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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey frnds its a boring Sunday so thought to write something...
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.it has been 2 days that prtap has gone to solve the problem of missing cows.. Here in palace db is getting recover... Us come to know that jagmal had shot db from maan anyhow.. He sent him gurukul for sometime and not punished him due to db's request ..
Us was in darbar with other members..
Sipahi: Khama gani hukum Kunwar prtap kuch hi samay me chittor aa rahe he or unhone sare apradhi jinhone gayo ko churaya tha unhe pakad liya he or unhe chittor la rhe he... Unhone sabi gayo ko bi mukta karva liya he...
Rawat ji: Ye to bahot hi shub samachar he baujiraj jis bhi karya ko apne hatho me lete he unhe humesha purn kaete he..
Us: Ha rawat ji.. Humse hi galti ho gyi jo humne Kunwar prtap ko galat samja...
Prtap: Khamma gani daji raj..
Us nods at him: Ayiye kp.. Hume appe garv he ki aapne firse apne ap ko sabit kar diya ki humne aapko yuvraj chun kar sahi nirnay liya he... Prtap smiles at him..
Us: Kp ab aap vishram kijiye or.. Aap se bhojan ke samay mileng..
Prtap: Ji dajiraj..
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Dasi: Kunwrani sa kp mahal me aa chuke he... Ve ranisa ke kaksh ki or prsthan kar rhe he..
Ajabde: Kp aa gye..aap shigr jaiye or unke snan ke jal ki vyavstha kijiye..
Prtap went to jb's room and met maan there and come to know about jagmal.. He was feeling bad for him.. Then he went to his room..
He was about to open the door but before that ajabde open the door.. By seeing her smile his all tiredness vanished...
Prtap: Apki prsnta dekh kar lagta he aapko suchna pahele hi mil gyi humare aane ki..
Ajabde: Ha or ye bi pata he ki aapne apna kartvya bhi nibaya or sari gayo ko mukt karcadiya..
Prtap: Aapko kese pata.. ?
Ajabde: Patni he aapki.. Aapke mukh ke bhav se pata chal jata he...
Prtap smiles at her..
Prtap: Ajabde humare snaan ka..
Ajabde: Jal taiyar he..
Prtap: Kitne ache se janti heaap hume.. Humare bina kahe humare dil ki bat jan leti he..
Ajabde: Isi liye to hum yaha he kp.. Aapke liye..
They were standing close to eachother and their eyes were locked..

Dasi: Kunwrani sa sare prband ho gye he..
They move away..
Ajabde: Ji... Ab aap chaliye humare sath...
Ajabde and prtap went towards royal bathroom .prtap sat there removing his upper cloths..
Ajabde: Kp aapke pith par ye ghav..
Prtap: Ajabde airf ek karoch he ajabde.. Ladte vakt ek chaku se lag gyi..
Ajabde: Kyaa? Chaku.. Kp ye sirf karoch nhi he..hum ved ji se aushdi leke ate he..
Prtap held her hand: Ajabde..he stood up and stand in front of her ..: Ajabde aesi kayi chote hume lagi he or apne ap thik ho gyi he.. Aap aese chintit mat hoiye..hume to aadat si he..
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap pahele hum nhi the..
Prtap: Acha thik he ab snan karle hum..
Ajabde nods at him... He sat on stool.. When she pour water on his wound he close his eyes in pain... Yes it pained him a little but now he has habit of it.. When his rani ma left him there was no one too look for his wounds whenever he hurt himself he has lurnt to leave alone without anyone 's help and concern...
Ajabde rub some lap that she has made to remove his tirdness and to make him fresh...
Soon after bath prtap went to his room..ajabde was nowhere...
Prtap: Shayad bojan banane ki vyavstha dekhne gyi hongi.. He was about to put his upper cloth..
Ajabde: Rukiye kp..
Prtap: Aap kaha chali gyi thi.. Or ye kya he??
Ajabde: Hum aapke liye ye aushdi wala lap banane gye the.. Jakham chahe chota ho ua bda use yunhi nhi chodna chahiye..
Prtap took the bowl from her hand...: Humne kaha na ajabde hume aadat ho gyi he.. Par ab aap leke ayi he to hum laga lete he.
Ajabde: Ab aap apni pith pe ye kese lagayenge..
Prtap smiles at her.. Jese hum pahele lagate the...
Ajabde: Parantu ab hum he..
Prtap look into her eyes..there are so many people that took care of his after rani ma left him but they never paid any attention what he realy want he either followed what rani ma or dajiraj told.. But now he knew he us not alone... Ajabde is here with him forever..to take care of him..to live him..to understand him.. To be with him whenever he don't want to be alone ..to give him shoulder whenever he wanted to cry.. Now she is wirh him.. Her one line made him realise that now he is not alone anymore...
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap..she held his hand and made him sit on the bed..
She sat behind him and applied that lap on his wound...
Prtap was deep in thought..
Ajabde: Worriedly: Kp kya bat he hum kabse dekh rhe he aap aese.. Prtap turn and held her hand: His eyes were wet..
Ajabde: Kp kya bat he? Aap aese..
Prtap: Janti he ajabde jab rani ma hume chod ke gyi gum bahot samay tak apne kaksh me hi rhe fir choti ma ne hume vaha se nikala or humne apna sara dhyan rajkary me laga diye.. Par sach kahe to hum sabke sath hoke bi akela hi mahasoos karte the..rani ma humara bahot shayan rakhti thi...maan or chand bhi par pata he kuch kami si thi.. Hum aapko bahot yad karte the some tears escaped from his eyes ajabde wiped them..par hum fir bhi akela mahasoos karte the apne kaksh mre..apne jivan me ..par ab hum jante he ki vo kya tha jo adhra tha.. Vo aap thi ajabde aap hi he jo hume pura karti he.. ..kabi kaha nhi par hum aapse bahot pream karte he ajabde..ajabde hugged him n cried from happiness..she move and kissed on his forehead..
Ajabde: Humare hote aab kabhi akele nhi honge .. Hum jo he aapka dhyan rakhne ke liye..kyunki aapko khud ko chod ke sabki chinta hoti he ..prtap smiles.. To lighten the moment...or rahi samay ki bat to yaha tak chetak ko bi aap zyada samay dete he... Hum mante he ki vo apka priya ghoda he .. He understood she was making him feel better so..
He held her hand and with jerk fall on bed he crushed her with his body..
Prtap: Kunwar prtap aap..
Ajabde: Aapko ye bura lag rha he ki hum chetak ko samay dete ya ye ki hum aapke sath samay nhi vyatit karte... Hr was just joking with her but
Ajabde's breath became shallow..
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap chodiye hume aap kya keh rahe he or humne aesa kuch nhi kaha..
she was struggling under him which aroused ..he forget about their talks.. He just wanted to spend some time with her only.. He bent down n smell her fragrance of hair...
He run his nose on her nexk..
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap...
Ajabde's moan inspired him to go further... Je started giving wet kisses in her neck then he move towards other side Ajabde put her hand on his back ..by mistak she put her hand on his wound..
Ajabde opened her eyes..kunwar prtap aap..aapka ghav..hmm..aap ko..d..dard ho..he bite on her neck ...kunwar prtap... He move a little
Prtap: Ha ajabde hume dard he ...par ghav ka nhi.. Aapse dur rahne ka.. Itne varsh aapke bina rahene ka... Aapke sath samay na vytit karne ka.. Or vo ek aap hi he jo is pida ko dur kar sakti he..
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap.. A lone tear escaped from her eye...
Prtap kissed on her tears as if drinking it.. He then kissed on her eyes...
Prtap: Hum aapke ankho me ansoo nhi hotho pe muskan dekhna chahte he..
Ajabde smile ..
Prtap lookes in her eyes as if asking for a permission to go ahead..ajabde blushed and lower her eyes..prtap bent and kissed her..slowly they he remove her all jwellery and made her his forever...
Ajabde lay in his arms...and prtap was moving his fingers in her hair..
Prtap: Ab to aap naraz nhi he na ki hum aapke sath samay nhi vytit karte...
Ajabde blushed and hide his face in his chest..
Ajabde: Hum to bhul hi gye hum aapke liye bhojan bi laye the socha tha lap lagake aapke sath bojan karenge par..she stopped n blushed
Prtap: Par kya ajabde..
Ajabde: Ap...vo.. Aap bhojan thand ho gya hoga hum abhi aapkr liye she was about to wake up when prtap pull her push her into bed and come on her...
Ajabde: Kunwar prtap..aap firse kya.. Matlab aap bhojan to..
Prtap: Hume bhojan nhi kuch or chahiye..
Ajabde: Kya?
Prtap: Abhi batate he..and bent kuss her again...
After some time they both slept peacefully in eachother arms..
They both knew that tomorrow they have to face new problems but from now they both are with eachother to face all the problems..
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Hope this was in my mind from when i read OLV where ajabde sent prtap to find cows...she is so perfect for himm n i really wanted their sr like this without any interruptions...
Hope u like it...
And this is strictly an os don't tell me to continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely update...waiting for more updates⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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She's back!!!!
With an amazing new OS...it is a good read...enjoyed it thororughly...bas ab show mein bhi AS ki entry ka trailer hi dikha dein humko yeh CVs

Love it... hope you write more OS and hopefully another FF 🤗👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Divi you are back with a OS ... that's so great loved it... please do write more OS and or FFs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

She's back!!!!
With an amazing new OS...it is a good read...enjoyed it thororughly...bas ab show mein bhi AS ki entry ka trailer hi dikha dein humko yeh CVs

Love it... hope you write more OS and hopefully another FF 🤗👏


Thank you...ans i think we have to wait for At least 1 year for as's entry according to current track..kya yar prtap and ajabde is so childish they leave in one room ..still.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

Divi you are back with a OS ... that's so great loved it... please do write more OS and or FFs


Thanx Pari... Are yar m not getting any topic to write an os on so...getting bored as m free nw a days..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divi.C


Thank you...ans i think we have to wait for At least 1 year for as's entry according to current track..kya yar prtap and ajabde is so childish they leave in one room ..still.. 😆



Woh toh hai bhai...Ajabde itne saare hints de chuki hai tab bhi hamare Pratap ko kuch samajh mein hi nahi aata😛
Lagta hai "Humtum ek kamre mein band aur chabi kho jaaye" background mein play karenge toh shayad kuch hoga ya Pratap phir apne CID giri wali side mein kho kar chabi dhoondne lagega 🤣
AS ki toh ho gayi entry😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29



Woh toh hai bhai...Ajabde itne saare hints de chuki hai tab bhi hamare Pratap ko kuch samajh mein hi nahi aata😛
Lagta hai "Humtum ek kamre mein band aur chabi kho jaaye" background mein play karenge toh shayad kuch hoga ya Pratap phir apne CID giri wali side mein kho kar chabi dhoondne lagega 🤣
AS ki toh ho gayi entry😛


😛 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divi.C


Thanx Pari... Are yar m not getting any topic to write an os on so...getting bored as m free nw a days..



Areee topic nahi mil raha get os on cute Praja scenes 😉
Simple hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very nice story. Really liked it.

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