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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic chapter Mahishee😃
I am sorry that I got your name wrong🥱
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic chapter Mahishee😃

I am sorry that I got your name wrong🥱



Thank you so much

It's OK dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good morning everyone!!
Its quite cool here and I am enjoying the morning chills...😊

Update!!!

Chapter 15~ The Battle Begins


Dawn after Amavasya

The Border between Aravalli Forest and Udaipur


Pratap and Ajabde had set up their tents on the open ground between the Forest and the city of Udaipur.

Pratap(pointing at the model of Udaipur Fort):

We will surround the Fort on all the sides.There are six entrances to the Fort. Chundawatji will attack the Northern one, Shakti and Heer will March towards the Eastern one, Ajabde and I will attack the Western one which is also the largest gate, Rana Punja will go to the South Eastern gate which has a direct access to the Palace. Jaimalji will march to the North Western gate while Patta will attack on the back gate.
Any questions?

Ajabde: Ranaji, we all know that we cannot kill Maldev. We can make him extremely weak but cannot wipe him off. What shall we should about it?

Pratap: We will see to it when the need arises. For now let's focus on getting back the Palace and wiping out the morgues.


Inside the Udaipur Palace

Maldev was performing a tantric yajna to please the Devil and acquire special dark powers for the war.

Maldev(after completing the yajna) : O Mighty Devil! Give me powers to defeat my enemy! My morgues are weak and powerless and we are trapped in the shield. Help your servant My Lord!

A dark aura appeared from the hellish fire which turned black.
Devil Aura: I extend my powers to you Maldev. You can create a hole in the shield at one of the entrances and I grant your soldiers to be powerful but for only one day. At the next sunrise they will lose their power.
Beware my son! You are taking powers beyond your limit. Over powers can make a person corrupt and it leads to weakness. Your body may not be able to handle them. Also keep in mind that IF you die, I and my powers will be gone forever from this Earth and darkness will be erased once and for all.

Khetu and Tara came to know about this yajna and Maldev's special powers so they ran to inform Ajabde.

Multan came there suddenly and killed Tara from behind but Khetu successfully escaped from there.

Ajabde was standing near the entrance with Pratap and Phool. Khetu was running towards her from the Palace Entrance when she was struck with a dagger. Someone had attacked from behind.Her steps started shaking. Ajabde got off from her horse and ran towards her. Khetu fell down in Ajabde's lap as she was kneeling.

Khetu: Maha...Ranisa... I ful...filled my pr...omise. We...kil..led all...the in..ner Pal..ace Guards. Mal...dev has...acquir..ed dark po...wers. Mor...guess hav..e po..wer till tomo...rrow. Kill him...tomorrow aft...er sun..rise. The...re is ...a hol..e in the ...shield. Be...ware. Jai Eklin...gji!

Ajabde: Jai Eklingji!

She breathed her last. Ajabde closed her eyes. Not a fear fell from her eyes. She was proud of Khetu and tears would ruin her sacrifice.

After cremating her with all rituals, Ajabde moved with returned to the Palace entrance with a renewed determination.

Maldev got the news of the siege.

He went to North Western entrance where Jaimal was standing. He chose to create a hole there as it was strategically beneficial. There was a cliff near it so the soldiers could be easily pushed down. Besides there was a volcanic mountain some miles away. If it errupted then it would cause so much of damage. Also, Maldev wanted his Western side to be strong as sun appeared the last in West.


Face Off Part 1--
Jaimal and MSJ v/s Multan

Maldev thought that Multan was the wisest of all his men so he sent him to tear open the shield on the Western entrance. He gave him a sword with black magic powers infused in it so that he destroy that part of shield.

Jaimal got to know about the invasion there so he prepared himself and his men.
On hearing this MSJ also joined his father with his Bundi Army.



The Western gates opened and Multan could be seen standing near the shield with the sword in his hand and a large battalion of morgues behind him.

He got off from his horse and approached the shield. He took a deep breath and with confidence struck it with full force.

SLAAASHH!!!!

Thunders and lightning struck the sky which had become overcast with dark clouds. Sun rays were hidden and a dust storm rose.


Ajabde felt a big jerk inside her.
"The shield"...she mumbled," Its broken!"

Multan shouted:

ATTAACKK!!!

The cries of Jai Eklingji and Jai Mewar echoed powerfully as the Mewaris and Bundi soldiers met the morgues.

But they were losing a lot of soldiers rapidly as the morgues had been given power and secondly the Mewaris soldiers killed by them were turning into morgues and increasing the army.

Jaimal knew that if Multan succeeded in winning this region,he could conquer other parts also which could create problems for Pratap.
So he decided that at any cost he wouldn't let them win.

He was thinking about a new strategy when he saw a volcano ready to errupt and a small valley beneath it. Eureka!!! He got the trick of victory.

He instructed MSJ to use all his power and strength to push the morgues in the ravine as the volcano was about to errupt.

MSJ instructed all the soldiers to start cornering the morgues towards the ravine.
He himself joined this task.

Jaimal also used all his strength in not killing but just pushing them backwards.

He could see the success of the plan when he noticed that the volcano had a huge rock at its mouth due to which it was not exploding. It would take a lot of time for it to explode this way. Besides just pushing them into the valley won't kill the morgues.

He wanted the plan to succeed at any cost. So he immediately decided to himself remove the rock from the mountain. He very well knew that he was going to lose his life in this task. But he was satisfied that he was able to serve his Matrubhoomi.

Jaimal signalled his son to continue and galloped towards the volcano
He reached its base and started climbing it with agile moves. Soon he reached the top of the mountain. He analysed the situation below. MSJ had done a great job in pushing everyone in the valley. The plan was in place.

He took a deep breath and shouted Jai Eklingji! Jai Mewar! Jai Matrubhoomi!

With all his strength he pushed the huge rock. It took him sometime to move it. But after a few minutes, a huge explosion was heard. Pratap , Ajabde, Chundawatji-- everyone was startled hearing it.

"Daata!!" Cried MSJ. He didn't knew that he had just seen his father for the last time. Multaan was beyond shock and he stood frozen seeing the calamity.

MSJ had instructed his soldiers had moved away from the site. Hot lava came burning down into the valley. The battalion got evaporated in seconds. The heat of molten lava melted everything. The morgues were gone.

Dark, hot smoke emerged from the volcanic opening which hampered vision in the valley.

Multan decided that he would take revenge for this. He saw MSJ standing near the valley's cliff and decided to push him.
He ran towards him in full force while MSJ was standing there,unaware of him and was shocked due to his father's death.

Multan came out of no where and pushed him. MSJ couldn't stand the push and fell down. He caught the edge at the end moment. So he was left hanging with hot lava underneath him.

Multaan: I am here to send you to your father MS!

MSJ was recalling his father's words: Fear meant defeat and one had to save one's life to kill the enemy.

MSJ used every ounce of his energy and caught Multan's legs. He pulled him into the valley without giving him a chance to think.
Then slowly, he came up.

Multan was gone and thus Jaimal had succeeded in winning the first round of the battle.



Hope you like it😃



With love,

Mahishee😃
Edited by Mnp279 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Mahishee

OMG such awesome updates one after the other
You surely are building up the excitement

I loved Khetu and her back story- her sacrifice was awe-inspiring. She served till her last breath
I have a question- so the girls were taken by the morgues right so they survived after being bitten by them?

SS and JS got a deserving end

Also am so sorry for not being able to comment on the earlier updates was a bit occupied with some work

Multan the douche burn and melt into the lave

Jaimal ji and MSJ- salute
But am here now

Loads of love
Can't wait to see the end of Maldev
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Hi Mahishee

OMG such awesome updates one after the other
You surely are building up the excitement

I loved Khetu and her back story- her sacrifice was awe-inspiring. She served till her last breath
I have a question- so the girls were taken by the morgues right so they survived after being bitten by them?

SS and JS got a deserving end

Also am so sorry for not being able to comment on the earlier updates was a bit occupied with some work

Multan the douche burn and melt into the lave

Jaimal ji and MSJ- salute
But am here now

Loads of love
Can't wait to see the end of Maldev



Hey Garu di!!!


Wow finally you got time...I am sooo happy

I think you didn't get that part...living men were sent to those girls rooms and they got killed
The morgues drank their blood ...and I will talk about what happened to them in the next update


SS and JS ko to marna Hi tha...😆


No worries di...no fear now that you are here!!!😉

Thank you so much!!!

I get so pepped up after reading your comments

Maldev ka the end hone mein time hai😉

Good night!
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thank you very much!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapter Mahishee😃



I was waiting for your comment Nonie😊

Thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Mahishee you are making every stage of this war very very interesting...
The strategies that both are putting up are all worth a good fight and is seriously exciting.

Good that Khetu could complete what she was asked for. And Ajab not shedding a tear for Khetu was a befitting tribute.

Jaimal n Son did a splendid job for their army. Multan was to die anyway... It will be gr8 to see how Mewar Army stands the devil sena for that day coz the next day they shall all be weak again.

Good job Mahishee
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Wow Mahishee you are making every stage of this war very very interesting...

The strategies that both are putting up are all worth a good fight and is seriously exciting.

Good that Khetu could complete what she was asked for. And Ajab not shedding a tear for Khetu was a befitting tribute.

Jaimal n Son did a splendid job for their army. Multan was to die anyway... It will be gr8 to see how Mewar Army stands the devil sena for that day coz the next day they shall all be weak again.

Good job Mahishee



Whoa! Finally a comment from you!

Thank you so much sujata di!
The day is going to be tough for all...lets see what happens

Thanks once again😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello my lovely readers!
Sorry for keeping you waiting this long and not updating... But I was terribly busy since the last two weeks. My exams seemed never ending and I had three parts a day which got hectic.

But now its over and I am back with a bang😃

The New Year is approaching... Only 2 days to go😃. As we bid 2015 a good bye, I am super excited for the coming Year!!!😛


Update!!!

Chapter16~ Battle In Progress


Afternoon

Back entrance

Face Off 2~ Ajabde v/s Raimal

Patta and his battalion which mainly had Jodhpur soldiers were victorious in drastically reducing the morgues into small numbers. They were good in playing with fire and majority of the morgues were burnt. As Patta was about to establish The Mewari Flag at the entrance, an arrow hit him hard on the back. It was Raimal who had marched in with his army.

Raimal was a very dear friend of Maldev. They were like two Devils ruling over Rajputana. A third couldn't match their cunningness and cruelty unless the Devil himself descended the Earth.
So presently Raimal had arrived in full force to help his dear friend.

Near Western Entrance

Pratap and Ajabde were aware of the situation at the North Western Entrance and the hole in the shield there. So as they tackled soldiers, Pratap spoke up:
Ajabde, I think you should go to help MSJ. I don't want that part to be weak and the morgues to leak out from there.

Ajabde nodded in approval.

"Take care!" , both of them spoke in unison.

Ajabde galloped towards MSJ and Pratap watched her retreating figure till it became out of sight.

MSJ was skilled but the sudden loss of his father moments ago had shaken him badly. His attention was elsewhere. The soldiers who had recently entered that area took advantage of the situation and attacked him with all their might.

Ten of them jumped on him simultaneously, and it was getting difficult for him to take their weight. As he was handling them, another soldier was about to stab him from behind when Ajabde intervened at the right moment.
"Dadabhai!" , she screeched as she cut off the soldier's hand.

Together, they killed all the ten and moved on to others.
Meanwhile, Patta swaggered in his steps and turned being to see who it was. He saw Raimal standing with his sea of soldiers ready to fight.He painfully removed the arrow that was stuck in his back.


Meanwhile Ajabde and MSJ had cleared the North Western entrance and were moving towards Patta.

Raimal: Attack this fool!

Patta made a loud chirping noise which echoed through the sky.
Patta:Get ready to get doomed!

Ajabde got alerted of his condition and was currently heading towards Patta while MSJ had gone to assist Shakti and Heer.

Raimal was strong presently while Patta was already exhausted. So his moves became slightly lethargic and he needed rest. Besides his back wound had began hurting too much and it required attention. Ajabde reached the entrance and found Patta struggling with a group of soldiers.

She attacked them like a lioness and while dodging soldiers told Patta:

Move away from here Patta! You are injured. Look at your back its bleeding profusely. I don't want to lose my brother here.
Patta: No way Jija! How can I leave you here and run away? What answer will I give to Ranaji?

Ajabde: Stop being emotional Patta! It's my order. LEAVE NOW.
Patta couldn't resist the firmness in her voice and started to back away when he noticed Raimal aiming an arrow at her back.
"Jija!" Screamed Patta. Ajabde looked around to see what happened when she saw the arrow approaching her.

The arrow struck with a hissing sound and then a loud Thud!

Patta had come between Ajabde and the arrow. He felt his stomach go wet with blood. He groaned in pain.

Ajabde couldn't take it. His brother was dying in front of her. In her fit of rage , she approached Raimal. Raimal could feel the jitters in him as he could imagine himself becoming a prey to an angry lioness.

He slowly started backing away in fright. He took his bow and aimed at her approaching figure. He shot the arrow which was caught by Ajabde in midair before it could touch her.
She took out her sword and threw it straight at him. It struck with such force that Raimal fell from his horse and dropped dead on the ground.
His army ran away that instant.

Maldev got the news of Raimal's fall and tightened his fist- "It's time for you to pay Ajabde".

Maldev took it upon himself to erase this nuisance called Ajabde and he marched towards her with his battalion of morgues.

Meanwhile Ajabde arranged for the safe evacuation of Patta's dead body.
She was heading back towards Pratap when an arrow, piercing through the air hit her straight on the shoulder.
Maldev had attacked from the Fort terrace.
Ajabde looked up to find him standing there. She made a note to herself that now they just had to stay safe and alive till this day got over-- she had to put her defensive mode on.


Face Off 3~ Pratap v/s Maldev

Pratap got news of Ajabde's injury and rushed to her side.
Meanwhile Shakti and Heer with MSJ had captured the remaining parts of fort entrances and they were heading inside the Palace.

Pratap jumped right in between Ajabde and Maldev and he pushed her back. She had removed the arrow from the shoulder and she thought it was time that Pratap took over from her.

Pratap: So this is the best you can do! Shoot an arrow at a woman without her knowing it.

Maldev jumped down from the Fort wall and they were face to face now.
Maldev: I don't have time for talks Pratap. Let's have some serious business here.

Maldev chanted some mantras and his veins became black. His power was growing as his body muscles inflated. His devil form took over his body.
Pratap was taken aback at this. He didn't expect such a thing as he was caught off guard.

Pratap ,gathering his courage, attacked Maldev with his sword

SLAASH!

But the wound got seeped inside Maldev's body. Maldev took his right hand and punched him in full force. Pratap fell straight on the ground. It felt to him as a huge rock had hit him. He had no idea how he was to tackle this.





The story will catch up speed now with regular updates.

Hope you like this one😃

With love,
Mahishee.



Edited by Mnp279 - 9 years ago

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