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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
hey Divi want more of nok-jok of Ajabde n Pratap fighting smiling hiding n loving each other !!
update fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ash41900

hey Divi plz don't get disheartened !! we all love ur stories its great track going on ...

you's story is Da only one based on the current track going on in the show plz plz don't end it just like that...

I know that its only current track story i realy liked to write about it but still 😭
Even now m not getting good ideas about what to write., so. ..n thank u so much that u love my story vl try to write more ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi, please don't lose hope...
I love this story
please write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Don't loose hope dear
I like ur story very much
Plz continue it
Update fast
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
don't be disheartened dear :) please continue!! Sorry this is my first fine commenting, but trust me your story is really wonderful 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Great simply nice update... If I'm not mistaken Pratap didn't go against DB before this. Its nice to see Pratap stands for Ajabde. 👍🏼
Update soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey frnds here u go with part 8...
Next morning..
Prtap woke up bit early so he can see ajabde first but again he was late.. prtap got up n stopped in his track.. it was a beautiful sight. .. ajabde was selecting dupatta for her... she had taken her bath n her long hair were wet she hadn't wore any jwellery. Prtap was staring at her but come in his sence when he heard her murmurings. ..
Ajabde: ye sw bhi na humne kaha tha unse hamare aare kapde sahi se rakhe..ab is lahenge ka dupatta kha he .itni der ho gyi he rani ma hamara intezar kar rhi hongi...
prtap look here n there n found her dupatta.. n take it..
Ajabde was standing near mirror .prtap came from behind n put the dupatta on her head n she startled but prtap hold her before she loose her balance..
Prtap:aap yahi dundh rhi thi na..
Ajabde : ji .. hum woo... m walk forward. .. She was soo shy that her hands were trumbling.. she speedily wore her bangles n earings.. when she was wearing her neckless her hands were trumbling..
Prtap : Laiye hum aapki madad kar dete he..
Ajabde : nhii hum khud kar lenge..
N tries to lock thechain but it was not happening. .
Prtap come forward n hold the chain ...hum kar dete he.. Ajabde's heart wasbeating fastly she was feeling so shy that she was not looking in mirror...
Prtap hook the chain n move backword..
Ajabde : dhanyawad n before prtap could say anything sheran away from there..
From 2 days rani db was observation praja so she knew that ajabde was still angry at prtap. . Right now to mind wash prtap was risky .. so she decided to anger ajabde...
Ajabde was making prtap's favourite dish and db come there...
Db : kal prtap ne aapka sathdiya iska matlab ye nhi ki wo hum par wishwas nhi karte..
Ajabde : chinta mat kariye choti ma bahot jald sabko aapka asli rool patachal jayega..
Db : achhaaachalo dekhte he.. ranaji or kp hum par bahot barosakarte he .. aap kahengi jakar unhe or vo man lenge... pichle 10 varsho se is mahel me humne apna raj chalaya heaapko kya lagta he ki hum yuhi ye sab jane denge..
Ajabde : choti ma ye aapki galatfemi he.. sach ek na ek din sabke samne ...
Db : n laughs loudly.. aapko lagta he k sab aapka vishwas karenge.. kp bhi... 10 sal pahele humne aesi chal chali thi ki rana ji ne aapko yaha se nikal diya tha or kp vo to humse bahot pyar karte the unhone to hume kuch karne hi nhi diya ... unhone khud hi apse muh fer liya.. vo aap pe barosa hi nhi krte the...
Ajabde got flashback of their conversation in vrindavan...
She was again getting angry..
Db : aapko abhi bhi lagta he k kp aapse pream karte he.. to kaha gya vo pream in 10 salo me.. pata he aapka nam bhi nhi sunna chahte the .. mana kar diya tha unhone sabko aapka nam lenese use vo apradh mante the...
Ajabde was crying now..
Db : aapko kp isliye leke aaye kyunki unko jija ne bataya ki aapka koi kasurnhi tha.. agarvo jija se kabhi nhi milteto vo aapko kbhi vapas nhi late...aap hmesha bijolia me hi rahte or vo aapse hamesha grina hi karte.. hearing these words prtap lost her sence n run to their room...
She was getting all fb of their last meeting in vrindavan n in bijolia ...
Prtap entered in room .. he had brought ajabde's favourite flowers...
Prtap saw ajabde n smiles her back was on prtap's side so he was not able to dsee her tears..
Prtap : ajabde. .
Ajabde wipes her tears.,
Prtap : wo hum aapke pasanditafool laye the.. aapko lal gulab pasand he na..
Ajabde's face was blank he put the flowers biside her on bed..
Prtap : ajabde..
Ajabde : inki kya aavshyakta thi she said in quit angry tone..
Beforeprtap could say anything jb knocked on the door..
Prtap : are rani ma..aaiye na..
Ajabde compose herself. .n smiles..
Jb : wo hum bas itna kahene aaye the ki aaj humne aapke liye ek samarohrakha he.. chittor ki praja bhi apni kunwrani se milna chahti he.. to aaj shamko ek samaroh he ..
Prtap n ajabde : ji rani ma..
Jb: ajabde aap vakt par taiyar ho jaiyega.. or aap bhi kp..
Both: ji..
Jb : are hum to bhul hi gye kp aapko rana ji me yad kiya he..
Kp : ji rani ma n he went out..
In evening.. ajbde was standing in balcony. . Prtap came in the room .. he saw ajabde standings alone.. She was lost in her thought...
Prtap : ajabde kya bat he hum subah se dekh rhe he aap khoi khoi si lag rhi he aapki tabiyat to thik he..
Ajabde didn't replied n went back in the room prtap follows her..
Prtap : ajabde
Ajabde bluntly: hum thik he..
Prtap : thik he.. vo ajabde hum apke liye ek bhent laye the .. ye lahenga.. n shows her the dress..
Prtap : hum chahte he ki aap ye aaj ke samaroh me pahene..
At that time sw knocked..
Sw : kshama kijiyega vo rani sa ne kaha he aapko taiyar karne k liye..
Prtap went out of the room..
Sw: are wah ye to bahot sunder he ajabde. .aaj aap yahi pahenne wali he na..
Ajabde saw the lahenga indeed it so beautiful. .but right now ajabde was not in her sence she refuse ti wear that lahenga..
Ajabde : nhi hum ye nhi pahenenge..
Sw :par ajabde kp kitne pream se aapke liye ye laye the.. ajabde wo bahot pryas kar rhe aapko manane k liye ..
Ajabde : hum jante he sw.. n cries. . Par hum kya kare hum chah kar bhi vo sab nhi nhula pa rhe he.. hum unse bahot pream karte he or vo bhi par itne varsh kya ek bar bhi unhone hame yad nhi kiya., aaj chotima ne jo kha..n narrated her what happened in kitchen..
Sw : aap kiski bato par vishwas kar rhi he ajabde ..choti raniji ke.. aap janti he unhe vo sirf aapko or kp ko dur karna chahti he.. hum to bas aapse itna hi kahenge k aapko kp ko 1 or moka dena chahiye...
Dasi : kunwraniji rani ma ne aapke liye ye vastra bhijwaye he...
Ajabde : thik yaha rakh dijiye..
At night..
Everyone was presented in darbar... all were talking about prtap n ajabde.. but prtap was so restless. . He just wanted to watcj ajabde in that dress...
All became silent jb n vb entred with ajabde.. prtap held his breath n turn around...
He saw ajabde n his facial expressions changed from shock to hurt..
Ajabde was wearing another dress.. he has waited full evening to see ajabde in that dress but ajabde didn't wear it.. he know she was angry but she should habe wore that dress he had gifted her with so much love ... jb make ajabde stand beside him.. they both walk n sit on sofa.. everyone was praising them... everyone from family gave them gifts..
Maan: bhabhi sa aap bahot sundar lag rhi he..
Ajabde smiles at her.. al were dancing in front of them..
Prtap : aapne vo lahega kyun nhi pahena?
But some one come there to congratulate thwm ,. N then they didn't got any chance to talk,,...
At night whene prtap came .. ajabde was pretending to sleep..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww ... bechara Pratap trying so hard ... loved it Divi [ ab raat ka scene jaldi update karo !!😊 👏
Edited by ash41900 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ash41900

Aww ... bechara Pratap trying so hard ... loved it Divi [ ab raat ka scene jaldi update karo !!😊 👏

Rat to khatam ho gyi with prtap sulking... next update is going to be turning point...n txxx 4 liking..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Divi always liking ... love ur updates !! will b waiting for next!!

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