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Hello everyone. I know this time I am very late to update. But promise, I am going to update soon.
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Hello everyone. I know this time I am very late to update. But promise, I am going to update soon.
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Thank you so much friends for your LIKES and your lovely comments. Sorry for i couldn't reply to everyone individually this time. And yes, I know, this time I am awfully late to update. But this update is long enough to make up for the delay. It has two parts: 8A and 8B. So here goes the update:-


Part 8A

"Hey bhagwan, hume kuch samjh nahin aa raha! Kya jo hum soch rahein hai woh sach hai. Nahin nahin. Shayad hum thora zyada hi soch rahe hai." Hansa said to herself while pacing in her room. "hey Kanha, kya ye aap ka koi ishaara hai ya sirf ek iktafaak ya hum hi bare sapne dekh rahein hai."

"Unn dono ke vyavahar ko ekh kar to kuch aisa hi prateet ho raha hai.Haan. Yeh sab iktafaak katai nahi ho sakta.Hum apni beti ko achi tarha pehchaan te hai.Aaj se pehle humne kabhi unhe iss tarha nahin dekha. Humne unke ankhon mein spasht roop se Kunwar Pratap ke liye prem dekha hai. Hum itne galat nahi ho sakte. In do dino mein humne job hi dekha, isse hume poorna vishwaas hai ki Ajabde Kunwar Pratap ko chahti hai." After thinking a lot Hansa was sure that Ajabde liked Pratap. And after seeing them the last two days she had no doubt about it.

*Flashback*

Everyone is happy as Chakrapani has arrived in his horse along with others for the marriage. All his friends were in super happy mode. Except Pratap. He looked lost. Lost in his own thoughts.

"Kya hua Kunwar Pratap? Aap khush nazar kyon nahi aa rahein?" asked Hansa politely.

"Nahin nahin Hansa maasi ji. Hum to bohot khush hai." Pratap said honestly.

"Acha Baojiraj. Par aapko dekhkar to aisa nahin lag raha hai." Chakrapani said.

"Aisa kuch nahin hai. Chaliye thik hai. Bajaiye aap sab. Aur ache se bajaiyega. Humare mitra ka vivah hai aakhir." Pratap said.

As soon as the song started Pratap danced along with the dance beats. Ajabde couldn't take her eyes off him. How can someone be so charming? She herself was not aware of her gaze at Pratap. Pratap also glanced at her every now and then. Ajabde was staring at him when something around Pratap's neck caught her attention. Is it true? Isn't that her shivji waali maala which she had lost in the river? How come it went him? It was really confusing.

Ajabde POV

Kunwar Pratap ke gale mein humari shivji waali maala? Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Bhala unke paas yeh maala kaise gayi. Kya yeh humara koi vehem hai. Nahin. Hume pura yakeen hai ki yeh maala humari hi hai.Haat mein unn jyotish ne kaha tha ki yeh hume kisi vishesh vyakti se milayega. To kya unka matlab Kunwar Pratap se tha? Par...aisa kaise... Hume to ab bhi samajh nahin aa raha ki yeh maala unke paas pahunchi kaise. Kya hum unse jaa kar kehde ki yeh maala humari hai. Haan hum yahi karenge. Par pata nahi kyon hume unse humari maala mangne main sankoch ho raha hai. Pata nahin kyon unke galein mein woh maala dekhakar prasannata si mehsoos ho rahi hai. Nahin nahin. Yeh unke paas hi rehne dete hai.
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"Yeh maala Kunwar Pratap ke gale mein? Yeh to wahi maala hai jo humne Ajab ko di thi. To phir ye Pratap ke paas." Hansa was really confused. Her eyes went to Ajabde who was busy staring at Pratap. Then she looked at Pratap. And there he was, glancing at her from the corner of his eyes.

"Ajabde ko dekh kar lagta hai ki unhe iss mala ke barein mein maloom hai. Na jane kyon hume lagta hai inn dono ke beech kuch to hai." Hansa thought.

*Flashback ends*

"Kya hume Ajabde se jaakar puchna chahiye ki unhe Kunwar Pratap pasand hai yaa nahin? Nahin. Hume aisa nahin karna chahiye. Achi tarha pehchaante hai hum apni Ajab ko. Hume yakeen hai ki yadi hum unse iss bare mein unse kuch puchenge ya kehenge to ve bolengi ki woh Kunwar Pratap ke yogya nahin hai.Woh kabhi humari baat nahin manengi. Unhone humesha se apne aap ko saare khushiyon se door rakha hai. Par inme unka koi dosh nahin hai. Haalat hi kuch aise the. Bachpan se unhone kya kuch nahin saha hai. Darti hai woh khushiyon ko apnane se. Gam ke saaye mein ghiri hui hai humari bachchi. Woh sabke liye kitna kuch karti hai. Par uss bechari ko humesha in sab ache kaamon ke badlein dukh hi mila hai. Na unhe kabhi apne Daata ka pyaar mila aur na hum unki maa ho kar unki koi sahayta kar sakein. Par ab nahin. Hum apni beti ko woh saari khushiyaan denge jinki woh haqdaar hai. " She was determined this time to give her daughter all the happiness which she deserved. Ajabde had faced the wrath of her father from her childhood, without uttering a single complain. She had always accepted whatever came in her way. Being a mother, Hansa could do nothing for her child. Now it was time for her to do something for her daughter.

"Kal un dono ko dekhkar hume vishwaas hai Kunwar Pratap bhi unhe chaahte hai. Jab bhi ve Ajabde ke paas rehte hai, unki taraf dekhte hai ya unse baat kartein hai to kitne khush nazar aatein hai." Yes, she had seen the twinkle in his eyes when Ajabde was around him. "Parantu hum unse iss barein mein baat nahin karenge. Unn dono ko khud yeh ehsaas hona chahiye ki woh ek dusre ke liye apne dil mein kya anubhav karte hai. Jab sahi waqt aayega, tabhi baat karenge hum Ajab se."

Hansa thought it was not wise to talk to her directly. She knew that Ajabde was confused with her own feelings and so was Pratap. Only they can help themselves. The right time is yet to come.

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"Ajabde kabhi bhi shringar nahin karti hai. Wahi saadharan se vastra pehen kar rahti hai. Kal Saubhagyawati aur Chakrapani ke vivak ke uplyakshya mein samaroh rakha gaya hai. Hum chahte hai humari Ajab kal ek asli rajkumari lagein, Bijolia ki rajkumari jo woh vaastav mein hai." Hansa thought to herself while looking at all the lehengaas the servants had brought. Ajabde always lived a simple life. Never did she wear expensive lehengas, ghagras and gold jewelries which every other princess wore. Hansa always wanted to dress her daughter like a princess does, give her all those beautiful jewelries which she has been keeping for her since her childhood, all those beautiful lehengas which she often gave to Phool as gifts, but was never able to do that, the fear of her husband always stopped her to do that. But tomorrow she wanted her daughter to look the most beautiful girl present in the ceremony.

"Moti woh waali dikhaana. Kitni khubsurat hai, par waisi nahin jaisi hume apni rajkumari ke liye chahiye. Aur woh waali dikhaao. Aur woh bhi, haan haan use bhi. Yeh saari bohot sundar hai. Kaun sa chune hum?" Hansa was really confused to choose which dress for Ajabde. All of them were beautiful. She was not getting which one to choose.

"Pranam Hansa maasi ji!" Hansa turned around to find Pratap standing at the door of her room.

"Kunwar Pratap. Aap yahan. Aaiye na. Wahan kyon khare hai? Andar aaiye." Said Hansa standing up and keeping the Ghara choli in her hand, on the bed.

"Ji. Woh hum keh rahe the ki kya aapne Ajabde ko dekha hai?" he asked expectantly. Pratap was searching her from the last 20 minutes. But he couldn't find her anywhere.

"Ajabde? Hume lagta hai woh ya to rasoi mein hogi ya phir Lakshmi ke paas." Hansa replied politely.

Suddenly a thought came across her mind. "Achha Kunwar Pratap, bataiye to in saare vastro mein se aapko kaunsi sabse zyada achi lag rahi hai?" she asked him.

"Hume? Ab hum bhala iss vishaye mein kya kahein Hansa maasiji. Hume vastron ki samajh kahan hai?" Pratap was a little surprised to see Hansa ask him which lehenga he liked. He was only good at picking up swords and other weapons, not dresses!

"Phir bhi, inmein se koi ek chun lijiye. Ab apni maasi ki baat mat taaliyega." She said pointing him towards the ghagras and lehengas lying over the bed.

Pratap thought if he says no then Maaasi ji might feel bad, so went near the bed and started observing all the dresses. Suddenly, one of the lehngas caught his eyes. He found it really gorgeous. As he looked upon its bright colors and elegant designs, HER image flashed before him. His heart had drawn a mental picture of Ajabde in that dress. She was looking beautiful. No less than an angel.

Arrey yeh hum kya soch rahe hai. Patani nahin iss khubsurat vastra ko dekh humare mann mein Ajbde ki chavi kyon ban gayi. Yeh kya ho raha hai hume. Hum aisa kyon soch rahein hain. Hum bhi na. Aaj kal kuch atirikt hi sochte hai.' Pratap thought.He didn't knew for whom he was said to select the dress,

"Kunwar Pratap? Kahan kho gaye aap?" Hansa's words brought him back to reality.

"Woh...Kuch nahin. Hum to bass yuhi..." Pratap said trying to cover up for his lost behavior. "Woh Hansa maasi ji, hume yeh waali bohot pasand hai." He said pointing towards the Lehenga he liked.

Hansa took a look at the dress. She must have missed out this one. The beauty of the dress mesmerized her. "Kunwar Pratap, aap to keh rahe the ki aapko iss baarein mein koi samjh nahin hai?" she said. "Manna parega, aapki pasand bohot achi hai." She ordered the daisis to take back all the lehengas except the chosen one.

"Acha ab hum chalte hai. Pranam." Saying this Pratap walked out of Hansa's room.

Pratap got out of Hansa's room and started walking towards his own. While walking he took out a ring from his kamarbandh(the cloth which is tied in the waist) and looked at it remembering something.

*flashback*

The ring finding ceremony was in full swing. Chakrapani has lost the game in the first round. Second round, Pratap played for Chakrapani and Phool on behalf of Saubhagyawati. This time Phool had lost. She thought she would win because few minutes before Chakrapani had said that the girls are going to win at last.

"Dekha Chakrapani, jeet gaye na hum!" Pratap said to his friend who thought that these girls are going to win.

"Nahin aisa nahin ho sakta. Hum log iss tarha nahin haar sakte. Ajabde, ab humari taraf se aap khelengi. Aaiye na Ajabde." Saying this Phool dragged Ajabde and made her sit in front of the bowl opposite to Pratap for playing.

"Par Phool...acha thik hai." Ajabde dropped the ring in the bowl and the game started. Both of them put their hands in the bowl to find the ring.

[Ajab POV in red and Pratap POV in blue]

Yeh phool bhi na. Unke karan hume yeh khel khelna pad raha hai. Hum to jaante hai ki Kunwar Pratap hi jeetenge.Par phir bhi. Unka aur Saubhagyawati ke mann rakhne ke liye...hum cheshta karte hai. Anguthi, anguthi, anguthi...kahan gayi yeh Anguthi? Hume to maloom tha yeh Phool haar hi jayengi. Par Ajabde. Kya unhe hum hara payenge. Nahin Chakrapani ke liye...hum hi jeetenge. Anguthi, anguthi, kahan gayi anguthi? Waise aaj Ajabde kitni achi lag rahi hai.(Glances at Ajabde) Jab woh mann laga kar kuch karti hai to kitni sundar lagti hai. Arrey! Yeh hum kya soche jaa rahe hai? Kya humari matibhrashta ho gayi hai. Hum unke bare mein aisa...anguthi! Yeh rahi anguthi! Kahin yeh toh...Itna waqt kyun lag raha dhundne mein humein. Kunwar Pratap! Kya unhone abhi humari taraf dekha(taking a quick look at Pratap) nahin, nahin. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai. Hume khel par dhyaan dena chahiye. Yeh...yeh kya hai...Mil gayi anguthi. Par iske sath yeh kya...yeh to Ajabde ka haath hai. Ajabde ka haath... Ajabde ka haath...His hand lingers on her hands for sometimes. He felt like grabbing her hand. But the next second he kicked those thoughts out of his mind.Yeh yeh kya hai...Kunwar Pratap ka hath...unka haath...She could feel his hands touching hers. Shivers ran down her spines as his fingers slowly lingered on hers. She didn't know why she felt like that. She had never felt something like this before. The feeling was chilling yet a soothing one.Kahan gayi yeh anguthi. Mil gayi. Hume to pata tha hum hi jeetenge.Hume anguthi dhundne par dhyaan dena chahiye. Kahan gayi, kahan gayi. Yeh rahi mil gayi hume anguthi.

Pratap was about to take out his hands when Ajabde took the ring out of the bowl. Phool clapped happily. "Dekha na Kunwar Pratap, haar gaye na aap? Hehehe." Phool said. Ajabde has a small smile adorning her face. Pratap took out his hand to see what had he got then if the ring was with Ajabde. It was Ajabde's ring which might have slipped in the milk. No one noticed it .Pratap heard Phool's comment and replied, "Itni gunawati kanya se haarna humare liye jeet ke barabar hi hai." Everyone looked at him, amazed. Ajabde was mesmerized by his words. Chakrapani says that he knew they would win and starts his prediction.(rest goes like the show)

*Flashback ends*

Pratap looked at the ring in his hand which he had forgotten to return because he had been busy in listening his friends predictions which he doesn't think is going to get true.

"Hum aur kisi kanya se harenge? Aisa to ho hi nahin sakta" Pratap said in his mind smiling. As he walked towards his room, he kept staring at the ring and a grin formed in his face. When he was inside his room he took a look at the sky from the window. It was starting to get darker. And again he looked at the ring and gave a sigh. "Koi baat nahin. Hum yeh unhe kal hi de denge." Saying this he kept the ring at a table beside his bed and drifted into sleep.

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"Hume kya karna chahiye. Yeh pehn na chahiye ya nahin? Hume samajh nahin aa raha." Ajabde said pacing in her room as she took a look on the plate whose contents were covered with a cloth. Then at those beautiful jewelries.

*Flashback*

"Ajabde, yeh dekhiye hum aapke kya laaye hai." Hansa entered with two dasis following her, each of them with a plate in their hands, covered by a cloth.

"Maa, yeh sab kya hai?" a surprised Ajabde asked.

"Khol ke dekhiye." Hansa said as the dasis kept the two plates in the bed and went away. Ajabde removed the cover of one of the plate. There were some beautiful jewelries in the plate, like those which the other princesses wore.

"Maa, aap yeh hume kyun de rahi hai?" Ajabde asked not getting the fact that why has her brought this things to her.

"Kyun? Hum aapko yeh nahin de sakte hai? Beti hai aap humari aur Bijolia ki rajkumar. Haq hai aapka yeh sab pehen ne ka." Hansa said to Ajabde.

"Par maa...hum yeh...sab...aur" Ajabde was stopped in the middle by her mother.

"Ajabde, ab aap humse behas mat kijiye. Aap humesha aise sadhaaran vastra pehen kar rehti hai aur na hi koi shringaar karti hai. Par aaj nahin. Aaj hum aapki koi baat nahin sunenge. Hum chahte ki aaj ke samaaroh mein aap yeh pehne aur yeh lehenga bhi." Pointing towards the plate which had the lehenga. She stood up and started to leave. She gave a last look to Ajabde and said, "Hume pata hai Ajabde,aap hume niraash nahin karengi." She gave a smile to Ajabde and left the room.

*Flashback ends*

"Agar humne yeh nahin pehna to maa ko avashya hi bohot bura lagega." Ajabde said to herself and then uncovered the plate to see the dress.

She was totally mesmerized by seeing its beauty. Never had she seen such a beautiful lehenga. And here she was asked to wear it. She felt really happy but at the next moment she thought wether she should wear it or not.

Ajabde POV-

Yeh lehenga kitna sudar hai. Humne isse pehle itni khubsurat lehenga aaj tak nahin dekha. Kitna sundar aur pyaara hai iska rang. Maa ki pasand kitni achi hai. Daad deni paregi unke pasand ki. Par kya hume yeh pehen na chahiye? Humne aaj se pehle itna shringar nahi kiya hai. Yeh gehne...aur yeh sab...kya karein hum?Nahin, humein yeh pehen lena chahiye. Nahin to maa ko bohot bura lagega. Sirf ek pahar ki to baat hai. Hum pehen lenge isse.

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She took the dress in her hand and went in front of the mirror at looked at her reflection.

"Jaldi taiyaar ho jaiye. Pritiksha karenge hum aapki." She saw HIM say this from the mirror.

"Kunwar Pratap!" she said shocked and quickly turned around, only to find nobody there.

"Yeh hume kya ho gaya hai. Hume Kunwar Pratap kyun dikhayi diye abhi? Aisa kaise ho sakta. Hume samajh nahin aa raha hume ho kya gaya hai. Hume jaldi se taiyaar ho jaana chahiye." Saying this to herself she started wearing the lehenga.

"Ajabde! Aap taiyaar ho gayi? Dekhiye to kitni sundar lag rahi hai aap. Aap aur bhi zyaada sundar lagengi jab hum khud apne haathon se aapka shringaar kar denge." Hansa said while entering Ajabde's room. Ajabde gave a small smile to her mother.

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"Surtan Singh, tumhe pata hai na tumko kya karna hai? Koi bhi galti nahin honi chahiye. Samjhe tum?" Gauhar Jaan said as she advanced towards the ceremony hall to check if everything is ready.

"Aap chinta mat kijiye Gauhar Jaan. Sab kuch humare yojna ke mutabik hi hone wala hai." Suran Singh said checking the sharpness of a knife.

"Pratap, maut ab tumse kuch hi pal dur hai. Taiyaar ho jao Pratap apne maut ko gale lagan eke liye."

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"Ache se shringar karo humara. Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum. Hume itne sundar se sajao ki sabki nazar sirf humari aor hi rahe. Samjhi?" Phool instructed the dasis, looking herself at the mirror.

"Ji Bai sa. Hum samajh gaye. Aap chinta mat kijiye. Aaj sabki nazar sirf aap par hogi." The dasi said.

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Phool enetered the hall. She was looking beautiful. Her maid had really done a good job in doing her work. Phool was very excited to see HIS reaction. Yes, HIS reaction, for whom she had done all these. She wanted HIS eyes only on her. But nothing of that sort happened.

Pratap and his friends were standing in the ceremony hall and were discovering over some topic when Phool entered. All their eyes including Pratap's went towards her. His friends were just staring at the beautiful rajkumari standing a little distance away from them. They haven't seen such a beautiful princess before. Pratap looked at her and gave her a genuine smile. Then he looked towards his friends only to find them staring at Phool.

"Areey! Yeh aap log kya kar rahein hai?" Pratap said in a low voice trying to make his friends understand what they are doing.

Again he said, "Aap logo nahin pata aise kisi rajkumari ya stri ki taraf dekhna asabhyata kaha jaata hai."

Quickly they looked away from Phool.

Phool looked at Pratap who was busy talking with his friends. Every now and then he looked towards the doorway as if searching someone. "Kunwar Pratap kisse dhund rahen hai." She thought.

"Baojiraj, aap kisko dhund rahe hai? Zara humein bhi bataiye." Venidas said seeing his friend.

"Woh kuch nahin hum to bass aise hi..." saying this Pratap's eyes again went towards the door, when he stopped. He was left dumbstruck by HER beauty. He stared at Ajabde as she gracefully walked inside the hall. She looked towards him and gave him the sweetest smile he had ever seen and then looked down. Ajabde was wearing the same lehenga ha had selected the previous day. He had no idea she would look so beautiful in this. He was totally mesmerized. He didn't know that the purple lehenga with the parrot green choli will suit her so well. For the first time he was seeing her like this, all decked up in jewelry and light make up.

He was staring at her and grinning like a fool. Ajabde look at him again and there was a eyelock. They were lost in each other. It was Phool broke their eyelock.

"Wah Ajabde! Aap aaj kitni khuburat lag rahi hai. Dekhiye to zara. Dekhiye, sab aapko dekh rahe hai. Aap bhi kya humesha saadharan vastra pehen kar rahti hai humesha. Aap aise hi kyun nahin raha karti humesha? Hehehe. Sach Ajabde aaj aap bohot sundar lag rahi hai." Phool said to her friend.

"Aisi koi baat nahin hai Phool. Aur aap bhi to aaj ko kitni sundar lag rahi hai." Ajabde replied smiling.

"Woh to hai." Phool replied and both the friends broke into laughter.

How serene and beautiful does she look when she laughs like this, Pratap thought. He was lost in Ajabde. His friends voice broke him out of his chain of thoughts.

"Abhi abhi koi hume asabhya keh raha tha. Pata nahin uss vyakti ki sabhyata Ajabde Bai sa ke aane se achaanak kahan chali gayi." He said near Pratap's ear but literally telling this to Bheem.

"Sahi kaha ." Bheem complied. "Kya? Aisi koi baat nahin hai. Aap log bhi na. Kuch bhi kehte rahte hai." Pratap said looking away from Ajabde while his friends started to laugh at him.

The samaroh had started. Gauhar was dancing in the middle while everyone was enjoying the act. All the people praised her dance. While dancing she would take a quick look at the spot where the jhoomar is tied, where Surtan Singh is supposed to be. But he is nowhere.

Gauhar grabs phools hand and Ajabde and also makes them dance along with her. Then slowly everybody joins and are dancing along with the song. Gauhar Jaan once again looks towards the direction of the jhoomar and then the place where its rope is tied. She gets disappointed to find no one there.

The ceremony finishes. Gauhar is very angry but pretends to be happy. Everybody starts departing. Only Ajabde and Pratap are there in the hall.

Ajabde also starts to leave when Pratap calls her. "Ajabde, hume aap se kuch kehna tha, humara matlab dena tha." Pratap said and goes towards Ajabde.

"Kuch dena tha? Parantu kya Kunwar Pratap?" she asks him curious about what it can be?

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Gauhar goes near the place where the jhoomar is tied and find Sutan Singh there.

"Surtan Singh!! Tum kar kya rahe the? Kitna cha mauka tha? Tumne rassi kyun nahin kaati?" Gauhar Jaan said angrily in a low voice so that no one else could hear her.

"Sh..sh..shaan ho jaiye Gauhar Jaan. Woh kya hai jab hum yahan aaye to yahan 4 sainik khare the! Aur woh yahn par pehra de rahe the sath mein samaroh bhi dekh rahe the. Ab hum rassi kaise kaat sakte the tab?" Surtan Singh reasoned.

"To maar kyun kanhi diya unhe? Kisi kaam ke nahin ho tum!" Gauhar said.

"Arrey! Hum bhala unhe kaise maarte? Kitne saare log the wahan! Koi humein dekh leta tab? Au..aur Pra..Pratap! Woh humein dekh leta to maar daalta humein!" Surtan said. "Waise Gauhar Jaan, muka humare haath mein abhi bhi hai. Woh dekho, Kunwar Pratap wahan khara kisi se baat kar raha hai."

He said pointing towards Pratap and Ajabde.

"Sahi kahan tumne. Hume waqt nahin gavana chahiye. Jaldi kaato rassi!" Gauhar said.

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"Woh Ajabde hum aapko yeh dena chahte the." Pratap took out her ring from his kamarbandh and held it out to her.

"Humari anguthi! Isse humne har jagha dhunda par humein kahin nahi mili." Ajabde said happily as she took the ring from his hand and wore it back on her finger. "Aapka bohot bohot dhanyawaad Kuwar Pratap. Waise aapko yeh kahan se mili Kunwar Pratap?" she asked him.

"Yeh...yeh hume uss dini milithi jab hum anguthi dhundne ka khel khel rahe the. Tab uss patra mein humne aapki anguthi ko dusri waali anguthi samjh li thi. Phir baad mein humne dekha dusri waali to aapke paas hai. Tab humein pata chala ki yeh aapki hai. Woh hume shama kijiyega hum isse aapko ab de rahein hai. Hum aapko ye uss din dena bhool hi gaye the." Pratap said.

"Koi baat nahin Kunwar Pratap. Acha ab hum halte hai." Ajabde said and started leaving the hall. Pratap stood there in the middle of the hall, staring at her retreating figure and admiring her. Again he was lost in his own thoughts.

"Aaj Ajabde kitni sundar lag rahi thi. Kitni nahin, woh sabse zyada sundar lag rahi thi. Jab bhi hum unke shaant chehre, unke aacharan ya unki muskurahat dekhte hai hume apni rani ma ki yaad aa jati hai." He thought.

Ajabde was going out of the hall when she heard a sound coming from the place where Gauhar Jaan and Surtan Singh were standing.

"Hume laga humne abhi kisi ki payal ki awaaz suni." Thinking this Ajabde turned towards the direction and could only see some shadows getting past there and then the rope of the jhoomar ready to tear apart any time. Before she could go there it tore apart. She turned at once and screamed at the top of her lungs "KUNWAR PRATAP!"

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Edited by Celana - 11 years ago
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Kunwar Pratap selected lehenga for Ajabdeh. Kunwar Pratap khud kehte hai ki rajkumariyon ko aise dekhna asabyatha kehlaatha hai aur vo hi Ajabdeh ko dekh rahe the. Kunwar Pratap's friends teasing him. Kunwar Pratap gave the ring back to Ajabdeh. Ajabdeh saw joomar falling on Kunwar Pratap. Hope she saves him from the falling joomar

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