where did cv's did error's !!!!!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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ok why we are not able to digest zoya take on poosh ..
why we feel she is doing wrong ..

where did cv's failed ?


no offense not bashing cv's because i love this show as all do i want to tell u where was the problem ...


1. dialogues of zoya's which are ott ..

2. instead of showing her arguing with adi they could have shown her thought process like monologue like this is not right i need to fight to clear yash name so that i won't have an guilt in future and bury his memories forever i won't forgive him .
3. FB of poosh had some minute errors that to from pooja side ...

they showed adi as quarrel some man that to on special occasion that to from pooja POV ...



instead of showing that birthday scene they could have shown poosh met and slowly connected then poosh discussing about there spouses and the affair ..

that would be better instead of making adi the culprit ..

but yash was far better he said zoya as delicate, unique it was poetic and realistic ..
4. these precap ruined the whole flow of the episode were zoya says "pakh"word which was OTT for normal ppl like us ...

5.dialogue writer of the show is awesome but some how past 2 weeks he/she is ruining zoya's characterization because of the dialogue given either its OTT and even beyond our head ...
young audience can't follow such big big words ...

6. using same words thousand times like "cheater husband ""me apne yash ko beguna saabit ""poosh ka pyar sacha tha"in every episodes from past week is really bugging ppl big time ...

7. better they tone down zoya a bit let her do what she wants silently ..

8.promo was big let down ...adi says i was good hubby to pooja i know that but zoya says"u were not i will teach u how to be good husband"does it makes sense ...a normal ppl will think who the hell she is to judge adi was bad hubby that pooja left why the hell she wants to teach thing as teacher ...



so main reason why episode fell flat was unrealistic dialogues given to zoya .
one scene of adi fighting in party made him fighter shetty so pooja hoped on yash and had affair because he knew to show chivalry...what crap logic cv's😡..



otherwise this diary thing would have been beautiful thing ...cv's messed it up a bit ..

but i must say everyone acted so well even shehbaan (i know everyone dont like him i like him as actor)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The diary was written by Pooja so they will show the story from her POV. Basically, what she meant was she organized the birthday party with so much love and excitement and Adi ruined it by quarreling with his dad. I agree they shouldn't have shown that scene but they had to show that Adi never understood her and that was one of the problems in their marriage.

I agree Zoya's dialogues are completely OTT. I wish she was sarcastic as Aditya because the dialogue writer is expert in writing sarcastic dialogues. Whosoever the dialogue writer is, he/she is not expert in writing philosophical dialogues.

The new promo was completely silly but it grabbed peoples attention so I guess the cvs succeeded in their efforts.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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heyy
good points there
i think the worst thing is - the dialogues of zoya - i think this made alot of people lost their brain cells today
otherwise i am liking adi/zoya character growth and really looking forward to the upcoming track
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yes totally annoyed by cv;s with this current track!

the only reason fandom is hyper on zoya is for those dialogues which makes no sense to me! W*F is paak about cheating on respective partners, PooSh love is true, i am okay with that! But calling it oh sooo right, no sorry it isnt! Cheating isnt right!

As you rightly stated on promo, just reading the pooja side of the story, zoya cannot come to a conclusion that Adi is a bad husband! It take two to make a marriage work! Pooja was equally responsible to fix things for Adi esp on his relationship with his parents! Did pooja ever try that? She wanted love, agree! But did she try explaining the same to her so called best friend?

Second zoya, is taking all the blame of being a bad wife that she dint understand her husband. But then why did yash come into a conclusion that zoya would not understand his problem? why didnt he every try to communicate his problems with her? He calls zoya innocent , so does that mean he used her innocence to cheat on her?

All these questions are unanswered by cv's! I am really hoping they come up with better justification for whole betrayal thingy!

And yes please dont ruin zoya;s character! I am glad she is non-judgemental aboit PooSh's relationship! It takes guts to accept a partner's betrayal and i am proud of her, but dont portray zoya as stupid to consider that all flaws are from her and Adi's side!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tulips-

The diary was written by Pooja so they will show the story from her POV. Basically, what she meant was she organized the birthday party with so much love and excitement and Adi ruined it by quarreling with his dad. I agree they shouldn't have shown that scene but they had to show that Adi never understood her and that was one of the problems in their marriage.

I agree Zoya's dialogues are completely OTT. I wish she was sarcastic as Aditya because the dialogue writer is expert in writing sarcastic dialogues. Whosoever the dialogue writer is, he/she is not expert in writing philosophical dialogues.

The new promo was completely silly but it grabbed peoples attention so I guess the cvs succeeded in their efforts.



that scene i really didn't like ..
adi has a reason to fight his dad might be the reason ..
pooja claims that she was his childhood sweetheart then she should why adi behaves that way..

that scene looked odd no offense


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maryam2

heyy

good points there
i think the worst thing is - the dialogues of zoya - i think this made alot of people lost their brain cells today
otherwise i am liking adi/zoya character growth and really looking forward to the upcoming track


wahi tho her dialogues are way too unrealistic 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetha

yes totally annoyed by cv;s with this current track!


the only reason fandom is hyper on zoya is for those dialogues which makes no sense to me! W*F is paak about cheating on respective partners, PooSh love is true, i am okay with that! But calling it oh sooo right, no sorry it isnt! Cheating isnt right!

As you rightly stated on promo, just reading the pooja side of the story, zoya cannot come to a conclusion that Adi is a bad husband! It take two to make a marriage work! Pooja was equally responsible to fix things for Adi esp on his relationship with his parents! Did pooja ever try that? She wanted love, agree! But did she try explaining the same to her so called best friend?

Second zoya, is taking all the blame of being a bad wife that she dint understand her husband. But then why did yash come into a conclusion that zoya would not understand his problem? why didnt he every try to communicate his problems with her? He calls zoya innocent , so does that mean he used her innocence to cheat on her?

All these questions are unanswered by cv's! I am really hoping they come up with better justification for whole betrayal thingy!

And yes please dont ruin zoya;s character! I am glad she is non-judgemental aboit PooSh's relationship! It takes guts to accept a partner's betrayal and i am proud of her, but dont portray zoya as stupid to consider that all flaws are from her and Adi's side!




dialogue writer until know was too good now also he/she good but since 2 weeks the lines written on zoya is really ruining the flavor of the show ..
they need too tone down it a bit ..


she taking blame makes her unique and thats not unusual its her greatness
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetha

yes totally annoyed by cv;s with this current track!


the only reason fandom is hyper on zoya is for those dialogues which makes no sense to me! W*F is paak about cheating on respective partners, PooSh love is true, i am okay with that! But calling it oh sooo right, no sorry it isnt! Cheating isnt right!

As you rightly stated on promo, just reading the pooja side of the story, zoya cannot come to a conclusion that Adi is a bad husband! It take two to make a marriage work! Pooja was equally responsible to fix things for Adi esp on his relationship with his parents! Did pooja ever try that? She wanted love, agree! But did she try explaining the same to her so called best friend?

Second zoya, is taking all the blame of being a bad wife that she dint understand her husband. But then why did yash come into a conclusion that zoya would not understand his problem? why didnt he every try to communicate his problems with her? He calls zoya innocent , so does that mean he used her innocence to cheat on her?

All these questions are unanswered by cv's! I am really hoping they come up with better justification for whole betrayal thingy!

And yes please dont ruin zoya;s character! I am glad she is non-judgemental aboit PooSh's relationship! It takes guts to accept a partner's betrayal and i am proud of her, but dont portray zoya as stupid to consider that all flaws are from her and Adi's side!

Actually today they not just showed AdiYa's 'faults' but also Poosh's faults too. They too didn't understand their spouses. Pooja said that Adi's problems with his dad affected their relationship. I really didn't understand that point. Did he vent his anger on Pooja? Did she shout at her after getting angry with Papa Hooda? Adi is not that type of husband who will treat his wife as his punching bag. He is a blunt guy who doesn't think twice before calling a spade a spade. It's Pooja who didn't understand him.

Even Yash didn't understand Zoya. He underestimated her. He thought she is an average intelligence wali woman who doesn't know anything except romance. He didn't make any efforts to discuss his problems with her because he already had created this opinion in his mind that Zoya will not understand him. Yes she was and is still innocent and nave but at the same time, she does use her intelligence too in certain occasions. Nowadays, she is not using it though. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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And yes please dont ruin zoya;s character! I am glad she is non-judgemental aboit PooSh's relationship! It takes guts to accept a partner's betrayal and i am proud of her, but dont portray zoya as stupid to consider that all flaws are from her and Adi's side!
Actually today they not just showed AdiYa's 'faults' but also Poosh's faults too. They too didn't understand their spouses. Pooja said that Adi's problems with his dad affected their relationship. I really didn't understand that point. Did he vent his anger on Pooja? Did she shout at her after getting angry with Papa Hooda? Adi is not that type of husband who will treat his wife as his punching bag. He is a blunt guy who doesn't think twice before calling a spade a spade. It's Pooja who didn't understand him.

Even Yash didn't understand Zoya. He underestimated her. He thought she is an average intelligence wali woman who doesn't know anything except romance. He didn't make any efforts to discuss his problems with her because he already had created this opinion in his mind that Zoya will not understand him. Yes she was and is still innocent and nave but at the same time, she does use her intelligence too in certain occasions. Nowadays, she is not using it though. 😆


thats exactly my point ..

adi was never rude to pooja ...cv's want to justify the EMA ..

but sabha do u remember one scene were yash was talking to zoya but she slept off so i feel yash has a point there she is too naive in few things but not delicate as he mentioned
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rs..shailu29



that scene i really didn't like ..
adi has a reason to fight his dad might be the reason ..
pooja claims that she was his childhood sweetheart then she should why adi behaves that way..

that scene looked odd no offense


They showed that scene for the sake of showing. They didn't even reveal the reason behind their fight. I think Papa Hooda needs to be blamed more than Aditya actually for spoiling his son's birthday party. If he had issues he would have called Adi in his room or should have waited for the party to get over. Again this is another proof of Pooja not understanding Adi.

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