AdiYa OS: Tied By Affection - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Adiya as parents are just adorable.❤️ Loved the OS
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Zenab78

This is fabulous Aarohi 🤗

Thank you so much Zenu 🤗

This is one of the best OS I have come across on IF
Aww Means a Lot Darling ❤️
You are an amazing writer dear 👏
Thank you Once again 🤗
They married for sake of their kids
And had a perfect family
I was shocked to Know Adya was not Adi's real daughter but he is best as a person and even as a father
Adi as a father brought out the best in him , He wanted to be father he fought with Pooja to keep his child but unfortunately his child died and Adya came into his life as a light in his darkness giving him all the happiness he was to get deprived 😭
Then little Ayyan who was deprived of father's love 😭
Adi was the bestest father Ayyan could have asked for
He was so attached with his Dad
Zoya is so caring and loving
MummyZo She loved her children with equality
She treated all her kids equally ❤️
AdiYa were amazing as parents and as companion
Agree 😳
They are cutest couple who never go out without their munchkins 😳
That's their quality they were bond into marriage because of their kids
Then arrived new member of their little family Aradhya
Hamara Aaru
The four of them had best moments of their lives when the youngest member of family was on her way
My Favorite Part was when Adya spoke to Zoya's protruding tummy I Loved writing that part
Adi is so caring but Poor guy landed in mess while taking care of her wifey
Only A Woman can carry out responsibility single handle
And Tom sleepy head 😆 He got all attention of ladies of Hooda clan
Poor Sweet Little Tommy And Zenu u know what I am the Jerry There 😆
I loved how beautifully your wrote about three of them growing
*bows down*
Singhania brothers were cutest ❤️
Aarav & Arnav
I personally fell in love with both brothers
Me to mainly Aarav
This was cute and unique family of Overprotective Papa , Drama queen Mumma ,2 princess and flirty Ayyan
haha true 😆
Aarav oh boy he was so scared of Adi's revolver 😆
Fathers 😆
Adi is so overprotective about his daughters he was jealous of 6 yr kid and his warning to 9 yrs boy to stay away 😆Zoya was great as mother and even as MIL she messaged him asking about becoming a father like Adi at 3 am 😆
Adi and his man-to-man talk 😆
I Loved writing the last suhagarat part 😆 bechari Aarav 😆

Love between all three of them ❤️
❤️
I hated Pooja she is so selfish lady 😡
Me too hating 🤢
I was crying after reading some parts it was beautifully penned
It was like a roller coaster ride full of ups and downs
I cried half of the time while reading this
It was emotional and touchy 😭
Zenu while writing i was on verge of tears in some parts that brought out my feelings in writing 😭
Beautiful os dear
I fell in love with this OS
🤗
AdiYa's journey was amazing like their perfect fam ❤️
Keep up the brilliant work
I takes a lot of hardwork to write such long updates
Kudos 👏


Love ❤️

Thanks Once Again Love you to Darling
And your comment makes my day
Thank you for a longer one ❤️



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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Best Best Best Os i have read so far. How bfully u wrote AdiYa story from beginning to end. How they become one for their children. U touched every expect of our society in this story.
Loved AdiYa equation, their relationship with children, siblings realtion with each other, their personal lives and weddings. Ufff Amazing.
Aroo dear u always brought a smile with ur stories on my face dear. Thnx ;)


Thank you so much di
Glad u loved it :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Nice os dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Indeed you are one of the best writers on IF
this story held realization , love , companionship , understanding
care , warmth and family togetherness
this was such a Beautiful story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
What a journey you took us in
I loved it so much

It is sooo long for one shot but I loved every second I spent reading it

Story full of feelings and love
love between parents and kids
love between life partners
love between friends

I loved it so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Res..


Unres..
So finally Aaru I am here to unres this!!
It was a PHENOMENAL shot girl!
You nailed it!!
The best fiction on AdiYa I have read so far..
Totally amazing Loved it!!
It was Lit!!
I felt like I am watching a movie with each passing moment!
So beautiful!
And the title is also so beautiful!!

Okay starting from Aditya and Zoya's beginning!!
The awkwardness yet comfort was there when they were talking about their past!
Honestly speaking Yash and Pooja don't even deserve my curses..
It is their lose that they lost amazing partners like AdiYa!!
Pooja is literally someone I terribly want to kill here and the show myself..
Anyways...
I felt extremely bad for Aditya!
He wasn't even given a chance to feel his baby...
And Zoya she is my strong girl!
Loved her character!!


Coming to the sweet babies!!
The siblings were so cute!!
The way Adya started to cry just by seeing Ayaan cry was really true.
It happens in actual!
I liked the way you kept it natural Aaru.
I enjoyed the presence of babies throughout the OS!
You carried them along in a magnificent way!
Loved it too!!


Moving on...
Aditya needs to keep a check on his temper..
He can't allege Zoya like this..
I really felt bad on this...
But I can't believe that Adya isn't Adi's daughter...
I mean she is so so so much similar to them..
So Noor and Arjun were Adya's real parents!!
My heart went out by even thinking ArNoor as dead but never mind as the story goes!!


Pooja not again!
She is really annoying!!
Good that Zoya gave her what she deserved!!
I loved the tigress Zoya!!❤️
I for not even a moment felt that Adi is over hyping!!
He was so like a real father!!


Coming to Adi's cute possessiveness for his daughters!
That was really cute!
TBH, I got it that moment only when Aarav said those mature words...
I knew Adi has melted down!
Both Aarav and Arnav were really cute!!😆
The way Aarav was scared of Adi was so funny!


Ayaan's protectiveness towards Adya reminded me of my brother!!
I could clearly see the similarity!!
Brother's are always protective for their sisters no matter what..
It's just that we sisters never get to know that they are standing behind us pointing a revolver on the people..


Ayaan's and Aaru's love story was really cute too.
Hahaha Ayaan played cupid in Adya's love story..
I loved the siblings bond a lot..!


Coming back to AdiYa again!
I enjoyed naughty Zoya a lot!!
The way she teased Adi at night was really worth of being watched!!
Adi is also no less!!
The way they both took their children on date with was really sweet!!
I loved the whole journey!!


Now the most important relation of this OS!
Adi's and Adya's!!
Oh man! It was so relate-able!
I felt like watching my family in it!
Their bond was really beautiful!!
Specially Adi's worry when Adya got married...
The way Adya reacted the same way as Adi thought..
Their chat...
I LOVED IT!!

Whole in whole it was amazing!
A beautiful piece of creativity indeed!!
Loved it!!❤️
Do continue writing such amazing stories!!




Oh My That was A Long Comment !! Thank you So Much Mainu Darling 🤗
The Title I Personally Love it Glad U like it too
Glad to know U felt like watching a movie that means a lot 🤗
Zo & Adi are two characters bonded together for their kids
Yash & Pooja they deserved to be strangle 🤢 I Give ur the honor of doing that 😆
U Know what more ? I was personally into Adi's Character more !
Siblings bond well 😆😆 Was Really Fun writing it
And I could remember in your Profile u Cannot see tears in anyone's eyes I personally think the bond between siblings somewhat suits u ? the qualities maybe

The Bond Formed between two people bcoz of affection is more than blood
Adya was with Adya since she was born afterall how could she not inherit his features?
Mens Will Be Mens Scream Before Woman Reasons😔
Well I was planning to kill yash & pooja by making them as Adya's parents but I needed them for the other 🥱
Fathers are Like that Over-Possessive and Over-Protective
Isn't that We Girls Love the most from Fathers?😆 although at times it ikrs 😆
Zoya's naughtiness LOL My Boy Just want sometime with His wife 😆😆
"We Do it While Walking?" 🤣

Personally Another Character I enjoyed writing is Aarav mine he is so cute 😆😆
and the asking hand scene from Adi 😆
Brothers would be brothers even I got myself a brother who irritates me to the hell but same he does protects us but we never know
The Last Part My Poor Aarav that man wanted to have his suhagraat 😆😆

Glad to Know Mainu that you enjoyed reading it a lot
And It resembles ur family ❤️

Thanks Once Again Love 🤗
Have A Look at My Other One Shots If Interested
Thank you 😳


Edited by sh_aarohi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cooldilkaur

Beautiful and lovely os
Fabulously written
U r an awesome writer arohi 👏
Ty 4 d pm too


thank you so much dear
It means a lot :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Thank you so much dear 😳

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