FF~*Tera hone laga hoon *~ Part 19 on pg 29

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

ok im back after reading 😃

Yaar the part was definitely worth the wait and i wont complain about the length since what matters is the quality not the quantity right 😉

Its was magically beautiful 👏

Very well written as usual. 😳👏

Yaar yeh Tam ko kya hua ? I think it was a lie to leave Armaan and Bharti alone 😃 Good girl 😉😳

Both Armaan and Bharti realised amazingly the luck to have found each other 😳👏

I love their sweet moment on the park, It was so great to se Bharti feeling that Armaan wanted to kiss and she took the 1st step 👏👏 Sho romantic 😳😃 Armaan's wish got fulfilled 😳

so was mine with the ending, Bharti snuggling close to Armaan at night, woah *sigh* 😍

Im really looking forward ur next update 😳 take your time, i know uni's pressure 😆😕 ( not too much time as well 😆, have some pity on your readers 😆 )

And Happy Valentine's day to you aswell, Enjoy 😃

Love,

Take care,

Humera 🤗

Edited by sonu4ever - 15 years ago

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

This part is beautifully wriiten ...👏

loved every bit of it 😛...

from the start till the end it was magical and just perfect ...😍

waiting for the next part ... update it whenever you have time ...

and a very HaPPy ValenTines Day !!! to you toooooooooooooooooooo 😛

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

OMG OMG AND ANOTHER OMG

u know waht you gave me feeling of day dreaming

i loved it

your FF is the most romantic Arbi FF

loved it

i feel very happy when arbi come close

and that kiss😳 awsome

keep it up dear

u rock

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Noori Khan

@CrazyNoori

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz I LOVE ITTTTTTTT CONT SOON XXXXXXXXX

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

Hi Sohana ..😃
sorry 4 the late comments ...!😳
If I don't comment doesn't mean i don read ....!
whenever i get time i make it a point to read pending FFs ..
hav so many still to read ..!

nw cuming to ur FF ...
read it all nw ..
Its just amazing yaar ...👏👏
u write so well ...just luv it ...!
Keep it up ..!👍🏼

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N.H.Talagala

@naley4ever

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

OMG girl it was soooooooooooo beautiful🤗 Loved it Wow the kiss was Amazing sooo soooo REAL ☺️made me go crazy !!!!!
love ur FF soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!
i was missing it a lot but girl u came out with a bang !!! man that was a awesome update 👏 i loved everything a bout it Start to the end mind blowing ..................... loved it ..............................loved it
VERY HAPPY V-DAY TO U TO GIRL best of luck in ur university work !!!!
truly madly deeply in love with ur FF☺️
Please continue soooooooooooooooooooon 🤗
take care
naley

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

lovely Sohana😊
Bharti is feeling so much for Armaan😊
Very beautifully described ArBi moments👏
Always love your writing style👏
I am sure Bharti will not leave Armaan-Jia😊
continue soon dear.

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Hey Sohana me will read your Part soon. Kinda busy at the moment BUT will read and come back to comment!:)

*Edited*

Ok just read it! Wow it was so romantic!!..With the hugging on the swing, to the stealing of glances, to Bharti playfully hitting Armaan to the dinner they had and Armaan feeding Bharti the desserts and FINALLY that KISS!!........I LOVE the fact that Bharti made the first move..!! Hai the way you described every single bit of it was perfect! Just perfect!.... I felt kinda mushy all inside already and the way Bharti cuddled up to Armaan while sleeping was like an icing on a cake with a red delicious cherry on top!..

Tamana is s nice character, love her as Armaan's Sister. For a moment i thought Tamana was all preggy went she wasn't feeliing well or smth...😆 😆..But no no am sure she isn't..hahah

Love the growing relationship bettween them and YES!! Karva chauth!! Am excited to read how Armaan will be all caring and uberly sweet towards Bharti!

Waiting for that! 😊

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

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Posted: 15 years ago

#159

Part 11

Awesome part dearie...Reallie luved the intimate moments between Armaan and Bharti...

Sunny was reallie cute.....

OK is also in this...Wonder what trouble he's gonna create.....

Awesome moments of ArBi..esp the Khuda Jaane song which was just perfect for both of them~~

Part 12

OMG....It was really beautiful yaar....How armaan fought for Bharti....

Reminded me of the fight scenes in the BB series during Dussehra...The shaken Bharti and Armaan trying to pacify her....

I'm glad that Amarjeet is a very reputed boss who cares of the reputation of his staff....

It's so natural and beautiful of how Arbi care for each other...So beautifully written!!!!

The hug and wrapping the shawl around Bharti was so magical...Awww!!!!

Part 13

Aww..Karva Chauth..looking forward to it sweetie....Tamanna and Armaan's relationship is real cute!!!

KK's back..Missed him!!!!

KK: (sighing)"Anything else Bhaskar? Can I go and save the world now?"

Lollz this was so so cute and hilarious!!!!!

Dearie it wasn't long..it was so so beautifully written especially about Armaan's past and how tears naturally formed in Bharti's eyes....Just amazing...

Loved Tamanna's and Bharti's conversation!!!!

Part 14

Stealing glances...helping with Jiya's project..ArBi dinner-date...

Simply awesome yaar!!!!

Reallie sorrie for the late comments dearie....You know I've reallie become a great fan of your writing....

Loved the magical kiss at the end which was an icing on the cake....Awesome work sweetie....

All of us are busy..Just take your time to update dear....

And yes the title is simply superb..Tera hone laga hoon!!!!Real nice parts!!!!