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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: deeps07


Do write more...and hopefully the show wont turn boring like others anytime soon...it has been many years since i have been hooked to a show..bepannah has a promising track..it looks perfect...and touchwood it remains so for long long time...and u too keep writing..cant wait for the next one..😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps07


Do write more...and hopefully the show wont turn boring like others anytime soon...it has been many years since i have been hooked to a show..bepannah has a promising track..it looks perfect...and touchwood it remains so for long long time...and u too keep writing..cant wait for the next one..😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh god Drunk Arjun 😆
Zoya and Arjun their antics
They have backfired Noor's plan
Her half plan was successful but other half was total mess
Anjana is sweet mother in law 😆
Liked it dear 😃
Do write more if possible

Posted: 7 years ago
#14
This is an OS but seems more like a SS 😃 Read all chaps at a go & you've got a funny nerve LOL Enjoyed the Jeeju-Saali bond & they'll definitely be a great team if the show would make Adi & Noor bond
Poor Zoya & Arjun, plans backfired but definitely for the good 😆 Drunk Zoya's reactions were cute & I could imagine Adi's blush LMAO
You gotta continue & may I know your name? 😊 Will you pm me the updates? I'll send a buddy req before everything LOL
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Posted: 7 years ago
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BLISS

Aditya looked up to find her licking the chocolate cream from her fingers.

He is dying of embarassment and this women is celebrating ! He was furious . He was never been such a situation.

Zoya looked up to find him shooting glares at her , " what happened Adi ! " She asked innocently.

And he forgot everything else. She is so cute Aditya wished if he could actually eat her . Well without causing any harm ofcourse.

No ! She is the cause of his misery . He needs to settle score.

" nothing " he smirked .

" Zoya ! " Aditya called her and she looked at him keeping the pastry aside. Cause he was more important than pastry.

" You wanted a kiss right ???? You got it "

Zoya watched him crossing the distance in 2 swift steps and the very next moment she was on bed and Adi was on top of her . One hand on bed for support . Other on her waist.

Zoya looked into his eyes - " no ! I don't want to kiss you anymore "

" What " he couldn't believe his ears. Few moments ago she was complaining to his mother about him not kissing her . And not she doesn't feel like it.

Does he have to listen to her. No ! I am kissing her right here right now !!

Before he could make a move she beats him. Turned upside down and next moment she was lying over him.

Aditya could feel that she was overwhelmed. He lay her hands on her backs stroking her smoothly.

Her face was drowned into his chest and she muttered : " I want to sleep!! Will you stay like this please . "

"Absolutely" Aditya smiled.

He was overwhelmed. Although they were so close bodies pressing into each other. And he would love to shower her with all his kisses on every part of her body.

But he knew he has a lot of time for that. Infact this is beauty of their relationship. They turn each other on in most innocent situation without even touching each other . And sometimes even so close yet they only want to hold each other.

They felt home into each other's arm.
Right now he just wants to be still , enjoying their little bubble... Safe and sound into each other's arms. They have come so far.

Aditya realised she was asleep so he rolled her over to her side. He put the duvet on her. And he thought about sleeping on couch for a change he doesn't want to disturb her.

That's When he caught his sight into mirror. His shirt has half of her lipstick mark n the remaining half was on his chest just near his heart.

And forgetting all his previous conclusions Aditya decided to sleep beside her. He removed his shirt and carefully placed it in her hands.

He could feel butterflies in his stomach just by imagining her morning reactions. Today was a bliss but tomorrow will be better. And he meant it not just for morning drama but for every other morning of their life.

He lay besides her deliberately avoid any shirt and she turned to face her. Aditya noticed her lips.

" On second thoughts ! We are married ! You want it ! And I simply can disobey my mother !" Aditya reasoned with a sleeping Zoya.

And he quickly gave her a peck on her lips.

"Ummm ! Chocolate !"

Chuckling he pulled her in a tight hug. He needed some more marks to freak her in the morning. He just can't wait.

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Noor looked at him with horror on her face.

"COFFEE NAWAZ" Noor smeared and pulled him into their room.

She pushed him with all her might and turned to close the door.

"Yaa Allah ! What do you think you were doing theee...

Her voice died the moment she turned from door.
He was standing right next to her , Their faces inches apart. He was towering ovr her. Due to their height difference Noor was breathing into his neck. Her nose touching his Adam's apple.

"Did I do something wrong ! " He whispered into her ears in a husky voice.

Noor closed her eyes unable to think straight. She tries to concentrate.

YES !! WRONG ! WHAT HE DID WRONG ! She couldn't think straight . She started counting.

- firstly he get drunk
- then he back hugged her in front of maa
- then he said that... That...

And Noor opened her eyes shocked. He was stroking her waste with slight touches of his fingers. One at a time. Noor felt weak in her knees and hold onto his shirt for support.

She realised it was a great mistake as now they even closer. He nuzzled into her hair.

"Nooor "

"Hmmm" she wasn't in her senses to gave a proper reply.
@
"You smell so nice " he hugged her.

She smiled into his chest. All complaints forgotten. Infact she couldn't find proper reason to why they ever had to fight. They could simply do whatever they are doing right now. Noor realised he smell nice too.

" Noor "

"Hmmm"

"You are blushing !"

Noor opened her eyes and pushed him backwards. He was too strong for her but still he went two steps back. He crossed his arms , a teasing smile on his face for a moment he looked all sober.

" What " Noor tries to distract her and his attention .

" You look very beautiful tonight ! Sorry ! I forgot to tell you earlier " he again moves to her tugging her hair behind , he looked her into eyes " ANNDD ! YOU ARE BLUSHING ! REAL RED ! "

Noor saw a glint in his eyes. Something she has never seen before. A glint that confirms he is jiju's brother after all . Her mouth formed an "o" in surprise.

It further motivates him. He started stroking her cheeks with back of his 2 fingers slowly. Very slowly. Noor feel her legs giving up .

" It's turning dark red. Just like your lipstick. "

He moved his face towards her but she swayed sideways and jumped away from him sitting her bed. She looked at him acting as cool as possible -

" I do not blush " she emphasised each word more than necessary.

" I thought so too " arjun wondered " until I saw you blushing few moments ago ! Why were you blushing before mom ! "

That reminded Noor why she entered the room afterall. She had enough. This man ... Oh my god ! Man is coming close again ! Noor panicked watching him moving towards her

She hurried to mirror and acted as if trying to check her cheeks.

"See ! I am not blushing ! "

Arjun didn't move he looked at her for few seconds. Noor wondered what he is upto.

Finally sighing he walked upto her and pick her up in one swift motion.

" YAA ALLAH ! ARJUNNN !! "

Before she could Resist further ..

" Shut up Noor ! You don't want every one to wake and see us like this ! "

Noor went still. This has never happened before. Not only she ordered her to shut up but also threatened her. This is definately not her day ... Or night . She thought gulping saliva.

" Good girl ! " He took her to bed n placed her carefully. And then he lie besides her facing the ceiling .

" Noor ! You also need some sleep ! And for that you have to lie down as well ! "

Noor followed his words. She mused he is acting even more mature now that he is drunk. Does this man ever lose his cool

" Does it happen everyday " he poured facing her.

" What " she also faced him .

"Blushing" he asked sincerely .

She was speechless because her face was burning she can't deny it anymore . She was actually blushing. But Noor Siddiqui never blushed before ... Hmm but Noor Arjun Hooda ... Does blush .

" I always wanted to make you blush. Do you see how Zoya bhabhi blushes even at the mention of bhai . I use to wonder if it happens with you or not. " He was talking more to himself.

Noor remembered when she use to hide her blushing face by her smart trivks n fake annoyance. She thought that blushing is for meek girls but never had imagined it might have this effect on him.

She decided she would pay more attention to him. How could he not know. She ... Just have no words to describe how does this man makes her feel. But from now on she will show him . She will not hide anymore. This night is bliss and she will make sure their that every time will turn the same.

She looked at Arjun s sleeping form and snuggling him she whispered " I LOVE YOU "

" I know " Arjun replied and pulled her close in his sleep.

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So this is it !! I know it could have been better ! But I was in hurry to wrap up. Share your views. I might write another is ... Any suggestions


Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

This is an OS but seems more like a SS 😃 Read all chaps at a go & you've got a funny nerve LOL Enjoyed the Jeeju-Saali bond & they'll definitely be a great team if the show would make Adi & Noor bond

Poor Zoya & Arjun, plans backfired but definitely for the good 😆 Drunk Zoya's reactions were cute & I could imagine Adi's blush LMAO
You gotta continue & may I know your name? 😊 Will you pm me the updates? I'll send a buddy req before everything LOL


I am done with last chapter do read it. And comment.

And yes it was supposed to be an os... .. I had this one evening idea but my exaggerations formed it into ss ... Anyway it's over so now we call it an os with 5 acts... Hehe

Ill pm you if I wrote another is.

Thank you once again
Edited by Tanu221 - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Tanu221

BLISS

Aditya looked up to find her licking the chocolate cream from her fingers.

He is dying of embarassment and this women is celebrating ! He was furious . He was never been such a situation.

Zoya looked up to find him shooting glares at her , " what happened Adi ! " She asked innocently.

And he forgot everything else. She is so cute Aditya wished if he could actually eat her . Well without causing any harm ofcourse.

No ! She is the cause of his misery . He needs to settle score.

" nothing " he smirked .

" Zoya ! " Aditya called her and she looked at him keeping the pastry aside. Cause he was more important than pastry.

" You wanted a kiss right ???? You got it "

Zoya watched him crossing the distance in 2 swift steps and the very next moment she was on bed and Adi was on top of her . One hand on bed for support . Other on her waist.

Zoya looked into his eyes - " no ! I don't want to kiss you anymore "

" What " he couldn't believe his ears. Few moments ago she was complaining to his mother about him not kissing her . And not she doesn't feel like it.

Does he have to listen to her. No ! I am kissing her right here right now !!

Before he could make a move she beats him. Turned upside down and next moment she was lying over him.

Aditya could feel that she was overwhelmed. He lay her hands on her backs stroking her smoothly.

Her face was drowned into his chest and she muttered : " I want to sleep!! Will you stay like this please . "

"Absolutely" Aditya smiled.

He was overwhelmed. Although they were so close bodies pressing into each other. And he would love to shower her with all his kisses on every part of her body.

But he knew he has a lot of time for that. Infact this is beauty of their relationship. They turn each other on in most innocent situation without even touching each other . And sometimes even so close yet they only want to hold each other.

They felt home into each other's arm.
Right now he just wants to be still , enjoying their little bubble... Safe and sound into each other's arms. They have come so far.

Aditya realised she was asleep so he rolled her over to her side. He put the duvet on her. And he thought about sleeping on couch for a change he doesn't want to disturb her.

That's When he caught his sight into mirror. His shirt has half of her lipstick mark n the remaining half was on his chest just near his heart.

And forgetting all his previous conclusions Aditya decided to sleep beside her. He removed his shirt and carefully placed it in her hands.

He could feel butterflies in his stomach just by imagining her morning reactions. Today was a bliss but tomorrow will be better. And he meant it not just for morning drama but for every other morning of their life.

He lay besides her deliberately avoid any shirt and she turned to face her. Aditya noticed her lips.

" On second thoughts ! We are married ! You want it ! And I simply can disobey my mother !" Aditya reasoned with a sleeping Zoya.

And he quickly gave her a peck on her lips.

"Ummm ! Chocolate !"

Chuckling he pulled her in a tight hug. He needed some more marks to freak her in the morning. He just can't wait.

____________________________________________


Noor looked at him with horror on her face.

"COFFEE NAWAZ" Noor smeared and pulled him into their room.

She pushed him with all her might and turned to close the door.

"Yaa Allah ! What do you think you were doing theee...

Her voice died the moment she turned from door.
He was standing right next to her , Their faces inches apart. He was towering ovr her. Due to their height difference Noor was breathing into his neck. Her nose touching his Adam's apple.

"Did I do something wrong ! " He whispered into her ears in a husky voice.

Noor closed her eyes unable to think straight. She tries to concentrate.

YES !! WRONG ! WHAT HE DID WRONG ! She couldn't think straight . She started counting.

- firstly he get drunk
- then he back hugged her in front of maa
- then he said that... That...

And Noor opened her eyes shocked. He was stroking her waste with slight touches of his fingers. One at a time. Noor felt weak in her knees and hold onto his shirt for support.

She realised it was a great mistake as now they even closer. He nuzzled into her hair.

"Nooor "

"Hmmm" she wasn't in her senses to gave a proper reply.
@
"You smell so nice " he hugged her.

She smiled into his chest. All complaints forgotten. Infact she couldn't find proper reason to why they ever had to fight. They could simply do whatever they are doing right now. Noor realised he smell nice too.

" Noor "

"Hmmm"

"You are blushing !"

Noor opened her eyes and pushed him backwards. He was too strong for her but still he went two steps back. He crossed his arms , a teasing smile on his face for a moment he looked all sober.

" What " Noor tries to distract her and his attention .

" You look very beautiful tonight ! Sorry ! I forgot to tell you earlier " he again moves to her tugging her hair behind , he looked her into eyes " ANNDD ! YOU ARE BLUSHING ! REAL RED ! "

Noor saw a glint in his eyes. Something she has never seen before. A glint that confirms he is jiju's brother after all . Her mouth formed an "o" in surprise.

It further motivates him. He started stroking her cheeks with back of his 2 fingers slowly. Very slowly. Noor feel her legs giving up .

" It's turning dark red. Just like your lipstick. "

He moved his face towards her but she swayed sideways and jumped away from him sitting her bed. She looked at him acting as cool as possible -

" I do not blush " she emphasised each word more than necessary.

" I thought so too " arjun wondered " until I saw you blushing few moments ago ! Why were you blushing before mom ! "

That reminded Noor why she entered the room afterall. She had enough. This man ... Oh my god ! Man is coming close again ! Noor panicked watching him moving towards her

She hurried to mirror and acted as if trying to check her cheeks.

"See ! I am not blushing ! "

Arjun didn't move he looked at her for few seconds. Noor wondered what he is upto.

Finally sighing he walked upto her and pick her up in one swift motion.

" YAA ALLAH ! ARJUNNN !! "

Before she could Resist further ..

" Shut up Noor ! You don't want every one to wake and see us like this ! "

Noor went still. This has never happened before. Not only she ordered her to shut up but also threatened her. This is definately not her day ... Or night . She thought gulping saliva.

" Good girl ! " He took her to bed n placed her carefully. And then he lie besides her facing the ceiling .

" Noor ! You also need some sleep ! And for that you have to lie down as well ! "

Noor followed his words. She mused he is acting even more mature now that he is drunk. Does this man ever lose his cool

" Does it happen everyday " he poured facing her.

" What " she also faced him .

"Blushing" he asked sincerely .

She was speechless because her face was burning she can't deny it anymore . She was actually blushing. But Noor Siddiqui never blushed before ... Hmm but Noor Arjun Hooda ... Does blush .

" I always wanted to make you blush. Do you see how Zoya bhabhi blushes even at the mention of bhai . I use to wonder if it happens with you or not. " He was talking more to himself.

Noor remembered when she use to hide her blushing face by her smart trivks n fake annoyance. She thought that blushing is for meek girls but never had imagined it might have this effect on him.

She decided she would pay more attention to him. How could he not know. She ... Just have no words to describe how does this man makes her feel. But from now on she will show him . She will not hide anymore. This night is bliss and she will make sure their that every time will turn the same.

She looked at Arjun s sleeping form and snuggling him she whispered " I LOVE YOU "

" I know " Arjun replied and pulled her close in his sleep.

_____________________________________________
So this is it !! I know it could have been better ! But I was in hurry to wrap up. Share your views. I might write another is ... Any suggestions


Thank you



Read it too 😆 Any suggestions you have asked. I'd like if you continue AdiYa in the morning of the same OS because that I hope you would write in the wittiest way LOL Zoya's reactions to finding Adi near her, lipstick marks on his shirt etc ROFL Big smile Hope you'd consider others ideas & write one last part...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Keep updating this story dear. Very beautiful stoy, eagerly waiting how will Zoya react in morning.
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Aww AdiYa and ArNoor are adorable
Cute update
Pls do write about Zoya's morning reaction 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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you need to update soon!!! this is amazing!!!

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