Tiara's write up corner- Mayra/Beyhadh2 update pg 12( 18th April) - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: 69_Anushka

This is hot !! ☺️🔥👌

Love it .

Btw Tia I think you mistakenly wrote Varun in the beginning 🤔.

...ooob i was reading a book for inspiration and his character name was varun...main itna deep kyu ghus jati hu character ke sath🤣


Thanks i changed it🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful works sorry for not commenting earlier😭 we want to see(read) Maya go top☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hot yar.. Love it u did phd in romantic angle ☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wild romance of MayRa☺️ It was too hot, intense and emotional

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiaraa

He carried his limp form to the car and drove like a maniac on the road to reach hospital. All the time he carried the thought of loosing him. He never considered rishi as justbrother but he was his son too. He loved him that immensely! And wanted to protect rishi from all the ugly truth of the world.

Rudra stepped out of his car , screaming and asking for the help. Soon two ward boys comes out with stretcher and rishi is been taken inside. Rudra cared least about his car and left it with door open as he followd them in.

He saw police walking inside the room where rishi is kept and then emerged back before his eyez.

" I am sorry sir. He is no more."

As if his legs gave up on him and his world has collapsed before his eyes. The words that haunted him as he repeated. Rishi!!!! He screamed his name and ran towards rishi where doctors were standing at a feet distance.

He saw the blood thay began to thicken making a pool below the bed.

Rudra replayed the wonderful moment they livef together and sobbed uncontrollable

The body is suppose to discharge from the icu room for other emergency and hence the stretcher was once again ready to take the body away. Rudra objected people and asked them to treat him make him alive. Every body knew rishi was gone.

There was nothing rudra could do to save his brother. Love has once again stealed someone precious from his life. His eyes were pool of tears. His lips became dry and hoarse due to crying.

Rishi was dragged by a ward boy when rudra once again stopped him midway. The impact made rishi's hand fall on side. A medical practitioner who was passing by had stopped and witnessed the whole tragedy before her eyes , saw the hand sticking out of the white viel. She gently picked the hand up and was about to tuck inside the white cloth when she faintly felt a pulse beeping beneathe her thumb

"He is alive " she screamed almost out of pure unbelief

Everybody rushed towards her. The doctor looked at her sternly and almost dissmissed her while she argued for rishi to be alive. His pulse was weak but it was very much there.

Rudra rushed to her and seperated her from the crowd.

" can you save him?" He asked with a hope of her answering in yes.

She nods. Thats all! And once again the nurse were in with the woman and rishi in the ward.

Rudra didnt ler anyone other than them to step in , not even the doctors who checked rishi were allowed.

He waited for 20 min and in that dean, admin were called to give rudra a reality check on rules and regulation. He didnt give a damn about who says what and stood there waiting for the woman who claimed rishi to be alive come out . another hour passed he was growing restless. The door only opened when nurses wanted any medicine or any equipment. He was worried but he trusted god. He cannot do injustice to him. He cannot take away the only person he loved from his life. God cannot be that merciless!

After few more minutes finally the door open and the she came out . she looked exhausted. She took a few deep breath as rudra waited for her to speak.

"He is alive " she said it and like someome gave him his life back. He couldnt help but hug her out of happiness as he cried.

"Thankyou ..thankyou" he repeated. She patted him understanding his feelings as when he stepped out of hug she gave him a smile " he is out due to the medicines.you cannot meet him for 3 hours. But he is fine!" She said and walked away.

"Thankyou Dr..?"

She turned and smiled "Myra"

Maya saw them at a safe distance as she fisted her hands together. Behind rajeev paid the doctor and police while maya smirked!


I wish this actually happened in the show! 😭 This is a balm for us ❤️ Thank you for writing this!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiaraa

The insecurities



After dinner maya took Rudra upstairs to her bedroom. "Freshen up in the bathroom while I get you a clean pair of clothes to wear."

Rudra took a long hot shower. But when he stepped out he refused to touch the clothes of that b**tard. He knew it was immature of him to think so but he couldnt make himself wear the same clothes that his father use to wear once.

He wrapped the towel and came out only to find maya already changing bed with new bedsheets. A sinister smile appears on his lips as he observed how those tiny droplet of water were forming in the end of her hair and were disappearing between the valley if her chest.

Maya felt his stare on her but she didnt bother to turn. She remained in the same position finishing the task at hand.

" you didnt wear the clothes i gave you." She questioned as she noticed him only in towel.

"I dont want to-" rudra shuts his eyes and inhale sharply.

" to smell like him on my bed." There was a challenge in her eyes .

" so you remember his smell. How he felt there.?" He pointed at bed . maya had to shift her weight in awkwardness. Of course she remembers each and everything about her destroyer. He was a part of her and that truth never changed. No matter how much she hated him.

He saw her fidgeting with her fingers and dont know why but he asked.. " did you like him touching you?"

The question beated in his mind ever since he found out maya was pregnant with mj's baby. The mere thought of intimacy lashed the demon in him for release. Onlu he knows how he was controlling and pretending to be calm ever since.

" rudra.."

"Just answer me" he refused to give in to her begging eyes. She wanted him to stop at whereever he was going. It would only hurt him even more.

"You never asked me anything about Rishi or whether or not i had sex with him."

His eyes sting..he hated himself..he hated this between them..he wanted to kill her and kill himself at the same time. He felt hurt..he felt betrayed..he felt jealous..he felt pain..he felt everything that was driving him more insane..it was so wrong of him and her standing under same roof forget about the relationship they share..but yet all he felt with her was home. He wanted to run but all his paths lead to her..he was destructed by his own emotions.

" Did you?" He asked in demonic tone.


Maya sighed, " it doesnt matter who touched my body. Its only you who got the real maya. Me, my emotions..this feelings all this are only for you rudra."

Her reply didnt please him. He knew she is a passionate woman. And she did had a good share with the men she was associated with. She was playing with words and he could see through them. Her...

Her lies made her more appealing for unknown reason. She was driving him insane by just being standing there in front of him.

He wanted Her to forget any traces of ay men left in her memories..he wanted to own her mind body and soul compeltely. He couldnt stand even a piece of her being shared with anyone. He was going crazy and this crazy beast demanded to take control. So he did!

He went towards her and pulled her to him before crashing his lips on top of her and fighting for dominance. Maya met his kiss with equal amount of passion. But when he ripped her night clothes apart, she matched him by ripping the towel around him and grabbing him.

Soon they were having wild and animal sex on the same bed she had shared with that devil. He was not only claiming her but he was also wiping out all the memories of any man and filled her with only his.


Much later when finally she couldnt take more..he stopped to give her rest. He wanted to destroy her as she was destroying him slowly from inside. He was laying wide awake on bed while she was sleeping in his arms.

"I am sorry." He kissed her forehead. He knew she was his with every way a woman could be of a man. But ...this feeling just tormented him to do something worst..

She was a poison she was like a death. She was killing his conscience and sadly he was enjoying being burnt in it.

Good or bad! Right or wrong!

..the lines have faded for them..

She was like this sweet addiction that he knew will kill him one day. But he was ready for it. More ready than ever. He felt like a moth and she was his fire...

.......


Well fam, you write intense romance scenes really well! Dang the way you expressed their emotions! Rudra‘s sweet addiction and also what’s gonna kill him 😭 Thank you for writing this!
❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Beautiful works sorry for not commenting earlier😭 we want to see(read) Maya go top☺️

...someone is getting gutter vibes here☺️🤣
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Anu95_

Hot yar.. Love it u did phd in romantic angle ☺️

i took ekta mam's pvt tution😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranurosid

Wild romance of MayRa☺️ It was too hot, intense and emotional

thanks🤗 Rudra knowing about rishi and mj and still failing yo give up on his addiction was the motive of that update😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tahiti-1


I wish this actually happened in the show! 😭 This is a balm for us ❤️ Thank you for writing this!

i know..i wanted rishi to live


Thankyou🤗

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