Praja Ss:Mujhse Dosti Karogi ;)pt 13 updated on pg 22 - Page 10

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Aww! Cute update!! Love the cute nok-jokes!!
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Hello Lovely peoples..!! 🤗
How's u all..?
First of all thnkyou so much for beautiful comments..
And i'm extremely sry to u guys for not updating it..
So here's the nxt pt..
Hope u all ll enjoy reading it.. 😊
Praja Ss:Mujshe Dosti Karogi ;)
Part-7
The story starts with praja nok jok nd chakrapani and veenidas entering the hotel..
C-(Seeing pratap)"Are bhaujiraj aap yaha kya kar rahe ho..?Humari meeting toh us table par hai na..?Aur ye..ye..toh wahi madir wali chori hai na.."(says looking towards ajab)
P-"Ha ye wahi hai.."
R-(seeing pratap)Hii bhai..tum yaha kse..?
P-"Hey rattan..actually wo aaj meri office meeting thi yaha.."
R-"O acha..btw pratap ye koun hai.."(says looking towards chakri nd venni)
P-"O..ye mere frnd's chakrapani aur vennidas hai..aur guys..ye ajabde aur ratan hai.."
C-"O Hello ji"..
Venni-"Hello.."
R&A-"Hello.."(nd smiles)
"Chakrapani pratap ke haath se khoon nikaltha dekh khetha tha hai.."
C-(worriedly)" Bhaujiraj aapke haath se khoon nikal raha hai.."
"Ajabde chakrpani ki baat sun pratap k haath ki aur dekhthi hai aur dar jati hai.."
A-(worriedly)"Khoon..tumhe chot lagi thi.."
P-"Chill yar its ok mamulisi chot hai..kal thak thik ho jayegi..dnt wry.."(wrink)
A-"What..?Mamulisi ye tumhe mamulisi chot lag rahi hai..tumhara khoon beh raha hai aur tum..tumne mujhe phele kyu nahi bataya.."
P-"Ajab calm down..its ok yar..i'm fine.."
A-"No u r nt fine..dekho kitni chot lagi hai tumhe..rattan sun bag m se hanki dena plz.."
(Ajab ka barthav dekh sabhi heran ho jate hai..)
R-(in mind)ye jiji ko achanak kya ho gaya..inhe toh bhai pasand nahi..aur ye bhai ko chot kse lagi..?"(confused)
A-"O hello madam..!!Kha kho gayi..?Jaldi se hanki de.."
R-(Cuming to sense)"Ha..de rahi hu.."
Pratap chakrapani aur vennidas ko apne aur dekhtha dekh ajeeb lagtha hai aur unse dimhi awaz m puchtha hai..
P-(seeing chakri &Venni)"What..?tum dono mujhe ese kyu dekh rahe ho.."
C-"Wo..kuch nahi bhaujiraj..hum toh bus ye dekh rahe ki humara pyaara eklauta frnd kse itna badal gaya hai.."
P-(irritated)"What do u mean..?"
C-"I mean..mera bhai jo ladkiyo se sau (100) kosh dur rehtha tha wo aaj ek ladki se hanki bandwo raha hai..kisine sach kha hai haalat insaan se kya kya karva de dete hai.."
P-"You guys.."
"Ise phele pratap apni baat puri kar pta ajab ki awaz use rokh deti hai.."
A-"You ok nw..?"
P-Yes (nd smiles)
R-"Di mujhe bohot joroki bhuk lagi hai..abh toh chuve bhi uchal uchal k thak gaye hai..
C-"Kya..chuve..kha..kha hai..bhaujiraj plz help.."
P-"Had hai yar chakri kitna dartha hai re tu..rattan matlab tha use bhuk lagi hai.."
R-"Chalo guys kuch order karthe hai.."
P-"Ok toh pizza thik rahega..?"
R-"Thik nahi dorega.."(wrink)
Aftersome time,
P-"Acha guys chalo tum dono ko m ghar thak drop kar deta hu.."
R-(with bright smile)"ok bhai.."
A-"Umm..No thanks hum khud chale jayengye.."
P-(in mind)"Ye..abh ise kya hua abhi toh thik thi aur abhi..gawd..Ye ladki humesha tedi ki tedi he rahegi..nakchadi chipkali kahe ki..abh kya karu esa jo ye turant chalne k liye man jaye..soch beta soch..Idea"
(Cuming to sense with innocent look)Ha..thik hai..ok..as u wish..bus agar wo gundhe tumhe fir kahe mil jaye toh tum khud unshe nipat lena..ok toh fur m chaltha hu.."(nd moves forward)
R-(Confused)"Kya kha..?gundhe..?"
P-(moving frwd)"Common man jao..common.."
A-"Hum..hum tyaar hai tumhare saath chalne k liye.."
P-(happily) "Ye hui na baat.."(wrink)
A-"Ji.."
P-(innocent look)"Umm..i mean chale..its already late.."
(in mind)"Yes!!Finally man gayi.."
A-"Hmm.."
R-(still confused)"Bt..di..pratap kuch khe rahe the..gundhe kuch.."
A-(trying to hide truth)"Wo..kuch nahi..tum bhi na ratan aaj kal kuch jayada he sunne lag gayi ho.."
R-(talking to herself)"Really..?M kuch jayada he sunne lag gayi hu..?"
A-"Abh chal bhi yar.."
In car..
P-"Umm..btw tum itna kyu dar gayi un gundho ka naam sunkar..aur tumne hume rattan ko batane kyu nahi diya.."
A-"Hum dare nahi the.. humne isliye batane nahi diya coz hum nahi chate ki ratan humare karan tension le.."
P-"O acha.."
After few min,
P-"Acha tumhara koi boyfriend hai kya..?"
A-"What..?Boyfriend..?"
P-"Ha boyfriend..kyu..kya hua..tum itna shock kyu ho gayi..i mean its normal na..tumhari age ki ladkiyo k pass boyfriend hote hai hai..toh.."
A-(irritated)"What..?Normal..?I dnt hv boyfriend.. "
P-"Hmm..tabhi tum esi ho.."
A-(seeing pratap)"What..?Kya kha tumne..?"
P-(innocently)"Nahi toh..Kuch bhi toh nahi kha.."
A-"Waise tumhari koi girlfriend hai..?"
P-(in mind)"Hmmm...mera q mujhe p hi mar rahi hai.."
A-(snapping fingers)"Are kha kho gaye..?humne kuch pucha tha tumshe..?
P-"Ha i hv girlfriend.."
A-"Tabhi bhi tum ese ho.."
P-"What..?"
A-"Kuch nahi..tum nahi samjogye.."(wrink)
"Pratap aur ajab dono hasne lagthe hai..Aur Pratap radio chalu kartha hai.."
Radio-"Toh abh sunte hai agla geet jo ki hai Meherbhaan hua rab"
"Pratap Smiles looking at ajab nd remember their first meeting in shiv temple.."
A-(seeing pratap)"Kya hua..tum humari aur dekh k ese mushkura kyu rahe ho.."
P-(mischievously)"Kyu..meri aakhe hai..m kabhi dekhu aur mushkurau..any pro.."
A-(in mind)"Kabhi seedha jawab nahi dega..akhdu bandar.."
(irritated)"Nahi toh mujhe kyu pro hone lagi..kahi bhi dekho.."
R-"Bhai increase the volume plz na.."
P-"ok.."
R-(seeing venni)"Tum thik ho.."
V-(in mind)"Itni beautiful ladki pass m beti ho toh koi bhala kse thik ho sakta hai.."
R-"Hello..kha kho gaye..mne kuch pucha tumse.."
V-"Ha yes i'm fi9..btw tum bohut beautiful lag rahi ho.."
R-"Aww..!!Thnkyou..!!"
"Finally after few minutes they reach their destination.."
A-"Are rukh kyu gaye.."
P-"Wo kya hai na madamji aapka ghar aa gaya hai..Ha agar aap chathi ho toh we can go on long drive ya date bhi ja sakte hai..i dnt hv any pro.. wat say (wrink)
A-"No thnks..!!"
P-"Ok toh fir kabhi chalengye..teh raha.."
"Both of them smile looking at each other.."
"Sabhi gadi se uthar the hai..but ajab ka dupatta gadi k darwazese adh jata hai..aur ajab use nikal ki kosis karthi hai..pratap ajab ko dekh uski shayatha kar ne lagtha hai.."
A-"Thnkyou..!"
"Ye bol k ajab jane hi lagthi hai ki tabhi ajab ka per ratan k per se adh jata hai aur wo apna balance kho deti hai kintu pratap sahi samaye pe ajab ko girnese bacha leta hai aur Aur barish hone lagthi hai.."
"And they hv beautiful eyelock.."
(Bg music Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara..
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Ye, Paas Aa Jayein
Hum, Hum Tum, Tum,Hum Tum
Aankhon Mein Humko Utarne Do Zara
Baanhon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai...Hum Tum
Saanson Ko...)

Ok guys abhi k liye bus itna he..
Nxt pt ll b updated tomorrow..
Plz do comment nd hit like if u liked nd enjoyed reading it..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ek tho itne time k baad update us ka clear cut asar stry me dhiking..
acha khasa normal style me thi pichle update me n kr diya siyappa is me fullon pauranik style..waise stry tho msdt h bt average..
Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
So cute! 😳
Update tom only okay? No delayy!! xP
Thanks for the PM. :)
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Baapre yeh heroines girti boht hai... N pratu to pura hero mode Mein hai... Par yeh kya? Gf?? Ab yeh kaunsa kaata hai. Lol. Waiting for your next update !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome gal..Keep the updates coming ! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Ppls!
I'm bk with nxt pt 😉
Hope u all ll like it..

Praja Ss:Mujshe Dosti Karogi ;)
Part-8
The story starts with pratap saving ajabde..
Kb-"Oye jiji k boyfriend..mere jiji se dur hat.."
"Hearing the kuwar balwant voice both of come to sense.."
P-(Breaking the eyelock first)"Umm..u ok na..?'
A-"Yes..thnks..!!"(smiles)
P-"ok.."
A- "Balwant tu yaha kya kar raha hai aur ye kounsa tareeka hai badose baat karne ka.."
R-(seeing Mm standing near the window of room)"Hmm..jiji..chale..."
A-"Ha chal..bt tu itni dari hui kyu hai..kuch hua kya.."
R-"Jiji..datta..room..window.."(says looking towards room window)
A-"Mar gaye.."
P-"Ok then hum bhi chalthe hai.."
A-"Ok..bye.."(smiles)
P-"What..y u guys looking at me..?"
C-"Wo bhaujiraj hum dono ko bhi ghar drop kardo na plz.."
P-"Kyu..aaj bus aur auto ki strick hai kya..?"
V-"Hum khe rahe the na chakri abh bhaujiraj humare wo wale bhaujiraj nahi rahe..wo badal gaye hai.."
C-"Ha yar sach kha..aapse ye umeed nahi thi bhaujiraj..aapne humare saath esa kyu kiya bataeye bhaujiraj..bataeye.."
P-"Tum dono na kabhi nahi sudhrogye..nautanki khe k..chalo abh car m betho.."
In ajabde's house..
R-"Jiji abh humara kya hoga.."
A-"Gawd plz bacha lena plz.."
Mm-"Kha se aa rahe ho tum dono.."
A-'D..datta..wo..wo...hum shopping karne gaye the..wo..kal rattan k project submission ka last date hai isliye.."
R--"J..ji..datta..hum project ka saman lene gaye the..
Mm-Acha..toh fir saman kha hai..dikho toh jara.."
R-"Wo..jiji k pass hai.."
A-"Ha hum abhi dikhathe hai datta.."
Mm-"Jaldi ajab.."
"Ajab was shocked nd confused as the shopping bag was missing"
A-(in mind)"Hey eklingji bhag kha gaya..abh hum datta ko kya bole.."
Mm-"Kha kho gayi..dikhao hume wo saman.."
A-"D..datta..wo..bhag humse khe kho gaya.."
Hb-"Are aap bhi na ji..firse apni question bank leke shuru ho gaye..bache abhi aaye hai thak gaye hongye..unhe bhuk lagi hogi..aur waise bhi ye dono sach khe rahi hai.."
Mm-"Toh fir wo ladka koun tha.."
Kb-"Jiji ka boyfriend.."
A-"Are mere bhai..kyu mujhe marwane p thula hai..chup ho ja.."
Mm-"Kya boyfriend.."
A-"Nahi nahi datta wo humara kuch nahi hai.."
R-"Ha jiji sach khe rahe hai..datta wo humare frnd ka bhai hai..jo bus hume ghar thak drop karne aaya tha.."
A-"Ha datta aur usne he toh humari jaan bachayi hai aaj.."
"Everyone standing there was shocked.."
R-(in mind)"Hein..?Pratap ne jiji ko bachaya..but kab aur kis se..?Aur jijine humse ye baat kyu chupai..?"
Mm&Hb-"Jaan bachayi..?Matlab..kya hua tha ajab..?"
A-"Ji..datta..ma..aaj jab hume kuch ladke ched rahe the tab pratap ne he hum bachayatha.."
Hb&Mm-"Tum thik ho na ajab.."
A-"Ji.."
Mm-Ok nw u can go in ur room..
A&R-Ji datta..
In Car..
"Pratap apne frnds ko chod car m bettha hai k tabhi uski nazar ajab k bag ki aur jati hai.."
P-(talking to himself) "Are..?Ye bag kis ki hai..?(nd opens the bag )Are..ye..toh project ka saman hai..par ye yaha kse..?Khe ye ajab ki toh nahi..?"
In Ajab's House..
R-"Jiji yaad kijiye na aapne wo bhag kha rakh di..kal project submission ki last date hai.."
A-"Ha ha yar yaad kar rahi hu..tu shaant ho ja.."
R-"Ok toh aap yaad karo m aati hu.."
After few min..
A-(tensed)"Hey bhagwan..Khe wo bhag.."
P-"Ji ha wo bhag mere pass hai.."
A-"Tum..?Yaha..?"
P-"Ha..m yaha..kyu tum kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thi kya..?"
A-"Nahii...wo..hum..?"
P-"Matlab tum mere intezzar kar rahi thi..?"
A-"Nahii..humne esa kab kha.."
P-"Toh fir..?"
A-"Tum humari chodo khud ki bolo..tum yaha kse aaye.."
P-"Ye kse q hai.. ofcourse car se.."
A-"Haha soo funny..mera matlab room se tha..tum humare room m kse aaye.."
P-"Window se.."(wrink)
A-"Kya window se.."
P-"Ha i knw thodisi choti hai..bt..its ok mne adjust kar liya.."
A-"Tumhe kisi ne dekha toh nahi.."
P-"Ha dekha tha.."
A-(tensed)"Kya..kisne.."
P-"Actually..mujhe na pedho(trees) ne..asaman ne aur asaman m jilmila rahe stars ne dekha tha.."
A-"Hey bhagwan..agar kisi ne tumhe yaha dekhliya toh..pta nahi kya sochengye...abh hum kya kare.."
P-(cuming closer to ajab)"Jis ko jo sochna hai sochne do.."
A-(gng bkward)"Tum..tum thik ho na.."
R-"Jiji..aap thik toh ho na..aapne darwaza kyu band kar liya.."
A-"Hey bhagwan rattan..abh hum kya kare.."
P-Darwaza kholo..
A-"Are u mad.."
Mm-"Kya hua ratan..?"
A-"Hey bhagwan..abh toh datta bhi aa gaye..abh hum kya kare.."
R-"Datta wo di dawarza nahi khol rahi hai.."
Mm-"Kya..tumne hume phele kyu nahi bataya.."
R-"Wo..datta.."
Mm-"Acha kitni der se nahi khola darwaza..?"
R-"5 min ho gaye..aur di andar se rply bhi nahi kar rahi.."
Mm-"Acha.."
In room..
A-"Tum yaha se jao abhi.."
P-"Nahii.."
A-"See u r nt getting it..agar kisine hume ek saath dekh liya toh.."
P-"Toh..?"
A-"Toh datta hum dono ka ek saath ticket katwa dengye..jao na yaha se.."
P-"Ok thik hai m ja raha hu..bt ek condition p.."
A-"What..Condition nw..?"
P-"Humari date.."
A-"Kya..date..?Aur wo bhi tumhare saath no ways.."
P-"Thik hai toh fir m yahi hu.."
A-"Ok ok m sochuning..nw u go.."
P-"Thik toh m chala..are...ek min phele jis kaam k liye aaya tha wo toh bata du.."
A-"Jaldi bolo.."
P-"Ye tumhara bag car m reh gaya tha.."
A-"Thnks.."
P-"My pleasure mam..!!"
A-"ok abh jao.."
P-"Are itni bhi kya jaldi hai.."
A-"Gawd..!!"
P-"Ok ok gng.."(nd moves 2wrds main door)
A-"O hello..wha kha chal diye.."
P-"Tum ne he bola yaha se jane k liye.."
A-Mera matlab tha jaha se aaye ho wha se jao..
P-"What..?u mean window..? yar wo bohut choti hai.."
A-"Jao na plz..see abh toh pakka wo log andhar aa jayengye.."
P-"Toh kal tyaar rehena.."
A-(confused)"Kisliye..?"
P-"Are tum fir bhul gayi humari date hai.."(wrink)
A-"Bt mne ha kab kha.."
P-"Tumne kha u ll think dat means yes..ok toh m chala.."
Precap-Praja ki first date ;)


Ok Done with update..
Plz do let me knw hw it was through ur comments..
Nxt prt ll b updated 2mrw..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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mast mast mast stry che!!strt to end full on mazedaar tha.. language b sudri is me tho 😆 me waiting for nxt update
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awesome update

loved it

thanks for pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!! I love it!!! Read all the other chapters and they're marvellous...update soon if possible 😊

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