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So friends I am back with another of my compositions, this time a happy one with the theme of PrAja's Marriage. I am originally a RoSal fan and so though a little late, I am presenting a creation on their marriage. This one will only be from Pratap's POV. Hope you'll give this one too a warm response.
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THE MARRIAGE RHYME-BEING ONE
The sun has risen and so has the auspiious time,
The drums meekly complementing with my heart's rhyme
Overcoming all hurdles the day has finally arrived,
Our mental connection about to be revived
With new promises and new relations,
WE'll make our life the best of God's creation
And here she comes, decked in her best attire,
She's instigating me with very naughty desires
Pull that curtain down! I want a better look;
Goodness Gracious! All my practised self-control is leaving my heart's queue
She sat beside me and gave her priceless smile,
God! Pause this precious moment atleast for a while
The chanting started, the fire blowing equally;
Our family's happiness increasing constantly
The whole atmosphere was decorated so grand,
Our parents constantly inspecting, as if on some errand
Never mind my love our over-protective elders,
They only wanted us to be safe in their caring shelters
I now hold her hand and complete the rites,
Reminiscing the victory over numerous obstacles and fights
I fill her head with the sacred vermillion,
It feels as if I successfully led another battallion
I put those beads around her,
All the difficulties finally getting over
She wanted to put that garland in my neck,
My mischief ended with Mausiji's final check
Those garland flowers were never so fragrant,
Cleansing all the war memories that were just so stagnant
The rounds begin around the fire of purity,
We imbibe all the promises of love, trust and loyalty
I agree, she agrees and the rounds complete the counts,
Our togetherness enhancing in double amounts
'You'll are husband and wife now. Married for eternity'
I thank God for giving her as the gift of all my morality
The Marriage was officially over; I still had my own doubts,
I knew she would clear them all; With that I had to go about
For my sake she again walked around the fire assuring me,
Agreeing to my motherland's vows, adding to my glee
And now my Marriage is truly done,
She's mine, I'm hers and there are differences none
There will be obstacles, ever-increasing difficulties,
But as far as I have her, none will be promoted to hard-to-tackle realities
She's betrothed to me and I owe her,
Not only my wealth or body, my love and my life has also a part of her
She's my strength, support and saviour,
In case I indulge myself in some irrational behaviour
Her trust, love and company is the best gift I'll ever get,
She taught me life has a beautiful side which I had learned to forget
I don't know what this ecstasy is, this feeling of completeness,
Maybe it's the euphoria Of being with the person you experience happiness
Of being with your, Of having unison;
Of having a bright life, Of being one!

-Aayushi
Hey guys I have tried to encompass the whole marriage into this poem. However if you find any flaws please do let me know. Criticism and appreciation is welcomed😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing creation Aayu baby
The wedding so beautifully encompassed within these rhymes
they tell a story so bright
filled with love and desires
you brought out the happiness that resides
within my heart and soul
that clap for thee with such a force
that I feel God can hear
after all you are such a talented dear

Amazing poem (I tried my hand at it as well but you tons better)
Keep writing and do update my story as well

Love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Amazing creation Aayu baby
The wedding so beautifully encompassed within these rhymes
they tell a story so bright
filled with love and desires
you brought out the happiness that resides
within my heart and soul
that clap for thee with such a force
that I feel God can hear
after all you are such a talented dear

Amazing poem (I tried my hand at it as well but you tons better)
Keep writing and do update my story as well

Love



Mahn such a nice poem Di!!! I loved it 😉
Thank you yaar it means a lot really 😊
Hmm your story will be updated tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mahn such a nice poem Di!!! I loved it 😉
Thank you yaar it means a lot really 😊
Hmm your story will be updated tomorrow 😃

@Bold: Tomorrow - itna door hai...please try for tonight..pretty please😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for giving us a happy one. It is beautiful. You sure are a poet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Thank you for giving us a happy one. It is beautiful. You sure are a poet.


Thank you and oh yes welcome. No no I'm not that great also for a perfect poet. It's just that the words come from heart 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing and very touching poem. wao!!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: silk12

Amazing and very touching poem. wao!!!!😃


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooww aayu! This is fabulous!!👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Wooww aayu! This is fabulous!!👏👏

Thank you😊

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