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Posted: 10 years ago
time for your daily dose of Update!!!! Her we go...remember to leave me some love

Chapter 32

Rao Maldev was a desperate man he had lost everything his kingdom, respect, loved ones and life as he knew was over. He had made a run for it after watching that Saka die on the field. He had no desire to die at the hands of that young boy Pratap and also the entire council had already passed the judgement - his title of being Rana of Marwar was snatched away from him, he was a mere criminal in the eyes of the Rajputana. So he fled along with his wife and that Dheer who tagged along as she feared for her life as well but he had a nagging feeling about having that woman with him. She was quite deranged and delusional but to what extent he did not know but when he saw his wife's body lying in a pool of blood he realised that he had brought the devil with him

Who killed her? He roared at the woman standing near to UD's lifeless body and crying.

Pointing towards the unconscious girl Dheer looked at Rao Maldev with wet lashes and sobbed out, she managed to break free of her bonds as Jija was trying to make her drink water and then this commoner's daughter lost her senses and screamed at us and when Jija tried to defend herself this girl she stabbed her with the sword like a madman, I tried my best to stop her but I was too late...and with that Dheer burst into tears and kept on holding her hand which had a rather deep wound on it

Rao Maldev lost it- he strode forward and snatched the girl and slapped her, Ajabde jerked awake and on realising who was holding her she began struggling

Let me go you fiend she screamed but to no avail as Rao Maldev had finally given into his crazy mind and went on a rampage. He threw Ajabde over his shoulders and took her out and the last thing he said to DB was, Leave before that boy comes, you will find a carriage waiting by the riverside. It will take you safely to the borders from where you can decide to go anywhere and keep this (throws a pouch full of gold coins at her)

He leaves and so does DB

Pratap had a sinking feeling in the pit of stomach something was definitely wrong he could feel it. Ajabde's face came in front of him and he prayed, wait for me Ajab I'm coming for you and with that he rushed Chetak towards the forest he was informed by the spies that Maldev had be seen last

Ajabde kept on hitting the man who was carrying her like a rag anywhere place she could reach she hit him only to be thrown down

Maldev: You think you can ruin me and lead a happy life with that Pratap of yours. I promise you that when I'm finished with you forget Pratap you will be scared of your own shadow

Ajabde: Don't you dare come near me. I'm warning you, don't you came near me

Maldev: What would you do if I did and I do intend on doing way more than just coming near you

Ajabde took a chance and hit him with her legs and then pushed him and ran for her life. She didn't know which direction to run but she ran and ran only to realise that she was going around in a circle, she stopped near a tree and took a breath but unfortunately Maldev had found her and pulled her by the elbow towards him, she struggled but was no match for him and then she screamed for Help...

Help me please somebody...

Maldev looked at her and said no one is coming to your rescue I should have done this when I entered your room that night but that Jaiwanta Bai came in between but not tonight no one is coming to save you tonight and with that he made a move towards her dupatta and Ajabde shut her eyes praying to her Kanhaji for a miracle.

The hand never came near her in a swift movement it seemed that the monster was thrown off her and a loud thump was heard. Ajabde opened her eyes to see Pratap standing in front of her in a protective stance, she slowly stood up with the help of the tree nearby as her leg had been injured and she sobbed out Pra...Pratap

Pratap had never been this scared in his life he had followed the sounds of the anklets and then heard Ajabde's plea for help the scene he saw had his blood boiling that Maldev was trying to force himself on his Ajab who was trying to fight him but clearly she was a no match for a man like him. When he moved his hands towards her it was all he could do to not cut him right there, he held the arm and pulled him off her and threw him back. He stared at the man with fire raging in his eyes and entire body when he heard her call for him and so he turned towards her

She was hurt and scared so he made a tentative move towards her but when she threw herself in his arms he held her tight while rubbing her hair and kept on telling her

It's alright now Ajab, I'm here. He will never ever hurt you anymore. I promise. It is okay

Ajabde just held him tightly thanking her stars for sending Pratap at the right moment, all she could say was he was about to...I tried stopping him but he was too big and burst into tears

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Pratap had heard everything she said, he slowly distanced himself and made her sit by the tree and turned towards the man who was responsible for everything. Taking out his sword he strode confidently and said, pick up your sword and fight like a man you coward

Maldev picked up his sword and attacked - the final fight had begun

Pratap was fuming and enraged for what Maldev intended to do with the love of his life whereas Maldev was equally angry for the way his secrets had come out in the open because of that girl. Both of them were on an equal footing when it came to the skills, Maldev had an advantage of experience but Pratap's determination and the fact that Ajabde was present there were enough to bring out the feral lion inside of him

Pratap did not give Maldev any opportunity to use against him all he could see was him on top of Ajabde trying to subdue her and then his hand moving towards her honour. With a flying twist he cut Maldev's hand and then gave him a cut on his back Maldev staggered and screamed in agony but there was no stopping Pratap

Ajabde was herself scared seeing Pratap so angry and raw she had never seen this side of him and it was truly terrifying but Pratap's words calmed her down

Maldev you coward how could you stoop so low as to harm a Rajputana woman's honour? We Rajputs always protect women and children and fight honourably but you are nothing but a stain on the Rajputana. I always pity my enemies but not you as you have shown that you are a snake

Maldev: Snake!! Your Choti Ma is a snake she was the mastermind behind the events that took place 5 years ago, it was her idea to blame that girl- the plan was that she would be forced to marry me but no she had to go ahead and ruin everything and then you had to run into her and bring her back from the dead

Maldev made a move towards Ajabde but Pratap halted him in mid-way and with a direct stab in the chest from Pratap the leech Maldev fell back on the ground but that did not stop Pratap who went and stabbed him again and again, Maldev's blood had splashed everywhere Pratap was covered in it, he turned around to see Ajabde watching apprehensively she was scared and so Pratap raised his sword and with a fluid motion cut off Maldev's head and it landed right at her feet

Ajabde did not even glance at the head instead she ran towards Pratap and started to check him - there is so much blood...are you hurt...please tell me...oh my god your shoulder is bleeding Kunwar Pratap, she tore of her dupatta and tied it around Pratap who was staring at the girl in front of him, he just couldn't control himself and he hugged her tight and was happy to realise that the embrace was returned as well

I was so scared Kunwar Pratap...one moment I was in my room and then everything went dark... I woke up to find Uma Devi and Dheer Bai fighting...ohhh Kunwar Pratap Uma Devi is dead her body is lying in a hut somewhere nearby

Pratap looked at her and she understood the question in his eyes, Dheer Baiji killed her when Uma Devi went against her. In brief Ajabde told Pratap the events leading to the point where he found her...

Pratap knew that there was no way Dheer Bai could be pardoned for her actions when all of a sudden the rain gods decided to reveal themselves. With a glorious show of thunder and lightning rains fell on the ground allowing the parched ground to satisfy the thirst it had. It also cleansed everything with it - all the evils, blood, dirt, sweat and tears were washed away but two young souls stood entwined in each other's arm feeling the love that surrounded them

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Pratap and Ajabde heard noises coming and they separated but Ajabde's injury got the best of her and she was just on the verge of falling when Pratap held her by the waist that led to an interesting eye-lock

Baujiraj!! Ajabde Baisa!!! Where are you? Jija!! Jija!! Bhai Pratap!!

Hearing to the voices of their friends and brothers both of went towards them well Pratap lifted Ajabde in his arms and carried her towards the rescue committee that had come looking for them..

Bhai she called out and both Balwant, Patta along with the others came rushing towards her. Jija are you alright...no you are not you are hurt...your leg is bleeding Wait Jija let me tie this around your leg both Balwant and Patta went into protective mode but one touch from their Jija calmed them down... I'm fine, yes I hurt my leg but otherwise I'm alright so calm down both of you.

On the other hand Pratap was having a staring competition with his stubborn younger brother Shakti who despite having received so many injuries had come out looking for him - he did not know whether to hug him or beat him

You were supposed to rest Shakti he said in a strict tone and looked at his injuries to which his amazing brother responded what to do bhai but the outdoors called for me and you know when someone calls for Shakti ...Shakti responds besides a few more moments looking at the ladies teary faces and worries I would have gone mad...

Pratap cracked a smile and gently hugged his brother and then his friends.

Chakrapani: Baujiraj we have brought a palki with us for Rajkumarisa, we should move towards the palace. Maldev's body or rather pieces of it have been secured by the soldiers

Pratap nods and then again lifts Ajabde and helps her sit in the palki and then moves to help his brother and so along with her protectors Ajabde goes back to the palace where her family was waiting for her.


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Posted: 10 years ago
That Maldev grrr acha hua. Ajab is the same age as his grand daughter how sick do you have to be. Anyways I loved how the final fight took place without anyone watching. Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
glad that maldev is dead😡... Loved the fight...really good👏... Waiting for the next part.😊
Edited by poeple1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pari0706

That Maldev grrr acha hua. Ajab is the same age as his grand daughter how sick do you have to be. Anyways I loved how the final fight took place without anyone watching. Please update soon



well in my story Maldev was a leech and quite a sick man...the final fight was fought in the presence of Ajab who is main character and also nature - it is like Karma - what you sow is what you reap ideology working here...
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

glad that maldev is dead😡... Loved the fight...really good👏... Waiting for the next part.😊



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
i loved it
it s very different story but i liked praja's bonding with there brother's.
wonderful praja scene in ur ff
i liked the praja first meeting where he helps her in the forest
atleast maldev is dead
Update soon
waiting to see what happens to db.
i liked sakthi battel time scene where his mother see him with proud ,pratap and us run to him when he feel's on the ground
Loved praja
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Originally posted by: sita_rama

Awesome update

i loved it
it s very different story but i liked praja's bonding with there brother's.
wonderful praja scene in ur ff
i liked the praja first meeting where he helps her in the forest
atleast maldev is dead
Update soon
waiting to see what happens to db.
i liked sakthi battel time scene where his mother see him with proud ,pratap and us run to him when he feel's on the ground
Loved praja



Thank you for loving my story
I always wanted to see a strong bond between the brothers and yes Uday Singh in my eyes is a foll as he does not realise the fact that all his sons are unique and special, the first meeting and final rescue both take place in the forest symbolizing the fact that Pratap will always come for Ajab when she is in trouble
Glad you liked the battle scene

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome one..The Update which I loved is This...👏👏
Loved to see pratap's anger😊...Hate that Rao Maldev...Such a creep...😡
Plzz continue soon..Plz dont end it soon...
Waiting for the nxt part..
Want to see The marriage of praja..
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Hey everyone so we have finally reached the Final Chapter for Sin and Innocence..Thank You for joining me on this journey and hope t=you guys stick with me as I have a sequel planned for this one and you will soon see it on the forum...The sequel is titled Blood and Glory and will focus on adult Praja (they were teenagers in this one folks!!!)

So hope you enjoy this chapter and leave me loads of love at the end

Chapter 35

It has been a month since the fight and 25 days since Ajabde left for Bijolia with her family. Kunwar Pratap had used the days to nurse his brother back to health who refused to sit still for a moment. Shakti had troubled everyone since getting hurt and refused all treatments that advised him for bed rest - getting him to stay still while getting bandages done was in itself a huge task that only Pratap was able to achieve as his younger brother took time to talk to him about anything and everything he clearly loved to talk about Ajabde and her brothers, he remembered when /Shakti had prodded him about marriage, Bhai who do you intend on marrying? Giving him a cursory glance Pratap continued with the putting on clean bandages and Shakti continued I mean Bhai you are the crown prince and everyone would assume that you will marry a princess to strengthen relationships between the kingdoms you know like a political alliance...

Now that had Pratap thinking and he finally spoke up, Ajabde is a princess and I have no desire of marrying for the sake of an alliance. I intend on marrying someone who understands me and my principles someone who is as capable of looking after me and my family, someone who is...

Exactly like you and still different I get it Bhai but if you don't speak up soon don't you think Rao Mamrakh ji will find another suitor for his daughter? Shakti said in a very matter of fact tone which did not sit well with Pratap and he finished with the bandages went for a ride with his beloved Chetak

Riding allowed him to gather his thoughts and come up with a plan he intended on visiting Bijolia and asking Ajabde's hand in marriage. He knew that Shakti had a point when he said that Rao Mamrakh ji would be searching for a suitable groom and he was the perfect choice when it came down to it after all he was Kunwar Pratap Singh of Mewar but before that he needed to speak to his RaniMa about the matter

Jaiwanta Baiji had an idea about the topic her son was about to open and she also knew what his answer would be the entire family knew what was in the crown prince's mind and heart. She was happy for the fact that her son came to her with this matter as his father was as a stubborn fool on sensitive matters like these but she also knew that the fight had altered hi drastically - being on the verge of losing Shakti to death had changed him for the better he know spent equal amount of time with both his sons trying to mend relationships, she clearly remembered the day when he had announced that they were going to go for a ride and Shakti had addressed him as Daajiraj after a very long time

US: Let's go Rawatji, Jaiwanta Baiji where are my sons?

Kunwar Pratap: We are all ready Daajiraj, are we not Bhai?

Kunwar Shakti: Yeah I cannot wait to ride and beat you Bhai, come Daajiraj we need to go now...

Absolute silence in the room everyone was stunned on hearing Kunwar Shakti address Ranaji as Daajiraj, the ladies had tears in their eyes, Pratap and Rawatji had a smile on their faces and Ranaji himself was a bit teary but composed himself and said, yes let's go son

Since Ajabde had entered their lives everything had changed for the better- all the shadows of evil had been casted off and only happiness remained which would increase when Ajabde would enter the Chittor palace officially as the daughter-in-law of the family

Pratap was a very happy and excited fellow as he rode towards Bijolia along with his friends and brother. They were all going to Bijolia under the guise of enjoying the annual Mela that was being revived (as after Ajabde's banishment it was stopped due to the painful memories) and as Bijolia came into sight they understood that this time the Mela was going to be an extravagant affair- Bijolia's palace had been decorated like a bride with sounds of happiness reverberating throughout.

Hansa Bai and Rao Mamrakh received their guests and took them inside when a portly bald man came in and spoke to Mamrakh ji about the festivities and in a chuckle told him that all the doves along with the other birds were missing!!!

Hansa Bai smiled and Rao Mamrakh chuckled but then asked for his children's presence only to be informed that they were not in the palace. The portly bald man said with a smile, looks like the brothers along with their sister are on a mission to free all the birds

Ajabde, Patta and Balwant could not stop themselves from cracking up it had been so long since they caused mischief together but as they stood by the palace walls to catch their breaths all they could do was end up laughing at their recent mission - all the birds had been freed, most of the rabbits were now roaming in the palace gardens, hell they had managed to get two horses situated in the stables, now if only they could get their hands on a cow or a calf Ajabde thought but it was interrupted when they were informed of the guests from Mewar and the fact that their father knew about the missing animals...

Rushing towards her room through the gardens Ajabde collided with a wall or rather someone who was like a wall only to realise that it was Pratap. He could not believe his eyes as he drank her in she looked gorgeous in her simple dress with minimal jewellery but her smile and twinkling eyes were radiating a happiness he had never seen before on her, she hurriedly took him by the hand and hid behind one of the trees and told him to be quiet, we are hiding from Daata and Maa you see we just rescued a lot of animals so Bhai and I are trying to figure out a good reason for keeping them with us she looked at him adorably and he just couldn't resist and gave a peck o her nose which totally startled her and cue eye-lock, their eyes said everything they wanted to say to each other- confession of love and a hope for future

The rest of Mewar family had joined them in a day's time and both Pratap and Ajabde's kundlis were matched - a 100% match was something that no one had imagined would come but when it did everyone's happiness knew no bounds but there was a slight issue the Raj Purohitji said, the wedding could not take place for 3 years

Jaiwanta Baiji enquired about the delay and the reason had visibly disturbed everyone, darkness surrounds them both at this time and will do so for the next 3 years, it will test them on all fronts personal, social as well royal. They need to perform all their duties well for the next 3 years and then on the auspicious date after the Maha Puja both of them can marry each other. Ajabde being considered the Shakti of the Punwar family needs to perform some puja and take some trips as after her wedding to Kunwar Pratap he will be proclaimed the protector of the Rajputana

All the elders agreed and it was decided that after 3 years the wedding will take place.

In the night on a nearby mountain sat two individuals one boy and a girl with their hands entwined and the girl's head on the boy's shoulder they looked at the starry sky, the girl broke the silence

3 years is a long time you know and a lot can happen in that period, what if you find someone else? She teased the boy

The boy smiled at her and spoke with conviction that's not going to happen. 3 years is a long time but it will pass soon enough and then we will be married.

What do you think Purohitji meant by darkness surrounding us? The girl was visibly disturbed by that thought, I don't know but I do know that we will be able to withstand anything and everything that comes in my way as long as I have you.

I love you Ajabde Punwar and it is my promise to you that in 3 years from this day I will come and marry you so you better be ready.

Ajabde smiled at him and said before that you need to clear the test set by my brothers you know and laughed on seeing the scared expression on his face. She quickly gave him a peck on his cheek and went back to looking at the stars but now that she had Pratap turned her towards him and captured her lips in a soft endearing kiss.

The two souls sat together underneath the starry sky looking forward for their future together.


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Thanks for the update.loved it...
Waiting for the sequel...
Do cont soon... :)

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