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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ajabde aur Pratap kaksh ki aur chal padte hain. Ajabde ke maan se vo kshan baar baar doharata hain jab Kunwar Pratap unke samman ke liye ladhne ko tayyiar the. Achanak Kunwar Pratap bole, "Ajabde; kya hum aap se ek baat puchh sakte hain?"
Ajabde ki dheemi haan sun kar ve bole "Jab vo raajkumariyaan aapko itna bura bhala keh rahi thi, tab aap ne kuchh kahan kyun nahi? Phool toh sab ko kacha kha jaatin par aap chup chap sab sunti gayi. Aisa kyun?
Ajabde ne ek kshan apne ruk kar, dheere se kahaan "Humne unse kuch nahi kahaan kyunki ve satya keh rahi thi. Ve thehri raajkumariyaan aur ek Saamant ki putri. Hume garv hain apne data par, lekin hum apnii aukad bhi jaante hain. Yadi hum kuchh kehte toh ve apne ghar shikayat kartin aur hamare datta ka naam kharab ho jaata. Vaise bhi, aap kaunsa hum se vivaah karna chahenge. Toh humare zindagi mein koi farak nahi padta."
Pratap thodi der vichaar mein pad gaye. Phir ve bole "Aap ko aisa kyun lagta hain ki hum aapse vivaah nahi karna chahenge?"
"Kya?!"
Ajabde ko aapne kaanon par yakin nahi ho raha tha. Yeh prashna ve puchh bhi kaise sakte hain?
"Humara patlab hain ki aap ko aisa kyun laga ki hum aapko pasand nahi karsakte hain?"
"Vo...vo...vo hum pahaunch gaye hain. Hum yeh mitti nikal kar aate hain." Ajabde ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Kunwar Pratap ke iss vakya ka kya uttar ho sakta hai.
"Hume phirse shama chahate hain. Humari vajahse aap ko takleef hui."
Ajabde, Kunwar Pratap ki our halke se muskayi aur kaksh dvaar band kar liya.
Kunwar Pratap ke maan mein Ajabde ki muskurahat, unka dheere se hasna, unki vo chintit aankhen; tasveer ke jaise jhalak uthi.
Tabhi ek sevak sandesh lekar aaya.
"Khambagani Baujiraaj. MaharaniSa ne aap ko bulaaya hain."
Kunwar Pratap toh bhul hi gaye the ke aab tak unhe unki RaniMaa ka bhi gussa bhogna hai.
Ve sochte huey Jayvanta Bai Sa ke kaksh ki our badhna lage.

I'm overjoyed with the response for this story! this is the next part, I really hope you like it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know this must be extremely confusing to those who haven't read the first part. As I was posting for the first time, I posted this differently instead of updating. Plz check out.the first part on my SS 'Dil mein hi rakhna.'
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Posted: 11 years ago
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:D you are AWSOME, love both part 1 and 2...prAja scenes are tooo good 😳 you could maybe add a prAja eye lock in part 3?!!? But other than than I LOVED IT please continue very SOON N let me know, I honestly really like the way you write, keep it up :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u r suprb...both d part was fab..
keep updng n pm me olways
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bud...this was great!!!!!
i'm so excited for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey. Next part will be posted on the original post in a reply format. I know this is highly inconvenient so I can also double post; once here and once there. What do yall say?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great!!!!!
i'm so excited for the next part😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkaKashyap

Hey. Next part will be posted on the original post in a reply format. I know this is highly inconvenient so I can also double post; once here and once there. What do yall say?

ermmm... u can post this update as well as the next one on the original thread...that won't break the continuation... :)
Rest is up to u... :)

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