Updt: Chap1Pg5 07/01 PMsLtr | Learning to Breathe | AdiYa Short Story - Page 3

Very well written and would love to read what happens next 😊 I am Mandy btw. Please send me a PM when u next update.

Good job. Beautifully penned. He is conflicted. He wants to hate her but is unable to.

Originally posted by: Binzzz

Interesting...

Liked it...

thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Very well written and would love to read what happens next 😊 I am Mandy btw. Please send me a PM when u next update.

thank you for the review! I accepted your buddy request and will for sure send a pm (:

Originally posted by: SnehaDoll

Good job. Beautifully penned. He is conflicted. He wants to hate her but is unable to.

Usage of words is good, and I liked the way u started. Interesting storyline

thank you (:
At first I was just going to analyze his thoughts as the show progressed but then thought of my own storyline to write about

it was simply beautiful... ❤️

Originally posted by: Fee_Clochette

it was simply beautiful...❤️

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: -Tadibaaaz-

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<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This is very well written. You have penned down Adi's pain very beautifully. I am excited to see how they will fall for each other.</font>

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<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thanks for the pm.😳 Please update next part soon.</font>

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<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love,</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">P.S.-May I know your name please?😳</font>

Hey 🤗

Thank you so much for responding to the pm, it means a lot <3
I'm ashu 😳 and you?

I'm glad you are going to continue. I thought I missed the next p art I look forward to reading next part. Plz do pm.