*~The Adventurous Tale Contest~* || Results!! ||

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A big fat h e l l o to you,guys!

So,finally we're here to announce the r e s u l t s of a contest we organised 235478 years back!

Yeah,you guessed it right! A warm w e l c o m e you to the :

We got very ah-mazing, interesting and creative entries. It was really a tough task to judge them. But,yes,as this was a contest,we had to announce the results.

So,without many ado,

the w in ne r of The Adventurous Tale Contest is :


*Drum Rolls*

Aru_A

A big round of a p p l a u s e for her. It was really deserving for her to win! She really put a lot of effort in this contest.

Congratulations!

And other participants,you people were also great. You all rocked it, and when we say it,we mean it!

So,with this,we bid an adieu! See you all soon in some other exciting activity...

Regards,


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here is the winning signature you can flaunt,Aru_A :


[Thanks a lot starry.phoenix for this. <3]

And this is how how the winner was selected :

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Cheers!

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|| BubblyR || Abhishek_King ||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Aru! 👏 Party do aap mujhe,NOWW!😆

@all others you all were also great!⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulations and celebrations!!!! ^_^
aww... i'm so happy for you aru.. :D :D
you totally deserved to win! <3 <3
love yaaa... :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG !!!
congrats aru <3
i expected u 2 win !!!!
u r such a fab writer
i am really happy for u re...
congratulations and celebrations 🥳🤪
keep doing like this and much more !!!
i hope u may be always successful <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ermm...
well...
destiny takes turns...that's all I can say...
compared to what I usually say when the results come...
i'm hyper, in disbelief, over the moon, full of energy(and oxygen Abhi :P), and I have so much to convey, so much to confess, so much to...to...to express...
but today...when this odyssey has finally come to an end, when we finally know the results...I...I'm speechless...honestly, I don't know what to say...
well I never really thought that I would be at a loss of words, someone like me who can endlessly speak and write, I have nothing to say...
just that...there is a heartfelt thanks to everyone who made this contest possible, every person who considered me worthy for that position, everyone who made it possible for me to learn so much, everyone who has been a part of this amazing journey...and of course, my behnas who never fail to motivate me, encourage me and even congratulate me...you all have shown so much faith in me...
honestly, I'm crying right now, I don't know why, I don't know what to do, how to feel...
I thought that knowing the results would give me the boost I need for the massive work on my head right now...but I had no idea that I would be reduced to tears in such a way...
well, the victory is for all of us, not just me...we all are winners...we have been together since the beginning and today too, along with all that we've learnt, we all have won this together, trust me...
and I sincere request to the judges...if the others feel fine, can we get the permission to share our work with everyone? round1 was a quiz, round2 we saw each others mehnat, it was beautiful, round3, could please share our works? round 3a was a great opportunity to explore our talents, n i'mm really eager to see my lovely behnas works and share my own li'l JB-HB OS with them. as for 3b, it's up to you if u share it with us...its just that...all of our experiences may have great lessons for each of us to learn...
thank you so much to everyone and that's all I'm capable of saying...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RES...😲
I do have a lot to say...😈

P.S. Congo re Aru!! Baaki when i unres!🤗
P.P.S. I agree, can we please share our works...that was in my mind from the first... i mean it would be a pleasure to read my other cutie pie's writings...GOD I'm excited to read theirs!!!! And yep, it'd be really kind of you, if you all share our experiences..no no no...i mean R3b entries...We would get to know more about each other's experiences!😳

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Aru_A


It was the break of dawn. The monsoon morning sky had just turned whitish-blue. As the skylight weaved its way into the spacious, circular entrance hall which served as an entrance to the castle, a beautiful girl in her mid-teens walked in. A calm and satisfied smile dressed her fair, round face and happiness reflected in her dark and expressive eyes as she walked with a confident gait towards the magnificent main doors of the castle, which stood open in front of her, the sky outside visible. The light breeze flowing in through them ruffled her straight and slightly wet hair which fell to her waist.
Chan...chan...chan...'
With each step, her payals made sharp and sweet tinkling notes as she slowly made her way outside, relishing each breath. As she stepped over the threshold of the door, an endless rain of fragrant flower petals descended upon her. Taken aback, she looked up to see the source but the flowers obscured her vision. Her calm smile broke into a wide, elated grin stretching from ear to ear as she twirled around in happiness, dancing under the flowers. After some long moments, a voice interrupted her joyful solitude.
"Janmdin ki khoob saari shubh kaamnaen!"
She froze on spot. Her gaze fell upon the figure standing outside the door, slightly taller than her. Her eyes widened with excitement as she recognized it.
"Jaivantha!!!" she shrieked with a wave of surprise at the girl in front, who was wearing a smirk on her straight and dusky face, her long, wavy hair falling in front over her right shoulder. She ran to engulf Jaivantha into a tight hug. Jaivantha smiled back, she let her best friend speak.
"Jaivantha!! Aap yahan? Aap to Kaashi jaa rahi thi. Phir..." Hansa expressed her surprise but suddenly paused as she picked the glint of mischief in Jaivantha's eyes.
"Achcha. Ab samjhe. Aapne hamse jaan-boojhkar asatya kaha tha?" Hansa pointed.
"Bilkul" Jaivantha confirmed with sparkling eyes and a naughty smile, "Nahi to aapka vismit mukh kaise dekhte! Pichle varsh to aapne hame hamari yojna pe amal karne se pehle hi pakad liya tha! Aur smaran kijiye, hamare janmdin par kaise aapne achambit kar diya tha hame. Prasannta ke mare hamare pao dharti par nahi padh rahe the!"
"Aap bhi na Jaivantha! Prati varsh na jaane kahan se aisi adbhut yojnaen lati hain!" Hansa said in an impressed tone.
"Ye to matr aarambh hai. Aap chaliye hamare saath! Ham aapko kuch aur dikhate hain" and Jaivantha pulled Hansa's hand to take her away.


After some minutes, the bestfriends reached the backside of the castle. Amidst the lush green gardens, a patch of blue water lined with thin streaks of silver (due to the skylight) lay. In the middle of this pond was a pure white swan, sleeping with her head under her wing.
Hansa held her breath in surprise. Jaivantha turned towards her and said silently, "Ek sundar sa hans, hamari priy Hansa ke liye."
Hansa was speechless. A few minutes of silence passed. As Jaivantha watched the beautiful bird, Hansa became emotional. A silent tear full of happiness, awe, and uncertainty trickled out of her right eye, down her cheek. But Jaivantha was quick enough to catch it before it fell.

"Aisa kya keh diya is hans ne jo hamari sakhi ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye?" she enquired.
Hansa answered silently, "Jaivantha, ham dono ki maitri kitni gehri hai. Sadev saath rehte hain. Kintu kuch samay baad yadi ham dono ka vivah ho gaya, tab to matr smritiyan hi reh jayengi na..."
Even Jaivantha became thoughtful as she heard this. They were old enough and if they got married, how much would they be able to stay in touch? They had spent every living moment in each other's memory; would they even have time to think about each other with their marriage responsibilities? But, she couldn't let Hansa's birthday spoil for a mere thought like this. Quickly, she put on a smile and placed her hand on her shoulder and said, "Arre! Yeh kaise vyarth ke prashnon par vichar karke apna man vichlit kar rahi hain? Vivah ki baat hai to ham ek doosre ko anginat patr likhenge. Aur sochiye, jab hamare putr-putri honge, tab ham unhe apni maitri ki kahaniyan sunayenge! Koi ankhon ke samaksh nahi rehta, iska arth ye to nahi ki vo hai hi nahi. Ve sadev hamari smritiyon me amar rehte hain Hansa, haina?" Jaivantha consoled her and wiped her tears. Hansa nodded with her eyes down. She looked up into Jaivantha's hopeful eyes and soon her lips curled into a smile.
"Yeh hui na baat!" Jaivantha exclaimed, "Ab chaliye, sara din yahin rahengi to ham aapko apna agla uphaar kab denge? Aap shighr apne kaksh me jaiye, ham pahunchte hain.."
When Hansa gave a quizzical look at her excitement, Jaivantha pushed her, "Arre jaiye naa!"

Back in her room, Hansa's thoughts were interrupted when the door suddenly opened and Jaivantha ran in excitedly, hiding something behind her back. When Hansa tried to sneak a look, Jaivantha cleverly concealed it and asked Hansa to close her eyes first. Hansa followed. Soon Jaivantha exclaimed, "Yeh dekhiye!"
Hansa opened her eyes to see a beautiful baby pink lehenga with elegant embroidery done with silver thread and diamonds studded in places, the fabric emitting a soft shine. Latkans adorned the edges of the dupatta, which had the same silver embroidery.
"Kitna khoobsurat hai yeh Jaivantha!!! Ham to ise sadev ke liye pehen sakte hain!" Hansa squealed. "Aapna banaya hai na!"
"Vishesh roop se aapke liye."
"Ham abhi ise pehenke aate hain!"
"Rukiye! Aap in vastron me..."
But Hansa didn't hear anything; she just rushed off to change, leaving Jaivantha smiling. What Jaivantha didn't realize, was that Hansa actually had no intention to change that lehenga in the coming days. It took three days of convincing that Hansa finally agreed to take it off...

"Maa, ham maan hi nahi sakte! Aapko Rani maa ka lehenga itna pasand aaya ki aapne use teen din tak pehena!" laughed Ajabdeh as she heard the tale of the pink lehenga that her mother, Hansa bai was showing her.
"Teen din ke baad bhi ham ye lehenga nahi utaarte agar hamari maa aur Jaivantha hame dilasa na dete!" Hansa told Ajabdeh, and she was amused even more.
Just then, the door opened and Pratap, Jaivantha's son, entered.
"Khamma gadi Hansa massiji" he greeted.
"Gari khamma!"
"Ham Ajabdeh ko le jaye? Hame inhe...kuch dikhana hai" Pratap asked.
But before Hansa could answer, Ajabdeh answered, "Kunwar Pratap! Apni mitr ko baad me bhent dijiyega.. Pehle apni Rani maa ki maitri ki kahani to suniye! Ye lehenga, Rani maa ne maa ko diya tha, aur maa ne use teen din tak pehna tha!" Ajabdeh told Pratap.
"Kya?! Teen din tak ek hi vastr! Rani maa ka lehenga aapko itna pasand aaya?" Pratap uttered in disbelief.
"Aapki Rani maa aur ham itni achchi sakhiyan thi, ek doosre ke bare me sab jaante the. Jaise aap dono ki mitrta hai, haina?" Hansa said.
Pratap and Ajabdeh looked at each other with surprise. Then their faces broke into a smile, a smile that lasted a lifetime...

Experience and Winning

Oh My. That's a big question, I don't know where to begin...
From childhood, I have always been eager to participate in competitions and contests and show my talents and capabilities. But, honestly, it had become a sort of trend where I would always get eliminated before the final round. And soon I lost my interest and excitement for such competitions and preferred staying at peace with a normal and simple life.
I entered the The Adventurous Tale contest with the same casualty. I just knew the answers so I thought of giving it a go. But I had never thought in my wildest dreams that out of a forum filled with so many members, I would really get selected for the next round. Precisely that was the reason I was so surprised when I saw my name in list of selections for the second round. It was really hard for me to believe that I, I had really made it. I actually was screaming and jumping when I saw my name up there, that too with Einstein IQ level. And I even had friends who were standing on the same platform with me, all of them really overjoyed and congratulating each other, me as well. And, there was news that we such amazing friends would have to compete against each other. I was so uncertain. Friends against each other is one of the things I'm really scared of. I really didn't know how would all of it turn out. But actually, there was a lesson in it for me too. I learnt that true friendships never really leave hearts, they never do. 'Cause all of us are the same sisters like we used to be before the contest.
During the course of the Round 2: Dream-Team, I didn't know I had so much to learn, yet. There we were, four of us who knew each other, we were supposed to choose a topic and work on it. Make a thread, to be more specific. There was Anjori, who was for the Maharana Pratap topic while the rest of us were for PrAja wedding. After listening to Anjori's POV, I agreed on the MP topic. After all, what's life without a little risk? This now made us two and two. While Roshini di and Hina di were for the PrAja wedding, Anjori and I were for the MP topic. After a day of tracking both the di's, I knew a humongous task was in store for me, to convince them for the MP topic and a sort of debate to hold. I thought it would be difficult, it was a little, truly. But when, both of them gave their POV once and then, just said yes, when they just said that we will do whatever you two decide, I learnt the essence of friendships. I was a bit disappointed with Roshini di when she used to come and meet the rest of our group and not post anything on our CC thread, I tried to put it forward as calmly and politely as possible. I thought she would retort, but instead, she accepted it without any counter-arguments. I really did unveil the faces of true friends. And both of them, they readily gave all the credit to us, and even motivated us for the next round. And Anjori, she trusted me with such a big responsibility, the whole write up for the thread. Due to health issues, I couldn't do the write up in time, and I was really guilty about it. It was that last night when even the matter wasn't ready and I told her that. Instead of bursting out on me, she motivated me and convinced me that we could complete it off in time, she even helped me, and also confided that she was feeling guilty for not being able to help me when I was in a bad health. I was really touched when I saw this true gold of friendships, on IF and even in my real life. Everyone supported me so much and we as a team supported each other so much. No one questioned any decisions or anything. And I made another friend, Abhishek, someone who was more than just a watchman or organizer. He stayed with us the whole journey, giving us tips, updates, news, even pepping up our atmosphere and laughing with us gleefully. I had never seen someone from the organizing team of any event to be so open. Even though we tease, and start flying in the air regarding something or the other, but even that time is enjoyable, something that I can not minus out of my IF time.
Friendships weren't the only thing in that course of the journey. I still remember those times when all of us would disappear from IF and work undercover, doing our bit offline. But I was unsure from the very beginning of Round 2, I everyday wondered whether we would be able to complete the thread. Used to think so much about it, type on my way to school, and stuff. And still, the write up was left on the last night. But some determination and warmth of friendships, we were able to do it all. As those ten days passed, even the 12th hour of the last day, I learnt the value of time, I learnt how to value it. 'Cause in my real life, I'm somehow never able to submit my schoolwork on time or meet deadlines. Although I have a brilliant mind, but it is always devalued due to my tendency to not stick to the deadlines.This contest taught that to me, and I'm really thankful and grateful, I wonder if I could have learnt it any other way.
But that was not all. This contest, it was based on the show Maharana Pratap. All of us forum members, we watch the show everyday, we discuss the scenes and scenarios, fangirl behind PrAja, do analysis, leave our views, etc etc. But only a hand-picked lot out of us really take the knowledge the show tries to give us. This contest, it also taught me some real values that the show teaches us, values that the life of the great Maharana Pratap teach us. I learnt the importance of a strong will, that will keep you going in hard times. I learnt about the golden values of obedience, of surrender to your duties, of standing up for your right and for the right of others, of keeping the promises you make, of leading people, of collecting the different strands, ie people, and knitting them into one strong rope for one united cause, of true friendships, of your responsibility towards your duties, of trust, of surrender to your teachers and leaders and parents, of never giving up, of your duty to make your family, your background including your home, school, institutes, friends, proud, I really did learn all these values that our the golden Indian history teaches us, that the life of Maharana Pratap teaches us.
After that night, the last night of Round 2, I was pretty sure that our team wouldn't win, owing to the hurried completion of the thread we had done. But then, I had learnt so much, and had also learnt to appreciate my opponents, I was teary for a while at the thought of being eliminated, but then, I was not really leaving the competition empty handed. But then, the results came out, and when I saw that our team had won, honestly, really honestly, I was in utter disbelief. Literally! I could really not believe it. When I saw those words on the thread under Team Pratap's review that the had won(the thread was still reserved back then, nothing else had been posted), it took me some 5-10 minutes of "Wha-wh-wh-what-like no-like literallyy-like really what-no honestly, What?" to convince myself about the fact that we had won. I was literally saying all of this loud. Utter disbelief. Truly. But there, lay another lesson for me, 'Be determined. Struggle with determination and decision to do it. The Prize would definitely come to you in the end. 'Cause when you really give your all to something, the God himself opens ways to get that thing to you.' We got what we had ventured out for. Well not exactly. Winning the round was one motive, but the real motive that drove me to it was just doing it, just participating. Just giving my best. Just discovering my capacity, my capability. I did find it all, and we did win. Overjoyed. But again, its not good to loose yourself in the joy of success over a single hurdle and forget the road ahead. And so came the Round 3: The Final Face-off.
'Finally in my element, writing!' was my first reaction when I saw the task directions. 'Cause the reason I joined IF was to share my MP and PrAja stories with a like-minded community. And since the beginning, they accepted me and my stories. Till date, I have my friends who love to read my MP stories and wait for updates, though my writing became really limited ever since the leap. The task asked me to be creative and send in atleast one thing our of the list. Out of the whole list, I knew only two things, writing and VM's. I had seen a lot of creations, earlier, a lot of our PrAja/RoSal fangirls group used to make them, but till date, I'm not clear what they are called, or how they are made. I have watched VM's, but never made one. There was only one thing which I could do, and only one thing in which I had confidence, writing. And when I got to know that we could submit five things, things became a little more complicated for me. For me now, I had to make my story of this level that it matched the others' five artworks put together (but I still believe that there is no match for art...it is eternal and unique) And also, beautification of the PM had to be taken care of and I, was someone who didn't even know how to post pictures or what were dividers. This contest even increased my knowledge about these little things too.
To write something new and creative, and that too in a short frame of 1200 words, it was a challenge for a person like me who writes elaborately about each moment and likes to go down in depths and symbols of each moment, 'cause really, writing in short has been my weakness from the very beginning. I continued with my normal life, trying to grop out inspiration from my everyday life to write something surprising and new. I had two options, either to go with my strength(ir PrAja) or to go with the flare of nouvelle creativity. Some debate was on in my mind but then, I implied what I had learnt, you don't get success easily if you operate in your comfort zone. I was aware of my imagination with PrAja, but I chose the less-traveled path and I went with the latter and this idea on friendships, a great lesson from this contest and from the show as well, it struck me.
I explored my capability and came up with the story above, of Jaivantha bai and Hansa bai's friendship, right from their childhood. But doing this in the word limit was a task for me. I was exceeding the limit by 200 words when I finished typing it. But, I had to bring it down, I just had to follow the rules. So, the editing of that document itself taught me how to 'prune your garden' and make it look beautiful. I have never been able to fit things in word limit or edit the ones which exceeded it. But this time, I did it, and I was proud of myself. I still am. And I have achieved many of the things that I had aimed for in this round, I have grown, I have learnt...
So here I present myself before the panel with what I am, what I did, and what it was like for me. Looking at the length of this you may think that these are just made-up words 'cause really, the 3(b) task isn't what you call short( I honestly don't realize the length I have typed until I post it) But then, I hold on to my thing that things from heart are not to be subjected to cuts and edits. At this point, winning to me, it is important, I won't romanticize loosing, but yet, there is a bigger picture, a broader and more positive point of view to the unknown results; whatever they may be, but they can not take away the priceless awareness and knowledge that I have earned throughout this journey, would they? I am always gonna cherish all of this. But on the other hand, if I loose today, it would just be how it started, the same lack of fire in this heart craving for something, the lost confidence in your abilities and the world's eye to recognize it, I don't want that to happen. Earlier also, it was this very forum where the awards had been held and I, despite of getting so many nominations, couldn't get enough votes to make it to a title. This time, I have reached this far, I wanna keep going till that line and cross the ribbon before it is broken. I wanna keep the fire alive that this contest gave me. I want to see that how many are there who I can make see the world from my eyes, from my heart. I came in as an unsure, casual, just a member with meagre knowledge contestant, I want to leave as a confident, proud, and a better person, with a fire to stride ahead, and a thirst to quench the thirst of warmth that the others need, that this world needs. I want to leave as a person who dreams, dreams big, and also hold the capability of turning those dreams to reality. Winning today, it would just complete the whole circle for me...

Before I end, there is a sincere thank you from my heart to all the people who made this contest possible, all the people who supported us throughout the way, all the people because of whom, I am a much better person today with some beautiful and worthy experiences. Thank You so very much from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to be a part of this unforgettable and fruitful odyssey...
Dhanyawaad...
Pranam


AsYa_Celana



"Kyun Ajabde?" where the only words which Hansa Bai could manage to say. She was too shocked, surprised and pained to say anything more than that.
"Maa, humein kuch shan ke liye akela chod dijiye." Ajabde said in a very composed tone. But was that enough to hide that immense pain which she felt? No not at all...Hansa Bai could clearly make it our by her eyes and her voice. Even if she refused to speak anything about it, her eyes depicted all the pain she bore...her eyes spoke volumes.
"Ajabde..." Hansa Bai was angry on her. But her daughter's pain overpowered her anger on Ajabde.
"Koyi baat nahin Maa. Yadi aap nahin jayengi toh...toh hum jaa rahein hai..." She tried to sound normal and left the room hastily, almostrunning so that her tears go unnoticed by her mother.

Kitni der bhaagengi aap? Kis kis se bhaagengi aap?
Hum bhaag nahin rahein hai kisi se. Hum toh bass nahin chahte ki Maa aur Daata aur dukhi ho humari baatein sun kar...

Achha? Thik hai, chaliye maan liya. Parantu apne aap se? Apne aapse to aap kabhi bhaag nahin paayengi aur nahin koyi bahana bana paayengi.
Aap chahti kya hai humse? Aapko lagta hai yeh sab ek bahana hai? Kya chahti hai aap humse? Humein spasht roop se bataiye!

Kyun kiya aapne aisa Ajabde?
Humne wahi kiya jo humein karna chahiye tha.

Aapko lagta hai jo aapne kiya woh sahi tha?
Haan, humne jo kiya woh sahi tha. Kyun? Kya sach ka saath dena galat hai? Kya apne aatmasamman ki suraksha karna galat hai? Ya phir apne maata pita ke apmaan ke khilaaf awaaz uthana galat hai? Kya galat hai? Bataiye humein? Bataiye!

Ek mauka, kya sirf ek mauka aur nahin de sakti aap unhe?
Ek mauka? Ek mauka? Kise de ek aur mauka? Kunwar Pratap ko? Apne aap ko? Yah humarein iss sambandh ko yaa phir humarein vivaah ko? Aap ek mauke ki baat kar rahi hai na? Aur kitne mauke de hum? Aur...kitne mauke?
Humse aur nahin saha jaata! Bachpan se hum apmaan pe apmaan sehte chalein aaye hai. Parantu humne kuch nahin kaha kyunki hum apne daata ka samman katre the, kyunki tab Maa humare saath thi humein sanntwana dene ke liye...
Parantu ab...ab aur nahi saha jaata humse! Asahniya ho gaya humarein liye yeh pira, yeh apmaan!
Humein nahin pata tha ki kisi se prem karna itni badi bhooli hai... Humein nahin pata tha ki humein kabhi itne apmaan bhi sehne parenge. Nahin pata tha humein ki humaarein Daata aur humari Maa ka har pag pag par itna apmaan kiya jayega.
Samant Putri!
Haan hai hum ek saamant ki putri!
Ek saadharan samant ki putri!
Toh ismein dosh kya hai? Kya kisi samnat ki putri hona dosh maana jaata hai? Kya unhein sammaan nahin diya jaata hai ya phir woh uss sammaan ke haqdaar nahin hai?
Thak chuke hai hum! Thak chuke hai hum baar baar wahi baat sunte sunte, wahi do shabd sunte sunte! Baar baar apne daata aur apni Maa ka apmaan hote dekh!
Thak chuke hai hum ladte ladte! Thak chuke hai hum inn shadyantro se, unn logon se ladte ladte. Aur nahin hota humse yeh sahan, aur...aur nahin hota humse yeh sangharsh.
Apne aap ko nirbal bodh karte hai hum. Nirbal ho chuke hai hum baar baar apne vivaah ko toot te dekh, baar baar apni Maa, apne data,APNE sapno ko choor choor hote dekh! Hum mein aur itni shamta nahin rahi ki hum ek baar phir saahas karein, apne aapko, Kunwar Pratap aur humare smabandh ko ek mauka dene ki. Hum mein nahin hai sahas ek baar phir unn apmaano ke shikaar banne ka.
Bhool thi humari, ki hum yeh smajh baithe ki Kunwar Pratap humari baatein maan jaayenge. Apni Choti Maa ka sach swikaar kar paayenge. Hum kaise bhool gaye ki unke liye sabse pehle unki maryaada aur unki Choti Maa aati hai? Kaise bhool sakte hai hum iss baat ko?
Aur hum yeh bhi kaise soch baithe the ki...
Kunwar Pratap humarein saath khade rahenge, apni Choti Maa ko chod...unke khilaaf. Humne bhi na jaane kaise soch liya ki Kunwar Pratap humarein apmaan ke khilaaf awaaz uthayenge? Shayad hum bhool gaye the ki Kunwar Pratap apni Choti Maa ke khilaaf kabhi awaaz uthana toh kya, unke baarein mein kisi ke muh se apshabd bhi nahin sunn sakte.

Ve aapse prem karte hai...
Karte honge ve humse prem, parantu hum yeh jaante hai ki ve humse adhik apni Choti Maa se prem karte hai, unse jo humesha unhe haani pohunchaane ka maarg dhundti rehti hai.
Aur, hum itne swarthi nahin bann sakte ki keval unke humare prati prem ke karan hum apne Data evang Maa ko apmaanit hone de, hum yeh katayi nahin seh paayenge ki humari wajah se unka apmaan ho.

Parantu aapne aise kaise tod diya yeh vivaah?
Kis vishwaas ki neev se hum na todte yeh vivaah?
Kya apne sampoorna jeevan, apne Maa, Data aur swayam apmaanit hone chalein jaate Chittod mein Maharani ban kar?
Prem karte hai hum Kunwar Pratap se, parantu kya iska arth yeh hai ki hum woh har apmaan sehte rahein, unn baton ke liye apmaanti hote rahein jinmein humara koyi dosh nahi hai?
Kya ek rajputaani ka aatmasamman sabse pehle nahin aata?
Iss baat ko na hum bhool sakte hai aur naa hi jhootla sakte hai!
Aur...kya arth hai uss vivaah ka jahan do logon ke bech mein vishwaas na ho, jahan do logon ke beech bharosa na ho, ek dooje par, woh jo ek sambandh mein sabse aavashyak hota hai. Yadi ve hum par vishwaas hi nahin karte, bharosa hi nahin karte, toh...toh arth heen hai na yeh sambandh, yeh vivaah?
Yadi humarein pati humarein saath nahin khade ho paaye, toh jiss parivaar mein humara vivaah hone jaa rah tha, hum wahan ke logon se kya apekshaayein rakh sakte hai?
Yadi humarein pati apni patni ke samman ki raksha na kar paaye toh kya labh hua iss rishte ka?
Yadi do logon mein vishwaas ho toh ek sambandh prem ke bina bhi kayam reh sakta hai,
parantu yadi vishwaas hi na reh jaaye dono ke beech toh prem ka rehna bhi...arth heen ho jaata hai...

Toh aap yeh vivaah nahin karengi...?
Nahin...
Hum peeche hath rahein iss vivaah se...
Aur iss baar...
Humesha ke liye...




5 years...
She never knew when 5 years passed away... It was never less than 15 years to her...
He never knew how he had spent all these days...1825 days...43800 hours...without a single glimpse of her.

She sat there...beside the window...that window which had, all these days, witnessed her pain, her sorrow, which had often been wet with tears of repentance and pain...
Mann tera jo rog hai
Mohe samajh na paaye

'Wasn't it my decision to drift apart from you...to separate from you...to end it forever...
Than why does it hurt so much?
Then why do I still want to be with you?
Then why do I still get heartaches remembering every moment we spent together?'
Paas hai jo sab chod ke
door ko paas bulaaye

'I wish it wasn't that hard to be apart from you...
I wish the separation wasn't that much agonizing...'
jiya laage na, tum bin mora
jiya laage na, tum bin mora...
jiya laage na, tum bin moraaa...

He went to that corner of his palace which he used to visit late at nights, from the past 5 years...
To ease his pain...to hide his pain from everyone...
the balcony...that special balcony...
with the mala in his hand...yes...that mala...Ajab's shivji waali mala...
which was her only trace left with him...
Kya jaane kyun hai...
Kya jaane kaisi andekhi si dor...

'I was the only reason for which she left...
I myself wanted her to leave...
Then why I still want to be with her...to be together
I should have been happy that we are not together anymore...
Wasn't it me who wanted to get her away from my life and I still want that...somewhat...
But why can't I detach myself from her...
Why I feel I'm connected with her...
There's something which still pulls me towards her...'
Jo kheechti hai jo lechali hai
Ab yun mujhe teri ore

She looked at the dark night sky...
which was as dark as her fate...
'I don't know what had I done so sinful that destiny chose to be so cruel with me...
Would I always remain incomplete..
Maybe I'm among those stories which are destined to remain incomplete...'
Main anjaani hoon woh kahaani
Hogi na jo poori

'I never knew that the distance between us would get broader...
The hope of reunion in my heart had faded long back...
Because I know that bridging this gap is not easy.
Even if we ever come across the distance would still be vast...'
Paas aaoge to paaoge
Phir bhi hai ik doori
Jiyaa lage na tum bin mora
Jiya lage na, tum bin mora
Jiya lagena...tum bin mora...

He went down the memory lane...that day flashed before his mind...
Misunderstandings...uncertainty...disbelief...
'Why you did this? Why you broke me like this?
We were only a step away from unision but then...
Those sudden accusation...
I never knew you were like this
I never knew that the girl I loved with all my heart,
would have so many different shades...
I didn't trust you, I didn't believe you and still I don't...
But what I still believe is that you could never do this to me...
There's still something which is unknown...
Still there is some mystery which is left unsolved...'
Mann ab tak jo boojh na paaya
Tum woh paheli ho

'I wan to know...I want to solve that mystery...
that misunderstanding...
Which made us part our ways
Which separated me from you...
from my life...
I wanna know...'
Koi na jaane kya wo rahas hai
Koi na jaane kya wo rahasya hai
Jiski saheli ho

A cold breeze blew across her face messing her hair...
The breeze was unusually cold...with cold emotions...and cold feelings...
and f course...cold memories!
'I want to meet you...
I want to be with you...
The pain of separation is intolerable...
I cant pretend to be happy anymore...
I cant act to be normal just anymore...
I'm tired putting those fake smiles, every morning...'
Main muskaaun, sabse chhupaaun
Vyaakul hoon din rain

'These sleepless nights are getting impossible to get through...
I don't anymore remember the day when I last slept peacefully...
How could I?
You have seized my heart's peace...'
Kab se na aayi naino mein nindiya
Mann mein na aaya chain

"The pain is extreme...
It is unbearable...
Would that day ever come when we'll reunite?
Will that day ever come when the two broken hearts will mend once again?
Waiting for that day to come...
Waiting for our agony to end...
Waiting for those bright mornings...
Waiting for those peaceful nights...
And till then...
Jiya laage na tum bin mora
Jiya laage na, tum bin mora
Jiya laage na, tum bin mora...


Experience and Winning

Winning 'The Adventurous Tale Contest'...ummm... That means a LOT to me. It's nearly a dream for me, for which I've, I think all of us have been working so hard.
Bharat Ka Veer Putra Maharana Pratap- I've been watching this amazing historical saga of the valiant Rajput Maharana Pratap right from the first episode. And as the show progressed, I became a fan of this serial and couldn't even afford to miss a single episode. A few months back, when the magical journey of Pratap and Ajabde started, I was like enchanted by this show. And honestly, from the introduction of the Princesses Ajabde and Phool in the show, I became a die hard fan of this show. And PrAja...what to say about them, they were the one who brought me to this amazing place, this forum which became my 2nd home for the past hew months. Fangirling all evening on PrAja in the ATs had become a daily routine for me. And the actors...they are brilliant and the main reason for this shows popularity among us.
Aaah I just couldn't resist myself from drooling on Faisal...be it in India Forums, or my own room or even my classroom. I've always found Roshni a tremendous child actor even if she took a little time to flourish as Ajabde.
To sum up, this amzing show "Bharat Ka Veer Putra Maharana Pratap' had been my world for the past 1and half years. When PrAja track started, half of my day, my mind was crowded with different thoughts on upcoming track and PrAja magic had akmost cast a spell on me.
Winning this contest is a joy, an ecstatic feeling, elation and above all a satisfaction for the die hard Maharana Pratap fan inside me. What can be more amazing and fascinating than winning a contest on that partcular show which was your only topic of discussion and thinking, all day long? The feeling itself is so exciting, satisfactory and just so amazing. Believe me, this show has been the sole reason for my distraction in schools, tutions and even exams!!
Moreover, I've worked so hard for this, so certainly, winning this contest means a lot. I mean of course winning a contest for which u've struggled with your Projects and fought with your mother for 1 hour extra PC time, equal to a hundred 5 stars!!
Also, there had been times when I saw contests going on in other forums and i so awfully wanted to participate in them but how could I when the only show I knew every detail was Maharana Pratap'? I really wanted a contest to be held in BKVPMP forum also and thankfully my wish came true. Bein a part of suc an amazing contest is amazing...and winning it would be like a ...dream come true.

Partcipating in this contest was truly a wonderful experience. I think 18 days...if we eliminate round 1 then its 15days...this 15 days long journey was such which i would surely remember for days.
When first I got to know about this contest, i just rushed to the thread so that i don't miss this golden opportunity! The first round was actually easy, i mean surely easier then the later ones LOL. I had been eagerly waiting to know whether i was selected or not. And honestly i was tensed when the results were not out even after 5 days!! And then when i saw the Round 2 thread and spotted my name in the sleceted memebers list...i was so damn happy...the feeling was like my article being selected for the National Youth Festival!! Seriously...
The second round was the most interesting and according to me the toughest one. That is because...firstly all the members of the team had to put a lot of effort to complete the task on time...secondly gathering all the memebers together in the CC was the TOUGHEST part...God, i mean seriously, one momnet i was feeling so helpless that what yhe hell is these, i can't even assemble all my team mates together? Enev for 10 minutes...This was a lesson...a lesson to me..that being a captain is certainly NOT n easy task especially when all are your best buddies and you can't even be strict...in these cases I find unfamiliar members quite suitable. LOL
So where was I...yeah...thirdly when its a team work there need to co operation. Lack of communication and time was a big obstacle for the team. Some of the members couldn't give time to it and truly speaking..i find myself also somewhere at fault. However, it was a winning moment when finally I could PM our Thread link entry! Felt as if a heavy load has been lifted up from my shoulders. Soon we go to know the results.
With bated breath i saw the winner team's name and i was quite dissapointed to find that we lost. But anyways, its always not about winning or losing...it's about partcipating and putting your best efforts. And when you lose, you realize your flaws, your mistakes and learn something new. That itself is great achievement.
Seeing Team Pratap as the winner was great as they were deserving...well organized write ups, tags and an amazing team work that also when 3 members are active...Kabil-e-tarif!!
The third round...I was disturbed after knowing about the accident which happened with my friend...a little depressed i had almost thought of quiting but when you've such amazing friends...you lose the right of quitting too LOL! Aru and Abhi motivated me and their motivation gave me strength.And finnally we are here, sending the final entries of this contest. I don't know whther i'll be alive to see the result...i'll seriously die out of suspence!!
Indeed an amazing experience it was to be a part of this fantastic contest which gives you the chance to showcase your talents and bring out the tru fan inside you. Not only that, I learnt many things, from being sleceted in round 1 to losing in round 2 to being slecetd for final face off to this very momnet.
Now, I can proudly say that I am a true BKVPMP fan who could make it upto round 3 and become the Finalist of the Adventurous Tale contes. Now, even i can all myself...umm...EXPERIENCED!


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Experience and Winning


I wasn't there at the first,and I don't know what happened in that time,but when,I got the message,about the selection thing,I was as happy as anyone else could be at my place,shouting and pinching myself,with a shock,a good shock,a shock which was the dream of my life.After a little time,I got the message which had the link to the R2 *~The Adventurous Tale Contest~*||Team Ajabde||',which was such a big news for me.My heart was just so thrilled seeing that.

At first,when I came to the contest,everyone congratulated me,even when I wasn;t there at first !I slowly settled in the group,and started planning for the contest.

I devoted as much time as possible ,for winning the contest,thinking,that if we win then at least I should have a contribution,and at least I should do whatever the team members and captain tell me.

Sometimes,there would be no one when I came,and when others came,I wouldn't have been there !!! It was a frightening experience for the starring one to two days ,but slowly everything became so good,that i couldn't imagine this happening and expecting after the first two days.

After a little time,We decided to go on the topic of the wedding,as all people agreed with this and luckily we got the topic,which was our first successful step.

We finalized Celana with the captain of the competition,and she really did deserve that,as she was so organized from the starting,and as we thought in the starting that she would be perfect,and she was,in everything,she did a fabulous job !

I did writeups as well,which was the most adorable task for me !!Everyone encouraged me so much for my signatures,that I devoted all the free time in that,and I had put up all the efforts in it.That encouragement and appreciation, somehow was really the best part of my journey.

All of us one by one told about episodes,discussed about some major parts which had to be enrolled in the Contest Page,and editing the pictures/siggys and from where to start the the topic... etc.

Sejal did writeups and did edits as well.

Zari di made beautiful edits and writeups.

Celana was an awesome organizer and writer <3.

We had chit-chats about deciding everything,and about planning,sometimes

but in all I got thrill and excitement,which was more than winning for me.

.Our friendship and trust for each other became more strong, which was the most lovely part here and also my written update being posted at the first .So thank you people for arranging this wonderful contest,its a lovely idea.Guys,bring out such ideas

cause more important would be the journey and moments spent with friends,and show your talent and be proud of it :)

Winning,frankly means a lot to me,actually to anyone it would be a lot,but their is something special about everyone's opinions about this !!!

I want to win this contest ,because I always wanted to do such a thing,maybe my school friends,teachers would not be here to praise me,to be proud of having such a girl like me with them,but here I literally am so addicted to India Forums,that,

If I even win something here,it would be a proud moment for me,for my buddies here,and not only friends,but the people you know,and some strangers,the ones you don't know,they also praise you in some or the other way which means a lot to you.The sense of excitement,love,appreciation,the praise,and the people who are feeling proud of you !Everyone wishes for this all in life,and when this special moment comes true,for a few seconds or minutes,you literally can't believe that you have won a contest,and you need someone to tell you,That you have WON THE CONTEST.At that moment,it does not bother you that it is big or small,but the thing which matters you on that particular moment is that your hard work and sincerety has showed its effect,and you are the winner of the contest.

I would have butterflies in my stomach :P,and love to win this contest.

For me,it would always fascinate me,whenever I would see the winners of some contests,of banner and stuff,and I always wanted to win something like that,and,I have tried to make signatures and all,but I could not do anything good in that,but still people here were so nice to me,that they appreciated and encouraged me even for my worst signatures,icons,banners etc,stories/writeups which meant so much for me,that I did my best at what I did.

Appreciation is a very big term for everyone,at any stage of life,for anything, whether that thing is bad,or good,The world likes it,every living-being likes it!

Life is all about winning and losing,sometimes people win,and sometimes they lose,but there is always hope and faith for better,and good,if we win its a big thing for us,a big appreciation for us but we shall never have overconfidence in it,we should always try our best,than keeping it always at the same level.And if we even lose,the best thing at that very moment is,not to cry,or feel sad,but to try harder,instead of hardly working the next time as you have not won this time,and feel good for your buddy,show up a little humanity instead of feeling jealous,and annoyed, plus not talking to that person,and give her the best wishes,and say "Congrats",greet him/her,and celebrate with him in his happiness,which will show your real nature,and friendship.

Maharana Pratap has always been a fab show for me,I loved the show,and this contest is as big for me as the show or any other very important thing in my life.


I knew every character in the show,and if I won the title of winning the contest of Maharana Pratap,this would be my greatest wish come true,because there was a stage when,I could do anything possible for winning any type of contest ,and I could have crammed every single thing about the characters.Not typing a very big shot,I would end it,and say that, winning this contest isn't an easy task,but I am trying my best,cause I wanna do the best in whatever I do,and I prove that thing.

Thank you :D :)


Edited by Abhishek_King - 10 years ago
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Abhi...
you said you'll update i mean unres the post today!!
Com'on yaar jaldi kar!
Excited to read mere dosto ki kahaani s aand experiences!!!!!
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ok,finally arranged all the things together...😆 Now,you all can read it and see it and also can give a feedback on it.😛

@Celu don't be much excited qki savdhaani hati,durghatna ghati!🤣🤣

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