'My FF'luv makes life beautiful!updated part13pg20

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i was inspired by all of them who wrote FFs. i also thought why cant i write one
This is just an attempt of writing an FF
hope u like it.😊
~LUV MAKES LIFE BEAUTIFUL~
CHARACTER SKETCH:
Armaan sinha:24 year old guy. He is the son of Sudha Sinha.He works as a photographer for a big magazine in New York. But later,he shifts to mumbai for one reason.After coming to Mumbai,he works as a photographer in Mens Universe.
Bharti Malhotra:She is a final year student at a University in Mumbai. she is a very cheerful, talkative and self independent girl. and is very thoughtful about her future. She wanted to complete her studies and work for 1 year and then think about marriage.She is the only daughter of Lakshmi Narayan and Rajshri.Lakshmi Narayan is a strict person and a bit orthodox type.he settles a marriage for her without her consent.Later theres a big fight between her and her father and she leaves the house
Bhaskar Sinha: Cousin of Armaan. Best friend pf Shradda and a friend of Payal... A good guy but a chota mota flirt.
Payal Mehra:She is the best friend or Bharti. Infact Payal and Bharti are very close to each other from their childhood. She was the neighbor of Bharti in gwalior. It was because of Payal that Lakshmi Narayan had sent Bharti to Mumbai for studies
Shradda Mehta: seh is the roommate of Bharti and Payal. Three of them are great friends and share a good rapport with each other.
Sudha Sinha: Mom of Armaan nd Aksha. She works as a CEO in a big company in New York. She loves her kids and always wanted to see them happy......Armaan stays with her whereas she sent Aksha to Switzerland for studies.
INTRO
A pleasant morning in Mumbai,Birds are chirping and flying playfully all around .As it was early morning, there was no much traffic on the roads.
Then the scene shifts to a three bedroom apartment. In one of the rooms,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏 very beautiful and welcome to the FF club
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey dear..welcome 🤗to the prestigious club of BBs super duper FF writers..!!
Gr8 job yaar..!! Well liked ur character sketch.. n u knw what.. i m really tempted to say that the first epi.. motivates me to think..that it culd b the beginning for 'Sasural Genda Phool' 😍😍😍
Gud going and keep writing.. !! 👏👏👏 👍🏼
Side Note: The first part of the first epi.. reminded me of zoyas intro scene of Rab ne bana di jodi where payal,bharti n araina r roomies in mumbai.. but then u brought in the marriage twist..so thats a FRESH ONE.. 😉 Luvd it..yaar!!
Pls write soon.. ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazin and welcom yaar :)) do cont soon xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello Haaki welcome to FF writing..!. 😊
Well good intro..I'm thinking this guy that BHarti is gonna marry is Armaan..And also the guy whom she met at the train is Armaan..Ooohh kinda exciting to see how this goes post married life..like if they do get married then Bharti being all angry,kinda like a love-hate relationship thing going on...
As for resemblance to any FF..well i guess the name Sudha only...😆..That so reminds me of Jassie's FF..Ah love the character Sudha there!..But am sure the Sudha here in your FF will be rocking too!..It's exciting to see what happens SO
Do carry on yea..!!:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved will comment as soon as i read it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Immy:thnx for your encouragement my dear brother
i will try my best to keep this FF interesting
@Armu4eva:well thnx for liking it.i will not make it resemble to any other FF.i will continue soon.Probably,I'll post the first part today evening.
@blessedcuteone:thanx for liking it.will continue soon
@blueberry_07:thnx for liking it.Well your guess is right but only up to some extent.The gur at the station and the guy who is gonna marry Bharti is Armaan only.But they dont get married now.keep reading to know what happens.
@sohana:no problem.take your time for reading and commenting.
once again i thank every one for encouraging me😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey.....G8 character sketch & intro......
Do continue sooooooon


TC
Mahnaz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx for your comments mahnaz
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~LUV MAKES LIFE BEAUTIFUL~
part - 01
Back in Mumbai -
Bharti comes back to her place in Mumbai.She knocks the door.But no one opened it.She again banged the door and was shouting because she was angry and sad
Bharti:Open the door Payal!!!!!!!
Shradda came and opened the door.
then Bharti shouted again
Bharti:How much time it will take for you to open the door😡
Shradda:chill Bharti!!What's there in this?
Then, Payal came from inside.
Payal:What's happening here..........Bharti?When did you come back?how is Bauji?
Bharti:Every one is fine except me.........😡
Payal:What happened yaar?Whats wrong?
Bharti:bauji decided to marry me to some stupid guy and that too today.....this is the reason for all the drama😡
both Payal and Shradda:what?????????😲
Bharti narrated the whole incident that took place in gwalior and she leaving the house and coming back to Mumbai
shradda:I cant believe that this much happened........
Payal:me too.Who is this guy who wants to marry you?
Bharti:i dont know yaar!maa told that he had sent his photo and also a CD in which he recorded everything about him.i threw the CD.i dont even know his name and i even dont know how he looks.........
Payal:But Bharti you did a wrong thing by leaving the house.....Think about maa and bauji..........especially maa
Bharti:i dont know what i did at that time.....I was so pissed off by bauji's words that i instantly left the house.........i was not aware of anything that time.........I was even angry at maa for she did not tell me even a single thing about this......
Payal:Now lets call them and ask for forgiveness
bharti:dont even think of that from me..😡😡
[she says and goes to her room locking the door]
Shradda:She is very depressed.Why did you ask her to do like that?At this time what she needs the most is friend's support and condolence.But you are blaming her.Just think if you were in her place,what would you do?Wouuld you marry him?
Payal:yeah,I understand.Its a difficult situstion to decide....But i know bauji.he does not listen to any one..Now his anger on Bharti will be for ever........
Shradda:think positive yaar
Payal:but.............
Shradda:No but.... every thing will be fine soon......lets give Bharti something to eat.She might have not eaten anything from yesterday........
both Payal and Shradda took some noodles for Bharti and knocked her door.meanwhile,Bharti, who was crying wiped her tears and went to open the door.
Payal:I am sorry Bharti....
Bharti hugged payal and was crying
Payal:we are always there for you.stop crying now
Shradda:lo Bharti,eat this noodles.may be u have not eaten anything from yesterday.
Bharti:no,i am not hungry
Payal:now,stop telling lies and eat it
After much hesitation,Bharti took the plate of noodles and started eating.But soon she went into deep thoughts.Both Payal and Shradda saw this and wanted her to take out for cheering her up...[Bharti is fond of shopping.she forgets all her worries on hearing the word shopping]
Payal:ok Bharti,now lets go out for shopping
Bharti:no
Shradda:Please come now.dont say any thing and i will give u a big chocolate and also a large black currant flavour cornetto icecream
on hearing this Bharti cheered up and got ready to go.three of them locked the house and hired a cab
Payal:we have to return early and prepare for exam.There is a lot to study.
Bharti and Shradda together:yes madamji
three of them were chit chatting with each other and left for shopping
AFTER 2 DAYS
IN NEW YORK -
We see a big house in Newyork.Its a one storeyed house. Suddenly a guy will be seen calling bell of the door.He is very tall, handsome and has a charming smile.but that smile was unable to be seen on his face.And then we see a middle aged lady opening the door.her name is Sudha.
Sudha:hi Armu beta. how are you?
Armaan:hi maa😔
Sudha:So how was your trip?And where is your wife?That day you called me and told that narayanji asked to marry his daughter.U asked me for my decision and i told u that i was very very busy and we'll have a grand reception here after u arrived with her.U didnt even call me after that?what happened and where is she?
Armaan:Maa.i didn't get married
Sudha:Dont try to fool me Armu........
Armaan:really maa........
He told her everything what had happened in Gwalior that day,How she bumped into him and didnt recognise him and how he got a call by Narayan informing that his daughter said no to marriage and went away ,and by the time he returned how Bharti went away.
Sudha:this much happened and u did not even inform me?And why Bharti did not recognise you?
Armaan:I was hurt verymuch😔 and also i thought not to inform anything to u and disturb your work.So i have decided to tell u everything after coming here.And I am also unable to figure out why she didnot recognise me even after i sent her a CD with all my details.And i even told her that this marriage will happen if she likes only.
Sudha:you got her consent na?
Armaan:I didn't get a chance to talk directly to her as Narayan uncle told that she is busy in studies.But uncle had told me that she had agreed to this marriage.
Sudha:something went wrong some where!!!!!We have to find it out..............
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