanu am smiling now reading your comments!..Like this...😃.................😳..

So nice of ya for watching it despite your tight schedule & am very happy that you love it!..

Feels good when ppl appreciate your work and i appreciate your comments too..

And yes dear tell me the bad points..!..😆..Actually honestly, i didn't find my editing

good..:(..Some scenes were abit off...but sure sure i'll take you "Criticism"...and try to remove the Avs thing..

Actually i dun know how to remove...i'm using the link Ghaz gave me..and it's the unactivated one..thats why the Avs word is ther..:(................

Thanks again for watching it!!...😃

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rinkyyy.

@-Rinki-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

O-M-G :)

The song selection & the scenes were amazing Vini =)
Srsly believe me .. My speakers weren't working .. But still ONLY becaust it was YOU .. I downloaded it & put it into a CD & saw it in the Tv 😳

Hahaha .. Amazing man .. My mom was like Who are they? Theyr'e so pweetyy ❤️
Hehe I miss Arbi :((

Keep making man .. They are louly ❤️

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Pari_Rinki
O-M-G :)

The song selection & the scenes were amazing Vini =)
Srsly believe me .. My speakers weren't working .. But still ONLY becaust it was YOU .. I downloaded it & put it into a CD & saw it in the Tv 😳

Hahaha .. Amazing man .. My mom was like Who are they? Theyr'e so pweetyy ❤️
Hehe I miss Arbi :((

Keep making man .. They are louly ❤️

Oh wow Rinki!!..🤗 That's like the sweetest thing eva!!..

You downloaded it and put it onto a CD.??...☺️....Thanks alot girl..wow you actually went through the trouble....:)...

Yea man missing ArBi very much too..!! Didn't know you watch BB...but yes i do now...Hope they come back on TV soon...ArBi are like the perfecttttt On-screen couple...:)...And they sure are one pretty couple too...:).Me too love the song..

THANKS alot for watching it in your TV..Hahah my VM made it onto TV..!!.

WOW..!!....😆 😆...

Sure will try to make some more...:)....Will be my pleasure to make..Feels extremely good to get such reviews...But girl i hope your speakers can work then..cos i woudn't want you to go thru the trouble of having to put it on a CD again....

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rinkyyy.

@-Rinki-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oh wow Rinki!!..🤗 That's like the sweetest thing eva!!..

You downloaded it and put it onto a CD.??...☺️....Thanks alot girl..wow you actually went through the trouble....:)...

Yea man missing ArBi very much too..!! Didn't know you watch BB...but yes i do now...Hope they come back on TV soon...ArBi are like the perfecttttt On-screen couple...:)...And they sure are one pretty couple too...:).Me too love the song..

THANKS alot for watching it in your TV..Hahah my VM made it onto TV..!!.😳

WOW..!!....😆 😆...

Sure will try to make some more...:)....Will be my pleasure to make..Feels extremely good to get such reviews...But girl i hope your speakers can work then..cos i woudn't want you to go thru the trouble of having to put it on a CD again....😳

Aaaww Thanx for the utterly sweet reply 😳

& NO SHUT UP! 😆

Caause of you I could switch on the TV (:
& Your'e video made my mom go Ooo La La too :P

The last time she did that was when She saw Shahid in Star Screen 😆

Thanks :D

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sukirtiprincess
cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Thanks Hina....😊

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Pari_Rinki

Aaaww Thanx for the utterly sweet reply 😳

& NO SHUT UP! 😆

Caause of you I could switch on the TV (:
& Your'e video made my mom go Ooo La La too :P

The last time she did that was when She saw Shahid in Star Screen 😆

Thanks :D

😆 😆 😆 Oh so your mum still having the Hots for Shahid huh...😆....sure sure if my VMs allows you to watch TV more often then no problem me will make more..(hmm one more ah..not more as of yet...still haven't gotten the hang of it..😆..) so that you can watch it on TV and then you and mummy can be happy!!...😃...Thx dear..so funny!!....😆

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hey Guys..!! :)

Am back with my Second VM..😊

It's ArBi

Dil Gira Dafatan

Link : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=44b-mp9l0M8

There is just ONE problem..😆..

After making it i realised that the"Non-Activated" Logo that appears usually is extremely HUGE when watching the video..😆 So umm am sorry about that..Hope it doesn't really block out much..and next time..Promise y'll the logo will be smaller...😃😆.....

Also i chose this song because i really love it alot. Very meaningful song, the lyrics especially...It's so dreamy like and romantic..Love love love the melody of it..and esp love the instruments that's being for this piece...SO.....I thought of putting the lyrics down with the English translation..The reason being some of the words are very deep in meaning for me to understand (😆) and i really wanted to know the exact meaning of the song and not just love it for it's melody..So yea thought of sharing with y'll..:)

POINT TO NOTE: I DID NOT TRANSLATE THIS AT ALL ..(like abit duh...😆)

Credits for the translated lyrics : http://bollywoodtadka.com/2009/01/lyrics-song-%E2%80%98dil-gira-dafatan%E2%80%99-from-the-movie-delhi-6/

Okay i said too much..

Enjoy then! =)

The Video and the lyrics 😊

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Dil Mera...Dil Mera...Dil Mera.....
(my heart)

Dil gira kahin pe
(my heart has fallen somewhere)

Dil Gira kahin per daf_atan

(daf_atan: (urdu) all of a sudden, unexpectedly)
(my heart has fallen somewhere, all of a sudden)

Jaane magar ye nayan

(but these eyes know)

Teri khamosh zulfon ki gehraiyaan

(the depths of your silent hairlocks)

Hai jahan dil meraa uljha hua hai

(where my heart is entangled)

Wahin kho gaya

(there itself it, the heart, has got lost)

Tu magar hai bekhabar, hai bekhabar?

(but you are ignorant of it all)

Kyun goonj rahi hai dhadkan....

(why is the sound of heartbeats echoing)

Seepiyon ke honth se moti chhalak rahein hain

(pearls are getting sprinkled from the lips of shells)

NOTE: Pearls got formed in shell in the sea.
the shells look like lips, in which teeth are like pearls which are
seen. meaning ? the girl is smiling.

Ghazlon ki sohbat mein geet bhi behek rahein hai

(in the companionship of ghazals, songs are also getting intoxicated)

NOTE: ghazals are more a form of earthly, beauty things ? sharab,
shabab, zulf, mehbooba, compared to other forms of poems. So, the
ghazals are affecting those other songs also.

Samandar lahron ki chaadar odh ke so raha hai
(the sea, having covered itself with a sheet of the waves, is seeping)

Par main jaagoon
(but I stay awake)

Ek khumaari, ek nashaa sa ho raha hai

(a sort of intoxication is taking over me)

Tu magar hai bekhabar, hai bekhabar

(but you are ignorant)....

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

wow!! Vini what a VM😃

I loved the song, I have never herad this before but it is so melodious and magical.

Thanks for the translation and explanation, the VM looked much better after reading your explanation. 😊

Loved the editing. its much much better than your earlier VM 😊

So one word for your VM

"Magical"