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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first post in MP forum.

These two kids Pratap and Ajabdhe has made me PAGAL for them.

Wat can be more than this ki My exams are going on and I am writing OS for them.

( Gt a long gap for preparation s o writing one stuff on them. )

Hope all My PrAja (Not that raja waali Praja ) My Darling Pratap + Ajabdhe = PrAja fans like this piece of work.

This story is completely Different from the current track. Just while listening music this idea struck into my mind and I am here with it.

Bare me if this is not so good.

Not talking much here I am giving just a jhalak of

Ajabdhe you are gting late beta, Gt ready fast.

Yeah mom ! coming.

Mean while her phone ring, She ran to pick it thinking might her bestest Frend called her. Bt she was wrong it was Phool.

A : hello.

P : Happy b'day my darling. Its your 18th b'day. Wish you the world sweetheart.

A : thank you much dear.

P : chalo come to Bollywood treat fast ajab.

A : aahaan !! Nt ajab. You know na he has only the right to call me from this name.

P : acha baba solly. Chal ab jaldi aaja. Waise usne tujhe call kiya.

A : kaha yr. every year he wishes me first at 12 bt this time dun know wat happen..

P : ooohhooo koi ni, Busy hoga. And aaj tak kav aisa hua hai ki wo tera b'day bhula hai.

A : hope so. Chal BT mein milte hai.

Kya hua hai ? y he is nt calling me. use yaad toh hai na ki mera aaj b'day hai. It's the first time he had not wished me. without him nothing goes right in my life. Kahin wo bhul to nhi gaya. Tu v na ajabdhe kav aisa hua hai ki wo tera B'day bhula hai. He must be planning something good for you.

Mom : ajabdhe.

A : coming.

M : coming coming bolte bolt eek ghaanta kar di.

She goes down and touched her moms feet and took blessings from her.

M : awww mera bacha. God bless you. Dudhoo nahao phuto phalo.

A : thank you maa..

M : chalo eat your breakfast fattaphat, HE is coming to take you.

A : wat he is coming. Wat did he say ?

M : jo wo regular bolta hai. Aunty ajab ko bolo ki wo jaldi ready ho jaaye main use lene aa raha hun.

A : he didn say anything else.

M : no.

Ajabdhe became sad. Is he gone mad. Ghazini ki bimaari ho gayi hai kya usse.

M : usne tumhe wish kara ki nhi

A : kaha maa. First time life he didn wished me.

The door bell rang.

A : maa maa, use mere b'day ke bare mein kuch nhi puchna. Plzzz. Ok na.

M : meri beti paga hai.

A : hhehehehhe

Maa opens the door and here he is, ' Mr. bhulakar singh '..

Hayeee just look at him, kya banda hai, super cute, too hawt to handle and so dashing. Isse dhekhte he saara gussa gayab. Par ajabdhe u need to control.

P : gud morning aunty.

M : gud morning pratap.

P : gud morning ajab.

A : good morning.

P : chalo jaldi, hume BT time par pahunchna hai. And you know na I am so punctual.

A : ha ha ha ha I know. Par hume BT 12pm mein reach karna tha and 11:30am yahi par ho gaya hai. Half hour mein kaise.

P : tum shayad bhul rahi ho tumare saath kaun hai. Mr. pratap singh. The great racer.

A : racer ke mama to tum. And main bhul rahi hun. Tum bhul rahe ho kuch aaj.

P : main kya bhul raha hun.

A : hain dhekho iss bhole ko zaara dhekho toh. Kuch nhi ( in angry tone )

P : tumhari tabiyaat toh theek hai na.

She gives him dead waala look.

A : waise maa aaj ky adate hai.

M : hain, aaj 24th hai.

A : wahi toh aaj 24th hai ( she said in loud voice pointing to pratap ).

P : ha toh isme chilane waali kuan si baat hai, mujhe v pata hai aaj 24th hai. Main v issi planet kahun.

A : aaj kuch special hai pratap.

P : ha wo toh. Pata nhi kyun phool ne sabko BT mein kyun bulaya hai.

A : I feel like crying.

P : kya. Ajab r u really fine.

A : she didn say anything and went to pratap car.

And here pratap show thumbs up to ajab mom.

Solllyyy next and last part tomorrow.

Eyes lids gting heavy.

Hope you all like it.

True feedback needed and dun forgt to press like.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya Kamya! 🤗
IKR! even em too having boards next month yet 😆 but same as u,have got long time for preparation 😊
All the best for ur ones! 🤗

okay coming to writing ..it is totally dif ..kind of this generation story ..it's really great to read something like this ..never expected so! so thumps up for that! 👍🏼 and overall good job hun ..i loved it <3

Btw,i imagined RoSal here instead of PrAja! *gutter mind* 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Jes...

Heya Kamya! 🤗
IKR! even em too having boards next month yet 😆 but same as u,have got long time for preparation 😊
All the best for ur ones! 🤗

okay coming to writing ..it is totally dif ..kind of this generation story ..it's really great to read something like this ..never expected so! so thumps up for that! 👍🏼 and overall good job hun ..i loved it <3

Btw,i imagined RoSal here instead of PrAja! *gutter mind* 🤣


thanx jesmine. Glad u liked it. Wl try to wr8 smethng n ths track. Bt 4 dat i wl hve thnk. And ol d bst to u 2.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thany visu.

U 2 praja fan ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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all d bst to both of you... n i will too write an os soon on them.. traditional one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 03Kamya


thanx jesmine. Glad u liked it. Wl try to wr8 smethng n ths track. Bt 4 dat i wl hve thnk. And ol d bst to u 2.

it's totally okay kamya,rather i totally loved reading this one 😃👍🏼
thanks hun! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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grate dear..so loving...
different from portraying one...
so lovely...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamya, that was cute😛😊 will wait for one on PrAja in current track😳
Jessiee...🤣 stop it🤣 on the sets the two would be discussing about homeworks and school stuff🤣

But PrAja rocks😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Kamya, that was cute😛😊 will wait for one on PrAja in current track😳

Jessiee...🤣 stop it🤣 on the sets the two would be discussing about homeworks and school stuff🤣

But PrAja rocks😛


Thanx Hira For liking it.😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hiral_Halwa

Kamya, that was cute😛😊 will wait for one on PrAja in current track😳

Jessiee...🤣 stop it🤣 on the sets the two would be discussing about homeworks and school stuff🤣

But PrAja rocks😛

@Bold : is there any guarantee Hiru? 😉🤣
soch ne mein mera kya jata hai 😛 i wil keep assuming .. 🤣 that's y i think their parents can sue me anytime 🤣🤣

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