praja ff -the Beast or a prince (updated on pg 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful update Aditi 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The question is why is Pratap a Beast??
The concept is good n interesting... Looking forward to the updates...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

wonderful update Aditi 😃

thnks nonie...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujata_patil

The question is why is Pratap a Beast??

The concept is good n interesting... Looking forward to the updates...

good question ...i will ans. the ques. in next update...
thnks sujata...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for late reply
so the beast meets the beauty 😳
pratu is in love with ajabde 😳
lets see what happens next
update soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swara98

Sorry for late reply
so the beast meets the beauty 😳
pratu is in love with ajabde 😳
lets see what happens next
update soon 😛

its ok swara...😊
yeah !!! pratap has fallen in love...Embarrassed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the update is served..

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balwant was still sobbing hiding himself in ajabde's baby pink dupatta , while ajabde was numb , the incidents from morning was revolving around her head , she and balwant was thrown out of their own home , his fathers bank account was sued , just because of one mistake which he never commited , he was accused to steal money from sisodia company and was mercilessly dragged in jail...

FLASHBACK

ajabde was running everywhere around isodia groups building , tears were flowing non-stop , her father was in hospital thats the only thing running around her head, she abrutly entered , sangram singh's office , to meet sangram singh himself , surtan singh , and jagmal , all were glaring at her , like she is THE DON standing infront of them .

aj - dadasa , plzz help me ...u know , daata from such a long time , he can never take your companies money...never

ss- i am sorry , ajabde ...but your father has steal money from our company , a theif should in jail , so he is...

That's it , it was enough for ajabde , she can't wear her daata's insult at any rate ...

Aj - MY DAATA IS NOT A THEIF , MIND YOUR LANGUAGE ,he treated you like his own father and what you did ...not even trusted him...

She sobbed and sobbed before jagmal held her arm and dragged her outside forcibly , like he never did before ...

Jaggu - you ...a daughter of a thief , don't you dare to insult my baade daata , I loved you all this years but you never reciprocate , it was only maa and badi maa that I agreed to marry a ugly creature like you and your father...

Before he could speak one more word SLAP!!! SLAP!!! Both his cheeks were red , and all the employees were controlling their facial expressions not to laugh ...

Aj - go , away from my life right now...

FLASHBACK END

Pratap's mansion

Silence , silence , silence , before 7 am , each and every maid and servant was to fly high so that their could be no sound of their tip-toes also , as there master pratap wakes up at 7 no one was allowed to make even a single sound to disturb his sleep and those who did just hear one word, FIRED ...

Finally , enough of flying dreams , it was 7 , patta , the head of servants and manager of this big palace was standing infront of pratap's bedroom , numb totally numb , why , why on earth he has to do this...

He entered the auspicious bedroom , took a deep breath and ..

Patta - sir , its morning ...

No answer...

Patta - good morning ...

Pratap- GO AWAY , he roared

Patta - sir , you ordered me , to wake you up at 7 , shivering

Pratap- I said GO AWAY , finally he throw the alarm towards patta which met his forehead and he winced in pain , making pratap finally out of his dreamland ...

Pratap - can't you just catch the alarm ...moron

Patta - sorry sir... well , it is his day to day job , to got hit by various things...

Pratap- go , prepare my suit ...

Well , pratap singh's day had started with hitting his servant patta , then firing cook because he burned one toast , which he had hided properly in the dustbin but pratap smelled it and fired him for his lie , then shouting his firing his driver for not cleaning his favorite car on time , though he has many of them but , pratap singh simply hates imperfection , do one mistake and you are fired ...

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Ajabde was confused , his father is in jail , she has no relatives to go and seek help , only sisodia's , who had themselves did all this and uday uncle didn't live in india , he lives in London with his family , only here for family functions and he is gone , now what , she can't even feed her little brother a bread , they are homeless , foodless , shelterless too...

Suddenly , a car stopped in front of her and pratap came out making her gulp , though she had helped him but she is afraid of him , pratap smiled ans sat beside her , without asking , rude , she thought .

Pratap - good morning , princess , what are you doing over here .

Aj - i...voh...nothing

Pratap - ohh really ...stop hiding things princess , because your pretty face is saying everything , are you hurt , tell me ...you helped me na ...i will help you too .

Ajabde - will you give me a job , please ...please

Pratap - you are too young ...

Ajab- then ...thank you ...but you can't help ..

Pratap - tell me what happened ...this time he roared , losing all patience

Ajab - stop shouting ...i loost my home , my father is in jail ...fine , you heard it ...

She too shouted , confusing him , first time someone shouted at him , but the next thing she will knew is a harsh grip on her wrist , pratap held her hand , and dragged her in his car , and himself sat on driver's seat , before he could start his car , he saw a kid staring at him , at the back seat ..

Pratap - kiddo , what are you doing there ...in my car

Balwant - you are taking my jija with you , I will come with her ...

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Edited by aditi_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
A Good One Aditi...
Wasnt Ajab staying with Dheer n Jagmal since her childhood... Last update mentioned so...
So why was her father arrested in this update and her house sabotaged?? All of a sudden...

Pratap has flying servants in the house till 7 AM 😆😆😆
N Patta out of all is his chief servant!!!

Blawant hold on to your sister...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Just read the update
Aditi am a bit confused but waiting for the next update to clear my doubts

Balwant banega kebab mein haddi for sure
Patta ko fire kar diya- nahiii

Pratu beta tu toh gaya

nice update

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