A note for the writing team.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi,


Not to bash the writers or troll them , i just want to say a few things about this show because this story is a story that I watch and I want to see where it goes.


The good part:


If I was to say it in one line - You have NAILED the Rudra-Maya equation to another level and MJ as a character minus his current growth as a villain. Rudra and Maya's story is very sensitively and intensely written - their antonym characters, the meeting of their darkness and light, their evolution as characters and how they helped each other and fought with each other for each other is an absolute brilliant spark of some great lovestory writing. So much so, that even the character dips which are common in daily shows due to the constant script producing and multiple changes ; even they have been taken care of when they come together as a package. One feels for their love story and against all odds want a happy ending for them. Two, MJ is awesome as a conniving villain - sex appeal, masochism, devilry, narcissism , manipulation , danger , cold charisma - he has it all and that's why he makes even the cringeworthy physical violence pass off. MJ is POTENTIALLY one of the best villains ever and you love to hate him. Thirdly, Rajeev - a seemingly uh-oh character in the start is such a relief in this dark story and the feelings of affection that he has for Nandini, Rudra and Maya make him lovable. You have woven him well into Maya's life - gradually but strongly. Wow. Well done. These are the reasons I watch this show.


The not-so-good part:


While the show handles the love story and emotional dynamics very well, the thriller part inspite of well meant attempts doesn't weave into a edge-of-the-seat drama that a thriller usually promises. Secondly, Maya's plans, her planning of 10 years , her adversaries , her future plans just don't fall together because there is no clarity on how Maya intended to punish her sinners. Thirdly, MJ is a potentially great villain but his display of villainy is turning out to be like those abusers we see in Savdhan India and Crime Patrol. He is losing all his 'class' and 'cold charisma' as a villain by the constant physical assaults. Four, Ananya could have been a great character who finds out Maya's story and supports the couple , but I see her reducing into a scorned woman first and a "shoulder" later for Rudra. Five, Nandini may have partial amnesia but even as a mother she has not been active in Maya's life. Six - Please don't fill the show with more characters than you can handle and do justice to. The main trio is already the fulcrum of the show - so, to do justice to the peripheral cast ( especially Aamir who is just a good looking furniture piece inspite of being a good actor ) , you have to keep them MINIMAL. You cannot have multiple characters, multiple tracks when you have such a powerful central story. Seventh and the most important point - I understand that you wanted MJ to be so ruthless that we hate him. Rudra is Maya's soul saviour. Maya is the bechaari sufferer. This has been accepted and the purpose has been served. NOW, MOVE THE STORY towards MJ Vs. Maya on equal footing, the fight for Rudra move a notch up and Rudra starting to notice his wife's terror and start peeling the onion he promised to peel. And no, your show won't end because there is still a LOTTTT of story to tell.


P.S- This post is just to give the writers a review of what is Wow and what is Bow-wow in this show. Please refrain from trolling them, making fun of them or insulting them. A daily show with multiple thoughts, views and TRP dependence is a very very pressurizing job and yet this team is doing a decent job despite all of that.


Today's episode review is not coming. And won't be coming for a few more days as I am waltzing in the world.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MoronsKiMallika

Hi,


Not to bash the writers or troll them , i just want to say a few things about this show because this story is a story that I watch and I want to see where it goes.


The good part:


If I was to say it in one line - You have NAILED the Rudra-Maya equation to another level and MJ as a character minus his current growth as a villain. Rudra and Maya's story is very sensitively and intensely written - their antonym characters, the meeting of their darkness and light, their evolution as characters and how they helped each other and fought with each other for each other is an absolute brilliant spark of some great lovestory writing. So much so, that even the character dips which are common in daily shows due to the constant script producing and multiple changes ; even they have been taken care of when they come together as a package. One feels for their love story and against all odds want a happy ending for them. Two, MJ is awesome as a conniving villain - sex appeal, masochism, devilry, narcissism , manipulation , danger , cold charisma - he has it all and that's why he makes even the cringeworthy physical violence pass off. MJ is POTENTIALLY one of the best villains ever and you love to hate him. Thirdly, Rajeev - a seemingly uh-oh character in the start is such a relief in this dark story and the feelings of affection that he has for Nandini, Rudra and Maya make him lovable. You have woven him well into Maya's life - gradually but strongly. Wow. Well done. These are the reasons I watch this show.


The not-so-good part:


While the show handles the love story and emotional dynamics very well, the thriller part inspite of well meant attempts doesn't weave into a edge-of-the-seat drama that a thriller usually promises. Secondly, Maya's plans, her planning of 10 years , her adversaries , her future plans just don't fall together because there is no clarity on how Maya intended to punish her sinners. Thirdly, MJ is a potentially great villain but his display of villainy is turning out to be like those abusers we see in Savdhan India and Crime Patrol. He is losing all his 'class' and 'cold charisma' as a villain by the constant physical assaults. Four, Ananya could have been a great character who finds out Maya's story and supports the couple , but I see her reducing into a scorned woman first and a "shoulder" later for Rudra. Five, Nandini may have partial amnesia but even as a mother she has not been active in Maya's life. Six - Please don't fill the show with more characters than you can handle and do justice to. The main trio is already the fulcrum of the show - so, to do justice to the peripheral cast ( especially Aamir who is just a good looking furniture piece inspite of being a good actor ) , you have to keep them MINIMAL. You cannot have multiple characters, multiple tracks when you have such a powerful central story. Seventh and the most important point - I understand that you wanted MJ to be so ruthless that we hate him. Rudra is Maya's soul saviour. Maya is the bechaari sufferer. This has been accepted and the purpose has been served. NOW, MOVE THE STORY towards MJ Vs. Maya on equal footing, the fight for Rudra move a notch up and Rudra starting to notice his wife's terror and start peeling the onion he promised to peel. And no, your show won't end because there is still a LOTTTT of story to tell.


P.S- This post is just to give the writers a review of what is Wow and what is Bow-wow in this show. Please refrain from trolling them, making fun of them or insulting them. A daily show with multiple thoughts, views and TRP dependence is a very very pressurizing job and yet this team is doing a decent job despite all of that.


Today's episode review is not coming. And won't be coming for a few more days as I am waltzing in the world.


👏


Well said and well thought out.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cinnamonn


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Well said and well thought out.


Thank you so much, Cinnamonn. ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Great post your points are top really cvs and beyhadh team needs to read them

They added another character which is not so need also I'm missing my bindaas Maya Jaisingh a lots I understand she has the guts to face mj after all he done (cut her hair and tearing her up) but as mentioned 10 years is so long she has to face him even yesterday precap get excited today precap fade away

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivI10

Great post your points are top really cvs and beyhadh team needs to read them

They added another character which is not so need also I'm missing my bindaas Maya Jaisingh a lots I understand she has the guts to face mj after all he done (cut her hair and tearing her up) but as mentioned 10 years is so long she has to face him even yesterday precap get excited today precap fade away


Thank you, Divz. ❤️....The problem is not in adding characters, the problem is that you cannot milk them and they seem like episodic Poppins. Rudra's love for Maya is her strength , true, she is strong , true - but she needs to be pulled out of this RECYCLING TRAUMA so that she stops shivering in front of MJ. Bahot darna ho gayaa, abb use ek karate chop do. There needs to be a TURNING POINT to stop Maya from reliving the same trauma over and over and over. Ho gayaa abhee. Next milestone please.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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As usual to the point post.👍🏼 I loved your analysis for all the characters.😃

Infact was watching a previous episode where Rajeev said that we have planned for 8 years hence we cannot go wrong anywhere. This is the planning that needs more visibility, like they would have thought out every probable action.

Similarly as you said for MJ, we need more than just him being touchy or threatening/blackmailing her by using Nandini or Rajeev like the typical villians. Ashish is doing a great job with MJ's character. Should make full use of the potential.

And kudos to the team for MayRa's portrayal .❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

As usual to the point post.👍🏼 I loved your analysis for all the characters.😃

Infact was watching a previous episode where Rajeev said that we have planned for 8 years hence we cannot go wrong anywhere. This is the planning that needs more visibility, like they would have thought out every probable action.

Similarly as you said for MJ, we need more than just him being touchy or threatening/blackmailing her by using Nandini or Rajeev like the typical villians. Ashish is doing a great job with MJ's character. Should make full use of the potential.

And kudos to the team for MayRa's portrayal .❤️


Thank you, Ayushi. ❤️.....Exactly. If you have planned for 8 years , your revenge track against every character , all your moves, back up plans should be on PAPER like a chess board you have designed- but it never happened here. MJ is absolute detestable eye candy , but I don't want him to see as a villain out of Crime Patrol and Savdhan India. That's not the MJ we want to see.


Rudra and Maya stop me from losing interest for now, at least. Such potential this story has and it even shows, and then....well.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MoronsKiMallika


Thank you, Divz. ❤️....The problem is not in adding characters, the problem is that you cannot milk them and they seem like episodic Poppins. Rudra's love for Maya is her strength , true, she is strong , true - but she needs to be pulled out of this RECYCLING TRAUMA so that she stops shivering in front of MJ. Bahot darna ho gayaa, abb use ek karate chop do. There needs to be a TURNING POINT to stop Maya from reliving the same trauma over and over and over. Ho gayaa abhee. Next milestone please.


Yes right it's been more than weeks the Maya entry time was great like she actually faced him and challenged him but now.. I don't know what the point will be the turning point for Maya Jaisingh


Here I hoped unintentionally mj ll hurt Rudra but he brought a bodyguard for him

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Posted: 5 years ago
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M gonna miss u dear 🤗


I agree that in the story of hate revenge and deception, the love story has been beautifully written...their dynamics have been well taken care of.. but the problem is the makers have lack of consistency in the pace of the show..


But since the makers have to bring all the characters under one roof hence all this build up.. again I dont find any need of new ppl for no reason.. even this new entry looks like is not gonna have too much to do.. the whole scene was parallel to bringing Nandini and her words about the mauli she tied to both Maya and Rudra.. she is the protector of both here and aditya is an illusion like shruti said.. even being the so called kaala dhaaga he will turn useless..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivI10


Yes right it's been more than weeks the Maya entry time was great like she actually faced him and challenged him but now.. I don't know what the point will be the turning point for Maya Jaisingh


Here I hoped unintentionally mj ll hurt Rudra but he brought a bodyguard for him


MJ will hurt Rudra - usski haddi mein hi shaitaani hai.

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