prja scenes: love is trust last part 30 pg 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey frnds... M also prja's fan...
This forum is so silent n no 1 update ny os...
So i'm going to start new thread containg bits n bites... in this thread i vl post my stories but may be not related to each other..just a scenes which i wanted to see.. N if some of u wanted some scenes from your imagination feel free to post here or just suggest me i vl make some stories from it...


Part1: Pg 1
Part 2 : Pg 2
Part3.pg3
Part 4: pg 6
Part5: pg 7
Part 6:pg 9
Part 7: pg 11
Part 8. Pg 12
Part 9:pg 13
Part 10 : page 15
Part 11: page 17
Part 12 : page 19
Part 13: page 20
Part 14 :page 21


Part 15 page 22..
Part16: Page 24
Part 17: Page 25
Part18;page27
Part 19: Page 30
Part 20: Page 31
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here u go with 1st bite...
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scenes starts after fighting...rana udaysingh has not come to rajmahal... He is staying at some other place...
Us wanted to clear all the misunderstandings.. So he fix the meeting with ajabde..n with people of bijolia...
Meeting place...
Us: Hum jante he k hamse bhul hui he ..or hum aap sabse mafi bhi mangte he..hum jante he k bijolia svatantra hona chahta he mewad se.. Lekin hum ye wada kqrte he k ye bhul dobara nhi hogi...
Praja eyelock at that time...
Now prtap doesn't think that ajabde is deshdrohi..but ajabde still angry with prtap that he thinks that she is deshdrohi...n now she knows that he will never trust her..she is hurt ...n angry also...
Ajabde: Shama kijiye ja rana sa... Hum bijolia ko swatanta isliye karna chahte the taki unhe apne rakshan k liye kisi par aadhar na rakhna pade...naki isliye kyunki hum bijolia ko mewad se alag karna chahte the... Bijolia humesha mewad ka hi hissa rahega.. Bas aap humse wada karte he k aainda kabhi bhijoli ko nazarandaz na kiya jaye..
Us: Thik he...
Everyone cheered...
All were happy..
Prtap was watching ajabde but he remembered his promise n his mother so he turn his face...
Us: Ab hum yqha se chalenge..kunwar prtap chaliye..
Ajabde was watching prtap.. They both were looking eachother.prtap moves othersides...n thats when ajabde realised that may be everything is fine between chittor n bijolia but prtap still not belive her..
Prtap: Dajiraj ek minute...hum jab bijolia ka utardaitwa hamne le hi liya he to ye hamara farz he k hum bijolia ko unki khushiya lotaye..he brings all jwelleries of bijolia..people becomes so happy..n all took their jwells n money back...n us also move towards their horses..
Now ajabde n prtap were alone..
Prtap: Ye aapke abhushan he aap bhi le lijiye..
Ajabde was so angry n hurt...she moves towards the table n took the jwelleries which belongs to her n given by her father n give this saubhagyawati... Prtap: Ye abhushan to abhi bhi yahi he...
At that time ajabde looks into prtap's eyes : Ye hamare abhushan nhi he kunwar prtap..ye abhushan chittor ki bahu k he... Hamne hamare abhushan le liye he...
Prtap: Par ye sare to...
Ajabde: Hamare vivah k abhushan he .yahi na..jab koi vishwas hi nhi he pream hi nhi he to kesa vivah kunwar prtap aap to humse grina karte he na...
Par hum aaj bi aapse pream karte he shayad hum hi murkh the jo ye aas lagali k shayad ye sab hone k bad aap hume apne sathe le jayenge par nhi..
She was now crying...
Prtap: Ajabde ..aap hamri bhavano ko kabhi nhi samaj payengi hum kese bhul jaye k apki vajah se hamari rani ma...
Ajabde shouts: Bas... Sach to ye he k aapne kbi hum par barosa kiya hi nhi ..humne aapse kaha tha na k hum aapse pyar karte he or hamesha karte rahenge..lekin aaj kuch he jo tut gya he kunwar prtap..humara pream..humara vishawas k shayad aap hum par kbi yakin kar paye...or shayad humara rishta bhi.
Prtap: Ajabde ..
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Ajbde: Jaiye kunvar prtap ranaji aapki prtiksha kar rhe honge..khammaghani she just runs from there..
Prtap: Kya sachme rani ma ahab de k karan nhi gyi thi ya koi or karan he ..or vo patra..hume ek bar sach ka pata lagana hi hoga..kyunki jo kuch bhi hua he hum aapse abhi utna hi pyar karte he ajabde..chahe kitni bhi koshish kare hum apko bhulane ki Par har pal aapko yad karte he ...n he goes toward his dad..
I always wanted ajabde to stand for herself..she also have selfrespect..
Ok frnds. Thats it..sorry if u feeling bored...it was kinda long...
Let me know how this bite test.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww sweet even i was hoping for something similar atleast pratap Ko realise to karwao may b ajabde is innocent !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story Divi...loved Ajabde's attitude...👏 waiting for next update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rashi04

Interesting story Divi...loved Ajabde's attitude...👏 waiting for next update...😊


I didn't think about the story further but i vl update another scene which is not related to it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Exactly 👍🏼, I was hoping something like this from the cv's. Atleast I glad that somebody have same opinion with me. Please update soon and make sure Pratap work hard for Ajabdeh forgiveness...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmogini

Exactly👍🏼, I was hoping something like this from the cv's. Atleast I glad that somebody have same opinion with me. Please update soon and make sure Pratap work hard for Ajabdeh forgiveness...


I haven't decided to write next part ...but if got good response i vl try..but give me some suggetions what u wanted to read as i don't have anybidea..i just wanted to write some different scenes ...what could have happened but didn't decided to write full story..so if u can give me some suggestion and our opinions r same it vl be good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Divi would like to read abt ajabde in bijoliya n caring out her duties n then pratap finds out that the letter was fabricated by someone to send ajabde out ... he then following the bread crumb n reaching JB n getting out the truth then the remorse growing on him n his struggle to bring her back in his life with all her respect !! also want ajabde to show some attitude in going back!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz continue it
Its interesting concept
Edited by meera851 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok now i have decided that i vl continue this story...i don't know how i vl take this story ahead..so if u don't like then sorry in advance..
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Prtap left with his father for chittor...
Ajabde was standing in her balconey..n remembering all moments that she had spent with prtap..
Ajabde: Ab hum aapse kabhi koi umeed nhi rakhenge kunwar prtap..kyunki jab ummeed puri nhi hoti to bahot taklif hoti he...hume pahele hi samaj lena chahiye tha ki aap hum par vishwas nhi kar sakte...
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Prtap: In his room--
Prtap: Hum jante he ajabde aaj aap hamari vaja se bahot dukhi he par aapne jo kiya hum kese bhula de aapki vajah se hi hamari rani ma... Vo patra ye sabhit karta he ki aapki vaja se ye sab hua..vo patra...humne kabhi vo patra pada hi nhi ..kya sachme rani ma ajabde ki vajay se...
He was so tensed so he throw the vas in anger.. All this commotion heard by some one ...n that was nonathor than sajjabhai...(may be this is the name of that3rd rani i don't remember properly)
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Ajabde's room:
Saubhagyavti came there..
S: Ajabde kunwar prtap ne ye bijwaya he aapke liye.. Chakrapaniji ne hume diya tha aapko dene k liye n handed her the small box n leaves from there..
Ajabde wondering: Opened the box..
Ajabde: Ye anguthi..ye to...
N then she remember that prtap had taken the RING in auction...
Ajabde: Ye anguthi unhone hame kyun lota di ab..ye anguthi unhone hame is liye di thi taki hum unhe hamesha aapne pas rakh sake par ab...ye anguthi ek aas thi k ap hame lene aayenge par... Jo bhi ho kunwar prtap hum abhi aapse utna hi pream karte he jitna aphele karte he .ye anguthi hamesha hamare pas rahengi ek aas or vishwas banke nhi par hamare vivah ki nishani banke..ye hame hamesha aapse jode rakhegi kunwar prtap...
( today she has lost her aal hope)
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I know it's kinda short...
Give me good response. N i vl make next part fast...

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