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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aayu_26

Nice update yaar. Itna wait karne ke baad ek mast update mile. The button wala part was very cute. Especially when pratap was niharofying ajabde's beauty. Ab next update thoda zyada jaldi karna

thank you aayu 😳
Yup will update soon. I m quite lazy 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Cute update. Big suspense at the end. It seems Pratap's parents already know Ajabde.

thank you 😳

Nanana wring guess.
Wait for update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -zainab

Superbbb!!! <3 <3
Loved it
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

<font color="#6600FF">awesome update
Loved it


Thanks for the pm kamu 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">Aww love this line "yaha aakar v ghur sakti ho, main kuchnhi bolunga"😆😉Beautiful update! Can't wait to see their reaction for their shadiAye Haye!! Continue ASAP! Thanks for the PM!😊</font>

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 8

Recap : Pratap Parents tells him about his Marriage fixing.

There was a complete silence in room. PrAja were shocked but they themselfes didn know why they were shocked.

M: Itna sanaata kyun hai bhai. Tum dono ke chehre par 12kyun bje huye hai, as if koi contract haath se nikal gaya.

P: not to worry son. Itni jaldi nhi hai hume. Tum aaram se iske bare mein soch lo phir hume batana.

Pratap gave fake smile to his dad. 'I need to reach office soon its late'' said ajabdhe in low voice

'wait for a moment, main v apna bag lekar aata hun, saath mein chalengein'' Replie pratap to ajabdhe.

A: nhi I'll manage.

P: are it ok ajab, pratap v office hi jaa raha h get along with him.

A: yes sir, she said with fake smile.

They both left for office, There was again a complete silence in the car. They were not speaking to eahch other. Both were lost in their own t thoughts. Remembering each and every moment they have spended together. After some while Ajabdhe broked the silence.

A: (trying to speak happily) BTW congratulation, tumhari shaadi tai hogayi h.

P: maine ispar apni HAA nhi boli hai.

A: aaj nhi toh kal bol hi doge.

Pratap looked at ajabdhe in an angry look and stopped the car.

P: main haa bolunga ki nhi tumhe iski fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai. Get that. Ye meri life and nobody has the right to take the decision. Got it. So no more discussion on this topic.

Ajabdhe was scared for a moment. She has never seen this Pratap ealier.

They reached office. Both of them went to there respective cabin.

There was a knock at pratap cabbin door. May I comein sir' said the staff.

P: yes !!

S: sir your sign is needed on this document.

P: wait a second, ye kaam ajandhe ka hai na, where is she ( shouted pratap )

S: woo... woo unhone mujhe bhej diya, bolkar ki unhe kuch imp kaam hai.

P: WTH inn larkiyo ke tantrums is out of my mind., get out and send her fast. Ya wait main hi jaata hoon.

He went to ajabdhe, Made her turn towards him and holded his arms tightly giving her pain.

'Tumhari problem kya hai, subh se jabse mummy papa aaye hai yum weirdly behave kar rahi ho. Jo mujhe acha nhi lagata wahi kar rahi ho. Samjh nhi aata hai I m not liking this at all 'sai pratap anagrily

Oouch you hurting me and she pushed him, and she turned her face from him hiding the tears.

Ohhh you two are here ' entered Pratap dad.

P: dad aap yahan.

D: haan mujhe aana padaa. Actually important hai, ek important business contract ke silsile mein tumdono ko delhi jaana hoga, its very important.

Ajabdhe was about to say but was cut off by pratap dad, and I hope tum dono mujh Dissappoint nhi karoge.

Ya ajab bolo kya keh rahi thi.

A: jii,, kuch nhi.

And haa tum dono ko abhi 3 hrs mein nikalna hoga. So go home and pack your things, get all the imp. Documents with you. And ajab iss contract ke baare mein pratap tumhe raaste mein bataa dega.

Ummm yah dad, ofcourse, giving a naughty evil smile to ajab.

P: ek kaam karo go home pac the things and I will pick u up. Before she could deny the offer he cuts her ' so that main tumhe abhi se hi contract ke baare mein bata doon and winks.

He and his dad left the room.

Uurghhh !!! had hai, kabhie gussata hai kabhie hasta. Paagal h ye.

She keft the office and went home, packed all the things.

Ajab ajab fast beta dhekho pratap aagaya h ' said her mom

Coming - said ajabdhe.

She got down took blessing and hugged her mom and they both left.

ON THE WAY TO AIRPORT:-

Pratap was staring ajabdhe and smiling. She was looking out of the window. Her hair was flying on face and she was enjoying the cold breeze after the rain. Pratap was adoring her beauty. He removed the hair from her face. Ajabdhe shiver again from insisde. She wonder y everytym he touch her and she enjoys it and every touch gives her shiver inside.. coming back to sense.

A: kya kar rahe ho.

P: what?

p: tumhare lambe lambe baalo ke wajah se mujhe bahar nhi dhikh raha hai.

a: kya ?

P: kya kya?

A: company ne dono side window diya hai,

P; meri aankhein hai main jidhar chahe udhar ke nazare dhekun.

A: kya musibaat hai. And she angrily took one cluthcher out and tied her hair.

P: ye kya ? khule baalo mein jaida achi lagti ho.

And he opens it.

A : hawww!! How dare you touching my hair. And she tied again.

And he opened it again.

A: urghhh !!! man karta hai jaan lelun.

P: itne si hi tang hogayi abhi toh pura safar baaki ai baby doll (wink)

A: pagal insaan (she spoke to her herself)

P: kuch kaha tumne ?

A: tum contract ke baare mein kuch batane waale the.

P: haa. Acha kiya yaad dila diya.

Toh matter is this... ( now you all imagine yourself what discussion they di, ri8 now brain not working)

And they reached airport.

Driver : sir airport aagaye.

P : are wah pata v nhi chala. Dhekha ajabdhe mere ssath baat karte pata v nhi chala tumhe aur tum airport v aagayi.

A: haaa,, wait what. Tum pagal hogaye h aaj.

They did all checking stuffs at airport and got in plane.

Ajabdhe was quite scared, coz it was first tym she was travelling in Air. She was all sweating but didn want to tell Pratap, coz he would have make fun of her. She was all sweating.

p: mujhe pata hai ki main hawt hoon par itna v nhi hun ki tumhe paseena aaye. Are you alright ajab.

A: yaa !! wo bahar bht garmi thi toh mujhe garmi lag rahi hai.

P: heinn.. um pehli baar travel kar rahi ho plane mein ?

A: she looked at him shockingly. Kya? Nhi toh.

P: ohh common itne dino mein main tumhe itna toh jaan hi chukka hunk i tumhe jhooth bolna nhi aata.

Agar tum mujhe bata deti toh main tumhara Mazak nhi udata.

'good afternoon all. This your Captain Aakash We are about to take off for Delhi. We will reaching to Mumbai in one hour. Have a safe flight''

A: hey bhagwan rakhsha kariyo.

P: ek kaam karo mera haath pakadlo,

A: wat ?

P: wat wat mat karo meri maa, haath pakadlo nhi toh dar lagega jab plain take off karega

A: mujhe darr nhi lagta.

P: ok as you wish.

we are reday to take off plzz tighten up your seat belt informed Captain to paasenger.

Ajab tighten the seat belt, by seeing other people how they are tightening it up it.

P: are wah! Mann na padega ki you are smart.

Ajabdhe hold pratap arm tightly as the plain take off, and closed her eyes very tightly, Pratap being naughty put his hand on her shoulder and hold her tightly. Coming to sense ajabdhe pushed him.

A: I m fine now.

She was afraid of looking ouside coz she was fearing from height. She closed the eys and slept. Pratap was staring her inncence.

Bahut kuch kehna chahti ho par kehti kyun nhi tum, koi baat nhi ek baar meeting hojaane do phir main, and he smiled and he too slept

Plain landed to Mumbai. Ajabdhe wake up and found her head lying on Pratap shoulder, she stares her and meanwhile Pratap also got up and They had a eyelock. After few second they got into senses and got down from aircraft.

P: uff itni garmi hai.

Pratap mobile vibrate, there was msg, Meeting delay. Tomorrow 2PM.

P: meeting delayed.

A: ab kya kare.

P: abhi hotel chalet hai, phir sham ko Mumbai ghumne niklengein. Is it ok with you.

A: yup

They reached hotel,

P: tum yaha baitho main aata hun,

A: hmm

P: umm hello !

Receptionist: good evening sir ! may I hlp you.

P : I need two rooms, for two days.

R : let me check sir. Umm, I m sorry only one room is available.

P: ok np. I get in another hotel.

R: sorry sir, you wont get two rooms in any hotels, marriage season is going on so the rooms everywhere are booked.

P: what ? umm ok book it.

R : yes sir. Heres your key, aapka luggage aapke room mein pahuncha diya jaayega.

P: thank you !

Phewww!!!!

Guess its my longest update ever. Hope you all enjoy. I m tired now. Working with next part. Till then you all enjoy reading this.

Edited by ...Kamu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kamu *kissie* online aate hi tera surprise ..jee bawdo ho gayeo.
tera itna bada surprise..pehli baar diya h bina warning diye😆i'm impressed 😃 n dat too long update..
tere stry se jyaada stry k beech jho tere 1 liners hota h wo jyaada funny hota h
is me precap nhi diya ...acha hua warna soch soch k mera jaan jal jaata 😆
uff kya stry likhi kamu me tho fida ho gai..
waiting 4 nxt update
"Hum tum ek kamre me band ho wala"😆
Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy an update!!!
Nice- can see the dilemma both of them are facing wais my fav was "Toh matter is this... ( now you all imagine yourself what discussion they di, ri8 now brain not working)"

Maine toh cartoons ke baare mein discussion socha🤣

Loved it and waiting for the next one after all ab ek hi room mein rehna hai dodno ko toh mazaa aayega

Update thoda soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Yayyy an update!!!
Nice- can see the dilemma both of them are facing wais my fav was "<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Toh matter is this... ( now you
all imagine yourself what discussion they di, ri8 now brain not working)"

Maine toh cartoons ke baare mein discussion socha🤣

Loved it and waiting for the next one after all ab ek hi room mein rehna hai dodno ko toh mazaa aayega

Update thoda soon
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loll 😆 😆 Garima 🤣
My mind wasn't working that tym so wrote this. And was important meeting mein cartoon 😕 🤣

Update, yup on way of writing.

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