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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Dear Haaki,

Welcome to our "FF writer group"🤗
Lovely character sketch and intro👏
Really want to read more😊

BTW I was thinking to ask you whether you are from Andhra Pradesh, as your FF title reminded me the song "love makes life beautiful" from the film "Bommarillu", its one of my favourite movie.

Today I saw your intro and I came to know that you are from Hyderabad😊
Anyways continue soon😊

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Nice FF dear....
Loved the concept...
Continue soon...
Thanx for the PM

Take Care
Zoya

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey first of all well come to the world of FF writers🤗

its an awsome part yaar

love it 😃

really looking forwerd for more

write more soon😃

Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

hey i loved this epi

i found this line funny

Payal:me too.Who is this guy who wants to marry you?😆

like she is shocked that how can someone marry her😆

and bharti got ready as she heard of chocolates😆 she is like a kid

well i thinkg lots of girls will do anything for chcolates

nice part

coun soon😃

*edited* ohhhh poor armaan

must be very hurt😭😭

Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Awesome part dear...
Well I only read the intro and read the full part now...
It was awesome...
Loved the way Armaan send Bharti marriage proposal and her parents tried to get her married in a day...
Poor Armaan...
Bharti did not agreed to marry him....
I felt so bad for him...
The way he was telling her mother about Bharti...
I was feeling so pity for him...
Continue soon dear...

Take Care
Zoya

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Loved the 2nd part as well👍🏼
Poor Armaan😔
But it was not Bharti's fault. How can her father force her for the marriage?
Loved Payal and Shraddha😊

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Luvd the epi frm Start to Finish yaar.. 👏

I totally sympathise wit Bharti for having walked out like that.. coz its really unfair to b forced to marry a total stranger n that too without ones consent... 👍🏼 am with u Bharti..

Really liked what Shraddha told Payal.. abt Friendship.. n Friends.. n njoyed the plan they came up with to Cheer Bharti.. 😛

N gosh.. i feel terrible for Armu.. must b so so ..disappointed for no fault of his.. 😭 Just pray ArBi find a way to each other. .n soon..!!

Gud going dear.. keep it up.. 🤗

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Great going Haaki!..

It's good that Bharti did that.. I mean like what everyone else said, she shdn't be forced into marrying somone whom she doesn't know..

What i found funny was Armaan sending Bharti his CD..😆 😆..But yes poor Armu..Apparently Bharti knew him before is it?..I mean he keeps on saying she doesn't recognise me..And well Payal and Shrada are cute too!..Shopping and ice cream does cheer Bharti up! Cute!...

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Hey Sweety 😃

Your FF is really good, its an amazing start, i havent read many FFs, so i wont be able to compare, but i loved the twist u put up 👏👏

Im really looking fwd to it 😳😃

Do update soon. 😊

Love,

Humera 🤗

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

loved the character sketch,intro and the 1st part too ... the twist is interesting ... would love to know what happens next ... please continue soon ...😛

Arpita ...

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