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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: BUBLAI
i also didn't want it to be Armaan's wife ... I wanted it to be Anu or someone else..but the idea of Mohini amma is simply superb😆 never thought about it ...

Bharti : par humlog kaise apke bete ko jail se chhura sakte hain? hum toh usse jante bhi nahin ...

Mohini amma: Tujhe nahi pata toh kya hua .. tera pati janta hai usse ...

Bharti : ab mera pati kaha se paida ho gaya ? Main thodi na koi larke se shaadi karungi ...😆

Mohini amma : kya...?

Arpita, you forgot Mohini Amma hang up the phone. So Bharti called her?

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Haan, Bharti called her up.... completely forgot that she hung up ..hehehe!😆

Mohini amma: Kya?

Bharti: Aur nahi toh kya? Tum yeh batao ke tum ne Jiya ko kyun kidnap kiya?

Mohini Amma: Abhi toh bataya... mere bete ko jail se chhurane ke liye... uske papa ke wajah se mera beta jail mein hain...

Bharti: aisa kyun? Armaan ne tumhare bete ko jail bhijwaya

Mohini Amma: Haan, mere bete ne ek bar uske teen lakh rupaiye ke camera chori kar liya tha na.. isiliye...

Bharti: tumhara beta ek bakwas sa chor hain.. chori kiya aur pakra bhi gaya...

Mohini Amma: usse bechare ko thodi na pata tha ke us ghar main ek shaitan si bachchi bhi rehti thi ...

Bharti: ab jiya ne kya kiya?

Mohini amma: aur kya karti? jab mera beta unke ghar ke balcony se utar raha tha chori karke, us bache ne dekh liya tha....

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

bharti: toh ..?

Mohini amma: phir woh pagalon ki tarah 'dada' dada karke chillane lagi ... aur phir tera pati akar mere bete ko pakar liya aur usse arrest kar liye... samjhi ?

Bharti: haan, samajh gayi... Armaan ne bohut galat kiya usse police ke hawale karke... usse toh pakar ke marna chahiye tha...

Mohini: kya? tu zyada hoshiar mat ban... mere bete ko chhura la aur apni beti ko le jaa...

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: BUBLAI
bharti: toh ..?
Mohini amma: phir woh pagalon ki tarah 'dada' dada karke chillane lagi ... aur phir tera pati akar mere bete ko pakar liya aur usse arrest kar liye... samjhi ?

Bharti: haan, samajh gayi... Armaan ne bohut galat kiya usse police ke hawale karke... usse toh pakar ke marna chahiye tha...

Mohini: kya? tu zyada hoshiar mat ban... mere bete ko chhura la aur apni beti ko le jaa...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Continue dear
I will be back with another "kahani mein twist"😉

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Bharti: hume exactly karna kya hoga?

Mohini amma: apne pati ko bol police station jake mere bete ke khilaf usne ko complain likhvaya tha usse wapas le le ta ke wohlog mere bete ko chhor de aur galti se bhi mat batana ke teri beti mere paas hai, isiliye tu apna complain wapas le rahi hain ...

Bharti: par hum tumhe vishwas kaise kare ki tum apne bete mil jane par Jiya ko chhor dogi?

Mohini amma: tu apna kaam kar aur main apna kar dundi ...

Bharti: thik hai... par mujhe abhi ek baar jiya se baat karni hain

Mohini amma: aisa nahi ho sakta...

Bharti: toh phir main bhi nahi maanti ke jiya tumhare paas hain ...

Mohini amma: aisi baat hain toh kar le baat par sirf 2min ke liye..

Bharti: kyun tumhare phone mein balance nahi hain kya?😆

Mohini amma: maine tujhe kaha na ke zyada hoshiar mat ban nahi toh main teri beti ko maar dalungi...

Bharti: thik hain...par baat toh karwao

Bharti started shaking Armaan who was sitting there helplessly so that he can speak to jiya....

Bharti: Armaan ... lo ek bar jiya se baat kar lo...

Armaan: (absent mindedly)kya?

Bharti: jiya se jaldi baat karo ... tumhare paas sirf do minute hain..

Armaan hurriedly took the phone from Bharti's hand..

Armaan: hello... bacha.. tum kaise ho ?

jiya:(crying) dada... plz mujhe yahaan se le jao.. yeh log mujhe yahan abhi tak khana bhi nahi diya... i am missing you dada... mujhe bohut bhook lagi hain...

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Armaan was now really angry

His angel was missing from the whole dday and they did not even give her water to drink

He was about to say something when the call got disconnected

Armaan threw the phone in anger

Bharti held his hand he looks towards Bharti and hugs her

Bharti at first was hesitant but hearing his sobs she was not able to control herself and hugged him back

Armaan:Bharti Jiya ne subah se kuch nahin khaya

Bharti was just tapping his back with tears formng in her eyes also

Armaan broke from the hug and asked Bharti what they needed

Bharti told him the whole story and Armaan without wasting a single moment moved towards his car

Bharti picked up his phone as Mohini Amma will contact at the same number and ran after him

Armaan drove really fast and both reached the police station

Take Care

Zoya

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Armaan and bharti hurriedly went inside the police station and asked about the inspector

Havildar: saab abhi bahar gaya hain ap logo ko thoda intezar karna padega..

Armaan: unhe plz call karke batayi na ke bahut urgent hain..

Havildar: nahi... aisa nahi ho sakta... kyunki woh bahut e important kaam se gaye hain..

Armaan: Bharti, ab kya hoga?

Bharti: dnt worry Armaan... (to the havildar) kahan gaye hain kuch pata hain?

Havildar: woh Mohini amma ko pakar ke liye gaye hain jo ki ek bahut badi don hain..

Bharti: kya..?

Armaan:(aside to Bharti): Bharti humein kya karna chahiye? Kahin gar mohini amma ko lage ke humne jake police ko uske bare mein bata diya toh?

Bharti: toh kya karein? usse call karke bata de ke police wahan usse pakar ne ke liya aa rahe hain?

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Armaan: tum pagal toh nahi ho gayi ho... tum ek don ko police ke haaton se bachana chahte hon..?

Bharti: Mujhe bhi pata hai ki yeh galat hain, par akhir jiya ki life ka sawaal hain... kahin is galat faimi ki wajah se woh log jiya ko kuch na kar de...

Armaan was really amazed seeing Bharti's concern for his own daughter

Armaan: thik hain Bharti.. tum usse call karke batado

Bharti dialled Mihini amma's number but it was too late as inspector himself picked up the phone...

Bharti: aap kaun hain mujhe mohini amma se baat karni hain...

Inspector: aapko unse kya kaam hai...?

Bharti: aap kaun bol rahe hain?

Inspector: i am acp I.Gupta...

Bharti was completely shocked.. she didn't know what to say... suddenly an idea came to her mind

Bharti: Sir, actually Mohini amma ne meri beti ko kidnap kar liya hain... kya aap unse pooch sakte hain ki akhir usne meri beti ko kaha rakha hain.. Please sir kuch kijiye na..

Inspector: Haan humain yahaan par search karke ek behosh bachhi bhi mili hain.. shayad woh apki beti ho sakti hain.. aap abhi kahan hain?

Bharti: humlog toh police station mein aap se hi milne aaye the... abhi bhi yehi hain...

Inspector: aap log wahi rukiye humlog bache ko leke aadhe ghante mein pahuch rahe hain...

Bharti was completely confused about how to react.... on one hand she was happy to believe that the child was jiya only and on the other hand she was not being able to be completely sure... she told Armaan about her entire conversation with the inspector... they were waiting eagerly for the inspector and was praying inside that ki woh bachi jiya hi ho....

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

very good👍🏼
I hope it is Jiya
loved how Bharti said Jia is her daughter😛
write more dear

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

After almost 1 hour , the police jeep arrived... Armaan and Bharti rushed towards the door ... But they could only see the Inspector , his assistant and a mid-aged woman siiting behind them...Armaan and Bharti were eagerly waiting at the doorstep with hopes in their heart...As soon as the inspector got down from the jeep Armaan and Bharti rushed towards him...

Together they said: sir,woh bachi kahan hai?

Inspector :aap log kaun hain?

Bharti: sir, maine hi aapse baat ki thi us bachi ke baare mein... woh bachi kahan hain?

Inspector: ha woh bachi behosh pari thi toh humlog uske hosh aa jane ke baad usse jeep ke piche sula diya hain... aap log rukiye.. main woh bachi ko leke aata hoon...

Armaan and Bharti didn't listen to him and they went behind him... They both saw jiya lying down at the back seat and a tear of relief went down their cheeks,,,Bharti and Armaan hepled the inspector to wake jiya up and after she woke up ,seeing her dada and Bharti aunty infront of her she hugged them tight ... it was an emotional moment for all of them...After a while , Armaan saw Mohini amma and went to her...In the meantime Jiya was with Bharti,she hugged her tight..Bharti felt like she got her lost world in her arms....

Armaan:(in a loud voice) tumhari himmat kaise huye meri beti ko haat lagane ki ...?

Mohini amma: Toh mera shak sahi tha... tum logo ne jake police complain ki thi aur mujhe giraftar kar waya..

Armaan: (shouted)tumhare saath isse bhi bura hona chahiye tha...

Bharti and Jiya were shocked as they never saw Armaan in this way... Bharti tried pacifying him but Armaan was going on Screaming at Mohini amma... Atlast , the inspector intervened to stop them....

Mohini amma:Main tujhe,teri biwi ko aur teri bachi ko dekh lungi... is ka Baadla main le kar hi Chhodungi...

Bharti: haan haan , jail mein aur kaam hi kya hain,,, humare khilaf plan sochte rehna....

THe Inspector took her away to lock her up and told Armaan and Bharti to wait as they need to do some formalities before they can take Jiya....

After the inspector went inside Jiya ran to her Dada and jumped on him...

Edited by BUBLAI - 15 years ago