Updt: Chap1Pg5 07/01 PMsLtr | Learning to Breathe | AdiYa Short Story - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
nice start
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Wow this looks too good. Zoya marries her Jiju Aditya for her sister's kid,.. Adi is furious with zara for being cheated , but gonna show it on Zoya... Sounds like an amazing plot... Looking forward to further chapters 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Superb start...
Adi is punishing Zoya for zara's infedility...poor soul...
Waiting to know what will happen
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Mona Darling!!!
It's a good thing you sent me the link. Why hadn't you PMed me before! Mera 1st comment hona chahiye tha😭😭 It's okay... Chalo... I'm t, forgiving you this one time😛
Coming to the chapter... Adi is on the revenge mode again!
But poor Zoya, she has done nothing to incur his wrath! It's all that b**ch Zara😡 But still... Though Adi is impulsive, I believe he's a softy from inside... dil ka bura nahi hai!
But I wonder what poor Zo has to go through by the time we see this soft side of Adi.
I can literally imagine Adi staring at Zoya while she's signing the papers if looks could kill, Zoya would have died already. I believe she wishes she'd rather be dead than be with him right?😆
Waiting for the story to unfold further.
Update soon!
And I want longer updates😭

Love,
Aapu
Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Wow dear the update is surprising. Adi is jiju to Zoya
It will be great to read this new story line. I hope in future he'll understand not all women are same. I hope he loves his daughter and not hate hr for his wife's action.
Amazing chapter. Plz update soon (:
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Didn't expect the Zara twist at all! What about the last line in the prologue or the first post? Her lover's widow will see his Bepannaah nafrat or something? Zoya is the widow of Zara's love ? Isn't she her sister? 🤔
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
update was simply amazing dear..loved it totally...
continue soon...
Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Zaras' mistake is costing her sisters life like how? 😕 Poor Raina, Hope she'll have a secured life. Aditya marrying his sister in law Zoya sounded definitely interesting & wonder how she'll be treated in their marriage..
Do pm the updates 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
I thought I might have missed another update. Hope all is well. Plz update soon .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi woodchuck 😆
Will read and comment.

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