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Jaslee Saggi

@jusschillin

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Posted: 6 years ago

#111

JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER WITH EVERY PART!!!

Totally understand what Aditya is going through.

Loving the suspense you have added, even after reading the reader is still so unaware.😆

Thank you so much for the pm once again, much appreciated :)

CANT WAIT FOR MORE

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Adiya_fan

@Adiya_fan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#112

This story is simply ❤️

Thank you so much for the pm😊

Can't wait to read more!

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Sudha

@Sudharies

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Posted: 6 years ago

#113

Lovely update. Great going.

Though Zoya traveled all this way to celebrate Valentine day with Yash, I loved how she ends up wishing Adi which should have been with Yash,...

So Adi had parents problems here as well, and also there must be a woman involved... given his annoyance with the mention of valentine day. Waiting for the past to unfold.

Enjoyed reading it. Good job 👍🏼

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saira

@sezo

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Posted: 6 years ago

#114

Thanks for pm.

That was fab update. I Loved How they both let each other know there fears. Well sort of.

Can't wait to read what happens next.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#115

Yayy...another update...another FABULOUS update 👏

Well I'm back to eat your brains with my long, boring comment...sorry

I'm running out of words to praise your writing. The portrayal of characters' emotions was done beautifully. I felt every bit of pain Aditya suffered in his past. It felt like I'm watching a movie as I could imagine these scenes playing out in front of me. You've done a really wonderful job writing this piece. ⭐️

Zoya attempt at making a conversation and lightening the atmosphere in such a grave situation is commendable.

So, she trusts Aditya enough to reveal her love life to him and her problems. Wow girl...that's the quickest anyone would've placed their trust in a complete stranger.

Valentines' Day brings up horrible memories for Aditya. He's still hurt over his father's betrayal and mother's blatant refusal at acknowledging it has led to Aditya taking out his anger on Zoya. 😭

It's great to see that Aditya still is an impulsive person who basically bursts out on anyone when in anger.

Whatever he said about Yash's plans is true. Maybe Yash made flying plans because he wanted Zoya to refuse and still show her that he cares when he doesn't? I'm not sure but just a small guess 🤔

Although unintentionally, Aditya and Zoya are celebrating Valentines' Day together and were the first ones to wish each other. 😳 My lovesick mind is blushing with all the more possibilities of romance happening in these situations.

Thanks a lot for the pm

Continue soon please...this keeps getting better and better.

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@Ayraa-MK

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Posted: 6 years ago

#116

Wow such a lovely chap dear, Loved their convo, just loved it, how two strangers tried to talk and lessen the burden on their hearts but being AdiYa they nvr forgets to argue hahaha, both spent 14 Feb together Yaayyy! hoping to read next part soon dear and loving the element of suspense u put in story :)

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 6 years ago

#117

awesome update yar

wat Aditya said about yash's intension seems right

because yash knows about her fear and if he planned a trip without considering that is not at all romantic...

poor Aditya he is suffering because of his parents

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: itznimi003
Another lovely update priya👍🏼
Loved how zoya started convo😊 and adi's smile and started continue convo with her😳
Loved the way adi interrogate about yash👏
Who on earth plan terrible surprise foe her gf when yash now about her fear👏👏
Though zoya being zoya hogyi gussA😭
Loved how adi's small effort of manaofying her❤️
Awwee poor adi😭 about valentines😭
do pm me whenever u update

Thank you so much, Nimi! 😊

Adi hit the nail on head with regards to Yash's plan for her. Though is he right or just being surly because of his own baggage? ;)

I'll be updating the next part shortly. Thanks again for reading and sharing your views!

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
The Harshvardhan Hooda UGH He was never the loyal father 🥱 Poor Zoya, her naivety is her biggest weakness. I gotta agree with Aditya's pov where he was questioning Zoya about Yash planning a trip on a plane for her, when he clearly knows her problem with travelling. Though Adi had his own issues with Valentines day or his romantic past, he was correct. Now my eagerness is to see how these two strangers will bond further & get out of the mess 😊
+ the Chips reference 😆 It's their thing & the only missing element was a Cup of Black Coffee ❤️

Yeah, Harsh was never the loyal family-man and that kinda messed Adi up. But more on that in upcoming updates. WRT Yash, did Aditya catch on to something or was he just being snarky because of his own baggage on this day with the past? :D

These two strangers, sure, have some way to go before they reach their supposed destinations of Limerick/Dublin.

(Glad you liked the chips ref. Getting black coffee [in their current scenario] ]would have been a bit of a stretch so. :D)

Thank you so much for continuously reading and reviewing! 😊

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: ikhtiyar.
Following this story so closely. I too had doubts on Yash wanting to take her to Dublin. Kuch toh gadbad hai. The first ones to wish each other on Valentines day haan please update soon!

AdiYa had to be the first ones to wish each other irrespective of the situation :D

Though the day has just started in the fic-timeline 😉

I'll be updating the next part shortly.

Thanks a ton for always reading and sharing your thoughts! 😊