Crime Investigation Department...PrAja FF....Chapter 17 on page 42 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
Natasha...don't worry dear...you will never lose your readers...😳...you r a most active member in this forum...I always wonder that how do you manage all this..😃...do update whenever you will get time..😊...we will wait..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi04

Natasha...don't worry dear...you will never lose your readers...😳...you r a most active member in this forum...I always wonder that how do you manage all this..😃...do update whenever you will get time..😊...we will wait..

aww, thanks a lot darling! 😳
Even i wonder how I manage all this 😆 (sometimes)
I will do it soon...till them you enjoy the recycled items that I will post just now 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Don't worry Natasha
Take ur time
Will be waiting 😛


P.S Plzzz try to give next update with some Praja romance 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Annei123

Don't worry Natasha

Take ur time
Will be waiting😛


P.S Plzzz try to give next update with some Praja romance😳


Thanks Shivangi! About PrAja romance...I will try but the story will now mainly be thoda mystery jaisa...not much romance will come..
I'll still try to give you some nice cute moments in the middle 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here you go...



CHAPTER 13

Ajabde was in a very happy mood...that dinner date...no..just dinner...it was actually really nice!
She had enjoyed talking to Pratap without any serious talks in the middle...and she was kinda happy that Pratap looked jealous of that friend of hers..
She was just about to catch an auto when Pratap came angrily

'I think I told you that I'm gonna drop you home!'

Ajabde smiled at his cute anger and replied
'Don't bother..it's a different road that you will have to take to drop me...it'll be very a very long distance for you..'

'I don't think I have to catch a plane that I need to hurry up!'

'You're very stubborn!'

'Because I was under your influence madam!'

'Whatever'

And with that two people with angry faces sat inside the car and drove away...



She reached home soon and said a pretty little goodbye to her friend


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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 14

She entered her house only to meet with a storm...
Her father looked like a red monster who would just burst suddenly..

'Who was that who just dropped you?'

Even Ajabde got scared seeing this form of her father...she still put up a brave face and said
'It was just a friend'

'And where did you meet that friend?'

'Umm...I just happened to meet him'

'He's the head of the CID, Mumbai ...and you don't just happen to him, do you?...what's going on Ajab? ANSWER ME!!'

Ajabde was never good at lying and she just knew that she was caught!

'I...I...' But not a word came out after That..
She plucked up the courage and said 'I am an officer at the Crime Investigation Department, Mumbai...and he's my boss out there'

Rao Mamrakh was about to give her a slap when Hansa came and stopped him...

Rao Mamrakh said
'I forbid you from going to work now onwards...you will give your resignation right away...I let you study..let you go to university..but I never allowed you to take such jobs which only men are good at...you will be no good at all this...and I don't want myself to get insulted in the community just because of my stupid daughter...'

'But dad!'

'No more will be said in this matter...you will either listen to me or get out of my house..'

And he walked away into his room and Ajabde went to her room and locked it and started crying..
She knew it...just knew it! Something like this would've happened at some point of time for sure! She didn't know what to do and just kept crying...
Not often did she cry but she couldnt help it!
She had to do something...something for her dream!
And then..she made a decision which could change her life!
She decided to leave the house...right away
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Posted: 10 years ago
Two short chapters..I know..but that's all I could think about...I'll give longer ones and more regular ones now...hope you enjoy..
Please read and review..and leave love via comments..
And also ideas, opinions or any criticism is always welcome ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Iss Ajab ki dad ki toh main... 😡😡😡 hadd hai! But aweee Pratap and his jealousy 😆😆😆 under your influence madam... That was so sweet! Loved it, update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Suranya_Titli

Iss Ajab ki dad ki toh main...😡😡😡hadd hai! But aweee Pratap and his jealousy😆😆😆under your influence madam... That was so sweet! Loved it, update soon


Glad you liked that part 😳
I will try and update soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
two short chapters but usmein itne bada toofan
Par Ajabde jaayegi kahan??
Hope Pratap finds her before she does something drastic
Waise Subho bhi toh hai

waiting for longer updates and haan iss Rao Mamrakh ko acche se sabak seekhaana

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