PrAja SS---Updated Part-2 **My Love....My Life-Ajabdeh**...!.! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vrushaaallliii diii!!!!
Oh oh oh oh...BEAUTIFUL!!!
thats the word i have for it...
whole of it...
it was literally magical...
and i was super-glad to see the Bhils...literally...
and i loved seeing Ajabdeh busy with the Bhilni's more than Pratap being busy with Bhils...idk...its just that the women's aura and them laughing together made me smile...
and what struck me most was that time and again...Pratap was awestruck with her simplicity...especially what he thought under the stars..that she finds pleasure in the smallest of things...
and another favourite moment of mine...when Ajabdeh closed his eyes from behind...i went...'OOohhh!! Awww!!!!'
and the excitement in her voice was literally exciting...a sight to see her face beaming with hapiness and excitement...
and the whole balcony scene...Haayyyeee!!!!
it was amazing...
congrats to both of u for such a great story...Vrush & Shivzz... ;)
PS-becoz this story has two parts only, rename it to an OS...OS's have one or two parts, TS has three parts and an SS has more than four parts, while an FF is longer than 30 parts...so..as this story has two parts, rename it to an OS instead of an SS...and pm AsYa_Celana about the changes so that she can do the required changes in the creative gallery(u have submitted this story with details to her or not? if not then do it... ;) )
-Aru :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aru_A

Vrushaaallliii diii!!!!
Oh oh oh oh...BEAUTIFUL!!!
thats the word i have for it...
whole of it...
it was literally magical...
and i was super-glad to see the Bhils...literally...
and i loved seeing Ajabdeh busy with the Bhilni's more than Pratap being busy with Bhils...idk...its just that the women's aura and them laughing together made me smile...
and what struck me most was that time and again...Pratap was awestruck with her simplicity...especially what he thought under the stars..that she finds pleasure in the smallest of things...
and another favourite moment of mine...when Ajabdeh closed his eyes from behind...i went...'OOohhh!! Awww!!!!'
and the excitement in her voice was literally exciting...a sight to see her face beaming with hapiness and excitement...
and the whole balcony scene...Haayyyeee!!!!
it was amazing...
congrats to both of u for such a great story...Vrush & Shivzz... ;)
PS-becoz this story has two parts only, rename it to an OS...OS's have one or two parts, TS has three parts and an SS has more than four parts, while an FF is longer than 30 parts...so..as this story has two parts, rename it to an OS instead of an SS...and pm AsYa_Celana about the changes so that she can do the required changes in the creative gallery(u have submitted this story with details to her or not? if not then do it... ;) )
-Aru :)




Aww...Thank U So Much Dear Aru... It's Such A Great Thing To Get A Compliment From A Fantabulous Writer Like U...!! And Thanks So Much For The Difference B/W OS SS And FF... Actually I Was Confused... I'll Make It OS Now And Send It To Celena... Thank U For Liking It...!!!

ATB And Study Well..!!
Good Luck..!!

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