Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 7

Originally posted by: swara98

Great update nutz waiting for praja meet 😳 best of luck for your studies 👍🏼 and do update soonish 😛

Thank you...I'll make sure and add some PrAja in the next update...thanks and I'll update tomorrow now...

Awesome Update 👏 waiting for praja 😛

Natasha u have a great sense of writing and words... loved the aalsi pratap and beautiful ajabde... I always visualize rosal at their place... u rocked it girl... update soon

Originally posted by: dsm123

Awesome Update👏 waiting for praja 😛

update when you get time from studies😳

Thanks 😊
I update tomorrow...pakka

Originally posted by: sidyali4

Natasha u have a great sense of writing and words... loved the aalsi pratap and beautiful ajabde... I always visualize rosal at their place... u rocked it girl... update soon

Thanks a lot!! Yes! RoSal is great...
Thanks 😳 I'll update tomorrow

Hey guys...as promised the update is served...as a lot of you'll were awaiting this update I hope I've done justice with it and that it matched Up to your expectations...if not...I promise to give you'll lots of PrAja scenes...what kind of, I haven't decided...till then..enjoy

CHAPTER 5
Ajabde walked in the crime investigation department...it was humongous and every spacious with computers here and there...there was marble flooring and translucent glass doors...their was main meeting room with a white board and projector screen to discuss the case, a forensic lab with all different machines, few beds and testing material
There was also a hall kind of thing which she thought could be used when they had free time so that they could just sit on the comfi couches and relax...
She entered the hall with nervousness coming over her but she tried to look confident and that pretty much worked...
She saw saubhagtawati right in front sitting and chatting with chakri...
Vyeeni was sitting and explaining to maan Singh how to hack a new kind of file and som and Duda were solving some were scing some advanced crossword puzzles

Saubhagtawati saw Ajabde and she quickly got up and came near her..
'Hey Ajabde! Wait...I'll make you meet everyone'

Chakrapani came to her and shook hands 'subho has been telling me a lot about you! It's a pleasure to meet you!

Saubhagtawati called the other boys as well and introduced Ajabde to each one of them

Ajabdes nervousness had quite vanished as everyone was very friendly and sweet to her

She got to know vyeeni very well and soon both of them sat on the computer figuring new codes

Some time later...
Pratap entered in looking handsome as ever...he greeted everyone and noticed Ajabde..

'So you're the new girl?'

'Yes...Ajabde... Ajabde punwar, sir'

'Ok...I just hope you know that this job contains a lot of risking your life so just make sure you're ready for that...if you're not..you can always leave a resignation letter at my table' he said in a rude voice

'Thanks...sir...people normally know what kind of job they're going for and what they would have to do before studying for it and applying for it as well...and I have done that as well...what risks there are I certainly know.. And I can tell you that you're not going to a resignation letter from me...I can take risks for my country like all the other officers' she ended sharply with hints of sarcasm and an air of confidence in her voice

She looked at saubhagtawati as if asking if she did something wrong but saubhagtawati was looking quite pleased and she gave her a smile and a big thumbs up

Pratap had an impassive look but if you knew him very well ,his face clearly showed that he was quite pleased with Ajabde

PRATAP'S POV

I quite like this girl...such confidence is quite appreciable...she's so pretty...ya! She is beautiful

Shut up pratap! You've got to be professional...and you don't even know her well enough to start liking her...

but then she seems so nice...there's innocence all over her face and she has a great air of confidence and pride in her eyes

Forget it!



And so he also made a decision to be sweet with her(as sweet as he could manage right)

AJABDE'S POV

he looks khadoos...he was quite rude...

But then subho said that he just does that in the starting...he might be really nice

And then he looks quite decent...and looks smart and handsome too...he's so hottt!!

Ajabde! You should not say that...he is your boss and clearly has no interest in you

But then he's actually hot!!!

Stop it! Just forget it!


And all of them resumed their work while pratap sat down shooting quick glances on Ajabde every now and then...



Thats it...I know it's not very good but I promise the next ones will certainly be better...do let me know if you like it
Criticisms, opinions and ideas are welcome...also the ones who are irritated with the CVs can check the new bashing posts and fun posts made by me, kaana and ramya too...so enjoyyy!!

And they meet - chalo both of them think that the other person is hot!!!
Nice update but show some only Praja moments while they are working together and haan you could show them saving each other or maybe someone from the team being attracted towards Ajab making PRatu a bit jealous

Am eagerly looking forward for the next update and I love the way the story has been set and is moving

PS: I'm first!!!

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

And they meet - chalo both of them think that the other person is hot!!!
Nice update but show some only Praja moments while they are working together and haan you could show them saving each other or maybe someone from the team being attracted towards Ajab making PRatu a bit jealous

Am eagerly looking forward for the next update and I love the way the story has been set and is moving

PS: I'm first!!!

Great ideas 😳 don't worry...there will be some only PrAja updates too and I will try to show some nice light moments between the story...the actual plot and mystery wi start too..but that will be some time later...jealousy tracks may come...I'll see if I can shape it well...thanks a lot my firstie 😉

Nice update. Waiting for the next one.

Originally posted by: _CutieCute_

Nice update. Waiting for the next one.

Thanks! Will update by day after tomorrow