PrAja OS - Unravelling of hidden feelings - Pratap (POV) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: _GC-AK-Fan_

Omg hiru..🤗.

It's really beautifully written yaara.
Omg i can imagine that Pratap reached Chittor and everything is reminding him Ajab.
Haye hope we get this in upcoming epi.
But for now we can imagine that wid ur amazing OS.☺️

Thank u Khushu🤗
aww I feel CVs will give us something more amazzzing😳 lets keep our fingers crossed😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Wow Hiru this is damm damm ausme jaana.
So perfectly u have poytrated the emotion sof pratap. This things deffo gonna be happen with him 😭
In everything, they have memory like wen is unpackking, wen JB uthaoring his nazar, wen he is washing the face.

He walked towards the window...maybe he needed fresh air. A beautifully lit moon was gazing down on him...The tears which had been held inside for long, finally silently trickled down...

"Ajabdeh" he finally said her name...holding on to the window...

Miles away, someone in Bijolia felt the pain and the winds seemed to have carried his plea, his voice...

She looked up...to stare at the moon..."Kunwar Pratap"...involuntarily she too cried out...

Thandi aahein bhar ke

Jeeta hai mar-mar ke
Pyasa reh gaya hai

Yeh dariya se guzar ke...

Holding on to the memories, they both cried together...they both felt the pain together...their tears dropped together

...physical distance could not separate their connected hearts...it just ended up bringing them closer...maybe that is what true love is all about J

These lines dear gt me goosebumps, tears come into eyes. So touching.


welll done jaana.

continue soon. i know wen JB will bring food he will again remember her '' when he asked ajab to bring food for chakri''

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: 03Kamya

Wow Hiru this is damm damm ausme jaana.

So perfectly u have poytrated the emotion sof pratap. This things deffo gonna be happen with him 😭
In everything, they have memory like wen is unpackking, wen JB uthaoring his nazar, wen he is washing the face.

He walked towards the window...maybe he needed fresh air. A beautifully lit moon was gazing down on him...The tears which had been held inside for long, finally silently trickled down...

"Ajabdeh" he finally said her name...holding on to the window...

Miles away, someone in Bijolia felt the pain and the winds seemed to have carried his plea, his voice...

She looked up...to stare at the moon..."Kunwar Pratap"...involuntarily she too cried out...

Thandi aahein bhar ke

Jeeta hai mar-mar ke
Pyasa reh gaya hai

Yeh dariya se guzar ke...

Holding on to the memories, they both cried together...they both felt the pain together...their tears dropped together

...physical distance could not separate their connected hearts...it just ended up bringing them closer...maybe that is what true love is all about J

These lines dear gt me goosebumps, tears come into eyes. So touching.


welll done jaana.

continue soon. i know wen JB will bring food he will again remember her '' when he asked ajab to bring food for chakri''

Thank u Kammu🤗 glad u liked it😳
no continuation to this one...its an OS😳 will write one depending on upcoming situations...for now..my heart goes out for PratapCryCryCry
but yeah, even food mai bhi he will remember Ajab❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Thank u Kammu🤗 glad u liked it😳
no continuation to this one...its an OS😳 will write one depending on upcoming situations...for now..my heart goes out for Pratap😭😭😭
but yeah, even food mai bhi he will remember Ajab❤️

GOD how i will see him today.
i want him cry loudly by calling name of ajabdhe 🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
awesome, prataps emotions are so meaningful and its beautifully written.
thanks for the Pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
OMG hiru...it's lovely...😳
it's mind blowing...loved it like
❤️
how you expressed ptarap's feelings i am 👍🏼
and in last OMG OMG i am not alive anymore,...🤢🤢
i feels like i am watching the whole seq...it's too beautiful
thanks for such amazing treat 👏👏
love you🤪🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Very nice...awesome😊😛pls update soon waiting eagerly😛😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome awesome just awesome loved it :) :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN

awesome, prataps emotions are so meaningful and its beautifully written.
thanks for the Pm.

Thank u dear😊 what may I call u?😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Moumimon

OMG hiru...it's lovely...😳
it's mind blowing...loved it like
❤️
how you expressed ptarap's feelings i am 👍🏼
and in last OMG OMG i am not alive anymore,...🤢🤢
i feels like i am watching the whole seq...it's too beautiful
thanks for such amazing treat 👏👏
love you🤪🤗

Thank u Momo🤗 glad u liked it Embarrassed
Love ya too❤️

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