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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: diatoms82

Wow.. Lovely update .. Loved how Aditya is helping her & being her strength in these testing times. Would love to see how it goes from here... I don't want her to leave Hooda house now..😉


Thank you so much!! 😊
There's still some time before leaving so let's see... :D ;)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh

Lovely update, Priya. So finally Zoya acknowledged the dear freind Adi has become to her at least to herself.

Waiting to see when it changes to fullfledged feelings.. Its gonna take time but would make an interesting read for sure. Great job !


Thank you so much Sudha! 😊
Yeah, Zoya has realized her changing dynamics with him. And now we'll see how it, as you stated, becomes full-fledged. ;)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sezo

They are finely becoming friend.

What about her family. Won't she get I touch with them
Will she go back home
What will she do now.
So many questions.
It's a amazing story plz continue soon. I always look out for this story just so I don't miss any parts.
This is one of my favourite stories on this forum. Plz update sooner
I know it's easier said tha. Done but the reader in.me doesn't like waiting
Take your time I'll always always look out for your updates.


Thanks a lot for those lovely words! 😊
I get delayed in sending PMs coz I individually sent it to only those who asked/are interested. Will try and send PMs on time from now on :)
Coming to your questions- all in due time ;)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Doc.love

I am in an AdiYa dreamland!!!

This is a masterpiece that you have written. I have said this before, and I would like to repeat- Please convert this ff into a proper novel. It has all the ingredients to become a hit!!! Please trust me on that!
You are a brilliant writer mashaAllah.. 👏⭐️ When I read your ff, it always involves me completely and leaves me wanting for more! THANK YOU for this ff!❤️
This part was great too...as all other previous chapters... Adi is such a sweet man yar! Felt bad for Zo though..
I am just very excited to find out how Zo will develop lovey dovey feelings for Adi now...😳😆
Please update soon! Its soo hard to wait! 😳😃
Lots of love..❤️


Thanks so much, Ayesha! 😊
Your comments really brighten up my day.
I am very very happy that you're enjoying the fic so thoroughly. Hope the future updates can keep up :D
The Ireland chapter is done now and story has moved to Mumbai... so let's see how it progresses here :D
Will be updating soon (in fact almost done with a couple of parts so will update a bit faster this time)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

OKAY I LOVEEE HOW LONG YOUR UPDATES ARE!!! ❤️
Sooo this was absolutely cute and sad at the same time. Adi is so freaking perfect ! The way he tries to help Zoya all the time ohmygosh! do men like him even exist???


Thanks a lot Ishana! 😊
@question- I'd like to think/hope so. 😆 (Fiction is inspired from real life)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

i am glad that Aditya is with her during this difficult situation...he was being a good friend...totally loving this...


Thank you Ayushi! 😊
Adi is being her rock. Glad you're liking the progress!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine_kk

The way you've written about Aditya being there for her was awesome. Thats how people should be with their beloved ones during their testing times. Loved reading the part and loved how Aditya and Zoya's relationship is culminating slowly into a meaningful one.
Good job. Waiting for your next update.


Thanks so much! 😊
I am glad you liked those bits with Adi helping Zo out in what ever way he could. (I didn't want him to be too imposing. Just wanted to write what could happen naturally).
Will be updating the next part shortly.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Chapter 11

Awesome update 👏
I loved reading every word of this story.
Aditya bought a suitcase for Zoya? Definitely not what I imagined his first gift for her to be...but it was a sweet gesture.
Zoya dear...Ivy is saying the truth. Aditya really does care for you. He wasn't just acting. 😆
OMG Aditya is going to drop her off to Dublin? This man is already in love or what? I love that she is finally starting to see the truth in Ivy's words. Oh my poor heart can't handle a gentlemanly Aditya. 😳
Aditya himself is confused as to why he wants to drop her all the way to Dublin.
'It dawned on him that the universe, just, might be on his side.' I love this line. They both don't realize how true it is. Universe really doesn't want Zoya to go to Dublin.
So now they are taking a bus to Dublin...man this will be a trip to remember.
Aditya almost doesn't want to leave Zoya, but he still doesn't understand what's happening to him.
Let's see where the universe takes them now 😉
Thanks a lot for the PM


Everytime I see a review from you I do a little happy dance 😆
Zo had been carrying the shopping bags from Delhi airport since days. Adi thought it was high time she had a proper suitcase :D
He can't understand why he is doing one silly thing after another. Guy's too confused. And Ivy has put some seeds of doubt/clarity in Zo's mind.
Thanks so much!! 😊 Off to read your next feedback!


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Chapter 12

Ahhh what an amazing update 👏
Aditya and Zoya have reached Dublin. A journey that should've taken a couple of hours, took them a whole week.
Aditya knows (or at least suspects) something fishy about this whole lack of communication situation but who would explain this to a lovesick Zoya.
Is Aditya feeling bad that Zoya is going to marry her boyfriend? Man, that would be a treat to read.
OMG Zoya doesn't want Adi to leave yet so she asked him to come with her. AND he said yes! Ahhh my weak heart...Zoya babe, you will realize soon why you wanted him to stay. 😃
She held his hand...though for like a few seconds but still 😳
Oh no...Yash lied to Zoya about his whereabouts. 😡 Mahi told her the truth. I will kill Yash for hurting Zoya.
I'm glad that Adi was there to support her, when she needed it the most. Universe made him stay with her.
I can't believe she travelled alone to a different country for a guy like Yash who is possibly two-timing her and obviously doesn't care enough.
Aditya...this is where you step in. I really hope he can comfort Zoya and bring her out of this betrayal.
You know what surprises me the most? The fact that these two people (who were practically strangers a week ago) are so comfortable with each other.
This story gets better with each update. I just love it.
Thanks for the PM dear.


I am so glad you're liking the slow transformation in their relationship.
These 2 strangers, who may not have even interacted if not for their circumstances, are now becoming dependent on one another, unintentionally. That is what I wanted to write and I am happy that it's coming across. Your feedback helps me understand if what I pictured/wrote is in tandem with someone else's understanding. So I really appreciate all your feedback.
Thanks a lot for this one too. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Chapter 13

Another amazing update 👏 just like this entire story
Poor Zoya...she is re-evaluating her decisions of being with Yash for a year and still getting lied to.
I'm sad that Zoya is hurt but I'm also happy because now it will give way for Aditya in her life.
Aditya is the perfect person for company. He knows when to give space and when to talk.
So the possibility that Yash is cheating finally enters her mind.
Aditya is so smart...using the 'Find My iPhone' feature. Yash toh gaya 😆
Whoa...Aditya is ready to go back to Mumbai with Zoya leaving his work. This guy is already going crazy in love.
I love how he is so caring for Zoya even though they met only a week ago.
Uh-oh...he dropped the bomb. 'He is cheating on you'
Finally his past is starting to get revealed. I have been waiting for this since forever.
Pooja cheated on Aditya and Aditya caught her red-handed. I have a feeling the man he saw her with was Yash 😡 Wait but if it's Yash and this was 2 years ago, then it means that he had been lying to Zoya since the beginning of their relationship. The entire 1 year together was a lie. Pooja and Yash are 🤬
Aditya is right...Yash is cheating on her. I just hope Zoya won't be blind to all these possibilities because of her love.
Ahhh I have simply fallen in love with the story long time ago but with each update, I keep getting addicted. ❤️
Thanks a lot for the PM dear


I was contemplating some "filmy" ways of making Adi find Yash's location when the simplest one (find my iPhone) struck me 😆
Adi is making one decision after another coz like you said - maybe he is crazy in love (though he hasn't realized it yet) :D
Adi's backstory shed some light as to why he would kinda directly go the "he's cheating on you" route. All about Yash's secret, Zo's reaction in the next 2 updates. Can't wait to read your views on the future updates.
Thank you!! 😊 (I really can't emphasize enough).

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