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Posted: 8 years ago
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The small story reflects on Maya's getting shattered seeing Arjun and Saanjh's closeness. The very unexpected person will give small shoulders to cry. After holi Maya's heart is broken into million of pieces which she is unable to join again. In her wildest dream she could not imagine to get another Ashwin in her life. She is walking lifelessly on road without any reaction when a truck is about to hhit her when Ayaan saves her.

Ayaan : what do you think you are doing? you could have died

"Then you should have let me die, why did you save me" Maya finally burst into flow of tears holding Ayaan's hand tightly who is trying to calm her down

Ayaan : its okay (pats her shoulder)

Maya : everything is over, my life, desires, dream they are buried down

Ayaan does not say anything and lets her take out all pain she has been holding.

"Ayaan, I am very bad person, I am liar, manipulator, home wrecker, who only how to make things in our favor, I don't deserve to be loved" Maya keeps cursing herself and letting tears falling from her eyes

Ayaan : you are wrong, you don't know what you bhabhi

Maya looks up at him

Ayaan : you heard it right, you are beautiful angel who would spread happiness every where, it is my brother's bad luck he is losing a gem, trust me you are one of my best buddy, I can share my pain, tears, something nobody could understand in years

Maya ; No Ayaan, I am responsible for everything, I broke your relation with Arjun and Vandana ma

Ayaan : No bhabhi, it was not your fault, it is 9 years old girl's insecurity of losing something precious, a girl who is willing to let go her past for her love, a daughter who can die for her mother can never be bad person, she is the best human I ever met

Maya : why, Ayaan, I never asked for anything, I gave everything to get this

Ayaan : love is not forced bhabhi, you earned everything by your hard work but this is something you got easily

"Ayaan I am tired, I want peace now, I don't have courage to fight anymore" Maya is losing her strength of speaking

Ayaan : from today you don't have to fight for anything, I know my Bhai very well, he can never realize value of something till it is gone from his life.

Maya : what are you trying to say?

Ayaan : if you want to go live in peace go away from this place, don't hurt your self respect for love bhabhi, a girl can get everything back but not her respect

"You know I cannot live without Arjun and you are saying go away " Maya refuses to agree on his condition

Ayaan : you are wasting your time bhabhi on somebody who is playing on your emotion, you might have knew this from beginning, don't forget you are Maya Mehrothra, don't try to become Jhanvi Mehrothra, choice is yours, do you want to die like slow poison or want to live life with dignity you have been living till today

Maya wipes her tears when Ayaan just mentioned something she tried to hurt in the name of love. She chooses her self respect and decides to leave everything.

Ayaan : from today, you are going to have new identity, Maya Mehrothra but not the old one, a new Maya who will set example for girls who are used like toys by people

Maya : I promise, today this new Maya will only go on right path to achieve everything (puts hands on him) and only for my best friend

Ayaan : all the best buddy


Edited by ashpat3 - 8 years ago

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ishakumar thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww
That was just sooo cute
Can we just have an adorable moment like this between Maya and ayaan?!!!! Waiting to see something like this!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start. Nice to see Ayaan standing for Maya.
Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved this OS!!
The Ayaan - Maya friendship is really cute and adorable 😊
I love the fact Ayaan decided to help and support Maya, giving her a shoulder to cry on
This is something different, I don't think anyone's written about Maya and Ayaan's bond, thanks for sharing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishakumar

Awww
That was just sooo cute
Can we just have an adorable moment like this between Maya and ayaan?!!!! Waiting to see something like this!!!


I hope we don't get to see something of this sort in the show. Sure, it's adorable when written but currently, I don't want it to happen. Perhaps, some time back yes but now Ayaan, too is stuck in Maya's Mayajaal, it would be cruel to show something like this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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In a more funny kind of way i ship the two . because just like how saanj deserve better. Maya does too, and ayaan has matured a lot and had a huge character development. You make me want to write a story about them. I honestly think those two can learn from each other to live. Cause ayan is so honest.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ash you write even here good story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful plot. Hope actually if something happens like this in the show . Anyways ayaan is a good listener.
Thanks for this.

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