Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update nutz praja meeting was nice both are feeling attracted towards each other 😳 do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swara98

Nice update nutz praja meeting was nice both are feeling attracted towards each other 😳 do update soon


Thanks swara...I'll update as soon as I can
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Liked how Pratap and Ajabde are secretly admiring each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Liked how Pratap and Ajabde are secretly admiring each other.

glad you like it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys...the next update is served!

CHAPTER 6

There wasn't much to do at work that day as there were no pending cases and there was just one small case which needed a little working on and then everyone could leave..
Soon everybody was done with their respectful work and they winded up ready to leave...

You could see on her face that Ajabde loved her job...she basically had to just look at some old records and match them and she thoroughly enjoyed it..

Krishnaa had already left as her uncle was in the hospital and Duda too went quickly to meet her

There were only maan Singh, Ajabde and pratap left as all the others had left already...subho had offered to drop Ajabde but she said she had some more work pending and that her driver would be coming too

Soon enough...Ajabdes phone started ringing..

'Hello'

'Hello Ajabde'

'Hi mom...ya say...what happened'

'Actually the driver had an emergency at his home so he had to go..so he won't be able to come to pick you...should I come? Or send balwant?'

'No mom! Don't bother! And don't disturb balwant as well..let him study and concentrate...I'll come home..don't worry'

'You sure beta?'

'Yes mom...now bye'

'Bye...be safe'



Ajabde winded up soon, said a goodbye to maan Singh who was the only one left...might be having a habit of working long hours..
She came down on the road...she couldn't see any auto or taxi! She knew there was a taxi strike but there wasn't any auto as well..she stood on the corner asking every single auto but none of them apparently wanted to come that way...
It started drizzling quite soon and she was thoroughly enjoying..the roads were quite lonely as there weren't many people though some cars and vehicles were always there...

And then she sudden saw a white car about to hit a six year old boy who was apparently running across the road and he has slipped due to the slippery lane..,
She ran, screamed and saved the child as the car just drove away..

She saw a lady approaching her..she took the child, hugged him, said some words of thanks to ajabde and left

A black car came just where ajabde was standing to catch and auto...the window slides down and a familiar voice spoke..

'Get in...I'll drop you'

'No thanks sir...I can go on my own'

'Yes...if you walk on a lonely road on the night with no umbrella with you and also to add some expensive diamond jewellery...certainly an amazing idea!'

'Just so you know...I'm very good at martial arts and karate and I'm a black belt...so jewellery won't be problem...as for the umbrella...any person who knows how to enjoy would love to get wet in the rain'

'Madam! I'm sorry...sorry for arguing...please shut up and get in now...you'll girls!! Seriously...you'll can do a lot of drama'

'Excuse me!'

'Please get in!!! You'll get sick and that'll be a problem for me as I'll have one less officer for so many days'

'Ummm...Ok...'

And ajabde quickly got in and they drove away...




Hope you'll liked it...there's a nice one coming next...pakka promise...
Criticisms, opinions and ideas are most welcome
Please tell me if you'll liked it by liking and also leave your comments below 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And the rains hit the stories too😆
I love rains and here we are having Sun shower his angry rays upon us
Please send some rains for relief na
Coming to the update it was good
So Ajabde loves and enjoys her work and Pratap is the saviour in time
Chalo lets see what happens next
Good job Natasha and am first again😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

And the rains hit the stories too😆

I love rains and here we are having Sun shower his angry rays upon us
Please send some rains for relief na
Coming to the update it was good
So Ajabde loves and enjoys her work and Pratap is the saviour in time
Chalo lets see what happens next
Good job Natasha and am first again😃


In India it is raining heavily and in my city it was flooding!
Thank you 😊 and yes! You're my firstie! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oho... Natasha gr8 conversation they had... update soon I'm waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidyali4

Oho... Natasha gr8 conversation they had... update soon I'm waiting


Thank you...I'll try and update quick
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for your first story Natasha 😃
I read all your stories in one go😳
All of them are amazing 👏
I like CID shows so I will enjoy reading this FF 😊
PM me for the next chapter😆

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