PrAja SS---Updated Part-2 **My Love....My Life-Ajabdeh**...!.!

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Hello Friendzz...
This Is My First PrAja SS And The Last One Also...Will Miss RoSal As PrAja Lottt..!.!!..!! So For Them And For U All...

I And My Best Friend Shivani-She Is Not On IF But A Regular MRP Viewer And Also Loves RoSal/PrAja A Lott...So She Helped Me A Lot In This SS...Infact I Just Had A Plot In Mind And She Has Written In For...
So A Joint SS My *Vrush-Shivzz*
It Will Have 2 Parts...
Njoy Reading...!!.!


*"...My LOVE...My LIFE-AJABDEH..."*

We were xactly in the middIe of the forests where d Bhils resided ! They had enthusiastically participated in my wedding n now it ws my turn to reciprocate ther love n support so I reached der with my Ajabde..I got down frm my horse n turned to luk at her...she smiled as she got down frm d the Palkhi... I wanted to smile back at her buh was interrupted by a voice saying''Arre KP aapka...Swagat hai aapka... Vilamb na karein.aaiye.!!! " The Bhils gathered to wlcm me n Ajabde!! She smiled at them n joined hands!! Another Bhil spoke up.."Ajabde baisaa...aapka bhi swagat hai!!! "It felt great to be welcomed in such a heart-warming way by the Bhils!!! Instantly the women got garlands n aarti ka thaal.. N were elated at our arrival-
"kunwar pratap..Ajabde baisa ...aap dono yahan padhare ...hum to dhanya ho gaye!! Almost the entire Bhil community had arrived there!!
The Bhil sardar invited us to their home..." Kunwar Pratap..hamara ghar naahi hi bada hai aur naahi aapke mahal jaisa Aalishaan...par aapke khatirdaari mein hum koi kami nhi chhodenge...yeh hamara vaada hai!!" Ajabde luked at me n I nodded at her!! I cud sense her happiness n xcitemnt!! Our eyes met n she beamed at me as we stepped into the house!! It was small but well-kept... We were offered seats...The Bhil sardar said to me " Kunwar Pratap humein aapse kuch baat karni hai !! N gestured me to cum aside!
The Bhil men soon got into a discussion abt the strategies regarding the protection of Mewar empire frm the Mughals...I liked few of der ideas n guided them thru the others...It was aftr a very long dat I realised Ajabde would be waiting for me...
I politely excused myself frm the discussion n went to look for her...She was'nt der ...I was tensed n so asked a lady who was busy preparing sum delicious feast... She giggled n said" Kunwar Pratap,. Woh rahi aapki bindani...!" pointing towards
Ajabde who was laughing n talking to the ladies outside... I cud hear dem talking ! Ajabde was guiding them abt gardening n abt growing vegetables!!"
I really was impressed wid the way Ajab was xplaining them abt dose things!! She was smarter than me in knowing such things yet so grounded !! time n again, Her simplicity struck me !! My mind drifted to thinking how Ajabde effortlessly impressed me every single tym,... I sighed!!! :);)
I was brought bck to reality when a Bhil lady came n said " Chaliye Kunwar Pratap, bhojan tayyar!" I said... Haan ...aa rahe hai hum!!! N my eyes again flew to Ajabde!! Yet again our eyes met n I gestured her to cum!

Soon after we were seated in a huge room with black-tiled flooring.A huge banana leaf with delicacies was before my eyes!! I said to Ajabde, - "Aapko har vishay ke baare mein itni saralta se jankaari kaise hoti hai! Hum kaafi prabhavit hain!!"
She blushed n replied-"Ab Hamara vivaah.. Rajputane k Sarvagun sampanna Rajkumar se jo hua hai! Toh aapki patni hone ke naate.. Humein bhi gyaan rakhna chahiye!!!" She widened her eyes appealingly!! I loved when her eyes said sumthing which her lips didnt!!

Soon we were done with the feast!! It really tasted good though it was bit different from what we usually ate!
The Bhil sardar said- "Kunwar Pratap.. Asha hai ki aapko bhojan accha laga hoga!! Humein badi prassanata hui ki aap Dono yahan aaye!!"
I said "Dhanyawaad toh humein aap sab Ka karna chahiye ! Aap ne hum logon ka itna accha swagat kiya aur bhojan toh Bohot swadisht tha!!"
Then a mid-aged Bhil lady standing in the corner came near Ajabde n said- Humein
Toh yeh sochkar bada garv mehsoos ho raha hai ki aap jaise vinamra Aur Gunvan Stri Hamari Kuvrani Hai Jo Badi Hai Sehejta Ke Saath Sabhi Ke Sang Ghulmil Jaati Hai Bina Kise Garv Ya Antar Ke Saath...Hum Sach Mein Dhanya Ho Gaye Aap Se Milkar Baisa...
To dis my Ajab immediately responded '"Kakisa aap yeh kaisi baatein keh rahi hai...kya hua agar hum Kunwarani hai hain toh... Hum bhi sadharan stree hi hai, aur hum sabka aadar apne mann se kartein hai!!!
Then the Bhils raised the cry-"Ajabde Baisa ki Jay!!! Kunwar Pratap ki Jay!!!!
We left the place since it was beginning to get dark!!!

Precap:PrAja Romance

I Hope U All Liked The First Part...
I'll Update The Second Part Soonn...Do Comment And Like

Thank You
Vrush-Shivzz
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wow...it was awesome...plz pm me when u update.
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very well written... 😊
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fab dr update soon. ...
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Part 2: Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan... Maaf Ho ! :* <3

Ranima wore a worried expression when we reached back at our Mahal !
I beamed at her -"Ranima...hum aa gaye ..aap... Aap chintit lag rahi hai !"
She immediately rushed towards me and said " Kahan the aap ...kitna pareshaan the Hum...!"
I comforted her ,"Humein Kshama kar dijiye ke humne itna samay aapko intezar karwaya !
Ranima said ," Chaliye ab aap dono bhojan kar lijiye..." I really wanted to talk to Ajabde and spend some time with her so I quickly retorted, "Ranima humne bhojan kar liya hai aur hum bohot thak gaye hai...hum aapse anumati mangte hai - Kya hum apne kaksh mein jakar Vishram karein ..??!"
I looked at Ajabde who stood by my side ...she said ," Hum bhi chalte hai Ranima ! "
She mischievously smiled and went into her room !

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I jumped into Ajabde 's room after making sure no one was watching me... I luked all around ..She was nowhere to be seen ! The windows were open n I cud see the dark sky wid the specks twinkling far away.. There existed a beautiful vibe in the entire room- Ajabde 's presence was truly magical ... I walked further to look for her n suddenly felt warm hands on my eyes... The world went dark ! I knew it was her , I raised my hands n kept dem on hers " Ajabde humein pata hai aap hi hai ! Ab apne haath hata bhi dijiye "
She giggled in her beautiful voice " Kunwar Pratap , aise nahi hataenge hum apne haath ... Pehle apko humare saath chalna hoga ! " I felt the xcitement in her voice. I tried to make guesses about wat it wud be but failed to. Retaining her soft hands on my eyes she slowly helped me move !
"Abhi hum apne haath hata rahe hai...!" She slowly slid her hands from my eyes and we were standing in the balcony attached to her room ! I gazed at her beautiful face noticing evry single detail of hers... She was as usual smiling beautifully and her eyes gleamed with happiness !
She looked up into the sky n spoke up " Dekhiye na Kunwar Pratap ... Aaj Aakash kitna chamak raha hai ! Aise lag raha hai mano ke saare sitaare humare liye hi chamak rahe hain ! " It was indeed a mesmerising sight , the sky luked exceptionally beautiful ! The stars seemed more in number from wat they were on the other days ... I thot to myself abt how Ajabde noticed it before me ! She was so genuine and simple ... She sought happiness in the smallest of things ! I smiled to myself !
Her voice was full of happiness n she turned towards me n tenderly said, "Kunwar Pratap , humein badi prassanata ho rhi hai aakash ko dekhkar !
I immediately added " Aur humein bhi ...apko dekhkar ! "
She , all of a sudden fell silent ! I luked straight into her eyes , they were beginning to get moist. There was an inexplicable emotion in dem ...! I cud see all of it in her eyes- her love for me and happiness that finally we were together. There was no need for the either of us to say anything, our eyes did the talking !
I went yet closer to her and drew her towards me in a warm embrace under the starry sky ! The beautiful surroundings added to the romance and our love for eachodah ! I kissed her forehead and said , "Ajabde... Humein bada garv hota hai ki hamara vivaah aap se hua ! Humein pura vishwas hai ki jeevan ke marg par , pag-pag aap hamara saath dengi !
Humein ab galtiyan karne ka bhay nahi lagta kyonki ab humein pata hai ki ap hongi hamesha hamari galtiyon ko sudharne ke liye...humein sambhalne ke liye ! "
I released her from my arms n she replied " Kunwar Pratap , ... It felt so nyc to hear my name from her mouth . She continued " Hum aapse jitna prem kartein hai utna hi apka samman karte Hai... Achha laga humein yeh jaankar ki aap hum pe Itna vishwas karte hai ! Vachan dete hai hum apko... " She took my hand in hers " ki ham aapka Vishwas kabhi nahi todenge ! Kabhi aisa kuch nahi karenge jisse aapki bhavnaon ko thes pohunche ! "
By this tym both of us had tears in our eyes , it was so overwhelming ! A light breeze blew ... I raised both my hands n held her gorgeous face ! I gently caressed her cheek while she deeply looked in my eyes ! I drew her forehead towards my lips n planted a kiss. :*
She ran her hands through my hair...and locked her arms at my neck ! I felt rejuvenated ... I didnt care about anything else n was content wid my Ajabde !
Suddenly she retreated back n turned away ! I sensed dat she felt shy ! I held her at her shoulders and turned her towards me ...
" Ajabde , aap humse sharma rahi hai ... Hum toh aapke Pati hai... Itna toh adhikar hai humein ! " She nervously bit her lip and looked away !
She surrendered and I puller her yet closer and held her at her waist. She looked into my eyes. She was breathing rapidly- I felt the warmth of her breathes near my mouth...her lashes fluttered rhythmically ... I never get tired of looking at her !
Oh God!!! I really , really loved her and wouldn't let go of her for anything in this world !
I tightened my grip around her waist and she entangled her arms around me ... Everything in the vicinity fell silent and it was just the two of us , the Sound of our breathing, two souls celebrating their union... <3 <3
I lifted her dupatta off her head and let it fall ! Strands of her hair flew to her face , I moved dem aside ... She closed her eyes as I kissed her between dem !
Then she whispered , " Kunwar Pratap hum aapse yun hi aajeevan prem karte rahenge... Hum to bohot hi zyada bhagyashaali hai ki hamara vivaah aapse se hua... Mushkilon aur dukhon ke bina jeevan ... Jeevan nahi hota.. Par humein toh iss baat ki prassanata hai ki ab hum dono apna jeevan saath saath bitayenge ! Ap par kabhi dukh ka saaya nahi padne denge ..."
"Aur hum yeh vaada kartein hai ki hum aapki in aankhon mein kabhi aansoon nahi aane denge !"
I buried my nose in her hair ... Breathing in her aroma as deep in my heart I prayed to have her only as my love...my wife ...in all my re-births!
The stars and the moon were the witnesses to the love we had in our hearts for eachother - The love wich wud keep growing with every passing minute ! <3 <3 <3



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nice one please continue soon
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I loved the concept- bhils and all.. really very nice. thanks for the pm! update soon.
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Originally posted by: _Rini_

I loved the concept- bhils and all.. really very nice. thanks for the pm! update soon.



Thank U Rini... Glad U Liked The Plot...
And No Need Of Thanks...!!!

RoSal ForEver...!!.!
They Rock...!!.!
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Its super fab stry...👏 awesum..truely luvd it..
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OMG ,,both are beautiful!
I love them girl,,please continue if possible !

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