OS #1
Scene - The last meet of PrAja where Pratap told Ajabde that he hates her.
She rushed up the stairs. She knew things will be better if Raani Maa helped her out. She climbed up the stairs with hurried steps. Staggering a little, she managed to reach the place where she expected her to be. As she was about to enter the place, she was stopped by her husband's voice. She was not expecting to see him here. As she was about to speak, he stopped her. And the next thing she knew was that she was being accused of sending Raani Maa away by the only person she trusted the most. She had expected a little support and trust from him. But what he did and said broke her heart into millions of pieces. Pieces which she will never be able to collect. Silent tears flowed down her cheeks but he didn't care to stop. She looked at him with the last hope but her hope was also crushed mercilessly when he stated that he hated her and will always continue to hate her. She was not given a chance to explain herself, to justify herself and tell her side of the story. Oh wait! There was no story. She was not even there in the picture. How can her presence make Raani Maa go away. How can one person's existence destroy many other lives. She thought bitterly. One last time, throwing an accusing glance at him she made her point clear by saying that when his hate turns into love once again, come back to her. But again he failed her, her trust and her confidence. She had loved him to the maximum extent possible but what she got was not even an ounce of what she deserved. She sighed and wiped her tears. No more crying. She saw her father standing right infront of her and listening to each and every word of their conversation. She again noticed some change in his expressions and body language. Her world came crashing down as she saw her father faint and fall on the floor. And that's how a new Ajabde, a new fighter, a new leader was born.
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Edited by -phenomenal- - 10 years ago
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