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@Ayraa-MK

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Posted: 6 years ago

#181

finally the update is here, Such a fun chap, i loved reading the awkwardness between them and loved tte part how they both opn up abt their pain to each other, loved the stranger concept, story just getting better and better

Hoping to read more soon :)

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 6 years ago

#182

such a beautiful update...

You beautifully portrayed the growth of connection between them... They are sharing their inner thoughts and Aditya had opened up about his parents which is very difficult for him...he definitely feels something for her...on the other side something is not adding up on yash...he is not so intrested in zoya it seems but she is brushing it off... so Aditya lied about valentines day... maybe it's too personal to share it with her

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#183

This is Evan better than the movie

Can't wait to read what happens next.

Thanks for pm as always

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@A.Kh_20

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Posted: 6 years ago

#184

Ok so he lied because his father must be cheating with aditya's gf or wife right!!! just taking a guess. anyway awesome progress finally a glimpse of yash!!

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

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Posted: 6 years ago

#185

I love your parts 8 and 9

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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 6 years ago

#186

They're opening upto each other. That's really nice to see. Can't wait for more :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: ikhtiyar.
An update! 🥳 I always knew something's off about Yash. 9.40 pm and 'way past midnight'? Hmm so Europe and India almost have a 5 hour difference. Yash is still in India?! Or did he come back to India after that trip without informing Zo about it ?

Adi opening up so much was a surprise. He lies about VDay in the end. Woahhh..

Okay I just love your FF. It's so so interesting Update soon though

Thank you so much! 😊

@the theory- It's an interesting one but at this stage will neither confirm nor deny 😆

They are slowly opening up to one another. Happy that you found the turn of events interesting.

Will be putting up the next part soon

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Meeph
This FF is really Interesting.
Love how you update without long gaps.
Keep up the great work!

Thanks a ton!! 😊

I try an update every few days. Will be updating the next part soon

Thanks again for reading!

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh
Story is getting more interesting...
Adi and Zoya are coming more closer not just physical but emotionally which was evident with the way they shared their feelings and pain with each other without any hesitation... Enjoyed reading it... Good going.

Thank you!! 😊

(I missed reading your view on the last part so glad to see it now)

AdiYa are, like you said, slowly bonding but they have some more way to go.

Thanks again!

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 6 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Woahhh! Lovely update!!! 😃😃 Enjoyed it soo much!
Zoya and Adi are connecting so beautifully... 😳 The way both shared their inner most feelings with each other, that was soo good to read! Adi tou is a gone case and he has already fallen for her, that we know, but even Zoya is getting close and comfortable around him...that was great!
Yashhh! 😲 Something is definitely going wrong behind Zoya's back... and the way the thought of Yash not being accepted by her dad nagged her, and she discussed it with Aditya, that shows the depth of character of this girl. I mean, she might look too independent, travelling across continents , chasing her boyfriend, approaching Aditya first... even initiating that kiss.. She might look forward and casual...maybe careless too...but deep down, your Zoya Siddiqui has a depth and integrity...and that was soo sweet to read. She cares for everyone around... 😊😊
Please update the next part soon... Cant wait! 😳😳

Thanks Ayesha, for this lovely review! 😊

Loved reading your view on Zoya. This impromptu trip of Ireland by Zoya has let her come out of her comfort zone. She's led a quite sheltered life but now, as you point you, she is kinda coming out of her shell and initiating things. I agree she is a bit naive (maybe careless) wrt what she has done (like show!Zoya was pre-leap).

Adi is already, like you wrote, gone case 😆

So happy to know that you liked the flow and even happier at reading your analysis on Zoya and AdiYa.

Will be updating part 10 soon :)