Beyhadh FF : The discovery of finding myself

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey😃 I am Anjali😊😊 I am a fan of Beyhadh and I have this story in my head, thought too share it with you guys, If you guys like it , I will continue for sure😆😃😳 Also in my story it is not so much about who Arjun will end up it, it is more about the journey of finding ourselves and the values of releationes😃😳


HEARTBREAK


" I love you Maya" she heard Arjun say to Maya. The three words which she had tried to say to him , but somehow she never been able to. Perhaps, because she had wanted him to find out his feelings for her and confess to her. There was times she had been so close to tell her duffer that he was more than her bestfriend , that she had always loved him . But unfortunately she had been afraid to ruin the friendship and lose the most important person in her life.

Saanjh fell down on the sand as her heart broke into million pieces, her whole body felt numb. Arjun loved someone else , the man she had as long as she can remember loved, he loved someone else. Tears fell from her eyes , as memories of them came through her eyes.

Saanj felt Arjun's eyes shift towards her and she turned around so he won't see her tears. This might be the worst day in her life , but for her duffer it was his best day and she could not spoil his day because of her tears. Saanj wiped her tears swiftly and turned around giving the two of them a gentle smile.

Arjun came running to her and said " Dusky, I am in love yaar " he said hugging her. Saanj froze, why did he has to make it more difficult for her . All she wanted to do was to break down in his arms, but she pushed him away gently. Before he could suspect something , she took his hand in Maya's hands and said " You are a lucky girl Maya, please don't break his heart. He is a duffer, but he is goodhearted. Please don't ever break his heart or hurt him" she said.

She saw Maya nod and hug Arjun happily , the smile on his face put balm on her heart even it was meant for someone else. Saanj moved away lifeless and took every step away from him. Saanj did not know how she ended in the mandir, but she was glad she did.

" I came here to ask something from you. Dad says if you ask something from heart from you, you answer. Then I am asking from the bottom of my heart to always keep him safe , loved and healthy. I am asking you to not let my fear of Maya being dangerous come true" she said remembering the dinner with Maya.

" Please don't let his heart break like mine" she pleaded in a barely whisper before she fell down and sobbed. She made a promise to herself that today was the last time she cried for him. Saanj had hit the wall and it was time for her to find the strength within herself to stand up and survive.


Constructrive criticism is more than welcome and sorry for any typos😃 chappals and tomatoes are more than welcome😆😆 I wrote this in 20 min or so😆😆🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Anjali! You're a great writer and I absolutely love the plot, please continue soon 👍🏼
I wish this happened in the actual show
I admire how you have decided to focus the story on self-discovery unlike most of the other ffs. Please please continue soon otherwise I will definitely throw tomatos 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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LOVELY POST!
i love the fact that its the same scenes we are about to see in the actual show
like something similar to this
with the beach and heartbreak

great visuals :D
keep continuing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its nice
Simple & beautiful 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhrishti_

Hey Anjali! You're a great writer and I absolutely love the plot, please continue soon 👍🏼

I wish this happened in the actual show
I admire how you have decided to focus the story on self-discovery unlike most of the other ffs. Please please continue soon otherwise I will definitely throw tomatos 😉



Hey Dhristti😳😃 Thank you so much dr, I am glad you liked the plot and I will continue soon😳😳
I too wish this happen in the show, want strong saanj😃😊
Thank you so much😳😳
Hehe sho sweeet dont worry I will continue soon😃 Do you want pm when I update? 😃
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishakumar

LOVELY POST!

i love the fact that its the same scenes we are about to see in the actual show
like something similar to this
with the beach and heartbreak

great visuals :D
keep continuing!




Thank you so much😳😳 I am really glad to hear you liked it 😳 Can I call you Isha?
Really excited to see how it will be in the actual show😃

Thank you so much once again😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sup3rman

Its nice
Simple & beautiful 👏


Thank you so much😃 Glad you liked it😊😊

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