AdiYa FF: In The Stars | Completed - Page 13

Originally posted by: jusschillin

JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER WITH EVERY PART!!!

Totally understand what Aditya is going through.

Loving the suspense you have added, even after reading the reader is still so unaware.😆

Thank you so much for the pm once again, much appreciated :)

CANT WAIT FOR MORE

Originally posted by: Adiya_fan

This story is simply ❤️

Thank you so much for the pm😊

Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh

Lovely update. Great going.

Though Zoya traveled all this way to celebrate Valentine day with Yash, I loved how she ends up wishing Adi which should have been with Yash,...

So Adi had parents problems here as well, and also there must be a woman involved... given his annoyance with the mention of valentine day. Waiting for the past to unfold.

Enjoyed reading it. Good job 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sezo

Thanks for pm.

That was fab update. I Loved How they both let each other know there fears. Well sort of.

Can't wait to read what happens next.

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Yayy...another update...another FABULOUS update 👏

Well I'm back to eat your brains with my long, boring comment...sorry

I'm running out of words to praise your writing. The portrayal of characters' emotions was done beautifully. I felt every bit of pain Aditya suffered in his past. It felt like I'm watching a movie as I could imagine these scenes playing out in front of me. You've done a really wonderful job writing this piece. ⭐️

Zoya attempt at making a conversation and lightening the atmosphere in such a grave situation is commendable.

So, she trusts Aditya enough to reveal her love life to him and her problems. Wow girl...that's the quickest anyone would've placed their trust in a complete stranger.

Valentines' Day brings up horrible memories for Aditya. He's still hurt over his father's betrayal and mother's blatant refusal at acknowledging it has led to Aditya taking out his anger on Zoya. 😭

It's great to see that Aditya still is an impulsive person who basically bursts out on anyone when in anger.

Whatever he said about Yash's plans is true. Maybe Yash made flying plans because he wanted Zoya to refuse and still show her that he cares when he doesn't? I'm not sure but just a small guess 🤔

Although unintentionally, Aditya and Zoya are celebrating Valentines' Day together and were the first ones to wish each other. 😳 My lovesick mind is blushing with all the more possibilities of romance happening in these situations.

Thanks a lot for the pm

Continue soon please...this keeps getting better and better.

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Wow such a lovely chap dear, Loved their convo, just loved it, how two strangers tried to talk and lessen the burden on their hearts but being AdiYa they nvr forgets to argue hahaha, both spent 14 Feb together Yaayyy! hoping to read next part soon dear and loving the element of suspense u put in story :)

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

wat Aditya said about yash's intension seems right

because yash knows about her fear and if he planned a trip without considering that is not at all romantic...

poor Aditya he is suffering because of his parents

Originally posted by: rashuaq

You are writing an amazing story dear.. Love it.. 😊