Sakha Veer Tale:Praja FF Update Pg 45 Complete!! - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Kamu...

nhiii 🤣 jaise tujhe nhi milta

Dushtt kahi ki🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapters Garima 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
aise anokhi jodiya banaogi tho kisne na pasand aayega??
chalo chalo update soon..tumhari stry updating speed kum ho gai h..


working on the update - thoda sa break lag gaya tha but am writing in full speed now so hopefully aaj raat ko next update ho jaayega
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rinall

Ladies and Gentlemen, let's welcome the new jodi in town 🤗

Lakshmi and Raja 🤪

What say, Garima ?? Shall we call this jodi LakJa or RajMi 🤪🤣

God ! 😲Ajabde jitni possessive Lakshmi ko lekar hai, usse aadha possessiveness agar Pratap ke liye dikhaaya hota, toh Pratap ke itne deewane nahi hote 😆...Majaal nahi hoti kisi ki, jo khudko Pratap ka deewana bataaye...😳

I have a song for Ajab's deewanapan =

Ajab, while searching for Lakshmi,sings--


jaiye aap kahan jayege ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi
dur tak aap ke pichhe pichhe meri aavaz chali aayegi
jaiye aap kahan jayege, ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi
ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi

aapko pyar mera yad jahan aayega
koi kanta vohi daman se lipat jayega
koi kanta vohi daman se lipat jayega
jaiye aap kahan jayege, ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi
ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi

jab uthoge meri betab nigaho ki tarah
rok legi koi dali meri baho ki tarah
rok legi koi dali meri baho ki tarah
jaiye aap kahan jayege, ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi
ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi

dekhiye chain milega na kahi dil ke siva
aapka koi nahi, koi nahi dil ke siva
aapaka koi nahi, koi nahi dil ke siva
jaiye aap kahan jayege ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi
dur tak aap ke pichhe pichhe meri aavaz chali aayegi
jaiye aap kahan jayege, ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi
ye nazar laut ke fir aayegi (link== http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AajHv7NIp9g)

Or maybe, this song--

Ja Rahe Ho Tum Kaha Jaoge
Are Ja Rahe Ho Tum Kaha Jaoge
Laut Kar Wapas Yaha Aaoge
Khatre Bade Hai Raho Me
Bas Jao Meri Baho Me
Kya Ana Jana
Haye Ja Rahe Ho Tum Kaha Jaoge
Are Laut Kar Wapis Yaha Aaoge

Baitho Tumko Palko Pe Hum Bithalo
Thahro Sine Se Tumko Hum Lagale
Sabki Najar Hai Tum Par
Lagta Nahi Tumhe Dar
Sabki Najar Hai Tum Par
Lagta Nahi Tumhe Dar
Khatre Bade Hai Raho Me
Bas Jao Meri Baho Me
Kya Ana Jana
Haye Ja Rahe Ho Tum Kaha Jaoge
Are Laut Kar Wapis Yaha Aaoge

Tum Ye Samjhe Tum Dur Ja Rahe Ho
Lekin Tum To Mere Pas Aa Rahe Ho
Mujh Par Yakin Nahi To
Khud Apne Dil Se Pucho
Mujh Par Yakin Nahi To
Khud Apne Dil Se Pucho
Khatre Bade Hai Raho Me
Bas Jao Meri Baho Me
Kya Ana Jana
Haye Ja Rahe Ho Tum Kaha Jaoge
Are Laut Kar Wapis Yaha Aaoge.😉😆

Fabulous update, Garima !! 👏



Rinal yaara🤗

kya songs select kiye hain - really good songs I must say
@bold: 🤣 lets go with option one kyunki second waala Rajma se milta hai😛
@Red: ab kya kare bechari Ajabde - Pratap agar Lakshmi ki tarah uske saath rahe toh woh uske liye possessive ho na - woh toh rukta hi nahi - sirf apni DB mummy ke peeche bhagta rehta hai😆

Thanks!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bella02pie

Amazing chapters Garima 😃



Thanks!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Kamu...

Ress

Unress *****

😆 This update *Rifling* so fun it was reading. I wish we could have same training scene n US DB market too 🤣

Mazaa aavigayo garima



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Kamu...

Garimaaa *screams* Huggieee 🤗
Kya update h by gawd 🤪 I read it 5tymes 😆 and will reading again n again 😃
Lakshmi Raja 🤣 wah kya jodi n that raja Eyeing on lakshmi still 🤪 😆
Patta Balwant *ROFL* 🤣

And PrAja hell hell romantic ❤️
Blushes 😳 pratap naughty boy so much romance 🤪



Kamu 🤗
5 times!!! woah am so happy you like it!!!

@red: Ab Raja aur kya kare - Lakshmi humari hai hi itni hot😆
@sky blue: Bhai aise hi hone chahiye
@blue: Ab show mein toh kuch nahi milta but meri story mein sab milega😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

sach dida..kya jodi hai... lakshmi & raja..?! 🤣🤣 kisiki nazar na lage.. 😛😆

Oh toh praja shaadi bhi tai ho gayi..? that's great.. ab jald hi undono ki vivah kara do.. aur phir uske baad kuch post marriage romance bhi dikhana... 😳😛
continue soon..

(all parts padne ki baad I'll Unress my upar wala comment 😛 )



Bachha my baccha you are back!!!!
I missed you so much 🤗🤗🤗🤗
@blue: ab tune demand ki hai toh pakka milega!!!




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Posted: 10 years ago
I know I'm late but kya karu - thoda sa block ho gaya tha toh took a small break and am back with an update for all!!!


Chapter 33

The next dawned early for the couple who were whisked away for all the ceremonies that were to take place that day. Bijolia was super busy with each and every citizen doing their bit to assist in the upcoming nuptials from flower sellers to pot makers people of all ages came together in the joyous occasion whereas in Chittor nothing was going well for the devious mother-son duo

DB was exhausted from all the packing US had made her do of the gifts for Ajabde but this time she could not blame the commoner girl as it was her own ego that came in the way

FLASHBACK

US (to a servant): Make sure all gifts are wrapped properly and nicely kept in a well decorated basket as they will be going to Bijolia and the baskets have to be decorated with bright coloured...what do you call them?

Servant: What Hukum?

DB sees her husband and walks up to him

DB: Ranaji may I help you with something?

US: Yes Dheer Baiji I was just asking the name of the things those bright coloured ones that are used to decorate baskets

DB: What things? And what baskets Ranaji

US: Dheer Baiji the baskets that will carry all the gifts for Ajabde

DB hides her irritation but US notices it

US: You know when Jaiwanta Baiji was here she would wrap all the gifts by her own hands and even decorate the baskets as well. She would say that Hansa Baiji and Rao Mamrakh are our family and we should prepare things ourselves for family but ...

DB swallows her anger as her ego kicks in (in thoughts): Jija has ruined their brains by thinking of them as family but what does she think that DheerBai Bhatiyani cannot wrap some gifts and decorate baskets?

DB: Don't worry Ranaji I will do everything as it has been done till now

US: But Dheer Baiji are you sure?

DB: Yes Ranaji I can manage gift wrapping and basket decorating

US: Alright then all the gifts have to be sent off early tomorrow morning so make sure everything is ready by then

He leaves leaving behind a dumbstruck DB -Early morning tomorrow?

And now here she was with her hair tied in a bun sitting on the floor surrounded by gifts and baskets that were covered haphazardly with blotches of colour thrown all over

DB: I swear I'm never doing this manual work ever again

Servant: Ranisa may we help with something

DB: No leave me alone

Servant: ji

Standing on the corner US was thoroughly enjoying the pain DheerBai was going through when he is joined by Rawatji

Rawatji: Is that?

US: Yes Rawatji Dheer Baiji is wrapping gifts and decorating baskets meant for Ajabde

Rawatji: How?

US: I might have said that Jaiwanta Baiji used to do that when she was here

Rawatji: But MahaRanisa only did the ones for Ajabde and not all of them

US: Must have slipped my mind. Do tell me how is Jagmal faring?

Rawatji: He is at the moment training with the archers

US: he is learning archery?

Rawatji: No

US: so target practice?

Rawatji: Yes but with a twist

US: Twist?

Rawatji: Jagmal is the target and every archer is aiming at him

Both the men laugh and leave to make preparations for the trip the latter had to take to Bijolia

Chapter 34

Ajabde sat in her room with her hand and feet decorated in henna while everyone bustled around her. She sat silently taking in everything around her - memories came rushing from when she was a mere toddler to her performing her puja with her brothers, playing with them, her parents kissing her goodnight, her mother telling all of them stories, holding her tight in her embrace when she was sick or hurt. She didn't even realise when tears had welled up in her eyes so when her mother came in calling her name and saw the tears she gave sometime to her daughter who was just realising the fact that she would be leaving them in a day's time

HB: Ajabde I was looking for the gifts we selected for Jaiwanta Baiji and Sajja Baiji. Do you know where they are?

Ajabde hides her tears and clears her voice: Maa the gifts yes they were kept in the temple

HB: Are you alright Ajab?

Ajabde: Yes Maa just something fell in my eye- nothing serious you go

HB goes to her daughter and slowly kisses her forehead and then leaves while Subho enters the room

Subho: Haaye so much love I'm surely going to get sick in this sweet weather I tell you Ajabde

Ajabde tries to hide her tears but Subho notices them and wipes them off: You are only marrying him Ajabde - just marriage - you are not going on the battlefield

Ajabde glares at her friend who smiles looking at her which makes her smile as well

Ajabde: Everything will be so different Subho

Subho: Only the place will change Ajab. Everyone is going to be there - it's going to be you, Kunwar Pratap, his brothers who adore you and his mothers who dote on you.

Ajabde: I know but I feel like something is being left behind

Subho: Ajabde I know you are going to miss me loads but let's be realistic you and I - we cannot elope what will the people think of us?

Ajabde ends up laughing at her friend's silliness and both of them just sit and chat for sometime

Pratap was with Rao Mamrakh who had received news of Rawatji's trip - he was expected in Bijolia the next day before the sword gifting ceremony. Security had been beefed up for the wedding as there was not only threat from foreign invaders but internal as well - Jagmal was a psychopath and nobody wanted to take any chances

Pratap and his brothers along with his friends had been invited for the feast by Rao Mamrakh ji when a servant came running in

Servant: Hukum an injured man has come seeking you

RM: Injured man?

Servant: Yes Hukum says it is important he speaks with you

Everyone look at each other

Pratap: Who did he say he was?

Servant: Said he was from Chittor

They all rush to meet the man who was getting treated by Vaidji

Man: have...to...speak

Vaidji: Keep still and save your energy brother

Man: No...need to ...save...

RM enters with everyone

Pratap recognises the man and so does everyone as well

Pratap: Kakasa tell me who did this you? I will personally kill him

Man: My Pratap - my boy...

Pratap: Kakasa!!

Man: Save Ajabde...Jagmal ran...hurt Rawatji

Pratap held the man's hand tightly in his while the others looked in horror trying to comprehend the words that had been just said out loud. Suddenly the women came in

JB: We just heard...

Their eyes fall on the man lying in front of them

JB: No...he cannot

Pratap: He's dead

SB and HB console JB who looked at Rawatji's younger brother who was family- who had always considered her as an elder sister while loved the boys unconditionally

Pratap keeps his hand respectfully and then stood up: Let's go. It's time to end Jagmal

And with that Pratap walked out without a glance at anyone followed by his brother and friends


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