FF - Dil Ko Tumse Pyar Hua Part 11 Pg 34 - Page 21

Great part!!

wow your FF wonderful i was reading it last week it was beautiful !!!!
big fan of ArBi hope u could translate the hindi parts bit some parts i dint understand but i love ur FF it is very unique !!! try my best to read it when i have time please post more!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part!!

Thanks for the PM..

Originally posted by: naley4ever

wow your FF wonderful i was reading it last week it was beautiful !!!!
big fan of ArBi hope u could translate the hindi parts bit some parts i dint understand but i love ur FF it is very unique !!! try my best to read it when i have time please post more!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Dear Zoya,

This part was soooo beautiful😊
As I told you, you have not kept any jhagra but it was so touching.
I was really shocked, is Bharti no more? But I was so happy at the end.😊

Totally loved it, every single line😊

Specially loved Armaan and his love for Bharti, its so genuine.

Loved Bhaskar and Payal a lot and of course Jia.

You are too good Zoya👏

I am very happy that you are starting a new FF, so are you going to finish this FF?
Eagerly waiting for your New FF

Love
Kanu Di

Oh my god! I swear Zoya you write so well!! My eyes were just hooked onto your FF for the past 15 mins or so! It was EXCELLENT!!! GREAT JOB GIRL!! 👏

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Hey Kanu Di...

First of all WELCOME BACK!!!!

Glad that you are back....

WEll Thanx for commenting....

Glad that you liked the part....

WEll I am not ending this FF

Just starting another because I planned that it will be of 4 to 5 parts...

But now....

I think it will be a proper FF because everyday I am getting different thing to add in it...

Take Care

Zoya

That's great, waiting for the new one😊

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oh my god! I swear Zoya you write so well!! My eyes were just hooked onto your FF for the past 15 mins or so! It was EXCELLENT!!! GREAT JOB GIRL!! 👏

I LOVE the whole suspense storyline esp the in between flash backs and reality!! It was so cool when you added the flashbacks in between!! Love it!! The way you potrayed the emotions of the characters through your writing is just mind blowing! I really could feel Armaan's pain and Bhaskar's pain of having almost lose a lover and a sister respectively.! Love the whole chain of dialogue you put in when Bhaskar was all angry with Armaan at MU! Really sad.. everything that he said! But i mean it's not Armaan's fault though..

Great writing! Happy that Bharti woke up eventually! But one thing how could the doctor want to turn off her life support just after one year???

Hahah they are evil!! 😆

Anyways once again great work! 👏

You're carrying on with this FF i suppose so looking forward to the next part! 😊