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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome update Aditi😃

It will be interesting to read pratap as a grey character⭐️

thank you very much nonie...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Nandini6

Nice one

JM & Ajab 😲 🤣 sounds funny 😆

thnks nandani...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the concept aditi
and sorry for being late
its amazing
do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey everyone...i know i have said i will update soon but u see girls problem...soo now , come to the topic , yeah pratap is a grey caracter , and a egoistic arrogant man...and jaiwanta bai is not pratap's mother , as i informed in story pratap has no one in this monster world as his own , so he himself became a monster ...but as the story will move further many cruel pasts will come back to life...have a beautiful day and stay lively...and don't forget to comment everyone ( include silent readers ) in my story and in every story in this forum otherwise i will come and eat your chocolates and will kill your teddy...😡----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------it must be one of the worst days in ajabde's life , though she had come out with jagmal and his friends , she had never expected to see jags and his stupid friends to dance like bandar in middle of the road , in her mind she was just cursing the day she got her life attached to jags , at the age of 16 she had heard dheer bai and jagmal convo and was shocked to learn jagmal is impotent , and that's why dheer aunty fixed his marriage at an earl age ( she had crossed one whole weak in internet to learn what the heck important mean ) .
a lone tear drop from her eyes , just because his father was raised up by sisodia family , she had to pay , being with jags. but before she could curse her luck more , a loud noise reached her soft ears , her eyes popped out seeing jagmal in front of the car , but suddenly the car driver took his left and crashed with a tree to save jags , everyone run towards jagmal , who had falled in his drunken state but ajabde's eyes searched for the driver , if he is okay or not .
black mercedees door flew open and pratap come out , the whole bunch of teenagers stopped there movement and run away towards there car to hide themselves as much as possible from the beast , and jagmal fainted in middle by understanding in what mess , he had travelled in .
" WHO WAS THE STUPID , TO COME IN MY WAY" pratap roared .
blood peeping from his forehead and right hand from those deep cuts , he was in a urge of fainting but because of his big manly ego , he can't . it felt like someone stabbed in ajabde's heart , she looked at the man with moving her eyes a little upward to see his damn handsome face , his tall toned perfect body , with his beautiful dead green eyes , she didn't know when she flew towards him and took his bleeding hand in her soft hand .
ajabde - just come down , first get firstaid then scream ...okay.
pratap was shocked , it was the first time someone had touched him without his permission , but he can't resist her soft hand feels so good , her deep brown magnetic eyes has care in them for a beast like him , her beautiful black hairs has a natural touch of copper and brown colour , her pink lips look more delicious then 7-star food to him , he has a sudden urge to press his lips to hers and lift this baby doll in his arms , she looks like a princess , just came from fairytales to become his .
he growled in frustration when she moved her hands away after dressing his wounds , he didn't even realise when she made him sit on the nearby bench , and get him a proper care with the help of a hotel owner.
ajabde - now , you can go ...
she smiled like a kid , but he was not in a mood to leave this fairy. suddenly , he realised her all friend including jagmal has gone home afraid leaving his baby doll in the verge of tears .
pratap - hey , you can't cry ...princess.
ajabde stopped wiping her eyes like a kid , noticing the word princess , she look behind to pratap , who was looking at her with worried eyes.
ajabde- princess...?
pratap - you look like one...
he smiled like a stupid , he was never good at emotional stuffs , and had kicked himself three times in head for saying princess to her.
ajabde- thanks ...she smiled like a kid , giving him a 32 teeth wali smile , which made him smile too .
pratap - come on , i will drop you ...princess.
ajabde - okay ...
he had droped her home , a journey where no one speck or even look at each other , but it was a journey he never wanted to end with , but he has too , ajabde waved him a good bye , he smiled and she run away in her home .
pratap - princess...you know you must be first person who sat in my car ..
when he was about to leave for his home , his eyes fell on the name infront of her home " ram mamrakh " , he raised his eyebrows ...
----------------------------flashback
ajabde - i wouldn't eat ...i will never ...dheer aunties food is yuck ...jaiwanta aunty plzz you cook for me na...
jb - ohh...princess ...just this burger ...if you don't eat this dheer aunty will get upset na ...i promise i will cook for you ...once you eat this...
ajabde promise...
jb- promise , princess...end---------------------------ajabde smiled at herself , in the mirror after jaiwanta aunty it was pratap who exclaimed her princess...-----------------------------
pratap was in his dark room
silently looking at her instgram pics , it nearly took him half an hour to get her every information , and was fuming in anger to read this line in her fb account " in a relationship with jagmal singh sisodia " .
he wouldn't let this happen with his princess, that dumb jagmal , and his cruel sisodia family doesn't reserve his fairy , she will only belong to him , yes...he wouldn't allow her to leave him , if she is in love with someone , then also she will be stuck to him all her life , if not will love , then be with force... pratap smile with a devil glare .
he doesn't know why but that girl , seems to be more important oxygen to him , in just 2 hours of meeting ...SERIOUSLLY...---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------precap - i wouldn't tell guess on your own...😆
Edited by aditi_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: roshallovepraja

loved the concept aditi

and sorry for being late
its amazing
do update soon

thnks rosh...
nah , you are not late i just started this...
i did update...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Aditi this is too good
i loved it
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Aww aditi love this ❤️ jagmal pair with ajab😕
Oh ho pratap nahi chata ajab jagmal se shadi kara😳
I love this cartoon series aditi pratap ke saath koi nahi hain kya jasa cartoon mein tha update pratap house and his life story 😃 update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: syndeyshine00

Awesome update

Continue soon

thanks a lot...😃
will do soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: roshallovepraja

Aditi this is too good

i loved it
please update soon

thanks rosh...
will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sushma_marawi

Aww aditi love this ❤️ jagmal pair with ajab😕

Oh ho pratap nahi chata ajab jagmal se shadi kara😳
I love this cartoon series aditi pratap ke saath koi nahi hain kya jasa cartoon mein tha update pratap house and his life story 😃 update soon

thanks sush...Embarrassed
ajab and jagmal ...pratap will never make it happen...
will surely sive u next update from pratap's home...Embarrassed

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